ProximaCentauri Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 [img]http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/7025/426178o.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lyfe. Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 I would raise the level to 7. Other than that, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Time Psyduck Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 Firstly, Pyro-Dragon isn't a type. If you want to make a card of that type, it's fine, but if you want a realistic card you should use a real type. Either Pyro or Dragon will do, and if you don't specifically want to make a normal monster you could give it an effect that says: "This card is also treat as a [Whichever type you didn't make it]-Type monster." Why 'Red-Eye'? Do you specifically want it to work with the Red-Eyes cards? If so, it should be "Red-Eye[b]s[/b] Pyro Dragon", and the text should provide at least some hints as to how it's related to the rest of the Red-Eyes series. If not, then why not just call it "Pyro Dragon" instead? It's stats are fine for it's level, although it should probably have a slightly lower DEF (perhaps around 1500) - the normal monsters of any given level with the highest ATK values often have lower defences, and at level 6 the only other monsters with 2500+ ATK have 1200 and 1700 DEF. There's a mark in the bottom corner of the image, which looks like a website's mark on the image to show it's theirs. You should crop the image to get rid of this if possible - if you want to acknowledge your image source, do so in the post below the card, rather than on it. The text seems off somehow, although I'm not sure how. I think it might be the fact that it sounds like it's telling us volcanoes have the monster in them, rather that telling us where the monster is. Perhaps something like: "This mighty dragon lives deep in the heart of an active volcano" might work better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 5, 2011 Report Share Posted June 5, 2011 change it to Pyro-type it's boring for being a vanilla, though it's good to see it's FIRE, since that attribute it somewhat unpopular if you give it some spell/trap support I'm sure it'll be fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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