(written) Fanfiction Cards (no, not of existing ones, that's later)

[Woloa]

So, as I've brought up a couple times, I'm very slowly working on a fanfiction, and, so, I'll be dumping random cards I make for it here in written form. you try finding artwork for the Ultimate Odd-Eyes Knightmare Stardust Cyber End Dragon. But, to be a little more serious, feedback on these cards would be nice, reguardless of their nature.

 

[spoiler=Dagrons]Girl With Odd Eyes
Level 1, Spellcaster-Type, Tuner
0Atk/0Def
When this card is targeted for an attack: You can negate the attack, and if you do, change the battle position of this card, then you can Special Summon 1 "Odd-Eyes Dragon" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. During either player's turn, when a card or effect is activated that targets this face-up card (except during the Damage Step): You can Special Summon 1 "Odd-Eyes Dragon" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. You can only use 1 "Girl with Odd Eyes" effect per turn, and only once that turn.

heterochromatic Golden Dragon
Dragon-Type, Level 8, Syncro
2500Atk/2500Def
1Tuner monster+ 1 Odd-Eyes Dragon
Once per turn, you may special summon 1 monster from your graveyard or 1 level 6 or lower Syncro monster from your extra deck, you may only control 1 Syncro Monster summoned this way.

 

 

[spoiler=Roxane (she is an archetype of sorts)]Roxane
Spellcaster-Type, level 1, Light
When this face down monster is targeted for an attack or sent to the graveyard by a card effect, banish it and special summon 1 "Roxane, Dark Child" from your hand deck or graveyard in face up attack position.

Roxane, Dark Child
Spellcaster Type, Level 5, Dark
2300Atk/0Def
If this card is summoned through the effect of a card including "Roxane" in its name, it gains the following effect: When this card declares an attack, negate the effects of all in play spell and trap cards

Roxane, Terror Form
Spellcaster-Type, Level 7, Dark
2600Atk/1000Def
Can not be normal summoned or set, can only be special summoned by tributing one "Roxane" monster you control and can not be special summoned other ways.. When this card declares an attack, negate the effects of all other in play monster cards

Roxane, Adult Form
Spellcaster-Type, Level 8, Dark
2900Atk/2000Def
Can not be normal summoned or set, can only be special summoned by tributing one "Roxane" monster you control and can not be special summoned other ways. Whenever this monster declares an attack: target 1 face down spell or trap card on the field, destroy that target.

Roxane, True Form
Fiend Type, Level 9, Dark
3200Atk/3000Def
Can not be normal summoned or set, can only be special summoned by tributing 1 "Roxane, Horror Form" or "Roxane, Adult Form" you control and can be special summoned other ways. When this card declares an attack: Negate the effects of all other in play cards.

 

 

[spoiler=My Old Gambler Stuff]Dice Juggler

Level 4, Dark, Spellcaster, 1000Atk/100Def

Once per turn you may Call odd or even and roll a die. If your call is correct, increase the attack of this card by 300 times the number the die landed on until the end of your opponent's turn.



Coin Juggler

Level 4, Dark, Spellcaster, 1000Atk/1000Def

Once per turn, you may call Heads or Tails and flip up to 6 coins, increase this monster's attack and defense by 300 times the number of coins you called correctly, until the end of your opponent's turn.



Card Juggler

Level 4, Dark, Spellcaster, 1000Atk/1000Def

Once per turn you may call Spells, Traps, or Monsters. Excavate cards from your deck until you find a card that is not the kind of card you called. This card gains 300 attack for each card excavated that is the type you called and loses 200 attack for each card not that type. Any card excavated is sent to the graveyard.



Bouncer Golem

Level 5, Earth, Rock, 2000Atk/2500Def

When either player normal summons a monster, they must call Heads or Tails and flip a coin, if they win, the summon proceeds as normal, if they lose the monster is returned to their hand and they may not normal summon this turn.



Dealer Golem

Level 5, Earth, Rock, 2000Atk/2500Def

Once per turn, you may call Spells, Traps, or Monsters then draw a card and reveal it to everyone, if you called it correctly, you gain 1000 life points, if you call it wrong you lose 1000 life points and must discard a card from your hand to the graveyard.



Slot Machine Golem

Level 5, Earth, Rock, 2000Atk/2500Def

Once per turn, you may roll three dice, if two match, destroy 1 card your opponent controls, if all three match, destroy 2 cards your opponent controls, if all three are 6's and they all match, destroy three cards your opponent controls. If none match, destroy one card you control and take damage equal to 100x the sum of the rolled numbers.



Trick Casino

Field Spell

Once during each player's turn, they may redo one die roll or coin flip. Whenever a monster is sent to the graveyard by a monster effect, place 1 Jackpot Counter on this card, when this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, the player who destroyed it gains 100 life points for each Jackpot Counter on this card.



Roulette Summon

Normal Spell

Call Even or Odd then roll a die, if you call it right you may special summon any number of monsters who's levels match the number rolled, if you call it wrong discard all monsters in your hand who's levels match the number rolled. If you lack monsters for either of these effects, you lose lifepoints equal to 100x the number rolled.



Risky Gamble

Counter Trap

Activate when your opponent activates a spell or trap card. Call Heads or Tails and flip a coin, if you call it right, negate the activation of your opponent's spell or trap and destroy it, your opponent can not activate other spells or traps this turn, if you call it wrong your opponent's spell or trap resolves as normal, but is returned to their hand if it would be sent to the graveyard this turn.

 

 

[spoiler=Crazed Dollmaker's Masterpeices][spoiler=Early Works]Toy Doll
500Atk/1000Def, Level 3, Warrior-Type, Dark
If this card is Normal Summoned, you can: You can Special Summon up to 2 "Toy Doll" from your Deck.


Bladed Doll

1600Atk/1000Def, Level 4, Warrior-Type, Dark
If this card attacks a monster, negate that monster's effects (including in the Graveyard).

Doll Guardna
0Atk/2000Def, Level 4, Warrior-Type, Dark
If this card is attacked by a monster, negate that monster's effects (including in the Graveyard).

Doll Monstrosity
?Atk/?Def, Level 5, Fusion, Warrior-Type, Dark
3 "Doll" monsters with different names
This cards attack and defense are equal to the number of "Doll" monsters in your graveyard x 500. Whenever this face up card would be destroyed by a card effect, you may banish two "Doll" monsters from the graveyard instead of sending it to the graveyard

[spoiler=Later Works]Maker Doll:
1000Atk/1000Def, Level 3, Spellcaster Type, Dark
While you control this face up card: If you would Tribute Summon a "Doll" monster, you can discard Monster Cards equal to the number of Tributes needed to Tribute Summon that "Doll" monster. Whenever a "Doll" monster you control is sent to the graveyard, you may return 1 "Doll" monster of a lower level from your graveyard to your hand.


Blue-Eyes Doll Dragon
2300Atk/2000Def, Level 5, Dragon Type, Dark
You may summon this card from your hand for 2 tributes, if you do: its level becomes 8 and its original attack points become 2600

Red-Eyes Doll Dragon
2200Atk/2000Def, Level 5, Dragon Type, Dark
You may summon this card from your hand for 2 tributes, if you do: its level becomes 7 and its original attack points become 2400

Buster Doll
2400Atk/2000Def, Level 7, Warrior Type, Dark
This face up card gains 250 attack points for each Dragon-Type or Beast-Type monster your opponent controls or is in their graveyard

Huge Shield Doll
2000Atk/3200Def, Level 7, Warrior Type, Dark
Once per turn, this face up monster can not be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn when another "Doll" monster you control is targeted for an attack, change the attack's target to this card. You can only use one "Huge Shield Doll" effect per turn, and only once that turn.

Restoration Doll
1200Atk/3000Def, Level 6, Spellcaster Type, Dark
Whenever this face up card battles an opponent's monster you may: Special summon 1 level 4 or lower "Doll" monster from your graveyard. Or: Return 1 level 5 or higher "Doll" monster from your graveyard to your hand.

[spoiler=The Magnum Opus]Anne, Doll of the Curse
2500Atk/2500Def, Ritual, Level 8, Spellcaster-Type, Dark
Can not be normal summoned or set, can only be special summoned through the effects of "Crazed Dollmaker's Curse", "Crazed Dollmaker's Toolbox", or "The Final Sermon". This face up card gains 250 Attack and Defense points for each other "Doll" monster on the field

Crazed Dollmaker's Curse:
Used to Ritual Summon "Anne, Doll of the Curse", you must also offer monsters from your hand and field who's total levels add up to 8 or more. When a battle involving "Anne, Doll of the Curse" is being conducted you may banish this card from the graveyard: increase the attack points of the involved "Anne, Doll of the Curse" by the attack points of the other involved monster.

 

 

[spoiler=The man himself]Shoebox, the Crazed Dollmaker
Level 12, Ritual, Spellcaster-Type, Dark
?Atk/0Def
Can only be ritual summoned by the effect of "Crazed Dollmaker's Sermon" and can not be summoned other ways. This face up card's battle position can not be changed. The attack points of this face up card are equal to the number of "Doll" monsters in your graveyard X1000. Once per turn, when this face up card would be destroyed by battle or by card effect, you may banish 1 "Doll" from your graveyard instead of sending it to the graveyard.

Crazed Dollmaker's Sermon
Ritual Spell
Used to ritual summon "Shoebox, the Crazed Dollmaker", you must also offer monsters from your hand and field who's levels equal 12 or more. Once per turn, when a "Shoebox, the Crazed Dollmaker" you control would be destroyed by a card effect, you may banish this card from your graveyard: Negate that effect and if you do, destroy it.

The Final Sermon
Spell
If you control a face up "Shoebox, the Crazed Dollmaker" and have exactly 1 "Anne, Doll of the Curse" in your graveyard, target those two cards: Sacrifice "Shoebox, the Crazed Dollmaker" and special summon "Anne, Doll of the Curse" from the graveyard. A monster special summoned this was gains the following effect: "This face up card gains 500 attack points for each doll in your graveyard."

[spoiler=Dark Magic (Spells)]Pot of Doll Parts
Draw 1 card for each "Doll" monster you control, "Doll" monsters can not attack for the rest of the turn.

Crazed Dollmaker's Toolbox
Continuous Spell
Each time a "Doll" monster is summoned or destoryed, place 1 Parts Counter on this card. You may, by sending this card to the graveyard, special summon 1 "Doll" monster from your graveyard who's level was equal to or less than the number of Parts Counter it had

Modular Design
Continuous Spell
"Doll" monsters you control may ignore the conditions on Equip spell cards.

 

 

Ritual Dollhouse

Continuous Spell.

"Doll" monsters have their levels doubled wile being tributed for a Ritual Summon.

 

Crazed Dollmaker's Workshop

Field Spell

Each "Doll" monster on the field gains 250 attack and defense points for each other "Doll" monster on the field.

[spoiler=Traps (ran out of creativity)]Cursed Barrier:
Continuous Trap
Activate this card by selecting 1 "Doll" monster you control, as long as this card stays face up on the field, that monster can not be destroyed by battle or by card effects, and neither player takes damage from battles involving it

Cursed Blowback
Activate this card only if you control a face up "Anne, Doll of the Curse", negate your opponent's attack and end their battle phase. Your opponent then takes damage equal to the number of monsters they control x 300

 

 

 

[spoiler=Dark Phoenix Cards (work in progress)]

Idol of the Dark Phoenix

Level 1, Spellcaster-Type, DARK

0Atk/0Def

If this face down card is targeted for an attack: turn this card face up and destroy the attacking monster, then you may tribute this card to special summon 1 "Dark Phoenix" monster except "Idol of the Dark Phoenix" from your hand in face down defense position.

 

Worshiper of the Dark Phoenix

Level 4, Spellcaster-Type, DARK

1600Atk/1000Def

Flip: place 3 Spell Counters on this card. Whenever this card would be destroyed by battle, you may remove a spell counter from this card instead. You may tribute this card with exactly 1 Spell Counter to special summon 1 "Dark Phoenix Aria" or 1 "Dark Phoenix Nightwing" from your hand in face down defense position.

 

Dark Phoenix Chick

Level 3, Pyro-Type, DARK

300Atk/2000Def

Flip: this face up card is unaffected by card effects this turn except its own. When this face up card is sent to the graveyard, you may special summon 1 "Dark Phoenix Aria" from your hand in face down defense position.

 

Dark Phoenix Aria

Level 6, Pryo-Type, DARK

2300Atk/2400Def

Can not be normal set. Can only be set through the effect of a "Dark Phoenix" card. Flip: Destroy all face down cards your opponent controls, this card can not declare an attack on the turn this effect is activated.

 

Dark Phoenix Nightwing

Level 9, Pyro-Type, DARK

2900Atk/2500Def

Can not be normal summoned except by tributing three monsters you control. Can not be normal set. Can only be set through the effect of a "Dark Phoenix" card. Flip: Destroy all face up cards your opponent controls.

 

Feather of the Dark Phoenix

Equip Spell

If the equipped monster battles an opponent's monster and fails to destroy it, target that opponent's monster: Destroy that target.

 

Phylactery of the Dark Phoenix

Spell

Discard 1 card from your hand to special summon 1 "Dark Phoenix" monster in your graveyard that was sent there from the field in face down defense position.

 

Dark Phoenix Resurrection

Quickplay spell

Special summon 1 "Dark Phoenix Aria" "Dark Phoenix Nightwing" or "Dark Phoenix Chick" from the graveyard that was sent there this turn from the field in face down defense position.

 

 

 

[spoiler=NIGHTMARE cards]

NIGHTMARE Weapon Pegasus

Level 4, Beast-Type, Union, DARK

1600Atkl/1200Def

Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to your Ritual Monster as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, its attack points are increased by 500 and its attacks can not be negated. When the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.

 

NIGHTMARE Weapon, Dragon

Level 4, Dragon-Type, Union, DARK

1800Atk/1000Def

Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to your Syncro Monster as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, its attack points are increased by 500 and once per turn it can not be destroyed by card effects. When the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.

 

NIGHTMARE Armor: Raven

Level 4, Winged-Beast-Type, DARK

0Atk/2000Def

Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to a face up level 8 or higher Monster you control as an Equip Card, OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, its attack points are decreased by 500 and it can attack your opponent directly. When the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.

 

NIGHTMARE Fusion

By banishing materials from your hand, field graveyard and deck, fusion summon 1 fusion monster that can be summoned using the banished materials.

 

NIGHTMARE Trap: Bottomless Pit

Trap

When a monster equipped with a 'NIGHTMARE Weapon' attacks, destroy the union monster equipped to it, then destroy the equipped monster. When this trap's effect resolves, set it face down again.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chared Wings (Fire Fairies)]
[spoiler=Main Deck Monsters]

Chared Wing Pixie

Level 2, Fairy-Type, FIRE
500/500
When this card is normal summoned, you may normal summon again this turn. You may only activate this effect of Chared Wing Pixie once per turn and only once that turn.

Chared Wing Card Snatcher
Level 2, Fairy-Type, FIRE
0/0
When this card is normal summoned, if it was not the first monster normal summoned to your field this turn: Target 1 card in your opponent's graveyard: Add that target to your hand. It is returned to your opponent's graveyard when it leaves the field, is discarded or would be returned to the deck..

Chared Wing Warrior
Level 3, Fairy-Type, FIRE
1300/1200
When this card is normal summoned, if it is not the first monster you've normal summoned this turn: Target one monster your opponent controls: Destroy that target.

Chared Wing Magician
Level 3, Fairy-Type, Fire
1200/1300
If this card is normal summoned, and was not the first monster normal summoned to your field this turn, it gains the following effect: "Once per turn, you may normal summon 1 level 2 or lower Fairy-Type monster from your hand."

Chared Wing Herald
Level 5, Fairy-Type, FIRE
Once per turn, you may normal summon 1 level 3 or lower Fairy-Type monster in addition to your normal summon/set. You must control this face up card to resolve this effect.

Chared Wing Gaurdian
Level 5, Fairy-Type, Fire
Once per turn, when a "Chared Wing" monster you control would be destroyed by battle or by card effects, you may discard a card instead.

[spoiler=Extra Deck Monsters]Chared Wing Flame Dancer
Rank 2, Fairy-Type, Xyz, FIRE
1000/1000
2 Level 2 Monsters
Once per turn, you may remove 1 Xyz material from this card: Decrease the levels of all monsters in your hand by 1 until the end of turn, and, if you do, you may make an additional normal summon or set this turn.

Chared Wing Spellsword
Rank 3, Fairy-Type, Xyz, Fire
1500/1500
2 Level 3 Monsters
Once per turn you may remove 1 Xyz material from this card and target 1 monster that was normal summoned this turn: That target gains 1000 attack points until the end step.

Chared Wing Savior
Rank 5, Fairy-Type, Xyz, Fire
2300/2300
2 Level 5 Monsters
Once per turn, you may remove 1 Xyz material from this card: Chared Wing monsters you control can not be targeted or destroyed by card effects this turn.

 

 

[spoiler=Support Cards]Chared Village
Field Spell
Whenever a Chared Wing monster is normal summoned, its controller gains 250 attack points and each other player takes 250 points of damage unless they control a "Chared Wing" monster.

Chared Ruins
Continuous Trap
During each players standby phase, if a non-Fire attribute monster is on their field or in their graveyard, they take 500 points of damage.

Chared Blacksmith
Continuous Spell
All "Chared Wing" monsters on the field gain 500 attack and defense points. When this card is sent to the graveyard, special summon 1 "Chared Wing" monster from your hand or graveyard.

Chared Dance
Quickplay Spell
Activate only if you control a face up "Chared Wing Flame Dancer", attach one card from your hand to your face up Flame Dancer, then, target 1 Xyz monster on the field: That target loses an Xyz material.

Chared Runeblade
Equip Spell
Equip only to a Chared Wing monster. The equipped monster gains 1000 attack points and can not attack unless its name is "Chared Wing Spellsword"

Chared Retribution
Trap
Activate only if you control a face up "Chared Wing Savior". Destroy all face up monsters and all face down spells and traps your opponent controls, then, destroy all face down and non-Xyz monsters you control.

 

 

 

If you wish to read the fanfic these were made for, it can be found here:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/336819-yugioh-bottomless-nightmares/

Artwork was found for some of the Crazed Dollmaker monsters and can be found here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/336786-crazed-dollmakers-masterpieces-monsters-not-written-this-time/

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Girl with Odd-Eyes is literally the Odd-Eyes equivalent of Maiden with Eyes of Blue.

Not much I can say about it; but at least it gives incentive to use the original Odd-Eyes, since his Pendulum form pretty much took over.
 
Golden Dragon pretty much is revival from the Graveyard; the Extra Deck one won't work because the monster wasn't properly SSed first (unless these are Synchro Pendulums that were properly SSed). 
 
You are missing the Attribute on these, but I will assume they are DARK to coincide with Odd-Eyes.

[Woloa]

The Girl with Odd Eyes is supposed to be the Odd-Eyes Maiden with Eyes of Blue, and in the case of the world these were made for, pendulums don't exist at all there, so, pendulum odd-eyes isn't an option to duelists.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Actually, I retract what I said about you being unable to Special Summon the Synchros from the Extra Deck.

Unless they specifically state that you need to Fusion Summon them first (or only that way), you can do it in a similar vein to what Magical Scientist does for Fusions.

 

It's only if you try to SS them from the Graveyard or banished zone that they won't work.

 

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However, keep in mind that because of its effect, you can SS stuff like Goyo and other prominent Level 6 Synchros for no cost.

There is a reason why Magical Scientist was banned; does the same thing this card is doing for Fusions (while monsters returned to the ED afterwards, it was not OPT).

 

Here, you have an OPT effect but said monster is free to attack and do whatever, and will not bounce themselves later. 

 

That, and it is indeed generic, so any Deck that can afford to run Level 8 Synchros can play this, and spam a random Level 6 Synchro of choice.

You should probably change its summon requirements to 1 Tuner + "Odd-Eyes Dragon"; that way, it cannot be abused by other Decks.

 

Additionally, you should also put some form of restriction on the ED-summoning thing.

 

This may be cards designed for a fanfic world, but keep in mind the implications yours will have with existing content in the actual game. 

[Woloa]

That is why I asked for feedback, I'll fix it right away.

[Woloa]

Update+Bump

[Woloa]

This now housed my Crazed Dollmaker cards, as they are the arcetype used by the protagonist of my fanfic.

[Woloa]

I made more.

[Woloa]

Updated Crazed Dollmaker set.

[Woloa]

Added some plot convi- I mean NIGHTMARE cards.

[King K. Azo]

So your NIGHTMARE cards... Is it used in a deck that uses both Ritual and Synchro cards? That's an odd combination... Or is it more like the Number cards in Zexal?

Anyways, this equip cards have a mistake. They should say 'equip to a Ritual monster' and 'equip to a Synchro monster'. It's just how they word Union monsters. Although it does make it so you can make your opponent's monster vulnerable to your own NIGHTMARE Trap. If you're trying to avoid that, then okay... Sorry..

 

I like the Maiden with the Odd Eyes. C'mon, Odd Eyes has a much better effect than Odd Eyes Pendulum Dragon! It needs more support.

 

Roxanne series is terrifying, plain and simple.

 

Dark Phoenix is as well, but I think I fear Roxanne more.

 

The Card Juggler monster's effect seems... Oddly worded. I gain attack for every card type I call right, and lose for every I don't. Fair enough... But you stop when you get a card you didn't call... So... You just lose 200 at the end of the change. The part after seems... Unneeded.

 

Also, Crazed Dollmakers are the protagonist's cards? ... Okay. May more sense when I read the fic.

 

Speaking of which, off to read the fic!

[Woloa]

Thank you, the NIGHTMARE cards are my version of the Zexal Weapons, and they are directly linked to the story. Card Juggler's effect was not my idea, and can be fixed. The protagonist uses the Crazed Dollmaker cards for 2 reasons: 1: he's a weird guy, or, he's supposed to be. 2: he's the only one who can truly care for the spirits attached to the cards that others find weird and creepy.

Roxane and Dark Phoenix are intended to be used by antagonists (who will have their own NIGHTMARE cards).

[Woloa]

Added two new NIGHTMARE cards.

[Woloa]

bump.

[Woloa]

Added the Chared Wing archetype.