Maeriberii Haan Posted May 11, 2014 Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 A.k.a the Masochist edition. Rules All Leaderboard rules apply. First to 3 votes or most votes by the deadline wins. The winner gets a rep from the loser. Voters are to explain their reasoning. Better-explained thought processes will receive reps. Written cards are allowed. (Must be in written format, cards with blank pictures are not acceptable) Remove any evidence of the card being made by you to ensure anonymity. In case a downtime happens, the deadlines may be extended. Deadlines PM your cards within 48 hours after I accept the challenge. Voters have 72 hours to vote once the cards are posted up. Requirement Create a card for any of the 6 archetypes introduced in DUEA (Shadoll, Tellaknights, Cosmic Dragons, that machine archetype that anyone barely played, Fantasia, and Entermates). Spell, traps, monsters, anything. [spoiler='Card A'] Stellaknight Antinous Rank 4 Warrior/Xyz/Effect Light 2300/2000 2 Level 4 “tellaknight” Monsters Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; return 1 face-up monster on the field to the top of its owner’s deck. If you control 2 other face-up “tellaknight” monsters; you can activate that effect during your opponent’s Main Phase 1. When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard; Special Summon 1 “tellaknight” monster from your graveyard. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Card B'] Activate only if you control a "Fantasia" monster. Tribute 1 Special Summoned Fairy-Type monster to target 1 face-up non-Fairy-Type monster your opponent controls; take control of that target. It is treated as Fairy-Type monster. Your opponent takes no damage for the rest of this turn. You can only activate 1 "Miracle Melody" per turn. During either player's turn, except the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard: You can banish this card from your Graveyard to target 1 Fairy-Type monster you control; once during this turn, if that target would be destroyed by battle or card effects, it is not destroyed. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted May 11, 2014 Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 This'd be the tough one, but I'll do it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted May 11, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 Alright, accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted May 12, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 Voting is now open. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted May 12, 2014 Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 These are both good enough for me to go into this with the rubric Card A OCG 1.5/3 [spoiler=Reason] Missing some colons and capitalization errors. Also, the second effect that makes it quick is worded oddly. [/spoiler]Creativity 1/3 [spoiler=Reason] A really strong effect with the ability to get better with a floating cherry on top. Very cookie cutter in this card's execution, but at least you took the time to look for a name. [/spoiler]Usability 5/5 [spoiler=Reason] This card is strictly better than their 3 Material option, bar ability to touch the backrow and the alteration of the floating effect. The shuffle into the deck gets around a lot of stuff like 101/Beelze and doesn't provide them with Graveyard options concerning the now returned monster. [/spoiler]Balance 1/5 [spoiler=Reason] The balance is horrid. The material is very simple to pull off and it has the effect of Avian Skyblaster, which is an upcoming staple. However, this card can use the effect not only once, but twice if it survives long enough AND it floats, SSing the Altair used to Summon it from the Graveyard to get another Deneb, search, Xyz. Too strong. [/spoiler] Card B OCG 2.5/3 [spoiler=Reason] Minor errors, most noticable being the second sentence using "to" instead of ":". [/spoiler]Creativity 2/3 [spoiler=Reason] It interacts with the Fantasia Monsters liking being Special Summoned, and the effect is rather unique in and of itself. The last effect seems just thrown on with no real reason, but the name is fitting for all the effects on the card. Perfect name, great image. [/spoiler]Usability 2/5 [spoiler=Reason] As it stands, Fantasia only have 3 monsters, all of which are crap. However, this card is a great card. Situational in that it requires you to have one of the archetype on the field AND have it or another Fairy be Special Summoned for the tribute, however, the effect to TG1-EM1 without giving them a monster yourself is a great effect, and the disruption this card can cause is immense. The last effect is also a nice addition to the playability, and without it, the usability would've dipped to 1 and Balance, since it would be pretty iffy (UP wise), would probably hit 4. Fantasia support was pretty much doomed to fail in this catagory unless blatantly overpowered though. [/spoiler]Balance 4.5/5 [spoiler=Reason] The card has sufficient costs and well enough pay to be in that special, warm place of being balanced AND useful! Great job here. Essentially it breaks even, but it is a support card for a bad archetype that has 2 situational conditions to be met, so all is well. [/spoiler] 8.5 to 11, Card B gets my vote. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted May 12, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 1-0 Card B. Thank you for voting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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-Noel- Posted May 15, 2014 Report Share Posted May 15, 2014 so even Leaderboard is very active like this, we only got 1 vote? aww that's kinda shame, but well gg Ain, and thx for the only vote for my card, Therrion :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted May 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 Yeah. Congrats Aqua for your win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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