Sleepy Posted September 20, 2017 Report Share Posted September 20, 2017 Thoughts, comments, suggestions, etc. Welcomed and encouraged as always~=) [spoiler=Sketch] [spoiler=Lineart] [spoiler=Colored characters] [spoiler=Progress Background] Done for now: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted September 20, 2017 Report Share Posted September 20, 2017 Lovely drawing. The faces and expressions of the 3 characters are great.Not sure if witch girl should be holding the lantern that way, since it looks a bit awkward and AFAIK it's kinda dangerous too from an IRL perspective... it may be better if she holds it from the handle.I understand it is still on draft stage, but I'm not exactly sure of what's going on with pyro girl's clothing. Looks like she is wearing a graphic tank top over a long and thick sweater, and that's... weird. I like that image on the shirt/tank top, by the way xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted September 20, 2017 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2017 Lovely drawing. The faces and expressions of the 3 characters are great.Not sure if witch girl should be holding the lantern that way, since it looks a bit awkward and AFAIK it's kinda dangerous too from an IRL perspective... it may be better if she holds it from the handle.I understand it is still on draft stage, but I'm not exactly sure of what's going on with pyro girl's clothing. Looks like she is wearing a graphic tank top over a long and thick sweater, and that's... weird. I like that image on the shirt/tank top, by the way xD It's not a fire hazard, it's a fun hazard :vThat'd make sense, but I've inked it now for the second time (I found out Black Magic ink for dip pens doesn't work well with alcohol-based markers so switched back to my regular brush pen, but had to ink again).... so kinda can't change it now xD Pyro girl is using a sweater, but it is being squeezed in the middle by her devil tail. Hopefully it'll be more notorious the more progress I make. Updated with lineart~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted September 20, 2017 Report Share Posted September 20, 2017 Ah so that's what it was, the devil tail. I just noticed the same tail is leading the giraffe; that's outright cute.Also I was going to add why you didn't put any angel wings or any other costume piece on the giraffe to go with the halo, but I just found them xD They should be more noticeable once the drawing is colored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted September 20, 2017 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2017 Added in color xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted September 21, 2017 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2017 Updated with more progress~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted September 22, 2017 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2017 Updated I think with the final version xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(GigaDrillBreaker) Posted September 24, 2017 Report Share Posted September 24, 2017 Those shadows are seriously fantastic. The level of detail you use, and the way you layer the colors (the shading you use, as well as the leaves in the foreground) is just super impressive. I'd say stuff like "x was a nice touch" but then I would be typing a few hundred more words than I intended. Really, I love how this one turned out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted September 24, 2017 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2017 Those shadows are seriously fantastic. The level of detail you use, and the way you layer the colors (the shading you use, as well as the leaves in the foreground) is just super impressive. I'd say stuff like "x was a nice touch" but then I would be typing a few hundred more words than I intended. Really, I love how this one turned out. This is a pleasant surprise. I was more or less resigned to not having any posts about it. Thank you so much for this post n_n Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eshai Posted September 27, 2017 Report Share Posted September 27, 2017 You should draw for children's books. This looks pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted September 27, 2017 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2017 You should draw for children's books. This looks pretty good. Thank you =3That was the appearance I was aiming for. Love to hear this n_n Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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