Lexadin Posted July 7, 2011 Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 [center]Sometime ago, while I still used MSE, I made a small set of cards. Called the Arcupians. They all where LIGHT Dragons, and had interesting evolution methods. Somewhat simulair to lvling up, the increase thier lvls to bring out thier next form. It's been a while, so I might have some OCG errors (expecially with that wierd new OCG). So here are the Arcupians. Img credit to Pixiv artist 猫鴉 and to HP Doom for the 1st one. [IMG]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/6404/arcupianlibata.png[/IMG] [i]Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed: it is not. During each of your Standby Phases, increase this card's Level by 1 (Max. 4). During your Standby Phases, you can send this face-up card to the Graveyard; Special Summon 1 "Arcupian" monster with the same Level as this card from your Deck.[/i] [IMG]http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/6123/arcupianpercurius.png[/IMG] [i]If this card is Special Summoned by an "Arcupian" monster: this card can attack your opponents' Life Points directly. When this card attacks your opponent directly: send the top card of their Deck to the Graveyard. During each of your Standby Phases, increase this card's Level by 1 (Max. 6). During your Standby Phases, you can send this face-up card to the Graveyard; Special Summon 1 "Arcupian" monster with the same Level as this card from your Deck.[/i] [IMG]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/8420/arcupianchemota.png[/IMG] [i]If this card is Special Summoned by an "Arcupian" monster: this card can twice each of your Battle Phases. When this card inflicts damage to your opponent: send the top 2 cards of their Deck to the Graveyard. During each of your Standby Phases, increase this card's Level by 1 (Max. . During your Standby Phases, you can send this face-up card to the Graveyard; Special Summon 1 "Arcupian" monster with the same Level as this card from your Deck.[/i] [IMG]http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/9986/arcupianshurano.png[/IMG] [i]When this card is Summoned by an "Arcupian" monster: your opponent cannot activate card effects in their Graveyards. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card inflicts battle damage: send the top 3 cards of your opponents' Deck to the Graveyard. During each of your Standby Phases, increase this card's Level by 1 (Max. 10). During your Standby Phases, you can send this face-up card to the Graveyard; Special Summon 1 "Arcupian" monster with the same Level as this card from your Deck.[/i] [IMG]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/940/arcupianmagila.png[/IMG] [i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of an "Arcupian" monster. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent: send the top 3 cards of their Deck to the Graveyard. Negate the effects of Spell, Trap and Effect Monsters Cards that target a card(s) in your opponent's Graveyard. Cards in either player's Graveyard cannot be removed from play. Your opponent cannot activate any card effect in their Graveyard.[/i] [size="1"]Any comments about bad OCG must be given with the OCG fix, unless it's already given in a previous post. Every correct OCG fix will be repped, unless the fix is already given. Any post with less then 5 words is considered spam and will be treated as so.[/size][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted July 7, 2011 Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 What an oddly great archetype all of the effects make perfect sense. I would say that they aren't similar to lvling they are lvling up so you could just as easily name them arcupian Lvl2 etc. The pictures are great nightmare fuel though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 Thanks for your comment, but those names would be too simulair to LV monsters. *looks at images* I don't see nightmarish creatures in them. More like dream creatures to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted July 7, 2011 Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 They are really great. Although I noticed you kept spelling thier instead of their. Not really an OCG mistake just something that could be easily overlooked. Anyway these cards are great. Unlike a lot of archtypes here the pictures go together, which is a nice change. The effects could really deplete your opponent's Deck as long as you take the right precautions, until you get the last "Arcupian" monster out. The stats are good and the effects are interesting. Great Job. 9/10. (10/10 if you fix the thier->their problem) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 Ah, most of these cards are quite old, and back then I always confused their with thier. I'll go and fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted July 7, 2011 Report Share Posted July 7, 2011 I totally remember these! Since I've already commented on these before, I'll go over OCG a little. Anyway, OCG-wise, it's correct unless you want it to be updated to new OCG. All 'If this ..." and "When this..." or anything else beginning with 'if'/'with' should have a colon after it, as it is a condition. Also, each time you use the word 'to' in the case of 'Do something to this [b]to[/b] destroy 1 card' for example, use a semi-colon instead. But, anyway, as I've probably said before, inventive and effective Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 Thanks for the fix. I've updated them to, hopefully, good correct new OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2011 Bumb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 quite the impressive pics you for there overall from the pics due to their similarity, they seem better suited for level monsters any reason why you didn't do that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Mostly because everyone would make them Lvl monsters. But not everyone can think of a new idea simulair to Lvling but still slightly different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Almost forgot to bumb this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 *sigh* Final Bumb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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