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Pokemon Lapislazuli & Obsidian: Journey through the Wheysee'm Region [CHAPTER 1 ADDED!]

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[center][i]Long ago, there were two mysterious Pokemon - Rekamcy and Falpizz, who feuded with each other over the uncharted waters in ancient times, for they were rivals. However, after many centuries of restless fighting, they perished and rested in peace. Their main body became the Wheysee'm region itself, their fur and feathers morphed into the flora and and fauna, their jaws and skeleton were transformed into the rocks that lay throughout the Wheysee'm region. The very blood that rushed up to their brains during their long feud had become the very water bodies and surrounding ocean that protected the region. To make this long long story short, the two entities fused into one region when they died. However, there is no credible evidence for this.

Is this but a myth? Are Rekamcy and Falpizz still alive? There is only one way to find out...[/i]

[spoiler=Prologue]
I had awoken from my slumber. I stood up and looked into the mirror. My long pink hair was as fuzzy as a peach, and dark circles formed under my usually-bright purple eyes. I simply changed out of my pyjamas and wore a set of clothes, ready for an occasion.

“Good morning mom!” I shouted as I dashed downstairs to the living room, where breakfast was ready. It was a very special day, for this was the day I got my first Pokemon.
“Morning dear,” my mother replied. “Professor Maple decided to send you the Pokemon you wanted directly instead. What was it again?”
“I think it was a Wengfyre. Is that its Pokeball?” I noticed a Pokeball on the table and picked it up.
“It is, why not take a peek...”
“Sure, let’s try...” I tossed the ball into the air, and out came a red, shiny light, resembling fire. I noticed a crimson bird-like creature with three legs. “Fyre? Weng,” the bird softly cawed as it looked around. I simply looked at the creature, while it stared at me too. I simply introduced myself to the little bird, but I was in for a big surprise.

Instead of greeting back, it hit me with a few pecks, then stopped. “Ow! Ow! Stop it! I’m your friend! Return!”
With that, I raised its Pokeball, and it was returned to the Pokeball in a flash of red light. After that, I looked at my watch, realising something...
“Sorry mom! I gotta go!” with that, I ran out of the house, dashing towards a nearby laboratory...

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“Professor Maple!” I slammed the door open as I shouted, “I’m sorry I’m late.”
“Well, you’re just in time Otto,” the labcoat-clad woman before me spoke, “your friend over here is selecting a Pokemon. Having a hard time.”

I craned my neck, and saw a friend of mine, Joe Lapislazuli with his signature navy-blue hair. We had been rivals since kids. He was selecting between two Pokemon. One appeared to be a dryad-wolf-cub thing, known as Jekkay, and the other resembled a blue egg with an eye peeping out of a hole, along with a couple legs popping out. I happened to believe that that was a Klaviathan.

After a while, he selected the Klaviathan for some reason. “Good, now we can begin,” Professor Maple spoke. Next, she coughed for a second before starting.
“You see, like all children at this age, you’re beginning your Pokemon journey, meeting and catching all Pokemon in the region. I’ve been researching Pokemon for quite a while now, but even I need a hand, so, I’m handing you these...”
She handed us a queer device.
“The... Pokedex?” Joe and I said in unison.
“You got that right, it records the data of any Pokemon you see and catch. Well, these Pokedexes are equipped with maps, so you won’t get lost. I suppose, you’re all ready to go?”

“One more thing,” Joe spoke, “ I wanna have a battle with Otto. Waddya say, Otto?”
“With pleasure...” I replied as we went to the outdoors, in front of a lake located in our small hometown.
We sent out our Pokemon. We tossed our Pokeballs into the air, and out came our Pokemon.
“FYRE!” In a flash of red light, Wengfyre appeared.
“KLAVIA!” In a flash of blue light, Joe’s Klaviathan appeared. This was when our battle begun.

“Wengfyre! Use Ember!” I ordered Wengfyre, but it didn’t do a thing.
“Klaviathan, hit ‘em with a Water Gun,” Joe calmly said, but the egg-like Pokemon did not a thing.

The two of us stared at each other like idiots, then chuckled. “OK buddy, use Tackle!”
With that, both Pokemon struck each other with a tackle, hitting each other in the process.

I simply ordered Wengfyre to do the same thing, but Klaviathan did something different. Its shell shined under the morning sun, and my attack was almost deflected.
“Haven’t you heard of Harden? It raises Defense one stage.”
Hearing that, I simply growled. Then I realised something.

“Now Wengfyre, use Leer!”
That was my order. With that, Wengfyre gave a menacing glare, frightening the egg Pokemon, potentially lowering its defenses.
“FINISH IT OFF WITH TACKLE!”
Wengfyre did just that, tackling the egg, causing it to faint.

The little bird jumped up and used its wings to hug me. I tugged it close to my chest, hugging him back. “Thanks, you’re the best Wengfyre...” I could tell that Wengfyre was starting to take a liking to me.

Joe approached his fainted egg Pokemon as well, and picked it up. “Klaviathan, you battled hard, you deserve a nice long rest...” he said as he returned the egg Pokemon to its Pokeball. “Well Otto, that was a long, hard battle, but I know we’ll both get stronger one day. Well, our journey’s beginning, gotta go!” he ran away, into the tall grass.

Little did he know, he missed a brilliant sight. Well, I didn’t...

Suddenly, I noticed a mysterious whirlpool on the lake I was standing near to. I observed the unusual phenomenom with awe, knowing that such a thing has never happened before.
Not in a lake, that is.
A mysterious, spirit-like being rose from it, producing enigmatic cries. I saw those feathery angel wings, that long, white hair, that humanoid, slender figure that seemed human. I presumed it was a mythical Pokemon of sorts.

“Wha- what are you?” I questioned.
“You will find out another day, during your journey, but now, I am in danger, and you must help...”
“What kind of danger?”
“An evil team known as Team Distortion. They are bound on harnessing the power of my friends and I and- sorry, I cannot stay for long...” with that, the queer creature disappeared into the whirlpool, then it all stopped. For a moment there I thought I was dreaming, but then I realised, it was real.

Looks like this journey was going to be the journey of my life.
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[spoiler=Chapter 1 - A new friend, a new legend]
I started off my very first Pokemon journey by venturing into the nearby tall grass. As I started walking, I realised I had become a much more mature girl, although a Pokemon journey was part of every kid’s life. I left Wengfyre to sit on my shoulder since he disliked staying in his Pokeball.

“I’m glad we can be friends Wengfyre,” I said to my new three-legged Pokemon. “Now, let’s make more friends, shall we?”
Wengfyre simply cawed happily while flapping his wings, failing to fly. “WENG!” It cried as it jumped down from my shoulder, making a perfect landing on the ground. It produced a louder cry than before, attracting a lot of attention.

A lot, a lot of attention.

All of a sudden, many a Pokemon were charging at us, all of the same species. They were all on land, and their green grassy bodies matched the current season – spring. They had a simple body style, walking on four hooves, and had a nice ornamental horn. “Tee-Enkay!” They all cried out loud, potentially intimidating us.

“YIKES!” I wailed. “What are those?” I took out my Pokedex from my bag in order to identify the creatures.
“Tee-Enkay, the Seasonal Pokemon,” the Pokedex spoke, “they change type and appearance each season. They enjoy discussing many interesting things with each other, classifying them as intelligent beings.

I gulped my saliva down my throat. “What the- well, that doesn’t sound so threatening. So, Fire beats Grass, right?”
One of those that seemed to be an Alpha Male walked up, then screamed at the top of its lungs. With that, those behind him started to charge up an attack, finally releasing a mysterious smoke-like object onto Wengfyre. However, I tugged him close to me and took all the hits.
“Ahhh... Gunk Shot... hurts...” I then quivered in pain as I started falling to the ground. “I just need a few minutes, don’t worry, Wengfyre.”

I looked into Wengfyre’s eyes, full of determination and fames. “WENG!” With that, the flaming bird charged up a ball of flames in his mouth, next,he fired it at the foes in the form of bullets.
I simply stared in awe. With his determination, he had learnt a new move – ember. He easily defeated most of the Tee-Enkays, but to my astonishment, someone new had come. This person’s identity was encased in a mask and a cape. But from the voice, I could tell it was probably a male.

He tossed a Pokeball in the air, and from within in, came out a Pokemon. “Fyruck!” Before my very eyes, a red, biomechanical, truck-like Pokemon had appeared. It appeared to run on wheels, a trait that most Pokemon did not have.

“Woah, what’s that?” I muttered to myself as I took out my Pokedex to identify the Pokemon. “Fyruck, the Roadkill Pokemon. Fyruck are vehicles brought to life. They mainly feed on metals and thrash.”

“Fyruck,” the mystery man said, “use Troll!”
Suddenly, the truck-like Pokemon created a ghost-like illusionary replica of itself, which rammed into the many Tee-Enkays, causing them to flee in fear, However, one simply jumped on my head, crying like a newborn infant. It appeared to be one of the younger ones of the pack. When I looked up, the mystery man and his giant Pokemon had disappeared. How strange.

Startled by the sudden series of events, I cooled down after a short while. The young Tee-Enkay from earlier was still there, staring at me. I observed the creature for a while, and noticed that its wooden horn was partially chipped-off, and its green fur had slight bruises on it. I realised that it was hurt. Wengfyre jumped on my shoulder and looked at the Pokemon. “Weng?”
“C’mon Wengfyre, let’s go to the Pokemon Centre...” I said as I picked the Tee-Enkay from the ground and ran to the nearest Pokemon Centre...

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After a short ten-minute run, we had finally reached the nearest town – Grim Town. Since it wasn’t such a big town, I could immediately detect the Pokemon Centre and thus ran to it. I was then greeted by a nurse.
“Hello, welcome to the Pokemon Centre. How may I help you?”
“Errr...” I said, “I’d like my Pokemon healed please.”
“Please give us a few seconds...” the nurse said as she took Wengfyre and Tee-Enkay by hand, and with ease, she brought them both to some back door. After a short while, they were both out, looking good as new. “We hope to see you again!” she said as I started leaving with Wengfyre and Tee-Enkay.

As I approached the exit, I noticed the same mystery man from before. “Hello kid,” he said. “I see you’ve made friends with the Tee-Enkay, a strong bond I can tell, It’s still a wild Pokemon, why not you catch it?”
“Who-who-who are you?” I trembled in astonishment.
“I cannot tell you,” the mystery man said, “but I can show you something that’ll help in your journey...” he walked out of the Pokemon Centre as I followed, then pointed to two odd-looking statues in the distant, one appeared to be made from a black, shiny rock, and resembled a dragon, and the other, a blue, shiny gemstone, resembling a phoenix.
“What are those?” I questioned as we both started to approach the statues. I stared in awe at the craftsmanship.
“They are the very Pokemon linked to the creation of the Wheysee’m region...” he started explaining, “Rekamcy, the Origin Pokemon,” he pointed to the Black statue, “and Falpizz, the Existence Pokemon,” he then pointed to the Blue one, “In ancient times, these two feuded and eventually perished, their very bodies becoming the Wheysee’m region itself. Without them, none of us would exist, and you would not make so many wonderful friends. We must always do something for something to happen, otherwise, the undesirable will come...”
He ran away.
I couldn’t completely understand it, but I knew I would one day. I was positive that this was linked to the water-nymph Pokemon I saw at the lake. So far, I was good as clueless what all this could all mean. But for now, my journey continues.

“Wengfyre?”
“Enkay?”
“It’s OK,” I had just woken up from a sudden daydream. “So, Tee-Enkay, do you want to come with us?” The little horse-like creature nodded, its horn shining under the sun.
“OK, lets see...” I dug deep into my bag and threw a Pokeball into the air, wuth Tee-Enkay jumping up and headbutting it. 3... 2... 1... Poof! Tee-Enkay was caught. “Perfect, I made a new friend...” I muttered to myself as I put the Pokeball in my bag. I looked around, only to notice there was nothing much in this town, thus I started moving on.

Just my luck. As I started to exit, mysterious-looking villain-like people appeared. They were clad in wierd, blue-and-black uniforms and had similar hair and eyes. They had a capital ‘D’ on their belts. For some reason, I felt that they were about to approach me.
Which they were.
“Hold it right there little punk,” one of them spoke, “where are you going?”
“Hand over your Pokemon right now!” another said.
“What for!” I rudely replied. “C’mon out Tee-Enkay, use Megahorn!”
With that, I sent out Tee-Enkay once more. It rammed its wooden horn straight at the grunts, but they dodged swiftly.

“Seriously?” they spoke. “C’mon out, Zyobrehcram!” In a flash of light, numerous identical-looking stickman-like fugures appeared. The queer Pokemon were all two-dimensional. I checked my Pokedex for information.
“Zyobrehcram, the Sketch Pokemon. It is believed that if you stare at one for too long, it will continuously throw insults at you. Its body is 2-dimensional.

“Easy, Tee-Enkay, Gunk Shot.”
With that, the green creature shot a ball of sludge from its mouth, producing an odd smokescreen, giving us the chance to run away.

“Hey, where’d the little punk go?”
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CnC, comment, Review, its horrible like most of my Fanfics, but, I'll try. Do note that every single Pokemon in this Fanfic is based on a YCM member, you can guess by looking at the name and/or description of each Pokemon.
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Sweet, I appeared in the prologue. That is like so awesome. So totally awesome. I even did a bit of a Giratina portal to do it. SWEET.

It was a bit short for my liking, but I write too much, so I s'pose that's fine.

It would be nice if we knew what Otto looked like. When presenting a story in first person, you could make them look in a mirror as they get ready, or spot their reflection.

[s]But I can see Otto looking like your avi, amirite?[/s]
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Oh yeah, I got a little comment;

I thought wailing was when you are like begging, or in pain, or something. Not really a "Hey Mum" thing, y'know? It's just a nit picky then with me.

In fact, the dictionary definition of wail is a mournful cry, or a cry of grief or pain. Uhhhh... yeah. That explains my point.
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I don't like Tee-Enkay. I hate 'ponies.'

I have an idea for my Pokemon who must be an Electric type!\
Name: Tigga
Type: Electric
Evolution: Tigga -> Tighers(Via Thunderstone)
Pokedex Entry: Tigga, the tiger Pokemon. Tigga is shy and when disturbed, it sends electrical blasts from it's body to it's enemies.
Tighers Pokedex: Tighers, the ultamite tiger Pokemon. The evolved form of Tigga. Tighers is very clam and won't attack unless ordered.
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I'll see if there's anything to modify XD Thanks for the suggestion.

And it isn't a pony, its a unicorn, a horse with a horn, thus can learn Megahorn [s]and Gunk Shot[/s].
A seasonal unicorn whose type varies according to the season.
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[s]MoreliektotalDeerlingripexceptnotdeer[/s]

A damned unicorn/Deerling with a tiny wooden horn. The dream of every little horse. Then it evolves and has grass growing everywhere it alks, and uses Vine Whip like a bawz.

Yes, my imagination is crazy.

But thats just the way it goes.




Otto thinks I'm A FRICKIN WATER NYMPH? *folds arms* Yah Otto, Imma water nymph. I spend days tending to droplets of water, making them shiny. I collect hordes of my shiny water and drain lakes to clean them. I'm made of water, and can disappear within its depth.

Yah Otto, that's what I am. /heavysarcasmtag
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Also, here's what they look like,
Tigga
[img]http://image.spreadshirt.net/image-server/image/composition/17166288/view/1/type/png/width/378/height/378/cute-cartoon-yellow-tiger-cat-sticker_design.png[/img]
Tighers
[img]http://cdn.graphicsfactory.com/clip-art/image_files/tn_image/0/588860-tn_tiger201.gif[/img]
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I like the first chapter. It's going along pretty nice [s]but you introduced a deerling ripoff lol[/s]. By the way, "Pokemon Lapizlazuli & Obsidian" are basically the game titles, right? Like "Pokemon Diamond and Pearl"?

And my favorite quote:

[quote name='♪♫ SF-A2★Miki ♫♪' timestamp='1309593995' post='5327574']
“Fyruck,” the mystery man said, “use Troll!”
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[s]It's sig-worthy[/s]
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