Knight of Emotion Posted July 8, 2011 Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 Dam GIMP. I should have just used the regular card maker. Please note any OCG errors. I'm not used to newer OCG. [spoiler=(Sanctuary Dragon)] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/j9u7m8.jpg[/IMG] [spoiler=(Lore)] This card cannot be Special Summoned. If a card you control is destroyed by battle, this card loses 500 ATK and you take no 0 battle damage. During your either player's Battle Phase , you can discard one card to negate a card effect that targets card(s) you control. You can tribute this card to Special Summon one monster from your Graveyard. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stinkfist Posted July 8, 2011 Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 The very last sentence makes it extremely OP. I like it though, good job. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Emotion Posted July 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2011 [quote name='Stinkfist' timestamp='1310144150' post='5338030'] The very last sentence makes it extremely OP. I like it though, good job. 9/10 [/quote] Well. It is "sanctuary" dragon. Sanctuary = Safe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 [quote name='Stinkfist' timestamp='1310144150' post='5338030'] The very last sentence makes it extremely OP. [/quote] I think the last TWO sentences make it OP. Actually, I think it's all OP. If you wanted it to be Special Summoned while still keeping it's effect in the Graveyard at least proportionate, you would either Banish it or return it to the Deck/Hand. Also, gaining 3000 LP seems a bit much for a monster that can negate EVERYthing. To me, it's a more powerful, more OP version of "Lightness and Darkness Dragon". btw, what font did ya use, and what size? I'm tired of the website trying to make the card effects for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 You can banish this face-up card to gain 3000 Life Points. As long as this card is in the Graveyard you take no Battle Damage. Wow. Those 2 make this card really OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 Usually, I say cards are UP. ...Not in this case. My advice: [b]This card cannot be Special Summoned except by it's own effect. If a monster you control is destroyed by battle you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is Special Summoned this way, destroy it during the End Phase. You can pay 500 Life Points to negate a card effect that targets card(s) you control. You can banish this face-up card to gain [s]3[/s]2000 Life Points. [s]As long as this card is in the Graveyard you take no Battle Damage.[/s]Remove from play this card from your Graveyard to negate 1 attack this turn from a monster your opponent controls. [/b] Not rating broken stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Emotion Posted July 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 [quote name='Devil's Advocate' timestamp='1310172064' post='5339186'] I think the last TWO sentences make it OP. Actually, I think it's all OP. If you wanted it to be Special Summoned while still keeping it's effect in the Graveyard at least proportionate, you would either Banish it or return it to the Deck/Hand. Also, gaining 3000 LP seems a bit much for a monster that can negate EVERYthing. To me, it's a more powerful, more OP version of "Lightness and Darkness Dragon". btw, what font did ya use, and what size? I'm tired of the website trying to make the card effects for me. [/quote] Yea... I know it's broken...And I use GIMP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 [quote name='Hybrid-X89-0rb' timestamp='1310257812' post='5341582'] Yea... I know it's broken...[/quote] Then just, like, fix it. You know it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Emotion Posted July 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 Alright. Fixed. Changed effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 Whers is the card picture, I can't find it, its not in the spoilers and also, the effect and spoilers are a little messed up, edit your post to find out....please and thanks... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight of Emotion Posted July 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 [quote name='Master White' timestamp='1310264558' post='5341865'] Whers is the card picture, I can't find it, its not in the spoilers and also, the effect and spoilers are a little messed up, edit your post to find out....please and thanks... [/quote] Sorry for that. Werid thing is I sworn I posted the picture. Anyways sorry with the error. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 First, its now still overpowered, slightly...But here soon, I'm going to change that, when my Rivalry Set comes out that is, it won't be but for awhile now.....It might take a while..... But anyhow, its decent, playable, bad pciture, use deviant art or something. As for gimp, reason its effect looks whack is b/c you need to use the set fonts which is on MSE, Magic Set Editor. If you do not have it, you do not have the right fonts. If you want it, you need to go and get it. Then afterwards, uninstall gimp and re-install it. Then you should have the appropriate Font. Everything else of the card looks fine. Are you sure you use didn't use gimp for applying the text only? That's pretty much closely what you did there..... So, its okay..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 [quote name='Master White' timestamp='1310266752' post='5341955'] First, its now still overpowered, slightly...But here soon, I'm going to change that, when my Rivalry Set comes out that is, it won't be but for awhile now.....It might take a while..... But anyhow, its decent, playable, bad pciture, use deviant art or something. As for gimp, reason its effect looks whack is b/c you need to use the set fonts which is on MSE, Magic Set Editor. If you do not have it, you do not have the right fonts. If you want it, you need to go and get it. Then afterwards, uninstall gimp and re-install it. Then you should have the appropriate Font. Everything else of the card looks fine. Are you sure you use didn't use gimp for applying the text only? That's pretty much closely what you did there..... So, its okay..... [/quote] Don't listen to this guy about being overpowered, now this is pretty damn useless. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 [quote name='Darkplant - PAIN' timestamp='1310289643' post='5342709'] Don't listen to this guy about being overpowered, now this is pretty damn useless. Nice job. [/quote] So, oh I get it, but if I made a card with the exactly the same, different picture, I bet you'd call it op'd, wouldn't ya. This card cannot be Special Summoned. [b]Okay, good[/b] If a card you control is destroyed by battle, this card loses 500 ATK and you take no 0 battle damage. [b]Wait, I misread this part, oh, okay, yea, this is underpowered right now.[/b] During your either player's Battle Phase , you can discard one card to negate a card effect that targets card(s) you control. [b]Okay, so, this stops Cyber Phoenix and other cards that target....[/b] You can tribute this card to Special Summon one monster from your Graveyard. [B]This is where I was calling it over powered. Free White Night Dragon for the price of tributing this card, slightly op'd. [/b] So, in all in all, its slightly op'd, and if people think not, then op does not exist anymore....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 Shut up. I hate it when people consider these stuff OP. See, I come from the TCG section. The TCG section knows more about the card metagame than any other place. And so I know how much the "No SS-ing" part kills. [b]This card cannot be Special Summoned.[/b] By this time we can sorta see how stupid this card is, unless it's gonna be better than the others that say the same thing. Except wait, there IS a completely better alternative. The TC forgot the existance of the excellent LV 8 LIGHT Dragon Heavy Beatstick, Light and Darkness Dragon. We'd need something pretty damn good to make this better than it, eh? [b]If a card you control is destroyed by battle, this card loses 500 ATK and you take no 0 battle damage.[/b] So far, sucks. LADD laughes in this guy's face. [b]During your either player's Battle Phase , you can discard one card to negate a card effect that targets card(s) you control.[/b] Well, Master White, no one even runs Cyber Phoenix. So I'm way too lazy to even check the effect it has. As for other possibilities, I can say this is hilariously useless, because the only real thing people will ever use in the Battle Phase to target is Dimensional Prison. [b]You can tribute this card to Special Summon one monster from your Graveyard. [/b] See, so you thought this is good. Except wait, you need 2 tributes. Totem Dragon can make it 1! Yay! Except wait, Caius exists. But this can revive strong monsters! Yay! Except wait, LADD exists. The problem here is that many aspects of this cards match that of LADD, except watered down. And LADD doesn't really need watering down. LADD isn't used much these days anymore either. It's goddamn "good", but not enough for the swift and everchanging metagame where no monster can live for 3 turns. The result? This card's current placement is the "bad" zone. Also, by the time you even mentioned the terribad White Night Dragon, I was depraved of the will to take you seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maximate Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 Let me help you fix the OCG This card cannot be Special Summoned. If a [s]card[/s] [b]monster[/b] you control is destroyed by battle, this card loses 500 ATK and you take no [s]0[/s] [b]B[/b]attle [b]D[/b]amage [b]involving that battle[/b]. During [s]your[/s] either player's Battle Phase , you can discard [s]one[/s] [b]1[/b] card to negate a card effect that targets card(s) you control. You can tribute this card to Special Summon [s]one[/s] [b]1[/b] monster from your Graveyard. Overall, it's good, while IMO, the part you can Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard is OP. How 'bout making some condition or something like that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 No it more balanced for me, and far better than before Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted July 10, 2011 Report Share Posted July 10, 2011 [quote name='Darkplant - PAIN' timestamp='1310306190' post='5342927'] Shut up. I hate it when people consider these stuff OP. See, I come from the TCG section. The TCG section knows more about the card metagame than any other place. And so I know how much the "No SS-ing" part kills. [b]This card cannot be Special Summoned.[/b] By this time we can sorta see how stupid this card is, unless it's gonna be better than the others that say the same thing. Except wait, there IS a completely better alternative. The TC forgot the existance of the excellent LV 8 LIGHT Dragon Heavy Beatstick, Light and Darkness Dragon. We'd need something pretty damn good to make this better than it, eh? [b]If a card you control is destroyed by battle, this card loses 500 ATK and you take no 0 battle damage.[/b] So far, sucks. LADD laughes in this guy's face. [b]During your either player's Battle Phase , you can discard one card to negate a card effect that targets card(s) you control.[/b] Well, Master White, no one even runs Cyber Phoenix. So I'm way too lazy to even check the effect it has. As for other possibilities, I can say this is hilariously useless, because the only real thing people will ever use in the Battle Phase to target is Dimensional Prison. [b]You can tribute this card to Special Summon one monster from your Graveyard. [/b] See, so you thought this is good. Except wait, you need 2 tributes. Totem Dragon can make it 1! Yay! Except wait, Caius exists. But this can revive strong monsters! Yay! Except wait, LADD exists. The problem here is that many aspects of this cards match that of LADD, except watered down. And LADD doesn't really need watering down. LADD isn't used much these days anymore either. It's goddamn "good", but not enough for the swift and everchanging metagame where no monster can live for 3 turns. The result? This card's current placement is the "bad" zone. Also, by the time you even mentioned the terribad White Night Dragon, I was depraved of the will to take you seriously. [/quote] [i][b]Well, finally, I'm getting somewhere....But if it was someone else of high caliber saying this card was op'd, when you fight back? No, b/c you'd be afraind you'd get banned for no reason. My whole goal here was to get a reaction out of someone that would explain that this card is in fact quite underpowered, but no matter where I go, I keep seeing people say cards that are like this or are more powerful then it, op'd. Cards more powerful then this is balanced. So, when I post my card, I no doubt will get people saying my cards are overpowered, but wai, if its overpwoered, wouldn't it make this card absurdly overpowered? So, may I reason with you through pm and +rep for what I was trying to get, detailed comments explaining why this card is bad, hence posing as a person that does not know what they are talking about.....[/b][/i] By the way, White Night Dragon isn't all that bad, I used monster reborn on him and one the duel....It was quite interesting really, Second turn even....I'm glad my opponent had him in his Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 "During your either player's Battle Phase , you can discard one card to negate a card effect that targets card(s) you control" That sentence should be the 1st one and in any case that effect should be limited to once per turn overall it's a reasonable card though, so I'll give it 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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