The "-styx" Continuation- "In a world without water..."

[Sluggaholic]

Though I call this a "Continuation", it's moreso the second Card Pack in my "-styx" archetype. I've already finished the first Card Pack if you want to check it out. I wouldn't recommend commenting, however, because that would be thread necromancy. Instead, just post the changes you think must be made with those cards here, and I'll add them to the OP. For now, I'd like to introduce a new Archetype that plays along with the "-styx" Archetype. While it does branch off a fair bit from them, these cards are indeed related, as I'm sure you'll soon see.

 

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[spoiler= "-styx" Card Pack #2 - The Heathens of Nixtah]

 

Monsters x7 [Main Monsters]

 

[spoiler=First of the "Humasilisks"]

 

"Humasilisk Jake"

Reptile-type / EARTH Attribute / Level 2

LORE: "Roaming the desert can twist the mind. It can twist  the soul. And finally, it can twist the body. In horrible, unimaginable, irreversible ways..."

900 ATK / 500 DEF

 

 

"Humasilisk Alex"

Reptile-type / EARTH Attribute / Level 2

LORE: "Sometimes, as unfortunate as it is, your friends are the things that you simply cannot rely upon anymore... When that day arrives, instinct takes over."

750 ATK / 650 DEF

 

"Humasilisk Ferris"

Reptile-type / EARTH Attribute / Level 2

LORE: "Power corrupts. Absolute power corrupts absolutely."

950 ATK / 350 DEF

 

 

"Humasilisk Jeremiah"

Reptile-type / EARTH Attribute / Level 2

LORE: "It's time to return to your roots..."

500 ATK / 800 DEF

 

 

"Humasilisk Maaorn"

Reptile-type / EARTH Attribute / Level 4 - Pendulum Scale <1 / 1>

Pendulum Effect: Once per turn, you may tribute one card on your side of the field- set one "Humasilisk" Spell Card from your Deck on your side of the field. Special Summoned cards your opponent control lose 200 Attack.

Monster Effect:  Level 2 monsters can attack your opponent directly while this card is face-up on the field. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. These effects cannot be negated.

2000 ATK / 0 DEF

 

 

"Humasilisk Nyne"

Reptile-type (Pendulum - Union) / EARTH Attribute / Level 4 - Pendulum Scale <4 / 4>

Pendulum Effect: When a card(s) is Pendulum Summoned to your side of the field: you may add one Level 2 monster from your Graveyard or Deck to your hand.

Monster Effect: Once per turn, while this card you control is on the field, you can either: Target 1 face-up monster you control; equip this card to that target, OR: Unequip this card and Special Summon it in face-up Defense Position. The equipped monster gains this effect: this card cannot be destroyed by battle, and all battle damage you would take is dealt to your opponent instead. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.)

0 ATK / 2000 DEF

 

 

"Erengard, the Humasilisk Champion"

Reptile-type / EARTH Attribute / Level 8

Monster Effect: This card may not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card must be Special Summoned to your side of the field by tributing any number of "Humasilisk" Monsters you control (min.1). Normal Monsters you control can attack your opponent directly. If 4 or more monsters were tributed to summon this card, it gains this effect:

*Draw one card, then, destroy one card your opponent controls. If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate cards or effects until the end of the Battle Phase.

2800 ATK / 2200 DEF

 

 

Spells x4

 

[spoiler=The Humasilisk Spells]

 

"Humasilisk Spawn"

Continuous Spell Card

Effect: When this card is activated, you may add one Level 4 or lower Reptile-type Normal Monster from your Deck to your hand. Once per turn, you may destroy this card and one Normal Monster you control that's Level 2 or lower; return one face-up monster to the Deck and inflict damage to your opponent equal to its attack. Reptile-type Monsters you control gain 100 Attack Points.

 

 

"Humasilisk Technique"

Normal Spell Card

Effect: Tribute any number of face-up Level 2 or lower Normal Monsters whose levels combined are less than 10; deal damage to your opponent equal to the combined levels of the monsters tributed x300. During either player's turn, except the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard, you may banish this card: Special Summon any number of Level 2 or lower Normal Monsters whose combined levels are less than 10 from your Graveyard in Defense mode, and reduce their Defense(s) to 0. You may only use one "Humasilisk Technique" per turn.

 

 

"Humasilisk World Without Water - Nixtah"

Field Spell Card

Effect: When this card is activated, send all "-styx" cards your opponent controls to the Graveyard, ignoring their effects. Your opponent cannot activate Field Spells while this Field Spell is in play. Your opponents monsters cannot declare attacks, and lose 100 Attack for every face-up "Humasilisk" card you control, including this card. During your End Phase, send one face-up "Humasilisk" Monster you control to the Graveyard, or destroy this card.

 

 

"Humasilisk Furious Retaliation"

Continuous Spell Card

Effect: Once per turn, if a Normal Monster(s) are tributed on your side of the field, you may target any amount of the cards tributed: Special Summon them during your End Phase. Once per turn, if any number of "Humasilisk" monsters are sent from your Deck to the Graveyard, you may target cards your opponent controls, up to the number of cards sent: send them to the Graveyard. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, target as many Normal Monsters in your Graveyard (min.1) as you can, and shuffle them into the deck, then draw 1 card. You can only control one "Humasilisk Furious Retaliation".

 

 

Traps x7

 

[spoiler=The Humasilisk Traps]

 

"Humasilisk Drain"

Continuous Trap Card

Effect: Once per turn, when an opponent's monster that was Special Summoned to the field would activate its effect, you can Tribute one "Humasilisk" Monster you control; negate that monster's effect and shuffle it into the Deck. While this card is face-up on the field, "Humasilisk" monsters you control gain 100 ATK points.

 

 

"Humasilisk Pit"

Counter-Trap Card

Effect: Once per turn, when your opponent would Special Summon a monster(s), tribute a face-up "Humasilisk" monster you control; negate that Special Summon, and if you do, take damage equal to the tributed monster's level x1000. Your opponent gains any Life Points lost because of this effect. You can only use one "Humasilisk Pit" per turn.

 

 

"Humasilisk Rain"

Normal Trap Card

Effect: Once per turn, when a monster is Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field, you may pay Life Points in increments of 500; Special Summon a number of "Snake-Eater" Tokens (Reptile/EARTH/Level 2/ATK 0/DEF 0) to your opponent's side of the field in attack mode. These Tokens cannot be tributed for a Tribute Summon or used as Synchro Materials for a Synchro Summon.

 

 

"Humasilisk Desert Scimitar"

Normal Trap Card

Effect: Target one face-up "Humasilisk" monster you control and equip this card to it: it gains 300 Atk, and if it attacks a defense position monster, inflict piercing battle damage. If this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of the equipped monster being Tributed, equip this card to the card that monster was tributed for. You can banish this card from the Graveyard and target one face-up "Humasilisk" monster you control; when it attacks this turn, it is unaffected by your opponent's card effects until the end of the Battle Phase. You can only use each of these effects of "Humasilisk Desert Scimitar" once per turn, and can only have one face-up "Humasilisk Desert Scimitar" at a time.

 

 

"Getorochi, Whip of Pain"

Normal Trap Card

Effect: When this card is activated: Special Summon it as an Effect Monster to the field with this effect: When this card is Tributed for a Summon, the Summoned monster gains this effect: when this card is summoned, draw one card. (Reptile/FIRE/Level 6/ATK 2300/DEF 1500). "Getorochi, Whip of Pain" cannot declare an attack, or be used as a Synchro or Xyz material. You cannot Tribute this monster except for the Summon of a "-styx" or "Humasilisk" monster. If this card is Tributed for a Summon, equip it to the Summoned Monster. The monster equipped with this card can declare a second attack each Battle Phase this turn.

 

 

"Getoroboros, Whip of Pleasure"

Normal Trap Card

Effect: When this card is activated: Special Summon it as an Effect Monster to the field with this effect: When this card is Tributed for a Summon, the Summoned monster gains this effect: when this card is summoned, return one card to the hand. (Reptile/Water/Level 6/ATK 1500/DEF 2300). "Getoroboros, Whip of Pleasure" cannot declare an attack, or be used as a Synchro or Xyz material. You cannot Tribute this monster except for the Summon of a "-styx" or "Humasilisk" monster. If this card is Tributed for a Summon, equip it to the Summoned Monster. When the monster equipped with this card destroys a monster by battle, gain Life Points equal to that monster's Attack Points.

 

 

"Sacrificial Gains"

Continuous Trap Card

Effect: When this card is activated, target one monster your opponent controls: tribute "Humasilisk" monsters on your side of the field equal to or greater than that monster's level, and if you do, take control of that monster. When that card leaves the field, except by being used as a Tribute, you lose 3000 Life Points. When that card is Tributed, draw two cards. When this card leaves the field, shuffle that card into your opponent's Deck. You can only control one "Sacrificial Gains".

 

Other x8 [Non-Humasilisk Cards]

 

[spoiler=Revengance Against Humasilisk]

 

"Destyx Jake Enhanced"

Warrior-type / EARTH Attribute / Level 6

Effect: This card may not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card must be Special Summoned to your side of the field by returning a face-up "Destyx Jake" you control to the hand. This card gains 400 Attack for all face-up "-styx" monsters you control, besides this card. Once per turn, you can discard any number of Spell or Trap cards from your hand and draw an equal amount of cards from your deck. Once per turn, you may Special Summon one "-styx" Monster from your hand.

2600 ATK / 1900 DEF

 

 

"Destyx Alex Enhanced"

Spellcaster-type / FIRE Attribute / Level 6

Effect: This card may not be Normal Summon or Set. This card must be Special Summoned by returning one face-up "Destyx Alex" to the hand. This card gains 400 Attack for all face-up "-styx" cards you control besides this card. Once per turn, you may discard any number of Monster cards from your hand; add an equal amount of Spell/Trap cards from your Graveyard to your hand. This card cannot be affected by your opponent's card effects.

2300 ATK / 2200 DEF

 

 

"Forstyx Ferris Enhanced"

Beast-Warrior-type / WATER Attribute / Level 6

Effect: This card may not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card must be Special Summoned by returning one "Forstyx Ferris" to the hand, and cannot be Special Summoned any other way. No other monster may be Special Summoned the turn this card is Summoned. This card gains 200 Attack for every face-up "-styx" monster you control besides this card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle, and all monsters your opponent controls must attack this card, if able. This card cannot attack your opponent directly, but can attack all Monsters they control once. If it attacks a Defense position monster, deal piercing damage to your opponent.

2700 ATK / 1600 DEF

 

 

"Cragstyx Jeremiah Enhanced"

Warrior-type / WIND Attribute / Level 6

Effect: This card may not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card must be Special Summoned by returning a face-up "Cragstyx Jeremiah" you control to your hand. This card gains 200 Attack for every face-up "-styx" card you control. This card can attack your opponent directly, and if it does, any battle damage it does is halved. This card can attack twice per Battle Phase. Once per turn you can Special Summon one "Mambyx" Token (Reptile/WIND/Level 6/ATK 2500/DEF 1800). This card cannot be targeted for attacks while you control a face-up "Mambyx" Token, and it's unaffected by Spell and Trap cards.

1800 ATK / 2500 DEF

 

 

"Transformation Stone Core"

Rock-type / LIGHT Attribute / Level 2

Effect: Once per turn, you can target one face-up "Destyx Jake" monster you control: equip this card to it from your hand. While this card is equipped to a "Destyx Jake" monster, it cannot be removed from the field by any effect except by destruction. If this card is face-up on your side of the field, it can be used as a Tribute for a Summon. When this card is Tributed for a Ritual Summon, activate this effect: equip this card to the Ritual Summoned card. Ritual Summoned cards equipped with this card gains 500 Attack Points. You can only control one "Transformation Stone Core".

500 ATK/ 250 DEF

 

 

"Transformation Stone Sol"

Rock-type / LIGHT Attribute / Level 2

Effect: Once per turn, you can target one face-up "Destyx Alex" monster you control: equip this card to it from your hand. While this card is equipped to a "Destyx Alex" monster, it can, once per turn, remove one card from either player's Graveyard from play. If this card is face-up on your side of the field, it can be used as a Tribute for a Summon. When this card is Tributed for a Ritual Summon, activate this effect: equip this card to the Ritual Summoned card. Ritual Summoned cards equipped with this card can't be targeted by your opponent's card effects. You can only control one "Transformation Stone Sol".

250 ATK/ 500 DEF

 

 

"Enhanstyx"

Normal Spell Card

Effect: While you control no Spell or Trap cards, you may send one card from your hand to the Grave; add two "-styx" Pendulum Monsters from your Deck to your hand, but you may not Special Summon from your Extra Deck for the rest of the turn. If this card is sent from your hand to the Graveyard by a monster effect, you may add one Ritual Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. You may only each effect of "Enhanstyx" once per turn.

 

 

"Tecton Plae - Destyx Staff"

Equip Spell Card

Effect: Equip only to a "Destyx" Monster you control: it gains 500 Attack points. Every time the monster equipped deals your opponent battle damage, put one "Tecton" counter on this card. When this card leaves the field, activate these effects in sequence based on how many counters this card had on it. 0: Return this card to your hand; 1: Add one Pendulum Monster from your Deck or face-up in your Extra Deck to your hand; 2: Add one "-styx" Spell or Trap card from your Graveyard to your Hand; 3: Draw one card; 4: Add one Level 4 or lower "-styx" Monster from your Deck to your hand; 5: Remove from play one card your opponent controls to the Graveyard; 6: Add one Ritual Spell or Monster from your Deck to your hand. You cannot have more than one "Tecton Plae - Destyx Staff" card in your Deck.

 

 

Rituals x5

 

[spoiler=The Pinnacle of Evolution]

 

"Humasilisk Maaorn: The Galaxy"

Dragon-type (Ritual) / EARTH Attribute / Level 6

Effect: This card must be Ritual Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned any other way. Once per turn, when a monster you control would be removed from the field by an opponent's card effect, you can send this card to the Graveyard; negate that card or effect, and if you do, banish it and this card. If this card is Ritual Summoned while removed from play, activate this effect:

*Add two "Humasilisk" Pendulum Monsters to your hand, and if you do, deal your opponent 1000 damage.

2600 ATK/ 1200 DEF

 

 

"Humasilisk Nyne: The Tsunami"

Dragon-type (Ritual) / EARTH Attribute / Level 6

Effect: This card must be Ritual Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned any other way. Once per turn, if a Spell / Trap card you control would be removed from the field, you can send this card to the Graveyard; negate that card or effect, and if you do, banish it and this card. If this card is Ritual Summoned while removed from play, activate this effect:

*Add two "Humasilisk" Spell and/or Trap cards from your Deck to your hand, and if you do, discard up to two cards from your opponent's hand.

1200 ATK/ 2600 DEF

 

 

"Erengard, Diamond Humasilisk Warchieftain"

Reptile-type (Ritual) / EARTH Attribute / Level 8

Effect: Must be Ritual Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned any other way. If this card is Ritual Summoned, at least one of the cards tributed for it must have the name "Erengard, The Humasilisk Champion". Normal Monsters can attack your opponent directly while this card is on the field. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, send the top card of their Deck to the Graveyard. Cards sent to the Graveyard by this effect cannot activate their effects the turn they're sent. If this card would be destroyed by any means, you can send one face-up "Humasilisk" card you control to the Graveyard: this card is not destroyed. You can banish one "Humasilisk" or "-styx" card from your Graveyard- add this and one Ritual Spell card from your Graveyard to your hand.

3000 ATK/ 2000 DEF

 

 

"Humasilisk Diamond Overdrive"

Ritual Spell Card

Effect: You can use this card to Ritual Summon any Reptile-type Ritual Monster, however. To Ritual Summon the monster, you must tribute monsters in your hand or on your side of the field whose total levels equal the chosen monster, however, all Effect Monsters have their levels halved during calculation. Once per turn, you can shuffle one "Humasilisk" Spell or Trap from your Graveyard into the Deck; return this card to your hand. Once per turn, during either player's turn, you can banish this card and target one face-up "Humasilisk" or "-styx" Ritual Monster: when it declares an attack, your opponent can't activate cards or effects until the end of the Damage Step. You can only use one effect of "Humasilisk Diamond Overdrive" per turn and only once that turn.

 

 

"Emergency Interdimensional Revival"

Ritual Spell Card

Effect: You can use this card to Ritual Summon any "Humasilisk" Ritual Monster that's removed from play, but if you do, you must Tribute monsters in your hand or on your side of the field whose total levels equal the Ritual Monster's. All Effect Monsters used in this Ritual Summon have their levels halved during calculation. The Summoned Monster cannot attack the turn it's Ritual Summoned. If you Ritual Summoned a Level 8 or higher Ritual Monster, it gains this effect: When this card is Summoned, gain Life Points equal to this card's Attack Points. Once per turn, except for the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard, you can banish this card and one "Humasilisk" or "-styx" Ritual Monster; Special Summon from your Deck or Hand one monster whose Level matches the banished monster's, ignoring Summoning conditions. You can only use one effect of "Emergency Interdimensional Revival" per turn and only once that turn.

 

 

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As always, I am open to CnC for all my cards! Mind you, this is only the re-beginning for this archetype, as this is the second card pack I've made for it. If you want to check out the first, and didn't bother to use the link previously provided to you, you can view it here. I hope that you can take the time out of your day to review my archetype! It's beginning to come together, somewhat, but mind you, I still have a LONG ways to go! Have a good day!

 

EDIT: 3/13/16 - Added the rest of the "Enhanced" "-styx" monsters; Alex, Ferris, and Jeremiah all have their forms finished!

 

EDIT: 3/16/16 - Added Traps to the Archetype and edited some of the monsters and their effects to balance things out.

 

EDIT: 3/17/16 - Finished up "-styx" Card Pack #2- "The Heathens of Nixtah"! (Added 2 Effect Monsters, 3 Ritual Monsters, and 3 Spells.)

[Sluggaholic]

Bump

[chaosboom]

Hey bro didn't you already post these some where

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

He did back in October/November, but because of the necrobump rules in this section, he's remaking the thread (which is fine).

 

In any case, you need to follow the Advanced Clause. You were reprimanding for breaking it earlier on.

[Yuuji Kazami]

Sigh... Still have some cards that are too OP, but it wasn't as horrific as the worms.

 

Ignoring the Normal Monsters as they have to effect, I'll move on to the ones with effects.

 

Maaoran: This card has nothing wrong with it specifically, but 2000/1100 wothout a specific Summoning condition is a little to high for a Level 4 effect monster. Also, it can be splashed into other decks, as long as they run King of the Feral Imps.

 

Nyne: This is what I meant. Unlike Qlis, Zefras, or Magicians, this card is a Scale 9 Level 4 effect monster that has no restrictions on its Pendulum Summoning. This card would be better in a Rank 4 Spam deck as opposed to this archetype. Also, 2400 DEF is way too much for a Level 4 effect monster, regardless of low ATK. At most, it should only have 2000 DEF. The Union effect needs to be more clear because ot doesn't specify if it's an equip from the hand or the field.

 

Erenguard: This card is way too generic and powerful. Tributing any number of Humasilks can also be 0, and you'd get a Level 8 2800 ATK beater onto the field for free. Bad idea. Not only that, the Summon/Effect isn't even limited to OPT, which is really discerning.

 

Spawn: Nothing wrong with this one. All of its effects are fair.

 

Technique: Again, it may be way too powerful based on being generic. Geminis could use this, Normal monster beatdown could use this. I'm merely suggesting here that this card can be used bettter in other decks. Good thing you hard OPTed the effects, but there might be something else I'm forgetting here.

 

Nixtah: This was somewhat unclear and confusing. Also, a much more powerful Messenger of Peace considering your opponent's monsters cannot declare attacks. Not sure of the point in giving an opponent's monsters the boost if they can't attack, but a cost is recommended for using this card.

 

Retaliation: Too OP and generic. Ignoring the last effect, Monarchs would love the first, and Lightsworns the second. Not only that, this card is ridiculous if you have more than 1 copy on the field. Change it so you can only control 1 at a time.

 

Not sure of the last monster cards because I don't know the cards that summons them.

 

Ehanstyx: Pendulum Call. However, aince it locks down the Special Summoning for the hand in the same turn, it's not very apppealing. Not sure on how the second effect would resolve, but It is really weird in the wording.

 

The card grammar problem occurs in the other cards too.

[Sluggaholic]

Bump; I edited things. Added traps. Fun.

[Sluggaholic]

Bump; MAJOR edits done- Added the Boss Monsters of the "Humasilisk" archetype that works alongside/against the "-styx" monsters also added to this archetype. The Card Pack is FINISHED, but not FINALIZED. That will come after some CnC, both by myself, and more importantly, by others in the community.

[Sluggaholic]

Bump

[Sluggaholic]

Bump.

[shadowsapex]

Pendulum Effect: Once per turn: You can Tribute 1 monster you control; set 1 "Humasilisk" Spell Card directly from your Deck. Special Summoned monsters your opponent controls lose 200 ATK.

Monster Effect:  Level 2 monsters you control can attack your opponent directly. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. These effects cannot be negated.

Searchable scale 1 is nice.  The atk is still a bit too big to have without restrictions, I'd suggest 1900. The ability to search any of the themed spell cards is very powerful, since the spells themselves are quite powerful. I suggest you limit it to tributing a humasilisk monster.

 

Pendulum Effect: When a card(s) is Pendulum Summoned to your side of the field: You can add one Level 2 monster from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

Monster Effect: Once per turn, you can either: Target 1 face-up monster you control; equip this card to that target, OR: Unequip this card and Special Summon it in face-up Defense Position. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.) The equipped monster gains the following effect.

● This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Your opponent takes any Battle Damage you would have taken from battles involving this card.

A pendulum union monster is interesting. The union effect's fine the way it was, since ignition effects always activate on the field. It's an interesting card, since it can be equipped to any monster to let it reflect damage. I don't know if there's anything that can abuse it though. The pendulum effect should not be generic, since it can search any number of things, not just archetypal cards.

 

Monster Effect: Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by tributing any number of "Humasilisk" Monsters you control (min. 1) and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. Normal Monsters you control can attack your opponent directly. If 4 or more monsters were tributed to summon this card, it gains this effect:

● If this card is Special Summoned: Draw 1 card, then destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate cards or effects until the end of the Battle Phase.

I took the liberty of making the drawing effect trigger upon summon. That is what you were going for, yes?

Don't think it should allow all normal monsters to attack directly, because then I can attack directly with stuff like Blue-Eyes White Dragon. May want to limit it by level or something. I feel like it's a bit too powerful to be summoned with one tribute, too, since you're getting a 2800 beater that allows all your monsters to direct attack. Maybe up it to 2.

 

Effect: When this card is activated: You can add 1 Level 4 or lower Reptile-Type Normal Monster from your Deck to your hand. You can destroy this card and 1 Level 2 or lower Normal Monster you control; shuffle 1 face-up monster on the field into the Deck and inflict damage to your opponent equal to its ATK. Reptile-Type monsters you control gain 100 ATK.

So the biggest thing it could search is the 1900 Alien Shocktrooper. That's acceptable. The second effect doesn't require a once per turn, because it removes itself from the field anyway.

I think the second effect is too powerful to not target. 

 

Effect: Tribute any number of Level 2 or lower Normal Monsters whose combined Levels are less than 10; inflict damage to your opponent equal to the combined Levels of the Tributed monsters x300. During either player's turn, except the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard: You can banish this card; Special Summon any number of Level 2 or lower Normal Monsters whose combined Levels are less than 10 from your Graveyard in Defense Position, and their DEF becomes 0. You can only use 1 "Humasilisk Technique" per turn.

The first effect is sort of useless but can burn for game. The second effect is amazing. It's going to take at least two turns, however, since you have to wait a turn after sending this card to the graveyard and another turn to change all the monsters you summoned to attack mode, but it's still an amazingly powerful card that lends a lot of explosiveness to the deck. Also, the level limitations are redundant since you can't possibly either tribute or summon enough monsters so that their levels are more than 10.

 

Effect: When this card is activated: Send all "-styx" cards your opponent controls to the Graveyard, ignoring their effects. Your opponent cannot activate Field Spells. Your opponent's monsters cannot declare attacks, and lose 100 ATK for every face-up "Humasilisk" card you control. During your End Phase: Send 1 "Humasilisk" monster you control to the Graveyard or destroy this card.

It'd be a very powerful card, if not for the amount of s/t destruction running around lately. Is the end phase effect mandatory or can you just pop it anytime by choosing not to send?

 

Effect: Once per turn, if a Normal Monster(s) you control is Tributed: You can target any number of those Tributed cards: Special Summon them during your End Phase. Once per turn, if a "Humasilisk" monster(s) is sent from your Deck to the Graveyard: You can target cards your opponent controls, up to the number of cards sent; send them to the Graveyard. When this card is sent to the Graveyard: Target as many Normal Monsters in your Graveyard as possible; shuffle them into the Deck, then draw 1 card. You can only control 1 "Humasilisk Furious Retaliation".

Helps you recover the advantage you would lose to the tribute effects. I don't think many of these cards send from your deck, but you could use Snake Rain to practically nuke your opponent's field. The last effect seems more like a drawback, since a lot of your effects revive from the grave.

 

Effect: Once per turn, when a Special Summoned monster your opponent controls activates an effect: You can Tribute 1 "Humasilisk" monster; negate that monster's effect and shuffle it into the Deck. While this card is face-up on the field, "Humasilisk" monsters you control gain 100 ATK.

That's really powerful stun. I suggest making it a hard once per turn, and having it not shuffle.

 

Effect: Once per turn, when your opponent would Special Summon a monster(s): Tribute 1 "Humasilisk" monster; negate that Summon, and if you do, take damage equal to the Tributed monster's Level x1000, then your opponent gains that much LP. You can only use 1 "Humasilisk Pit" per turn.

The drawback's acceptable, making this basically more copies of Solemn Warning.

 

Effect: Once per turn, when a monster is Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field: You can pay LP in increments of 500; Special Summon a number of "Snake-Eater Tokens" (Reptile/EARTH/Level 2/ATK 0/DEF 0) to your opponent's side of the field in Attack Position. These Tokens cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon or used as Synchro Materials for a Synchro Summon.

It's generic and it single-handedly makes OTKs by providing a bunch of 0 atk monsters for Revolution Falcon/Cat Dancer/Chimeratech Overdragon to attack. Have it summon in defense position. Also, I'm really not sure what to do for the OCG here.

 

Effect: Target 1 "Humasilisk" monster you control; equip this card to it. It gains 300 ATK. If it attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. If this card is sent to the Graveyard because the equipped monster was Tributed for a Summon: equip this card to the card that monster was tributed for. You can banish this card from your Graveyard, then target 1 "Humasilisk" monster you control; when it attacks this turn, it is unaffected by your opponent's card effects until the end of the Battle Phase. You can only use each of these effects of "Humasilisk Desert Scimitar" once per turn, and can only control 1 "Humasilisk Desert Scimitar".

Is the part in italics what you were going for?

 

Effect: Special Summon this card as an Effect Monster (Reptile/FIRE/Level 6/ATK 2300/DEF 1500). (This card is also still a Trap Card.) This card cannot attack or be used as Synchro or Xyz Material, and it cannot  be Tributed except for the Summon of a "-styx" or "Humasilisk" monster. If this card is Tributed for a Summon: Equip it to the Summoned Monster. The equipped monster can declare a second attack during each Battle Phase this turn. When this card is Tributed for a Summon, the Summoned monster gains the following effect.

● When this card is Summoned: Draw 1 card.

Really complicated, and doesn't really fit with the theme. 

 

Effect: Special Summon this card as an Effect Monster (Reptile/Water/Level 6/ATK 1500/DEF 2300). (This card is also still a Trap Card.) This card cannot attack or be used as Synchro or Xyz Material, and it cannot  be Tributed except for the Summon of a "-styx" or "Humasilisk" monster. If this card is Tributed for a Summon, equip it to the Summoned Monster. When the equipped monster destroys a monster by battle, gain LP equal to that monster's ATK. When this card is Tributed for a Summon, the Summoned monster gains the following effect.

● When this card is Summoned: Return 1 card on the field to the hand. 

Non-targeting non-destroying effects are powerful. Keep that in mind.

 

Effect: When this card is activated: Target 1 monster your opponent controls; Tribute a number of "Humasilisk" monsters equal to or greater than that target's Level, and if you do, take control of that target. When that card leaves the field, except by being Tributed, you lose 3000 LP. When that card is Tributed: Draw 2 cards. When this card leaves the field: Shuffle that card into your opponent's Deck. You can only control one "Sacrificial Gains".

Pot of greed effect is overpowered, so that should be removed. Also you should prevent the stolen monster from attacking.

 

I'm not going to review the styx, just going to say that if you write "-styx" on the card, it's gonna require the cards to have a dash in the name. Just make the archetype name "styx".

 

Effect: Must be Ritual Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. Once per turn, when a monster you control would leave the field by an opponent's card effect: You can send this card to the Graveyard; negate that effect, and if you do, banish it and this card. If this card is Ritual Summoned from the banished zone: Add 2 "Humasilisk" Pendulum Monsters to your hand, and if you do, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.

Man, you have sooo many cards XP

Rituals now? I feel that this archetype does too many things. No one's ever going to use all of these cards in the same deck.

Add 2 pendulum monsters to your hand from where? And an instant pendulum scale is pretty op. Also I changed the 'gains this effect' to a simple trigger effect, because you're overcomplicating things.

 

Effect: Must be Ritual Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. Once per turn, if a Spell/Trap Card you control would leave the field by an opponent's card effect: You can send this card to the Graveyard; negate that effect, and if you do, banish it and this card. If this card is Ritual Summoned from the banished zone: Add 2 "Humasilisk" Spell/Trap cards from your Deck to your hand, and if you do, discard up to two cards from your opponent's hand.

That discarding effect is way overpowered. Make it discard 1, randomly. The search 2 is also quite op, because of how powerful the s/t support is.

 

Effect: Must be Ritual Summoned by Tributing "Erengard, The Humasilisk Champion" and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. Normal Monsters you control can attack your opponent directly. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent: Send the top card of their Deck to the Graveyard. Cards sent to the Graveyard by this effect cannot activate effects the turn they're sent. If this card would be destroyed, you can send 1 "Humasilisk" card you control to the Graveyard; this card is not destroyed. You can banish 1 "Humasilisk" or "styx" card from your Graveyard; add this card and 1 Ritual Spell Card from your Graveyard to your hand.

See what I said earlier about Blue-Eyes getting a direct attack. Second effect is op.

 

Effect: This card can be used to Ritual Summon any Reptile-type Ritual Monster. You must also Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total Levels equal the Level of that Ritual Monster, but all Effect Monsters you tribute have their Levels halved. Once per turn: You can shuffle 1 "Humasilisk" Spell/Trap Card from your Graveyard into the Deck; return this card from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can banish this card from your Graveyard, then target 1 "Humasilisk" or "styx" Ritual Monster on the field; when it declares an attack this turn, your opponent cannot activate cards or effects until the end of the Damage Step. You can only use 1 effect of "Humasilisk Diamond Overdrive" per turn and only once that turn.

Wayyy complicated. You should make the graveyard recursion effect unable to activate the turn it's sent to the graveyard. 

 

Effect: This card can be used to Ritual Summon 1 of your banished "Humasilisk" Ritual Monsters. You must also Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total Levels equal the Level of that Ritual Monster, but all Effect Monsters you tribute have their Levels halved. That monster cannot attack the turn it's Ritual Summoned. If you Ritual Summoned a Level 8 or higher monster: Gain LP equal to its ATK. Once per turn, except the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard: You can banish this card and 1 "Humasilisk" or "styx" Ritual Monster from your Graveyard; Special Summon 1 monster with a Level equal to the Level of the banished monster, ignoring its Summoning conditions. You can only use 1 "Emergency Interdimensional Revival" effect per turn and only once that turn.

Special summon from where?

Well, that was a lot. You may want to put less cards in a single post next time. It's a good archetype, but there's a lot of boss cards compared to the amount of tribute fodder or recursion. And many of the effects are really complicated, making them a headache to read. Love the art tho.