A FPS-Game Styled Archetype - "FPS-Soldier" [Written|24/24]

[KokonutLP]

It's this Time again! Hello Everybody and Welcome to my 3rd Archetype now called "FPS-Soldier".

FPS-Player is an Archetype with the Idea of making it feel like to Play a FPS Game ~ Sounds Strange because it Is!

The Main Cards of this Archetype are: "FPS-Soldier Novice / Pro / Elite and the Spectrator" - They use "Killstreak" Counters for Various Effects. The Rest is Support and well "Killstreak" Cards - but read for your Self!

 

~MONSTER(S)~

 

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FPS-Soldier Novice

Level 4 | EARTH | Warrior | Effect

If this Card is Normal/or Special Summoned: Put one "Killstreak" Counter on it. Once per turn, you can place 1 Killstreak counter on this card when it destroys a monster by battle. This card gains 100 ATK each Killstreak Counter on it Once per turn during your End Phase if this card destroyed a Monster in Battle: You can add one "FPS-Soldier" or "Perk Power" card from your deck to your hand.

ATK: 1500 | DEF: 1500

 

FPS-Soldier Pro

Level 6 | EARTH | Warrior | Effect

Cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing a "FPS-Soldier Novice", and if you do: Place the tributed monster's Killstreak Counters on this card. If this Card was Successfully Special Summoned: Place 1 Killstreak counter on it. Once per turn, you can place 1 Killstreak counter on this card when it destroys a monster by battle. This card gains 200 ATK each Killstreak Counter on it. Once per Turn during your End Phase if this card has destroyed a Monster in Battle: You can add one "FPS-Soldier" or "Perk Power" card from your deck to your hand. Cannot be Targeted by Opponents Card Effects.

ATK: 2000 | DEF: 2000

 

FPS-Soldier Elite

Level 9 | EARTH | Warrior | Effect

Cannot be Normal Summoned. Cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing a "FPS-Soldier Pro", and if you do: Place the tributed monster's Killstreak Counters on this card. If this Card was Successfully Special Summoned: Put 1 "Killstreak" Counter on it. Once per turn, you can place 1 Killstreak counter on this card when it destroys a monster by battle. This card gains 300 ATK for each "Killstreak" Counter on it. Once per Turn during your End Phase if this Card destroyed a Monster in Battle: You can add one "FPS-Soldier" or "Perk Power" card from your deck to your hand. Cannot be Targeted by Opponents Card Effects. Once Per Turn During your Main Phase 1: Shuffle 1 "FPS-Soldier" , "Perk Power" or "Killstreak" card from your Graveyard back into your deck.

ATK: 2500 | DEF: 2500

 

FPS-Soldier Spectator

Level 1 | EARTH | Warrior | Effect

Once Per Turn, during your Main Phase 1: You can discard this card, and if you do: Special Summon 1 "FPS-Soldier Novice" from your hand or deck in Attack Position. During your Main Phase, except the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard: You can banish this Card from your Graveyard, and if you do: add one "FPS-Soldier" or "Perk Power" card from your deck to your hand.

ATK: 0 | DEF: 0

 

FPS-Soldier Support Buddys

Level 4 | EARTH | Warrior | Effect

If this Card is Normal/or Special Summond put 2 "Killstreak" Counters on it. Once Per Turn: If this Card is destroyed in battle and sent to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "FPS-Soldier Support Buddy" from your deck .This Card cannot be Used for an Xyz-Summoning except for the Summoning of an "FPS-Soldier" Monster. Once per turn you can remove 2 "Killstreak" Counters from this card, then increase This Cards level by 5 until the End of this Turn.

ATK: 1000 | DEF: 1000

 

FPS-Soldier Camper

Level 3 | EARTH | Warrior | Effect

This Card can Attack your Opponent Directly. If this Card deals Battle Damage to your Opponent but 1 "Killstreak" Counter on this Card. If this Card has Any "Killstreak" Counter on it, it cannot be targeted for an Attack by your Opponent. During your Opponents End Phase: Remove All "Killstreak" Counters from this Card.

ATK: 1000 | DEF: 0

 

~XYZ(S)~

 

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FPS-Soldier Prestige Master

Rank 4 | EARTH | Warrior | Xyz | Effect

2 Level 4 "FPS-Soldier" Monsters

Cannot be destroyed in battle. This Card gains 200 ATK for each "Killstreak" Counter on the Field. Once per turn if your opponent activates a Monster effect: negate that effect, and if you do: Banish it. Once per turn: you can Detach 1 Xyz-Material from this card: Put 1 "Killstreak Counter" on each "FPS-Soldier" Monster on the Field. If this Card destroys a monster in battle: target 1 card on the field: shuffle it back into their Deck.

ATK: 2000 | DEF: 2000

 

FPS-Soldier Future

Rank 9 | EARTH | Warrior | Xyz | Effect

2 Level 9 "FPS-Soldier"  Monsters

Cannot be destroyed or targeted by card effects. This Card gains 200 ATK for each "Killstreak" Counter on the Field. Once per turn if your opponent activates a card effect: negate that effect, and if you do: Banish it. Once Per Turn: You can detach 1 Xyz-Material from this Card: Until the end of this turn, you can activate card effects without removing "Killstreak" Counters. If this Card would be destroyed in battle: shuffle 1 "FPS-Soldier and 1 "Killstreak" or "Perk-Power" card back into your deck, and if you do: negate the destruction.

ATK: 2500 | DEF: 2500

 

~SPELL(S)~

 

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Killstreak - Attack Helicopter

Continuous | Spell

Remove 5 Killstreak counters from the field to activate this card. Once Per Turn: Banish a Random Card from your opponents hand. Cannot be Destroyd by Card Effect's. Destroy this Card during your 3rd End Phase after Activating this Card. Cannot be Negated.

 

Killstreak - System Hack

Continuous | Spell

Remove 5 Killstreak counters from the field to activate this card. Your Opponents Monster Card effects are Negated. Cannot be Destroyd by Card Effect's. Destroy this Card during your 3rd End Phase after Activating this Card. Cannot be Negated.

 

Killstreak - Guardian

Continuous | Spell

Remove 3 Killstreak counters from the field to activate this card. Your Opponents Monsters cannot Attack or Activate their Effects the turn they there Summonend. Cannot be Destroyd by Card Effect's. Destroy this Card during your 2nd End Phase after Activating this Card. Cannot be Negated.

 

Killstreak - Hunter Killer

Quick | Spell

Remove 2 Killstreak counters from the field to activate this card. Target 1 Card, then Banish that Target. Cannot be Negated.

 

Killstreak - Care Package

Quick | Spell

Remove 2 Killstreak counters from the field to activate this card. Draw 2 Cards. Cannot be Negated.

 

Prestige Mode

Normal | Spell

If you Controll a "FPS-Soldier Elite" with atleast 5 "Killstreak" Counters, search your deck for any 2 cards and put them onto your Hand, then remove all of its "Killstreak" Counters.

 

Map Advantage

Field | Spell

All "FPS-Soldier" Monsters Gain 500 ATK and 1000 DEF and cannot be Destroyd in Battle while they have "Killstreak" Counters on them. Once Per Turn: Remove 3 "Killstreak" Counter from anythere, if you do: Search your Deck for 1 "Killstreak" Spell Card and take it into your Hand. If this Card would be Destroyed, remove all "Killstreak" Counters from the Field: Negate the Destruction.

 

Vote For Map Change

Quick | Spell

If your Opponent has a "Field" Spell Card on his Side of the Field while you have None: Destroy your Opponents "Field" Spell Card, and if you do: add one "Map Advantage"  from your Deck to your Hand. you can only activate the Effect of "Vote For Map Change" once per Turn.

 

Killstreak - Tactical Nuke

Quick | Spell

Remove 10 Killstreak counters from the field to activate this card. Banish All Cards on your opponents side of the field. Cannot be Negated.

 

Tactical Attachment - Grenade Launcher

Equip | Spell

Can only be Equiped to a "FPS-Soldier" monster card. Once Per Turn: Target 1 monster card on the field whose ATK is smaller or equal 2000 and Banish it.

 

Tactical Attachment - Suppressor

Equip | Spell

Can only be Equiped to a "FPS-Soldier" monster card. The monster this card is attached to cannot be Targeted for an Attack by your opponents monsters.

 

~TRAP(S)~

 

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Perk Power - Scavenger

Normal | Trap

Activate this Card only if you need to Remove "Killstreak" Counters from the Field. You can Remove this Card and send it to Graveyard to Cover All the Costs for an Effect using "Killstreak" Counters. ( This Card normaly count's as 1 "Killstreak Counter ). You can only Activate "Perk Power - Scavenger" Once Per Turn.

 

Perk Power - Hardline

Continuous | Trap

As long as this Card is Active: Decrease the Activation Costs of Effects using "Killstreak" Counters by 1. You can only have 1 Active "Perk Power - Hardline".

 

Perk Power - Flak Jacket

Counter | Trap

If a "FPS-Soldier" Monster would have been Destroyed in Battle: Negate the Destruction, then send the Attacking Monster back onto their Hand and End the Battle Phase, then Change Your Monter into face-up Defence Position.

 

Perk Power - Dead Silence

Counter | Trap

Negate the Activation of a Monster Effect, if you do: change it to face-down Defence Position: It cannot Change its Battle Position anymore. You need to Controll a face-up "FPS-Soldier" Monster to Activate this Card.

 

Perk Power - Stopping Power

Continiuous | Trap

During a Battle with an "FPS-Soldier" and an Opponents Monster in Defence Position: Destroy the Opponents Monster in Defence Position without Damage Calculation.

 

 

 

As Usual - Please Tell me Your Opinion, Changes or Stuff you Like about this Archetype - Thanks for spending your Time Reading this! Have a Nice Day~bye bye.

[kevintriedge]

I actually like the concept of the cards very much. The Spells are quite powerful, bordering on being OP, but are not OP because they are balanced by the difficulty of amassing Killstreak Counters. This one is just personal, but I like decks where you have to put in effort first to do X (in this case, destroying monsters by battle), and reap the rewards later.

 

As for feedback, I think Pro can loosen up its summoning conditions a bit. You can remove the "Cannot be Normal Summoned" part from it and just make the Special Summon optional. After all, if it is Tribute Summoned or revived from the Graveyard, it won't have any headstart in the form of Ks Counters anyway. Besides, 2000 ATK for a Level 7 (Pro) isn't impressive, so it balances out its powerful effect of searching stuff. For Elite, given he has much stronger effects than Pro, the "Cannot be Normal Summoned" condition can be kept.

 

As for Perk Power - Dead Silence, I guess give it a condition so it becomes more exclusive for your FPS-Soldier instead of being a card that any Deck can use. For example, can only be activated when you control an FPS-Soldier (like GB War Chariot). Killstreak - Guardian might be a tad too strong though, preventing Normal Summon and attacks. Sure it needs 3 Ks Counter (2 with Hardline), but it's still a powerful lockdown effect using only 1 card. Maybe you can remove the "cannot attack" part, or allowing Normal Summon but not allowing attack.

 

Overall, nice archetype. Looking forward to the card arts soon.

[KokonutLP]

I actually like the concept of the cards very much. The Spells are quite powerful, bordering on being OP, but are not OP because they are balanced by the difficulty of amassing Killstreak Counters. This one is just personal, but I like decks where you have to put in effort first to do X (in this case, destroying monsters by battle), and reap the rewards later.

 

As for feedback, I think Pro can loosen up its summoning conditions a bit. You can remove the "Cannot be Normal Summoned" part from it and just make the Special Summon optional. After all, if it is Tribute Summoned or revived from the Graveyard, it won't have any headstart in the form of Ks Counters anyway. Besides, 2000 ATK for a Level 7 (Pro) isn't impressive, so it balances out its powerful effect of searching stuff. For Elite, given he has much stronger effects than Pro, the "Cannot be Normal Summoned" condition can be kept.

 

As for Perk Power - Dead Silence, I guess give it a condition so it becomes more exclusive for your FPS-Soldier instead of being a card that any Deck can use. For example, can only be activated when you control an FPS-Soldier (like GB War Chariot). Killstreak - Guardian might be a tad too strong though, preventing Normal Summon and attacks. Sure it needs 3 Ks Counter (2 with Hardline), but it's still a powerful lockdown effect using only 1 card. Maybe you can remove the "cannot attack" part, or allowing Normal Summon but not allowing attack.

 

Overall, nice archetype. Looking forward to the card arts soon.

Thanks For Letting me Know! Good to Hear that you like this Archetype, thats always nice to hear - I will change up the critical Effects and make it more balanced - Card Art is on the way maybe finishing it later today

[KokonutLP]

Bump: Added - 1 "FPS-Soldier" Effect Monster - Added 2 "FPS-Soldier" Xyz Monsters

[DiplomatfromPluto]

Novice

If this Card is Normal/or Special Summoned: Put one "Killstreak" Counter on it. Once per turn, you can place 1 Killstreak counter on this card when it destroys a monster by battle. Once per turn during your End Phase if this card destroyed a Monster in Battle: You can add one "FPS-Soldier" or "Perk Power" card from your deck to your hand. 

Pro

Cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing a "FPS-Soldier Novice", and if you do: Place the tributed monster's Killstreak Counters on this card. If this Card was Successfully Special Summoned: Place 1 Killstreak counter on it. Once per turn, you can place 1 Killstreak counter on this card when it destroys a monster by battle. This card gains 200 ATK each Killstreak Counter on it. Once per Turn during your End Phase if this card has destroyed a Monster in Battle: You can add one "FPS-Soldier" or "Perk Power" card from your deck to your hand. 

Elite

Cannot be Normal Summoned. Cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing a "FPS-Soldier Pro", and if you do: Place the tributed monster's Killstreak Counters on this card. If this Card was Successfully Special Summoned: Put 1 "Killstreak" Counter on it. Once per turn, you can place 1 Killstreak counter on this card when it destroys a monster by battle. This card gains 300 ATK for each "Killstreak" Counter on it. Once per Turn during your End Phase if this Card destroyed a Monster in Battle: You can add one "FPS-Soldier" or "Perk Power" card from your deck to your hand. Cannot be Targeted by Opponents Card Effects. Once Per Turn During your Main Phase 1: Shuffle 1 "FPS-Soldier" , "Perk Power" or "Killstreak" card back into your deck.

Spectrator

Once Per Turn during your Main Phase 1: You can discard this card, and if you do: Special Summon 1 "FPS-Soldier Novice" from your hand, deck, or Graveyard in Attack Position. During your Main Phase 1, except the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard: You can banish this Card from your Graveyard, and if you do: add one "FPS-Soldier" or "Perk Power" card from your deck to your hand. 

Soldier Support Buddy

If this Card is Normal/or Special Summond put 2 "Killstreak" Counters on it. Once Per Turn: If this Card is destroyed in battle and sent to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "FPS-Soldier Support Buddy" from your hand or deck, and if you do put 2 "Killstreak" Counters on it.. This Card cannot be Used for an Xyz-Summoning except for the Summoning of an "FPS-Soldier" Monster. Once per turn you can remove 2 "Killstreak" Counters from this card, then increase its level by 1 or 6 until the End of this Turn.

Prestige Master

Cannot be destroyed in battle. This gains 200 ATK for each "Killstreak" Counter on the Field. Once per turn if your opponent activates a card effect is activated: negate that effect, and if you do: Destroy it. Once per turn: you can Detach 1 Xyz-Material from this card: Each "FPS-Soldier" gets 1 "Killstreak Counter". If this Card destroys a monster in battle: target 1 card on the field: shuffle it back into their Deck.

I made the edit about your opponent because the way you worded it, it could actually work against your own card effects. 

Soldier Cheater

Cannot be destroyed or targeted by card effects. This Card gains 200 ATK for each "Killstreak" Counter on the Field. Once Per Turn if a card effect is activated: negate that effect, and if you do: Banish it. Once Per Turn: You can detach 1 Xyz-Material from this Card: Until the end of this turn, you can activate card effects without removing Kill Counters. If this Card would be destroyed in battle: shuffle 1 "FPS-Soldier and 1 "Killstreak" or "Perk-Power" card back into your deck, and if you do: negate the destruction.

Spell-Attack Helicopter

Remove 5 Killstreak counters from the field to activate this card. Once per turn target up to 2 Cards, then destroy those targets. cannot be destroyed by card effects. Destroy this Card during your 3rd End Phase after Activating this Card.

That's an idea for how to edit the spell cards. 

 

 

Your monsters are a bit weak for their levels, however, all but the first monster can keep the counters of the trbuted monsters and get a boost for their counters, which makes up for their ATK, plus there's a lot of search power. Prestige Master has a lot of good effects, though I assume you meant for it to negate the opponent's effects rather than your own. Soldier Cheater is good too, since you can make level 9s easier with soldier buddy. However, you might be able to bump its ATK a little, maybe to 2500/3000, I don't know if it has so many great effects that it needs to have the same ATK as weak rank 4s. 

 

Your spells are indeed quite powerful, especially Care Package, which is an easy Pot of Greed substitute, with lower cost since it's counters rather than cards. However, they can't be used by other decks. Yep, some good synergy between these cards.

[KokonutLP]

Novice

If this Card is Normal/or Special Summoned: Put one "Killstreak" Counter on it. Once per turn, you can place 1 Killstreak counter on this card when it destroys a monster by battle. Once per turn during your End Phase if this card destroyed a Monster in Battle: You can add one "FPS-Soldier" or "Perk Power" card from your deck to your hand. 

Pro

Cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing a "FPS-Soldier Novice", and if you do: Place the tributed monster's Killstreak Counters on this card. If this Card was Successfully Special Summoned: Place 1 Killstreak counter on it. Once per turn, you can place 1 Killstreak counter on this card when it destroys a monster by battle. This card gains 200 ATK each Killstreak Counter on it. Once per Turn during your End Phase if this card has destroyed a Monster in Battle: You can add one "FPS-Soldier" or "Perk Power" card from your deck to your hand. 

Elite

Cannot be Normal Summoned. Cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing a "FPS-Soldier Pro", and if you do: Place the tributed monster's Killstreak Counters on this card. If this Card was Successfully Special Summoned: Put 1 "Killstreak" Counter on it. Once per turn, you can place 1 Killstreak counter on this card when it destroys a monster by battle. This card gains 300 ATK for each "Killstreak" Counter on it. Once per Turn during your End Phase if this Card destroyed a Monster in Battle: You can add one "FPS-Soldier" or "Perk Power" card from your deck to your hand. Cannot be Targeted by Opponents Card Effects. Once Per Turn During your Main Phase 1: Shuffle 1 "FPS-Soldier" , "Perk Power" or "Killstreak" card back into your deck.

Spectrator

Once Per Turn during your Main Phase 1: You can discard this card, and if you do: Special Summon 1 "FPS-Soldier Novice" from your hand, deck, or Graveyard in Attack Position. During your Main Phase 1, except the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard: You can banish this Card from your Graveyard, and if you do: add one "FPS-Soldier" or "Perk Power" card from your deck to your hand. 

Soldier Support Buddy

If this Card is Normal/or Special Summond put 2 "Killstreak" Counters on it. Once Per Turn: If this Card is destroyed in battle and sent to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "FPS-Soldier Support Buddy" from your hand or deck, and if you do put 2 "Killstreak" Counters on it.. This Card cannot be Used for an Xyz-Summoning except for the Summoning of an "FPS-Soldier" Monster. Once per turn you can remove 2 "Killstreak" Counters from this card, then increase its level by 1 or 6 until the End of this Turn.

Prestige Master

Cannot be destroyed in battle. This gains 200 ATK for each "Killstreak" Counter on the Field. Once per turn if your opponent activates a card effect is activated: negate that effect, and if you do: Destroy it. Once per turn: you can Detach 1 Xyz-Material from this card: Each "FPS-Soldier" gets 1 "Killstreak Counter". If this Card destroys a monster in battle: target 1 card on the field: shuffle it back into their Deck.

I made the edit about your opponent because the way you worded it, it could actually work against your own card effects. 

Soldier Cheater

Cannot be destroyed or targeted by card effects. This Card gains 200 ATK for each "Killstreak" Counter on the Field. Once Per Turn if a card effect is activated: negate that effect, and if you do: Banish it. Once Per Turn: You can detach 1 Xyz-Material from this Card: Until the end of this turn, you can activate card effects without removing Kill Counters. If this Card would be destroyed in battle: shuffle 1 "FPS-Soldier and 1 "Killstreak" or "Perk-Power" card back into your deck, and if you do: negate the destruction.

Spell-Attack Helicopter

Remove 5 Killstreak counters from the field to activate this card. Once per turn target up to 2 Cards, then destroy those targets. cannot be destroyed by card effects. Destroy this Card during your 3rd End Phase after Activating this Card.

That's an idea for how to edit the spell cards. 

 

 

Your monsters are a bit weak for their levels, however, all but the first monster can keep the counters of the trbuted monsters and get a boost for their counters, which makes up for their ATK, plus there's a lot of search power. Prestige Master has a lot of good effects, though I assume you meant for it to negate the opponent's effects rather than your own. Soldier Cheater is good too, since you can make level 9s easier with soldier buddy. However, you might be able to bump its ATK a little, maybe to 2500/3000, I don't know if it has so many great effects that it needs to have the same ATK as weak rank 4s. 

 

Your spells are indeed quite powerful, especially Care Package, which is an easy Pot of Greed substitute, with lower cost since it's counters rather than cards. However, they can't be used by other decks. Yep, some good synergy between these cards.

Thanks For Providing me with Proper Card Effect Wording - also Thank's for your Time Doing all this - i try to improve anything as it should be - Also I thought "Cheaters" Effects would make him to Strong if he has to much ATK and DEF.

 

BUMP: Correction of Most Card Text - Proper Wording - Some Minor Changes - Added 2 more "Spell" Cards

[KokonutLP]

BUMP: Added 1 "Effect Monster" - Added 1 "Trap Card" - Minor Text Fixes and Name Changes - Small Effect Changes

[KokonutLP]

Final Bump ~ Added 3 New Cards - Updated Card Effects ~ ReDone a Few Card effects