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Good picture, and an idea for an effect that hadn't been put on a card. What's more to say?

Enjoy.

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[b]Effect:[/b] When a Gemini Monster gains its effect: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). When this card attacks: You can select up to 3 Level 4 or lower Gemini Monsters (from your Deck). If the ATK of any 1 of those monsters is equal to or less than the Battle Damage inflicted by this card during the following Damage Step: Add that monster to your hand, and return any other cards to your Deck.

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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1320013992' post='5608404']
a little confused what you meant by gains its effect

the Gemini monsters effects aren't negated
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When a Gemini Monster is Gemini Summoned, or put under the effect of 'Supervise' or 'Unleash Your Power!', it gains its effect (through being treated as an Effect Monster). That is what I am refering to.

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[quote name='Lexadin' timestamp='1320170414' post='5610957']
Mhh, the search effect is a tad hard to master. But if you do, it's a nice Gemini search engine.
The ATK is nice and high, though perhaps a smudge to high for a lvl 3.
The img is nice aswell.

I'd say it's a decent to nice card.
A 8.4/10
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The high ATK is in response to the huge number of 1800 ATK Level 3s Konami seems to be forcing out at the moment, and most of the Level 3 Geminis I made have 1500 or less ATK, so it's a low-Level beatstick to pull out.

Thanks for rating.

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[quote name='Max Darkness' timestamp='1320181337' post='5611309']
The high ATK is in response to the huge number of 1800 ATK Level 3s Konami seems to be forcing out at the moment, and most of the Level 3 Geminis I made have 1500 or less ATK, so it's a low-Level beatstick to pull out.

Thanks for rating.
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Seems fair enough.

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A very good card. I like that it gets Special Summoned when you "Gemini Summon" a monster. It would make me feel like I was losing less for not Normal Summoning that turn. The fact it can be SS during your opponent's during either from your a support card effect or your opponent's Gemini monster makes it much more useful without unbalancing it.

The second effect complements the first, and I really enjoy what you've created.

10/10

Name, art, type, attribute, level, effects, atk & def. It's all perfect in my opinion.

I'm sorry I can't offer any creative criticism. Make sure to take the complement and keep up the good work!

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As Kaze mentions, the fact that it can Special Summon herself is awesome.
However, the second effect is good... on paper, because with such original ATK, you won't be able to add decent Gemini monsters to your hand when she manages to inflict battle damage; even by attacking directly, you won't be able to add the most useful Gemini monsters available, such as Evocator and Neos Alius or Dark Valkyria; the only decent targets, in a Gemini Deck, would be Blazewing Butterfly and Future Samurai.
And if she ever gets the chance of battling, let's say, a recruiter (Giant Rat, Emmersblabe, etc.; because they are among the weakest ATK Position Monsters an opponent will dare to Summon), who often have 1300-1500 ATK, you will be adding a Gemini monster with <500 ATK; the only target with such ATK is Gemini Soldier.
So... unless you play ATK-boosting cards you won't get much from her searching effect.

Changing her to LIGHT might help because you could use Honest on her, otherwise the only possibility for turning her effect useable would be by running her on a Warrior Solidarity Deck.
Or you could change her effect so it targets both Gemini and Normal Monsters; that way she will have more targets with low ATK available.

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[quote name='God Kaze' timestamp='1320193012' post='5611887']
A very good card. I like that it gets Special Summoned when you "Gemini Summon" a monster. It would make me feel like I was losing less for not Normal Summoning that turn. The fact it can be SS during your opponent's during either from your a support card effect or your opponent's Gemini monster makes it much more useful without unbalancing it.

The second effect complements the first, and I really enjoy what you've created.

10/10

Name, art, type, attribute, level, effects, atk & def. It's all perfect in my opinion.

I'm sorry I can't offer any creative criticism. Make sure to take the complement and keep up the good work!
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[quote name='Ace9Brine' timestamp='1320226432' post='5612698']
The search effect is kinda hard to use but I rekon it'll be good if you can use it, overall nice card.

8.5/10
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Thank you both for rating.


[quote name='Frex' timestamp='1320211683' post='5612629']
As Kaze mentions, the fact that it can Special Summon herself is awesome.
However, the second effect is good... on paper, because with such original ATK, you won't be able to add decent Gemini monsters to your hand when she manages to inflict battle damage; even by attacking directly, you won't be able to add the most useful Gemini monsters available, such as Evocator and Neos Alius or Dark Valkyria; the only decent targets, in a Gemini Deck, would be Blazewing Butterfly and Future Samurai.
And if she ever gets the chance of battling, let's say, a recruiter (Giant Rat, Emmersblabe, etc.; because they are among the weakest ATK Position Monsters an opponent will dare to Summon), who often have 1300-1500 ATK, you will be adding a Gemini monster with <500 ATK; the only target with such ATK is Gemini Soldier.
So... unless you play ATK-boosting cards you won't get much from her searching effect.

Changing her to LIGHT might help because you could use Honest on her, otherwise the only possibility for turning her effect useable would be by running her on a Warrior Solidarity Deck.
Or you could change her effect so it targets both Gemini and Normal Monsters; that way she will have more targets with low ATK available.
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I realise that in the current game, her search effect is not very useful, and she is only an aid through the fact she can be easily Special Summoned and has decent ATK for her Level.

However, on paper (ie on YCM), she has a larger selection of monsters to choose from, due to my expansion of the Gemini Sub-Type:

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[quote name='X-Judgement' timestamp='1320279164' post='5613876']
I like the fact that it's Battle Damage that determines, if any, cards that goes to your hand. Nice touch.

Correct me if I'm wrong...'...return any other cards to your Deck.' > '...return any other cards to your Deck, then shuffle your Deck.'
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Thanks.

You don't really need to mention the shuffling any more, it's taken as a given to maintain a fair game. In the same way that the add-to-hand effects don't mention showing it to your opponent any more, it's assumed you do it to prevent cheating. If I wanted to add that clause it would become '...and shuffle any other cards into your Deck.', but it is almost redundant.

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