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[spoiler=Third Time's the Charmer]

Name: Neru Ianchi
Age: 21
Sex: Male

[spoiler=Appearance]

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Neru stands tall at a height of 6 feet tall (183 cm.) He is a man who often likes to dress in a more dapper clothing. This tends to hide the fact that his body is actually well toned and in shape.

 


[spoiler=Personality]
Neru is not someone who comes off as a particularly inspiring individual, nor is he entirely expressive. His voice is one that is generally mixed with some form of monotone, his humor usually deadpan, and his face often times wears a flat expression. He never quite seems to be interested in much of what’s going on, though saying he is without emotion would be a bit of an overstatement. He reacts to things just as a normal person would, though the expression behind those reactions are generally subdued or underwhelmed.

 

Despite what seems to be a sort of lethargy, Neru isn’t any bit so. While his reactions would say otherwise, he is a person who is a pretty diligent worker and willingly does just about any labor that he has to. He is a person who takes things surprisingly seriously, and tends to consider himself good both working and talking with people. The latter of which runs into some snags, though, due to his uncaring appearance, slight lack of tact, and one other quality. 

 

Neru is also a fine connoisseur of the female figure. A man whose taste forms in a manner he finds factual rather than opinionated, his travels has only honed this appreciation of his. He is a man who looks upon all of the fairer sex with an almost analytical view, observing and coming to conclusions about a woman’s appeal. He is, however, by no means a flirt and doesn’t not speak these analyses out of flattery, and instead just to inform.

 

 

[spoiler=Biography]

Neru was born in a rather affluent city within the Kingdom of Fraxinus, to a rather average family. They were one that never had really stood out, but were constantly in service to the kingdom; whether through knightship or service to the famed guild of Yggdrasil. Neru and his older brother were no such exception to this rule. From an early age they were taught to dedicate themselves, body and mind, to the glory of their kingdom, and thus were trained to be knights in the service of their country. The two brothers worked tirelessly, never allowing the other to surpass them.

 

The two were looked upon as natural examples of what a knight in training should be. Both were diligent, both had picked up their family’s magic fairly easily, and both were always physically above their peers. However, as Neru continued to grow, he had come to the realization that he hadn’t ever actually cared about what he was doing; he was simply doing this because he was told to. And so, he did the only thing an absolutely responsible sixteen year old boy would do. He left home.

 

While his parents had completely objected to this and tried to stop him, he had help from his brother in his escape from his household and was able to go free. And so, for the next five years, Neru traveled the world in search of things to do and see. Through a combination of skill, luck and kindness from others, he had managed to make a decent enough living and do whatever he felt like. After his years of traveling, he had heard of a guild that was rising from its once fallen ashes and making a comeback. That guild was, of course, Cherry Heart. Thinking joining a guild would be a good place to do what he had already been doing, only for pay, and a place where the fairer sex was likely to flock to, he had resolved to join the guild. 

 

 

[spoiler=Abilities] 

Physical Abilities:

  • Athleticism: Due to repeated physical exercises and extended traveling, Neru is no slouch in the physical fitness department. A man whose training has lended itself more to the increase of agility rather than strength, Neru has an above average stamina and speed.
  • Enhanced Agility: Neru can also use magic to increase his already decent physical parameters to a much higher degree, increasing his speed and reflexes.
  • Proficiency: While Neru is trained in some martial weapons, lack of use over the users has made him only slightly better than a complete amateur at most. Instead, his weapon skills lie mostly in the use of a short swords and knives. Of which, he always keeps his sword sheathed and buckled to the small of his back.

Barrier Magic:
Neru’s primary form of magic is barrier magic. It consists of him creating rather ornate and glowing circular walls that block anything that try to pass through them. Slamming into one of these barrier has the feeling of slamming into a brick wall. The barriers themselves are not actually impenetrable, and break as easily as a regular shield would. The barriers themselves don’t cost much mana to project, but to keep them projected under duress costs far more. This leads to them being far more useful as stopgaps then actual walls. The barriers are, at max, 1 meter long and can be projected anywhere from Neru’s body to 2 meters away from him. While the barrier casting time is pretty fast, casting them farther from his own body takes more time and reaction speed. Of the barriers he has, he can only have two projected max at one time.

 

 

 

 

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Decided to make a third character for the first time in a thing I am not hosting...hopefully I don't regret this XP

[spoiler=Gabriel, the Supreme jabroni]Name: Gabriel Desdem
Age: 20
Sex: Male

Race: Human
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5'10" and 170 pounds.

[spoiler=Personality]Gabriel has a bit of a god complex. And by that, he has a huge god complex. He completely believes that he's the strongest, and that he's destined for greatness. And thusly he thinks of the world, and everyone in it, as his plaything. He doesn't particularly side with good or evil, just with himself. He's perfectly okay with good or bad people dying, as long as he gets his kicks and advances his own goals. That being said, Gabriel is smart. He's seen plenty of things and has heard even more stories. He knows that the "good guys" tend to be better treated, and have an easier time. And so he tends to work alongside them more often than not. But he's not opposed to acting how he wants in the meantime. Which usually is somewhat cruel, sarcastic, and manipulative.

There's a strong anger that resides in him when it comes to his father. A passion that can sometimes consume him. His care-free smirk can vanish into a scowl in a moment, and if you slight him he'll do what he can to get back at you. Even it it takes years.

He quite likes to flirt, and is very aggressive in his pursuing of someone, be it male, female, or otherwise. He isn't used to rejection but he treats it as a challenge. Too much rejection and insult however can turn him bitter and he'll respond with snide remarks and venom.

Gabriel thinks that everyone else is complete trash, only good to entertain him. And he makes it quite clear unless he thinks that being kind will yield better, more interesting, results.

 

[spoiler=Biography]Gabriel grew up in a place that hated him. His parents were missing, and his grandparents hated him. For they didn't have any love for Gabriel's father, believing he had tainted their daughter. Thus he was raised with bitterness and constant mockery and abuse. Some of which left many deep scars, physical, mental, and emotional alike. Gabriel grew to hate them. However he hated his father even more. The man who had abandoned him with these horrible people who hated him. It didn't help that his grandparents would often tell him tales about why his father was complete trash. And, if trash like his grandparents called his father trash, he must be the worst kind of person.

Luckily Gabriel discovered he had a talent for magic. And it wasn't very long before he left his home, and set out to travel the world. His goal? Become strong, strong enough to remake the world as he saw fit. And strong enough to find his father and end his life for bringing him into such hell.

During his travels, in which he slept with quite a few men and women, he heard rumors of a guild called Cherry Heart. A legendary guild from a time long past. Perhaps this was his chance to fulfill his dreams? Maybe working for Cherry Heart would lead him down an even greater path.And allow him to find his father. He figures eventually taking enough quests will lead to clues of his whereabouts.

 

[spoiler=Abilities]Fulad-zereh:A magic artifact that Gabriel discovered in his travels. He has no idea what it is, but he can dismiss and summon it at will. Gabriel has learned how to use his blade in combat and is a great swordsman.

Chains of Judgement: Gabriel's main magic. The ability to form multiple, durable, chains and control them at will. He can only summon two at a time, and have a range of twenty feet.

Soul Fire: A technique passed on by his father, and one Gabriel has yet to master. It shoots a stream of black flames at the target, causing no physical damage, but causing great spiritual harm and extreme pain. However he doesn't know how to control it.

 

[spoiler=Misc][spoiler=Themes][spoiler=Theme 1]

[spoiler=Theme 2]

[spoiler=Theme 3]

 

 

 

 

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  On 4/7/2016 at 1:29 AM, Dread Fighter Cow said:

Decided to make a third character for the first time in a thing I am not hosting...hopefully I don't regret this XP

 

Another person making a third character....Maybe I've underestimated you. 

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I was inspired to make a villain

 

[spoiler= WIP Serenity, the Heavenly Construct]

 


"Perfection and Peace in all things."


 

Name: Serenity
Age: Unknown
Sex: Female

Race: Construct

Appearance: [spoiler=show]

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Height: 6'4

Weight: 200 pounds

Serenity is mde entirely of porcelain, only dawning some gold armor in various spots, such as her boots and jewelry. Although she appears to be a decoration, her true form is just pure light. The porcelain shell is surprisingly durable. Her hair doubles as angel wings.

 

Personality: [spoiler=show]

Serenity is a being who believes in perfection and purity in all things. Because of this, her intentions seem good. However, this trait makes her a ruthless killer, who has no real emotion. She does what she was created to do, purify evil by slaying it. She shows no emotion, not even the slightest remorse. This is because she is incapable of feeling such emotions. Although her motivations are pure, they appear rather evil. 

 

Serenity can not be conversed with, or reasoned with. She is goal oriented, and will not stop doing whatever it is she desires until she has obtained said goal. This primary goal is the eradication of everything evil and impure. Serenity does show "mercy" at times, by making her kills as swift and painless as possible. She does not waste time monologuing about her "giant scheme" or mess around in combat. 

 

Biography: [spoiler=show]

WIP

 

Combat and Abilities: [spoiler=show]

Serenity fights with a whip of light. On top of this, she uses Light Magic. Her whip burns all who touch it, except her. Not only does it have a large range, clocking in at 1 yard maximum range. She is very fast moving, and able to change her hands into different weapons when not weilding the whip. The primary construct outside of that is naturally a sword in one hand, a shield in the other.

 

Wall of Light: Serenity creates a wall of burning light. While not impassible, it melts the flesh of anyone who touches it. It is not useful as an offensive tactic however, due to her halo showing where the wall is going to form 5 seconds before it actually does.

 

Blind: Serenity creates an overwhelming burst of light from her body, causing anyone nearby to feel intense heat, as well as blinding people staring at her temporarily.

 

Halo Binding: Serenity launches her halo, and if it connects, it shrinks in size, binding them in place.

 

Reflect Barrier: Serenity creates a large screen of light, causing all projectiles to return to the caster of them

 

Angelic Missile Barrage: Serenity takes to the skies, and creates a giant glowing rune of light. From it, missiles of Light rain down, inflicting high damage. It is her signature technique, and one use per fight. Enemies hit by it feel as if the sun just collided with them.

 

Weakness: Despite her amazing speed and offensive roster, she is fragile and the moment her porcelain shell breaks she must retreat. If the entire armor is shattered, her true form, one of pure light, is revealed. One strike will immediately kill her if it hits the core of her being. She is mostly a one on one fighter, so she uses walls of light and reflect barriers to single out opponents and deliver justice one tainted being at a time.

 

Misc:

Theme

 

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[spoiler=Rising Star Nova]


 

“Ever felt about regretting a life-changing decision you made? Quite a pain, isn’t it?”

 


 

“But nevermind that, I like where I am now.”

 

Name: Celica Elirea Solais / Angelica Valahia Silkans
Age: 25 years old
Gender: Female
Race: Human


[spoiler=Appearance]
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162 cm, 53 kg. Pretty lightly built, and her height's nothing special. Usually wears something more practical outside of combat.

 


[spoiler=Personality]
Celica is a calm, passionate young woman who has taken quite a liking to the art of dancing, though she does appreciate most forms of art in general. She usually doesn’t really bother when other people try to bug her, and will rarely lash out as people no matter how much they agitate her, although she’d at times talk sternly to them instead. She’s pretty chill in general, not really someone who would be bothered by something too trivial like that. Although, at times this could be seen by others as her being uncaring by others, as she would even ignore legitimate advices and suggestions at times.

 

Despite of her flighty nature, she’s really hardheaded and determined on things that she has chosen to pursue or decision she has picked. As mentioned above, it’s hard getting suggestions into her head once that happens, which often leads to her making bad mistakes. She’s aware of this being the issue, but it’s not something she felt as important enough to fix, especially as she’d learn from her mistakes anyway. In fact, she accepts them with open hands. One cannot enjoy and understand life to its fullest if they haven’t failed, that’s what she believes in. it’s fine to fail no matter how much, since the experience of failing will help her out later on in her life. In a way, she always feel that it’s pointless to listen to others for advice, when the best thing is to live her life with her own way, no matter where it will lead her.

 

She has an air of pride and assuredness with her voice, which reinforces that stubborn and determined side of her. She’s generally quite respectful of others though even if she often ignored their words, usually going out of her way to not offend them. However, she does have a big point of regret that she doesn’t really like to talk about, the only crack in the stubborn fortress of hers.

 

It might be unclear from the surface, but Celica is actually trying her best to keep her image of being cool and someone to be looked up to by others. It's not a facade by all means, but she's struggling to not show her weakness to others as best as she could. As mentioned above regarding failures, even those would be something Celica try to make so that she doesn't show actual weakness to others. She just...has no intentions in disappointing others after they looked up to her. So she might as well try her best in looking like the ace that others see her as.


[spoiler=Biography]

She's born from a relatively wealthy family as the second child. She didn't know her older brother much since he was quite distant, and before long he had chosen to be enlisted in the military, so Celica couldn't really feel attached to him as siblings. She grew up relatively normally, taking her classes and advancing in a normal, if satisfying manner, and for then, she was just following the path her family had set for her, although she never really felt that it's the right path for her. Until she met him.

 

He was a handsome youth, with the blood of a noble family running through his veins. They started off as friends, and grew closer as time passed. Celica felt that he was the right path for him, so she started to openly oppose the path her family had set for her. Her family actually did not oppose their relationship, but they kept saying that she should stop being too reckless with her decisions, yet she didn't budge. Viewing her own family as non-supportive again, she later convinced her lover to take her away, and they soon married afterwards.

 

However, it didn't last. She saw all the hidden side of that man once she married him, and she realized that what she thought was the right choice was not something that she could actually live in. She lamented that fact that her family was actually right, but for a while she chose to stay to see if things would get better or not. However, not long after she realized that their relationship was unsalvageable - there was no more points of suffering through it anymore. So she just left one day. No one heard of anything about that girl anymore ever since then.

 

Several months later, a young woman named Celica applied to the Yggdrasil guild, and caught interest of the people there due to her unique, if unpolished, brand of magic, and her skill in general. It was far from an easy process to be accepted into something that elite, but she managed to pass the trials, and was accepted into the guild. The next few years went quite well for her, building up fame and prestige and skill there until she was quite renowned, even though still a bit far from the true top brasses of the guild. Nevertheless, she was still an exceptional ace comparably to the others, and thus she was later chosen to be Yggdrasil's official representative on the newly revived Cherry Heart. The optimistic Celica saw it as just her going to assist a fledgling guild to get off the ground, but...?


[spoiler=Ability]
  • Moralltach and Beagalltach: Her two flaming swords. It was actually two torch-like devices that was adorned with ancient magical runes, allowing the user to use fire magic using them. The default mode for it when activated is the flaming saber mode, which have variable blade length, but it can be adjusted to multiple other functions, even more advanced fire spells are within its reach if the user has figured out the way to utilize it that way.
  • Sword Dancer: She is very light on her feet, and her speed is downright superhuman in nature. Her fight using her sword is more akin to a dance, attacking her opponent with a wild, but choreographed and rhythmical series of relentless attacks.
  • Throwing Swords: Swords uniquely made for throwing purposes. She only has a limited amount of them, but using the next power would allow her to restock on them pretty easily. Due to their purpose, they're built in such a way that made them quite frail, but even then with her ability, she can utilize it to her advantage.
  • Origin Purification: Her brand of magic. She is capable of restoring anything nonliving (or herself) back to a certain reset point (which might or might not include their previous location if she so desires), or to their purest form if that is applicable. Of course, larger objects (something larger than herself) would be a lot harder to reset. The requirement for this is needing the object to have been in direct contact with herself in the last 10 minutes, and as the objects would be reset back to a certain point after she applied her power, she wouldn't be able to restore them again immediately afterwards. If she's restoring herself with this ability, it will take ten minutes to apply and she won't be able to use the ability on herself again for the next half an hour, which makes it pretty impractical to use for actual healing purpose.
    • Restore: Recreates an object by using a piece of it as a basis. Celica has to have knowledge and imagery of the object that she will recreate, and her product will only function as a normal object would, lacking in any form of magic with it since she's using magical energy to recreate matter and it'd be impossible for her to recreate any form of magic.
    • Reset: Returns a complete object into its base components.. A wooden door can be turned back into a piece of log and a bunch of metal bars, etc. She has limits on how detailed would the object breakdown be, and she must have some knowledge in what kind of elements would she need to split the objects into. This takes quite a while to prepare depending on how detailed would the breakdown be, but in general it's something that's too impractical for combat use as she wouldn't be able to focus on the object long enough to do it.
    • Rewind: Returns an object to its condition and position from a previous time. Time limit is 10 minutes of rewind. Even if the target has been destroyed once this is cast, it can still be reset. She can only activate this 5 times every half an hour, otherwise the strain would hurt her.

 


[spoiler=Miscellaneous]
  • Theme Song: Rising Star Nova ~ Touhou Labyrinth 2 OST
  • Likes apples a lot
  • Really likes adventuring, but her favorite pastime activity is monster-hunting
  • Moralltach's default flame is bigger than Beagalltach's, which is how she differentiates the two.
  • Even if the above is treasures that she found somewhere, she actually doesn't like treasure hunting muc

 


 

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New Character WIP

Xia https://imgur.com/0rhmj97

 

Name: Xia Quelaan

Age: 25

Gender: Female

Race: Daimon

Appearance: Long, black hair, crimson red eyes, mostly seen wearing a brown cloak, height-5'11" weight-172lbs, when she wears her cloak's hood all you can see are her glowing red eyes

 

Personality: Because of her isolation from civilization, Xia is not very social. She prefers to keep her distance from others and doesn't like open conversation. As such, Xia is very curious of new things and has trouble dropping a subject that interests her. She also has protective instincts when someone is in trouble, Xia is also fierce in battle, preferring to not show mercy to her enemies. Xia can't help but feel useless when she can't do something right. In the end she usually seeks advice from the creature in her when she can't think of anything else. Though, when she can do something on her own without aid, she can get a confidence boost, even if her aquaintance isnt much for getting excited. By joining Cherry Heart, she hopes not only to gain info on her unknown acquaintance but to also gain a little self respect by helping other people and guild members during quests.

 

Biography: Xia doesn't remember much of her past, all that she can remember is that her home was destroyed by a large bandit raid. Her memory comes back to her in horrible dreams, twisted forms of memory produced by an unknown entity that lived within Her. This creature doesn't seem to want to harm Xia and acts as a guide for her. The creature keeps its identity secret and only ever gives Xia a piece of her memory every so often. Xia wandered Arbolia, isolating herself further from civilization, until all she knew was this being inside her. One day, Xia was traveling through a little town, to rest after a long day of traveling when she overheard some townsfolk talking about the revival of an ancient guild. Ancient, maybe this guild would know of the creature in her, or maybe any mages in the guild could tell her a thing or two about the magic she possesses. The creature had no quarrles over joining the guild but told Xia not to get her hopes up. And so Xia set out, in the hopes of unlocking her memories, and to find out whether this creature inside her is a guardian, or a something dangerous.

 

Abilities: Skilled with spear based weapons like her bident, possesses strong pyromancy skills as seen by her black fire, can brand weak minded people to control them for a set amount of time, demonic form enhances all her skills but she can only last in her demon form for a set time as it uses her life force to sustain it. Xia can also move a short distance using an instantaneous form of teleportation. This magic is mainly used as a form of defense but can be used to get the jump on an unaware enemy.

 

Misc: Theme Song-

Realization Theme-

Demon form- Xia Demon https://imgur.com/B8fePse

Daemon is a phrase for describing a human who has been turned into a demon. Xia's Demon form effectively doubles her strength. Black flames traditionally are associated with dark magic and can leave very severe burns and are seen to be stronger than any type of fire. Xia also has a taste for sweets.

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[spoiler=The Bruiser from the Bronze]


 

"Yea,"



Name: Mac Louis
Age: 19
Sex: Male


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He stands at 4'8 and weighs 107 pounds.  Mac wears nothing but hoodies and shorts for every occasion, unless forced to wear something else.




[spoiler=Personality]Mac is a quiet man, often answering in one word answers, if at all. He prefers to let his actions speak louder than his words. Besides, he's not particularly a good speaker in the first place. He tries not to bother others, spending most of his days training and eating chocolate. He maybe addicted to chocolate and can be bribed by it decently easily.

 

Not much fazes this man, having seen plenty of weird things in his time. He takes most things in stride and keeps going. He loves to spar with willing people, finding new challenges and making friends by punching them in the face. The one thing he won't stand for is people abusing the power they have to oppress the weak, whether it's kids bullying another, or a king doing it to his people. He will do everything in his power to stop that.

A sore spot of Mac is his height. Being one of the shortest people around is a bit of a sore spot for him, and he does not like being made fun of for it. He especially hates it if someone thinks he can't accomplish something just because of his height, and it is the easiest way to anger him and provoke him into a fight, besides the gentler 'Hey, wanna fight?'.

 



[spoiler=Biography] Mac grew up in a small town in the far East, far past the Valais Mountains known as the City of Bronze, due to the high amounts of bronze that could be mined from there. His parents died from a mining accident when he was 4, so he spent many of his days living on the streets, where he would fight and steal to keep living. Being smaller than most kids around his age, however, made him the prime targets for bullies, who would beat him up daily. However, on his 9th birthday, everything changed.

As he was being attacked by bullies yet again, a man simply known as Doc came to his rescue. Doc then took in Mac and taught him how to fight in a special fighting style Doc called 'boxing', a strange style which used only a man's fists to achieve victory. After training hard for five years, Doc took him around the East, where Mac fought many strange opponents to test himself. Through clever thinking and the training he received, Mac won each fight, and soon became known as the 'Undefeated of the East'.

 

When he turned 17, Doc told him it was time to go their separate ways for now, seeing as Mac had overcome every challenge in the East, but Doc wanted to explore even further east. Mac's adopted father told him of a guild known as Cherry Heart in the city of Prunus and challenged him to join it, believing that guild would not only provide Mac with new obstacles, but let him use his skills to help people. Mac agreed, and with a fistbump and a promise to see each other again someday, Mac headed to Prunus, hoping to fulfill his father's challenge.

 

After two long years... he had finally made it.




[spoiler=Abilities]Peak Physical Condition - Due to training for a good portion of his life, Mac is in top physical condition, which he keeps himself in by training every day. He has an insane amount of natural strength, speed, and endurance, able to keep doing whatever it is he has to do for quite a while.

 

Fighting Experience - Due to his adopted father's training back home, Mac is a proficient fighter, although strangely, he uses only his fists while fighting.

 

Absorb Magic - Mac has the ability to create a magical aura that absorbs the kinetic energy behind attacks and use it to enhance his strength and speed. It does not, however, protect him from damage that may result from an attack. For example, if he was punched, he would absorb the kinetic energy, but he would still feel and be hurt by the punch.

He can not punch the aura itself to power himself up, but he could ask someone else to do so. This power also only works if he has actually cast the aura. There is also a limit to exactly how much power he can store before his body starts to deteriorate due to trying to hold in all the energy. To top it all off, he can only have the aura up for five seconds at a time, and there is a 20 second cool-down time before he can cast it again.

 

Limiter Removal - This magic allows him to control his adrenaline systems and temporarily release his mind's restraints on the body's muscles, allowing him to access his body's full potential. In doing so, however, he risks obliterating those very same muscles.

 

[spoiler=His Ultimate Attack]Knock Out Uppercut - Mac channels all the power he has absorbed into his fist and throws an extremely powerful uppercut. This move has been known to knock out the strongest of men, but due to all the magic energy he pours into it, this one punch drains all his magical reserves, and he can not cast his aura again for exactly 24 hours. 

 


 

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[spoiler=Inkheart | WIP]

 

Name: Delilah

Age: 26

Gender: Female

[spoiler=Appearance]

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Delilah wears a dress that goes down to her knees, the top part of it is as depicted in the picture while the lower part is a simple black skirt. She also wears a pair of black leather sandals.

 

The major difference between her and the picture is the fact that instead of red eyes she has green eyes.

 

She stand at 1.77 metres.

 

[spoiler=Personality]

 

[spoiler=Biography]

Bella was born as an accident, she was not wanted by her parents and was abandoned just a few weeks after her birth. She was taken into an orphanage were she lived for about 13 years. At the orphanage they were very strict. At the age of 13 she was adopted by a family. The years she passed with this new family were the happiest of her life, she was taught magic and to be creative, to treat others kindly and to help others in need. She and her two new parents were all very happy until, when Bella was 24, they had some very serious economical problems, they needed money fast if they didn't want to end up homeless, so they set up a marriage between Bella and a relatively wealthy family, so they might be on safer economic grounds. Bella happily accepted, as a way to thank her parents for all they had done to help her.

 

The marriage was going well, Bella's family was now back in stable conditions. It seemed like everything seemed to be going well, that is until Bella's husband one day left her. He lost interest in her and was going out with another woman. He made her leave the house. She returned to live with her parents. Unluckily, Bella's now ex-husband died shortly after he left her, leading many people to believe that she killed him as an act of revenge. She had to leave her parents so that her new reputation couldn't affect them. Now homeless and with the reputation of a murderer, she wandered far away from her village until she reached the city of Prunus were it was rumored that the famous Cherry Heart guild was reborn.

 

The only things she had with her were a diary and some money. She started writing on her diary the important things: age, how to use magic, and to seek help at the Cherry Heart guild. She didn't write a single thing about her past and she gave herself a new name: Delilah. She looked in town for a skilled alchemist and used a big part of her remaining money to pay for a potion to make her lose her memory. She then sat under a tree right outside the city and drank the potion.

 

 

[spoiler=Abilities]

  • Ink Magic: This is her main and only form of magic, it allows her to manipulate ink in multiple different ways. With the help of a skilled alchemist she can even change her ink's capabilities by adding special ingredients to it, although ink changing is a delicate process that can't be done in the middle of battle. On her diary she has written a series of runes from which she draws the ink from and gives it various forms:
    • Ink Slash: She can use the ink to create brush like slashes, these in itself do quite minor damage but they are very fast and can chain very easily.
    • Ink Rain: This ability will be learned later in the rp. It allows her to send a series of ink blobs up high and send them down as solidified arrows.
    • Ink Wolf: This ability allows her to summon a wolf companion made of ink. The wolf is big enough to be ridden by her and it helps her strike down opponents. Since it's made of ink, the majority of the attacks will deal no damage unless it's hit in its weak point: a green gem right under its belly. If it stands on big ink puddles, it's able to drain from them to get bigger and deal more damage

All of her abilities leave ink stains where they hit that usually fade after a minute or so.

 

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  • If you want an idea of how her ink abilities look like, look at Black Desert Online's Tamer class.

     

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Alright, first things first. Posted with the encounter in the Hunt the Beast quest. If anyone has any questions regarding it, they can direct it to me.

 

Secondly, new apps.

 

Xia still needs another paragraph of personality, so basically just elaborate more about her. I get what her character is supposed to be like, but more details or unique quirks would be nice to mention. Burns that will never heal is...pretty harsh. Though since everyone doesn't have super regeneration and healing is not that common, it would probably just have the same effect as a normal severe burn in here. Just...please make it so that this part is not the default feature of the flame, since it could lead to some pretty limiting situations in the future.

 

Mac can benefit with some more fleshing out on his personality tab, but what you have is acceptable. The main issue is his absorb magic. At first, I see it as being a shield, so one can play around it. However, as an aura it pretty much makes him effectively immune to physical attacks once it's up...which is pretty much most attacks in this setting. Things like water, wind, and earth based magic that attacks you would be rendered null by it. Even if it doesn't last forever and has limits, a 100% absorption and transformation of kinetic energy is an issue. And even if he needs to spend energy to keep it up, the fact that what it absorbs could very well be used to extend its duration in theory made it pretty ridiculous.

 

That ability needs a lot more clearly defined boundaries and limits, or a complete rework.

 

Basia is fine and accepted, however please contact Yui before adding her race's info into the docs. He's the one that made Kettir, and since your race is pretty intertwined with his, might be best to make sure everything aligns well.

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