Arcane Siphoner

[dedavii]

Arcane Siphoner
Level 3, DARK, Spellcaster/Effect
ATK/ 0, DEF/ 0
Once per turn: You can target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; the targeted monsters ATK and DEF become 0 and this card gains ATK and DEF equal to the targeted monster as long as this card is face up on the field. (1 monster can only be targeted by this effect at a time.) This card gains 200 ATK during the Damage Step if it attacks the target monster. If the targeted monster is destroyed (by battle or card effect) and sent to the Graveyard; Gain Life Points equal to the original ATK or DEF, whichever was highest, then this card's ATK and DEF become 0.




this is from an old set i made a while ago, and is a preview of what is to come.

[Ace487]

*Sigh* This one took me a while to review. This was more of a grammar review more than anything but none the less, I understood what the effect says/does, so good on you. Though for the means of playability is rather tough to say. This is no doubt it is a "Mystic Tomato" target, being that its ATK and DEF are 0; also being a target for "Armageddon Knight". Though I doubt this card wouldn't be any significant in the graveyard with that effect, this card does however have the use of being a all purpose 'Beat Stick' in any duel, that is for sure.

Now for the Card's Effect Text. The only part that gave me a bit of trouble was "Only 1 monster can be effected by this card's effect at a time." Which I now look on at being something similar to that of the last part of a Union monsters effect. Even thought that one part seemed incorrect, I notice that the entire effect needed to be reworded. In which I believe it should read something like this:

 

"Once per turn: You can target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; the targeted monsters ATK and DEF become 0 and this card gains ATK and DEF equal to the targeted monster as long as this card is face up on the field. (1 monster can only be targeted by this effect at a time.) This card gains 200 ATK during the Damage Step. If the targeted monster is destroyed and sent to the graveyard; gain LP equal to the original ATK OR DEF, then this card's ATK and DEF become 0."

[dedavii]

Thanks for that. I'll edit it a bit to make it say something like that.