Jump to content

What does An Imp, Gungnir, A Lantern Fish, A Godfather and a Winged Turtle have in common?

Lexadin

By Lexadin
in Realistic Cards

Recommended Posts

Lexadin Newbie

Lexadin

Posted
Posted

[center]Well they all apear in this thread.
Enough with the bad jokes, as some people who actaully read this and saw some of my previous set might remember, I'm currently remaking old contest cards. And now I'm arrived to these ones. They are not related to each other besides me making them.

Well enjoy.

[img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/2636/20638tg.jpg[/img]
[size=1]Img by HP Doom.[/size]
[i]When this card is Normal Summoned, while you control another Beast-Warrior-Type monster except "Swift Imp Duv-El": you can Special Summon 1 "Swift Imp Duv-El" from your hand or Deck in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot be used as an Xyz Material Monster.[/i]

Note: One of my more recent contest cards, I think it has some potential. But I'm not shure what it might be though.

[img]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/4064/20638w.jpg[/img]
[size=1]Img from Jazin kays[/size]
[i]Activate only while you control a face-up Level 7 or higher WATER monster. This card remains on the field for 3 of your turns. By discarding 1 WATER monster: either player can negate an attack and end the Battle Phase. When this card is send to the Graveyard: both players can return 1 Monster Card from thier Graveyards to thier hands.[/i]

Note: Well beside working with Gungnir as its img suggests, I persume it could save other high lvl WATER monsters from your opponent returning. While returning some ammo for Gungnir/returning a monster.
Now tbqh I haven't designed this card with Gungnir in mind, it just happened to work with it.

[img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/3066/20638e.jpg[/img]
[size=1]Img from Jazin kays[/size]
[i]This card is also treated as a Thunder-Type monster. While this card remains the top card of your Graveyard: face-up FIRE monsters gain 300 ATK and DEF and are not effected by the effects of Monster and Trap Cards. When this card is not the top card in your Graveyard: you can pay 750 Life Points to place this card on the top of your Graveyard.[/i]

Note: Obvious Fire Support, but no really. This is one of my older cards and was actually designed to help FIRE/WATER hybrid Decks. But I gues it also supports one of the many new FIRE archetypes.

[img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/8593/20638.jpg[/img]
[size=1]Img from Jazin kays[/size]
[i]When this card is Summoned: banish any number of cards in your Graveyard; Place 1 Absorb Counter on this card for each card banished by this card's effect (Max. 20). Increase this card's ATK by 50 for each Absorb Counter on it. Once per turn: you can remove 5 Absorb Counters from this card; Special Summon 1 "Bloat Soldato Token" [Aqua-Type/WATER/Level 4/ATK 1800/DEF 1600]. While you control a face-up "Bloat Soldato Token": this card cannot be destroyed, removed from play, or targeted for an attack.[/i]

Note: Again one of my older contest cards. Tbqh I have no idea what I was thinking when I made this. But I gues it has some DD and flodder potential. I deliberatly made it 'When it's Summoned' to ballance out it's high Summoning costs and low stats. As I didn't wanted to make a high powered flodder generator.

[img]http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/9643/20638l.jpg[/img]
[size=1]Img by HP Doom.[/size]
[i]When you draw a card(s) outside of your Draw Phase: inflict 800 damage to your opponent. If you have no cards in your hand: you can Tribute this card to draw 3 cards.[/i]

Note: It sort of burns, which is always nice. But I gues it's main use will be the 3 card draw. With low enough ATK to be Summoned with an "Mystic Tomato", high enough DEF to hold it's own for a turn. And filling the Grave with another ammo for DAD while giving you 3 more cards. It might be the most usefull card in this thread.


Anywho, make sure you leave a comment and a rating here if you took the time to read through all of this.
[/center]

Link to comment
Share on other sites
Lexadin Newbie

Lexadin

Posted
  • Author
Posted

I really don't see the use of putting a limit for banishing cards on Scymuc.

ORLY? How so. If you'd just mill this with something like "Foolish Burial" it's an easy support. That and it having 1500 ATK makes it Summonable with "Mother Grizly" and it being a Lvl 7 makes it easier Summonable with ALO.

Link to comment
Share on other sites
Therrion Newbie

Therrion

Posted
Posted

[center][center]Imp would be nice with Tengu, but the no Xyz material thing is wierd, and probably wouldn't be used with such a clause on it.[/center][/center]
[center][center]Godfather is very well thought up, I love it. Though, turning 250 ATK into a 1800 monster and granted immunity is pretty powerful. There should be some sort of draw back.[/center][/center]
[center][center]I like that it works with Mystic Tomato, would be nice in a Burn deck using Tomato's as stall then just blowing all your burn spells in hand then getting three more via this card.[/center][/center]

Link to comment
Share on other sites
Master White Newbie

Master White

Posted
Posted

Well enjoy.

[img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/2636/20638tg.jpg[/img]
[size=1]Img by HP Doom.[/size]
[i]When this card is Normal Summoned, while you control another Beast-Warrior-Type monster except "Swift Imp Duv-El": you can Special Summon 1 "Swift Imp Duv-El" from your hand or Deck in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot be used as an Xyz Material Monster.[/i]

[size=5][b]White's Note's:[i] Not bad, its more in favor of summoning itself though....But still, Its good and I think it should have its atk at 1400 just for a little roughing....I know people say it would be op'd b/c of Special Summoning, but truthfully, I'd see little use in it, just my opinion....[/i][/b][/size]

Note: One of my more recent contest cards, I think it has some potential. But I'm not shure what it might be though.


[img]http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/4064/20638w.jpg[/img]
[size=1]Img from Jazin kays[/size]
[i]Activate only while you control a face-up Level 7 or higher WATER monster. This card remains on the field for 3 of your turns. By discarding 1 WATER monster: either player can negate an attack and end the Battle Phase. When this card is send to the Graveyard: both players can return 1 Monster Card from thier Graveyards to thier hands.[/i]

[size=5][i][b]White's Note's:[i] I have nothing really much to say, other then its balanced and suitable in most water themes......[/i][/b][/i][/size]

Note: Well beside working with Gungnir as its img suggests, I persume it could save other high lvl WATER monsters from your opponent returning. While returning some ammo for Gungnir/returning a monster.
Now tbqh I haven't designed this card with Gungnir in mind, it just happened to work with it.

[img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/3066/20638e.jpg[/img]
[size=1]Img from Jazin kays[/size]
[i]This card is also treated as a Thunder-Type monster. While this card remains the top card of your Graveyard: face-up FIRE monsters gain 300 ATK and DEF and are not effected by the effects of Monster and Trap Cards. When this card is not the top card in your Graveyard: you can pay 750 Life Points to place this card on the top of your Graveyard.[/i]

[size=5][b]White's Note's:[i] Interesting, using the graveyard for effects, I like it, especially the way you did it 2.. I'm thinking I know why you aid fire, but not positive....Water is destructive nature 2, one of the most destructive forces in nature and fire actually can be both, good and bad.....If you didn't get what happened to me, I'm surprised......Well, great card....[/i][/b][/size]

Note: Obvious Fire Support, but no really. This is one of my older cards and was actually designed to help FIRE/WATER hybrid Decks. But I gues it also supports one of the many new FIRE archetypes.

[img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/8593/20638.jpg[/img]
[size=1]Img from Jazin kays[/size]
[i]When this card is Summoned: banish any number of cards in your Graveyard; Place 1 Absorb Counter on this card for each card banished by this card's effect (Max. 20). Increase this card's ATK by 50 for each Absorb Counter on it. Once per turn: you can remove 5 Absorb Counters from this card; Special Summon 1 "Bloat Soldato Token" [Aqua-Type/WATER/Level 4/ATK 1800/DEF 1600]. While you control a face-up "Bloat Soldato Token": this card cannot be destroyed, removed from play, or targeted for an attack.[/i]

[size=5][b]White's Note's:[i] Not really anything to say here other then the picture, sorry, its just doesn't seem to fit and its okay, but I had hoped you would have a better one....It won't effect your rating....[/i][/b][/size]

Note: Again one of my older contest cards. Tbqh I have no idea what I was thinking when I made this. But I gues it has some DD and flodder potential. I deliberatly made it 'When it's Summoned' to ballance out it's high Summoning costs and low stats. As I didn't wanted to make a high powered flodder generator.

[img]http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/9643/20638l.jpg[/img]
[size=1]Img by HP Doom.[/size]
[i]When you draw a card(s) outside of your Draw Phase: inflict 800 damage to your opponent. If you have no cards in your hand: you can Tribute this card to draw 3 cards.[/i]

[size=5][b]White's Note's:[i] Hmm, interesting, it is okay, until you have 3 of them and then get them all on the field......[/i][/b][/size]

[size=5][b][i]Me, use Ultimate offering, get all 3 of them out, then use a card to get rid of my hand, so then I can tribute all 3 of them for a total of 9 cards.....[/i][/b][/size]

[size=5][b][i]Its not op'd, but not up'd, maybe balanced, but can't quite sure until I remember the card I'm thinking of....[/i][/b][/size]

Note: It sort of burns, which is always nice. But I gues it's main use will be the 3 card draw. With low enough ATK to be Summoned with an "Mystic Tomato", high enough DEF to hold it's own for a turn. And filling the Grave with another ammo for DAD while giving you 3 more cards. It might be the most usefull card in this thread.

----------

Art: .78/1
OCG: 1/1
Balanced: .90/1
Playabilitly: .79/1
Restriction: .81/1
Total: .86/1 = B-



[/code]

Link to comment
Share on other sites
Lexadin Newbie

Lexadin

Posted
  • Author
Posted

@White: @Duv-El: Mhh, that is true. But I was thinking it would work with Synchro's, for example. You control 1 PSZ, Summon this. Sp.Summon another 1. Then Synchro for a Lvl 6 Synchro then Synchro again for another. Giving you 2 Lvl 6 Synchro's in 1 turn. + Being a Dark it helps fill your Grave for "Chaos Sorcerer", "BLS" or "DAD". While also thinning your Deck.

@Ice: Thanks.

@Scymuc: Well it's probebly one of my first contest cards made. I found it to be fitting. So I left it.

@Fure: Well considering you'll have to spend at least 1500 LP and need to have all of them in your hand, I'd say that's a bit far fetched.

@White&Rag: Well Lantern mostly helps this guy being played: [img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20070906023313/yugioh/images/thumb/a/af/FrostandFlameDragonTAEV-EN-ScR-1E.jpg/300px-FrostandFlameDragonTAEV-EN-ScR-1E.jpg[/img]

Link to comment
Share on other sites
ragnarok1945 Newbie

ragnarok1945

Posted
Posted

[quote name='Lexadin' timestamp='1317217386' post='5545567']
@White: @Duv-El: Mhh, that is true. But I was thinking it would work with Synchro's, for example. You control 1 PSZ, Summon this. Sp.Summon another 1. Then Synchro for a Lvl 6 Synchro then Synchro again for another. Giving you 2 Lvl 6 Synchro's in 1 turn. + Being a Dark it helps fill your Grave for "Chaos Sorcerer", "BLS" or "DAD". While also thinning your Deck.

@Ice: Thanks.

@Scymuc: Well it's probebly one of my first contest cards made. I found it to be fitting. So I left it.

@Fure: Well considering you'll have to spend at least 1500 LP and need to have all of them in your hand, I'd say that's a bit far fetched.

@White&Rag: Well Lantern mostly helps this guy being played: [img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20070906023313/yugioh/images/thumb/a/af/FrostandFlameDragonTAEV-EN-ScR-1E.jpg/300px-FrostandFlameDragonTAEV-EN-ScR-1E.jpg[/img]
[/quote]


Well how often is Frost and Flame Dragon used nowadays?

Link to comment
Share on other sites
Ojamazing Newbie

Ojamazing

Posted
Posted

[b] [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][size=3][quote]What do an imp, Gungnir, a lanternfish, a godfather and a winged turtle have in common?[/quote][/size][/font][/b]

Your title has been fixed.

The card's effects and stats seem suitable for casual play, though you should try to use the correct OCG for Continuous Effects.

8/10

Link to comment
Share on other sites
Ojamazing Newbie

Ojamazing

Posted
Posted

[quote name='Lexadin' timestamp='1317294468' post='5547759']
Actuall,y some have some potential for more advanced play, expecially 'Scymuc' and 'Winged Turtle'.

Also, if you make an OCG correction, do remember to actually fix it. As from my point of view, nothing is wrong with it.
[/quote]
Sycmuc is a Level 8 monster with a weak effect and no inbuilt ability to Summon itself from the hand. Turtle is at best a terrible Frog Monarch tech.

[i]While you control a face-up "Bloat Soldato Token", this card cannot be destroyed, removed from play, or targeted for an attack.[/i]

[i]While this card remains the top card of your Graveyard, face-up FIRE monsters gain 300 ATK and DEF and are unaffected by the effects of Effect Monster and Trap Cards.[/i]

There are a lot of errors here, and understandably I have neither the time or the inclination to go through them all. Nonetheless, I would like to remind you that these are solid cards and you shouldn't be upset if I hate them.

Link to comment
Share on other sites
Lexadin Newbie

Lexadin

Posted
  • Author
Posted

'Mystic Tomato' says hi. But I gues you're right about 'Scymuc', however it does help you Xyz Summon a lot. Seeing as in the OCG (Official Card Game) Tokens are aloud for Xyz's.

That's outdated OCG (Official Card Grammar), Generation Force released a newer one. Just check some cards out if you don't believe me: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Generation_Force

And I actually updated them to fit the new OCG.

Link to comment
Share on other sites
Ojamazing Newbie

Ojamazing

Posted
Posted

[quote name='Lexadin' timestamp='1317297037' post='5547793']
'Mystic Tomato' says hi. I gues you're right about 'Scymuc'; however, it does help you summon a lot of Xyzs seeing as in the OCG (Official Card Game), Tokens are allowed for Xyzs.

That's outdated OCG (Official Card Grammar), Generation Force released a newer one. Just check some cards out if you don't believe me: [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Generation_Force"]http://yugioh.wikia....eneration_Force[/url]

And I actually updated them to fit the new OCG.
[/quote]
Recruiters are bad this format, sorry.
Tokens aren't allowed to be used as Xyz material in the OCG.
[img]http://images.wikia.com/yugioh/images/7/72/PainPainterGENF-EN-ScR-1E.png[/img]

First line of text, kid.

Link to comment
Share on other sites
Lexadin Newbie

Lexadin

Posted
  • Author
Posted

[quote name='Ojamazing' timestamp='1317297491' post='5547797'] Recruiters are bad this format, sorry. Tokens aren't allowed to be used as Xyz material in the OCG. [img]http://images.wikia.com/yugioh/images/7/72/PainPainterGENF-EN-ScR-1E.png[/img] First line of text, kid. [/quote]

I'm pretty shure I read something like that before though. Might've been TCG then.

Meh, I'll fix it later then.

[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1317356104' post='5549558'] yeah yeah I know, popularity and everything. I hope you make even more support for it then [/quote]

Not quite seeing why it's such a problem, but I might make some more support lateron.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Archived

This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.

Go to topic listing
×
×
  • Create New...