Pythr Posted October 19, 2017 Report Share Posted October 19, 2017 So, this is my first archetype and I got a bit of ideas from my friends in a Yu-Gi-Oh! Discord server I'm in so I decided to create this archetype. It's a W.I.P, and I'd love criticism as to what I can add and what I should errata (including broken effects, fixing card grammar, typos, and whatever you find.)Another note, I quit Yu-Gi-Oh! for a year so I'm still shifting from stuff like "Graveyard" to "GY", but I've made sure to keep that consistent. So now, I'll get on with the cards.[spoiler=Monsters]Dread Pup the Glutton - DARKL1 - 100/1000 - Fiend“When this card is Normal Summoned: you can target 1 “Dread Pup” monster in your GY; Special Summon that target, and if you do, you can increase this card's level by 5. You can only use this effect of “Dread Pup the Glutton” once per turn. You can reveal 1 “Dread Pup” or “Dread Hound” card in your hand; this card is now treated as a Tuner monster.” Dread Pup the Wrath - DARKL1 - 100/500 - Fiend“When this card is Special Summoned from your hand or GY: target 1 “Dread Pup” or “Dread Hound” monster in your GY; add that target to your hand, and if you do, you can increase this card's level 5. You can only use this effect of “Dread Pup the Wrath” once per turn. You can reveal 1 “Dread Pup” or “Dread Hound” card in your hand; this card is now treated as a Tuner monster.” Dread Pup the Moon - DARKL1 - 100/100 - Fiend“When this card is Summoned by the effect of a “Dread Pup” or “Dread Hound” card; you can Special Summon 1 “Dread Pup” monster with 100 ATK from your Deck, except “Dread Pup the Moon”, and if you do, you can increase this card’s level by 5. You can only use this effect of “Dread Pup the Moon” once per turn. You can reveal 1 “Dread Pup” or “Dread Hound” card in your hand; this card is now treated as a Tuner monster.” Dread Pup the Berserk - DARKL1 - 100/500 - Fiend“When this card is Summoned: you can send 1 “Dread Hound” Synchro Monster from your Extra Deck to the GY; this card’s level becomes the level of that monster -1. You can only use the effect of “Dread Pup the Berserk” once per turn. You can reveal 1 “Dread Pup” or “Dread Hound” card in your hand; this card is now treated as a Tuner monster.” Dread Pup the Forbidden - DARKL1 - 100/500 - Fiend“You can discard this card and one other “Dread Pup” monster in your hand; draw 2 cards. If this card is Summoned: you can target 1 “Dread Pup” or “Dread Hound” card you control; destroy it, and if you do, draw 1 card. You can only use the effect of “Dread Pup the Forbidden” once per turn. You can reveal 1 “Dread Pup” or “Dread Hound” card in your hand; this card is now treated as a Tuner monster.” [spoiler=Spells]Dread Hound PackSpell - Field“When this card is activated; you can add 1 “Dread Pup” monster from your Deck to your hand. You can discard 1 card: send 1 “Dread Pup” monster from your Deck to your GY; draw 1 card and reveal it. If it’s a “Dread Pup” monster; Special Summon it. You can only use each effect of “Dread Hound Pack” once per turn.” Dread Hound RisingSpell - Normal“Target 1 “Dread Hound” Synchro monster you control: banish that target; Special Summon 1 “Dread Pup” monster from your GY that was used to Synchro Summon that card. During the End Phase; Special Summon that banished target. During your opponent’s Battle Phase: you can banish this card from your GY; all “Dread Hound” monsters you currently control cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects.” Dread Pup PlaytimeSpell - Quick Play“Target 2 “Dread Pup” monsters you control: shuffle those targets into the Deck; Special Summon 2 “Dread Pup” monsters with different names from your Deck or hand. You can banish this card from your GY: destroy 1 “Dread Pup” monster you control; Special Summon 1 “Dread Pup” from your Deck with a different name. You can only activate each effect of “Dread Pup Playtime” once per turn.” Dread Pup FeedingSpell - Continuous“When this card is activated; you can add 1 “Dread Pup” monster from your Deck to your hand. Once per turn, you can target 1 “Dread Pup” in your GY: banish that target, and if you do; Special Summon 1 “Dread Pup” monster from your Deck with a different name than the banished target. During your Main Phase, except the turn this card was sent to the GY: you can banish this card from your GY; Special Summon 1 of your banished “Dread Pup” monsters.” Dread Pup SurpriseSpell - Quick-Play“If you control no monsters: discard 1 card; Special Summon 1 “Dread Pup” monster from your hand. During your opponent's Main Phase or Battle Phase, except the turn this card was sent to the GY, you can banish this card from your GY; “Dread Pup” and “Dread Hound” monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects until the End Phase.” [spoiler=Traps]Dread Hound HuntingTrap - Normal“When an opponent’s monster declares an attack: target 1 “Dread Hound” monster; that monster gains ATK equal to the ATK of the attacking monster. During your Main Phase: you can banish this card from your GY; add 1 “Dread Pup” monster from your Deck to your hand.” [spoiler=E. Deck]Dread Hound the Igniter - DARKLink 3 - 2000 - Fiend - Link (S, SE, E)“2+ “Dread Pup” monstersAll “Dread Hound” monsters you control gain 500 ATK. Once per turn, during either player's turn, if this card would be destroyed by a card effect: you can banish 1 “Dread Hound” monster this card points to; negate that effect, and if you do, destroy that card. During the next Standby Phase, Special Summon that monster in Defense Position.”Dread Hound the Reimagined - DARKR1 - 100/2500 - Fiend - Xyz“3 Level 1 “Dread Pup” monstersWhen this card is Xyz Summoned: you can target 1 “Dread Hound” Synchro Monster in your GY; Special Summon that target in Defense Position. You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: target 1 “Dread Pup” or “Dread Hound” card in your GY; add that target to your hand.”Dread Hound the Growing - DARKL2 - 100/2000 - Fiend - Synchro“1 Tuner “Dread Pup” monster + 1 “Dread Pup” non-Tuner monsterWhen this card is Synchro Summoned: you can target 1 “Dread Pup” or “Dread Hound” Spell/Trap card; add that target to your hand. Once per turn: you can discard 1 Spell/Trap card; add 1 “Dread Pup” or “Dread Hound” Spell/Trap card from your Deck to your hand.” Dread Hound the Pride - DARKL6 - 100/2600 - Fiend - Synchro“1 Tuner “Dread Pup” monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned: you can target 1 of the non-Tuner “Dread Pup” monsters used to Synchro Summon this card; add that target to your hand. If this card is sent to the GY; you can send 1 “Dread Pup” or “Dread Hound” card from your Deck to your GY.” Dread Hound the Envoy - DARKL6 - 2500/100 - Fiend - Synchro“1 Tuner “Dread Pup” monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, you can target 1 of the non-Tuner “Dread Pup” monsters used to Synchro Summon this card; add that target to your hand. If this card is attacked: you can banish 1 “Dread Pup” monster from your field or hand; negate that attack, and if you do, “Dread Hound” monsters you currently control cannot be destroyed by battle or your opponent’s card effects until the End Phase. You can only use each effect of “Dread Hound the Envoy” once per turn.” Dread Hound the Requiem - DARKL7 - 2800/100 - Synchro“2 Tuner “Dread Pup” monsters + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, you can target 1 of the non-Tuner “Dread Pup” monsters used to Synchro Summon this card; add that target to your hand. If this card attacks an opponent’s monster: you can banish 1 “Dread Pup” monster from your hand or field; this card gains 1000 ATK until the end of the Battle Phase. You can only use each effect of “Dread Hound the Requiem” once per turn.” also some cards are named after people such as "moon" and "berserk" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xrisylar Posted October 22, 2017 Report Share Posted October 22, 2017 I like it! Also you could add a little bit of protection on your ace monster, i mean after all the effort to summon it, you could make it stick to field a little! Overall nice work :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 22, 2017 Report Share Posted October 22, 2017 I like it! Also you could add a little bit of protection on your ace monster, i mean after all the effort to summon it, you could make it stick to field a little! Overall nice work :D I understand you are new, but just as a little note, you do need to write more for a review in Multiple Cards and elaborate. This would be fine if you were simply reviewing a card in the Singles area. (This is just a heads-up for you, and not me scolding you in any way.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Pythr Posted October 24, 2017 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2017 Bump. AddedDread Hound HuntingDread Hound the IgniterDread Hound the Growing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pythr Posted October 25, 2017 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2017 Bump. (Well, I'm on the top, but this is just an update.) AddedDread Pup Surprise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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