(NEW CARDS ADDED) Let The Cold Black Heart Of My Dark Machine Engulf You

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Cosmic Summon is very cool

Cosmic Monsters go to your Extra Deck like any other Monster can, and have effects
(Cosmic Monsters can only be summon by Cosmic Summon (this is treated as a Special Summoned)

Cosmo Monsters go in your Deck and you gotta have at least 3 monsters in your graveyard of the same level (at least one have to be a cosmo monster) to Cosmic Summon

when you Comsic Summon all Cosmic Material retunrs to your deck then your deck is shuffled

when your cosmic monster is destoryed or removed form the field its removed form play instead of going to the graveyard

(so unlike sychros and excceds you can not use a cosmic monster for comsic material for a cosmic summon)

ive made a few of different types attribute levels and effects

[Spoiler=Fugi Baka Of The Dark Mashi Lords]
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Fugi Baka Of The Dark Mash Lords
lore
1 Level 8 DARK Cosmo Monsters + 2 Level 8 Non Cosmo Monsters
This card can only be Cosmic Summon by using the above Cosmic material Monsters. This card gains ATK equal to half of the Combined ATK of the non Cosmo Monsters used in the Cosmic Summoning of this Monster. this card is uneffected by the effects of Equip spell cards and Field spell cards. If this card attacks a face-down Defense Position monster, destroy it immediately with this card's effect without flipping it face-up or applying damage calculation. during you End Phase you can Tributed this monster to deal direct damage to your Opponent's Life Points equal to half of this Monster's ATK.
[/Spoiler]

[Spoiler=Fugi Baka Of The Fiery Mashi Lords]
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Fugi Baka Of The Fiery Mashi Lords
lore
1 Level 8 Cosmo Monsters + 1 Level 8 Non Cosmo Monsters
This card can only be Cosmic Summon by using the above Cosmic material Monsters. You can only control one face-up "Fugi Baka Of The Fiery Mashi Lords". This card is uneffected by the effects of Equip spell cards and Field spell cards. Once per turn, during your draw phase, you can reveal the card you drew to remove the top card of your deck from play. If the card sent was a monster card, deal 800 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points. If the card sent was a Spell card, destroy 2 face-down cards your opponent controls. If the card sent was a Trap card, double the original attack of this card until the End Phase."
[/Spoiler]

[Spoiler=Fugi Baka of the Nordic Surf Tribe]
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Fugi Baka of the Nordic Surf Tribe
lore
You can Special Summon this Monster from your Hand by Sending 3 Face Up Cards you control and removing form play the top 2 cards of your Deck. While on the Field this monster is also treated as a DARK attributed monster. While in the Graveyard during your Main Phase you can pay 500 of your Life Points to treat this as a non Cosmo Monster. when this monster fights a monster with a diferent attribute destroy it immediately with this card's effect without actaviating that monster's effect or applying damage calculation.
[/Spoiler]

[Spoiler=Fugi Baka of the Beast Men Tribe]
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Fugi Baka of the Beast Men Tribe
lore
You can Special Summon this Monster from your Hand by sending 3 face-down cards you control to the Graveyard and sending 1 card in your Hand to top of your Deck. While on the Field this monster is also treated as a FIRE attributed monster. While in the Graveyard during your Main Phase you can pay 500 of your Life Points to treat this as a non Cosmo Monster. when this monster fights a monster with a diferent attribute destroy it immediately with this card's effect without actaviating that monster's effect or applying damage calculation.
[/Spoiler]

[Spoiler=Fugi Baka Of The Dark Soul]
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Fugi Baka Of The Dark Soul
lore
You can send 3 cards in your Hand to the top of your Deck to Special Summon this card form your Hand.. When Summon you can pay 1000 of your Life Points to return 1 removed from played Cosmic Monster to your Extra Deck. If "Fugi Baka Of The Fiery Spirit" is face up on your side of the Field destory all face up "Fugi Baka Of The Dark Soul" and "Fugi Baka Of The Fiery Spirit"
[/Spoiler]

[Spoiler=Fugi Baka Of The Fiery Spirit]
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Fugi Baka Of The Fiery Spirit
lore
you can remove form play 2 Cosmic Monssters in your Extra Deck to Special Summon this card form your Hand. If "Fugi Baka Of The Dark Soul" is face up on your side of the Field destory all face up "Fugi Baka Of The Fiery Spirit" and "Fugi Baka Of The Dark Soul"
[/Spoiler]

[Spoiler=VonKeingling The Demonic King Serpent]
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VonKeingling The Demonic King Serpent
lore
2 Level 6 Cosmo monsters + 1 Level 6 non Cosmo monsters
This card can only be Cosmic Summoned by using the above Cosmic Material Monsters. This monster gains 100 ATK for every Fish and Reptile-Type monster in your hand and Graveyard. During battle between this attacking Card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.
[/Spoiler]

[Spoiler=Narumi Of The Sea]
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Narumi Of The Sea
lore
If you have either a Cosmso Monster or a Cosmic Monster on you side of the field, you can Special Summon this monster for your hand. When this monster is Summoned, your opponet sends the top 5 cards of their Deck to the Graveyard and draws 3 cards. When this monster is removed form the field, add 1 "Umi" form your Deck or Graveyard to your Hand.
[/Spoiler]

[Spoiler=Zenmaku The Burning Lake Creature]
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Zenmaku The Burning Lake Creature
lore
You can Special Summon this monster for your hand. When this monster is Summoned, destory 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. When this monster is removed form the field, you can Special Summon 1 Level 2 or lower Fish-Type monster from your Deck in face-up Attack Postion.
[/Spoiler]

[Spoiler=Burning Fate Warrior]
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Burning Fate Warrior
lore
2 Level 4 Cosmo Monsters + 1 Level 4 Non Cosmo Monsters
This card can only be Cosmic Summon by using the above Cosmic material Monsters. when Cosmic Summon, this card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every Cosmic monster in both Graveyard. "During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position Monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent."
[/Spoiler]

[Spoiler=Ozaku Of The Lower Burning Fate Tribe]
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Ozaku Of The Lower Burning Fate Tribe
lore
If you have either a Cosmo Monster or a Cosmic Monster on you side of the field, you can Special Summon this monster for your hand. When this monster is Summoned, your opponet sends the top 3 cards of their Deck to the Graveyard. When this monster is removed form the field, your opponent discards 3 cards in their hand and draws 3 cards
[/Spoiler]

[Spoiler=Zenmaru the Burning Fate Chunin]
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Zenmaru the Burning Fate Chunin
lore
you can Special Summon this Monster for your Hand. when this Monster is Summon, Destory it. when this Monster is removed form the Field. your Opponent discards 3 cards from their Hand and draws the same number of cards they discarded.
[/Spoiler]

NEW CARDS ADDED

[Spoiler=Sacred Ritual Art : Fugi Baka]
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Sacred Ritual Art : Fugi Baka
lore
during your end phase both players select 1 monster in their deck and send it to the graveyard then both players gain 2100 life points
[/Spoiler]

[Spoiler=Sacred Ritual Land of Fugi Baka Sacred]
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Ritual Land of Fugi Baka
lore
your Opponent can not activate any Field spell cards. during your End Phase both players select 1 monster in their Deck and send it to the Graveyard then both players gain 2100 Life Points
[/Spoiler]

[Spoiler=Adavnced Trickery Of Recycling]
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Adavnced Trickery Of Recycling
lore
during you Standby Phase you can removed form play form your Graveyard 2 Spell cards, 2 Trap cards and, pay 2000 Life Points to combine all the monsters in your Graveyard with your Deck then shuffle your Deck.
[/Spoiler]

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[Cody Frost]

Hmm, a new name for the subtype. For some reason I'm thinking Cosmo from Fairlyodd Parents o.O

[judedudemude]

bump for comments

[Icy]

Keep to 1 subtype or I'm moving this. Also keep up the S/T support as well as monsters, or that qualifies as AoC.

[·Toot]

stfu Toot

[Cody Frost]

[quote name='DISASTROUS!!' timestamp='1302055670' post='5117609']
i love how the summoning concept give you a small avarice xD
[/quote]

That's why I'm now worried that this set (regardless of what the individual card's effects are) might be OPed now :/
They can use themselves to recycle and you can keep quite a well played set up where you'll be earning (most likely) a +1 back to your deck and therefore preventing you from drawing out. This might not be a bad thing, but it can make decks that mill out cards ubberly broken. The light monsters I submitted are no exceptions either >.< you can combine those with Lightsworns to set up a great deck recycle engine that can keep bringing back Wulf, and other cards, set up for another Cosmo Summon, and voila!

Maybe the levels of the Cosmo monsters should be switched to Ranks like the Exceeds to prevent this from happening.

[judedudemude]

[quote name='Cody Frost' timestamp='1302050902' post='5117364']
Hmm, a new name for the subtype. For some reason I'm thinking Cosmo from Fairlyodd Parents o.O
[/quote]

well even though alot of people agree this was awesome and great and should be intergrated in tho the real game and the tv show and manga

there were some few who though other wise so i had to do some major remodeling and adjustments and i spent a few hours playing the game with the new cosmic summoning (use paper to repersent the cards ive made) to do multiple test and made sure that the cosmic summoning was acheiveable but not super easy to do

PLEASE GO HERE FOR MORE INFORMATION :
http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/245241-let-the-cold-black-heart-of-my-dark-machine-engulf-you/

[quote name='Icyblue' timestamp='1302053042' post='5117506']
Keep to 1 subtype or I'm moving this. Also keep up the S/T support as well as monsters, or that qualifies as AoC.
[/quote]

well i had to redo everthing i messed up the first set

[quote name='DISASTROUS!!' timestamp='1302055670' post='5117609']
i really like these
i love how the summoning concept give you a small avarice xD
you should probably add more spells and traps that supports this new
summoning

i liek the effects
not too bad

only flaws i actually see is the bad images
the pixalated (did i spell that right?) attribute and levels
and the re-colored inverted cards. but it might be a little tough to get that stuff right. xD

but overall these are good

8.5/10
[/quote]

i wanted a template for the new subtype and the only problem was getting the level and attribute right

and if any one have suggestions or requests about cosmo monsters and or cosmic monsters and or spells and traps that supports this new
summoning please let me know though PM me

[quote name='Cody Frost' timestamp='1302056261' post='5117628']
That's why I'm now worried that this set (regardless of what the individual card's effects are) might be OPed now :/
They can use themselves to recycle and you can keep quite a well played set up where you'll be earning (most likely) a +1 back to your deck and therefore preventing you from drawing out. This might not be a bad thing, but it can make decks that mill out cards ubberly broken. The light monsters I submitted are no exceptions either >.< you can combine those with Lightsworns to set up a great deck recycle engine that can keep bringing back Wulf, and other cards, set up for another Cosmo Summon, and voila!

Maybe the levels of the Cosmo monsters should be switched to Ranks like the Exceeds to prevent this from happening.
[/quote]

i made it were cosmic monsters are destoryed or removed form the field are removed form played to prevent over powering and cosmic monster being used for Cosmic Material

next you need at least 3 monsters of the same level in your the graveyard (and at least 1 a cosmo monster) the cosmic material are retun to your deck (so that can empty or near empty your "cosmic summon guage")

and combonation with the current cards (like lightsowrn and others) can be used but will still have their faults (plus deck like lightsowrn will only have cosmic monster of lv 4 or lower becuase of the low higher lv monsters and if it did had a higher lv cosmic monster it would very very impoarable to cosmic summon it anyways)

by the way ........

NEW CARDS ADDED

need help with spells and traps just pm me your ideas

[Leturn Master]

I have similar comments here as I had with the Necro cards. First, the name seems specialized. It made me think of Neo-Spacians right off the bat. What does cosmic power have to do with shuffling cards back into your deck?

Also, while the cards don't make for obscenely broken combos right now, more of them will certainly do so. "Cody Frost" mentioned the Lightsworn cards, and I think that's an good point. If you make 2-3 different Level 4 Cosmic and 4-5 decent Cosmo Monsters, a Lightsworn Deck could be absolutely devastating unless the Cosmic Monsters have annoying drawbacks. I'm also thinking of the ability to add a failsafe with Cosmics so that you can get should-be-banned cards like DAD and Gorz back to your deck after an opponent takes them out. I can see the balancing that you tried to do (3 card minimum and removing Cosmic Monsters from play after they die), but it's more of a band-aid on the problem than an actual fix.

The concept is cool, but there appear to be dangers in it (however, I'm not exactly a SUPER experienced player. I don't win state tourneys). The very base of the mechanic seems cool, but it's also what bothers me. I urge you to keep making these cards (please don't use that inverted card thing... It's makes stuff hard to read, and pixelly, and gross. We can just pretend that Ritual Monsters don't exist).

So, I recommend..:
[list]
[*]a name change from Cosmic and Cosmo
[*]the removal of Cosmo monsters
[*]not using the inverted color nonsense, and
[*]making more of these guys!
[/list]

[judedudemude]

[quote name='Leturn Master' timestamp='1302067453' post='5117870']
So, I recommend..:
[list]
[*]a name change from Cosmic and Cosmo
[*]the removal of Cosmo monsters
[*]not using the inverted color nonsense, and
[*]making more of these guys!
[/list]
[/quote]

1st ive allready did one name change becuase of you (YEEASSSHHH)

2nd why rfp cosmo ??? kinda ruin the whole concept and or thing

3rd if you have a better template let me know (ive all ready post this on this topic : [B]wanted a template for the new subtype and the only problem was getting the level and attribute right[/B] and [B]i want to use a different template for this so you if a have a good template i can use let me know by PM me ok[/B] plus i requested a template help for this

4th WILL DO !!! i plan to make more of these guys

[Leturn Master]

1. Hahaha, I had thought as much. Well, I'm a very demanding person. Don't feel the need to follow all my suggestions.
2. I don't mean RFP-ing Cosmo Monsters. I mean getting rid of them entirely. I don't think they should exist.
3. Nahh, I'd rather just see the Blue card color and the type "Cosmic" than look at those inverted-picture shenanigans.
4. Excellent! I'm actually going to try my hand at a related set of cards (they'll have a similar mechanic, but it'll be moderately different). I will credit you for the inspiration.

[judedudemude]

[quote name='Leturn Master' timestamp='1302070051' post='5117913']
1. Hahaha, I had thought as much. Well, I'm a very demanding person. Don't feel the need to follow all my suggestions.
2. I don't mean RFP-ing Cosmo Monsters. I mean getting rid of them entirely. I don't think they should exist.
3. Nahh, I'd rather just see the Blue card color and the type "Cosmic" than look at those inverted-picture shenanigans.
4. Excellent! I'm actually going to try my hand at a related set of cards (they'll have a similar mechanic, but it'll be moderately different). I will credit you for the inspiration.
[/quote]

1st i took what you said hard .... i did spent time about it and the manachianics and did test runs (using paper to repersent the cards) to test the old way and the new way the new way was way better

2nd why get rid of them completely i do not follow care to explain (i will most likely envoke "Don't feel the need to follow all my suggestions" on this)

3rd like i said before please read those part yet again (tsk tsk)

4th that great but if yours is going to be moderately different from mine it will not feel "cosmic summon" (im not sure how that make me feel)

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[Zextra]

It's a nice concept, but we don't need another subtype in the game - Synchros are enough as it is, and now they're adding Exceeds.
As for actual cards themselves, they aren't bad, and they're not broken either. However, with the proper cards, these can be abused. However, some of them are just pointless, such as the King Serpent thing, which is just a beatstick with piercing - we have enough useless piercing monsters as it is.

[judedudemude]

[quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1302073024' post='5117938']
It's a nice concept, but we don't need another subtype in the game - Synchros are enough as it is, and now they're adding Exceeds.
As for actual cards themselves, they aren't bad, and they're not broken either. However, with the proper cards, these can be abused. However, some of them are just pointless, such as the King Serpent thing, which is just a beatstick with piercing - we have enough useless piercing monsters as it is.
[/quote]

1st well sooner or later they will add a new subtype wiether you like or not (back in the day it was just normal effect fusion ritual toons) but they keep adding new subtypes genmi sychro dark sychro exceed and etc.

2nd for the "king serpent thing" as you put it i just come up with something that would wrok and was balanced (im not fimiliar to
water monsters because i simply do not use em)

3rd any thing else would you like to say ???

[Zextra]

I would, but I don't have the time right now - plus, I'm on an iPod, which makes typing harder.
I'll come check it out tomorrow when I get back on my computer.

[judedudemude]

[quote name='Zextra' timestamp='1302073356' post='5117945']
I would, but I don't have the time right now - plus, I'm on an iPod, which makes typing harder.
I'll come check it out tomorrow when I get back on my computer.
[/quote]

then why bother typing that if typing on the i pod is so hard (which i do not own a i pod so i wouldnt know about that)

kinda wanna say that was a spam but im not

[Zextra]

Well, I commented because:
a.) It would be rude to ignore you
b.) You asked me to comment here, so I did
c.) I'm leaving space on that post so I can come back to it
d.) It's not really harder, but rather much more annoying

While I'm here, I'll do a few more comments (mainly because a few more cards loaded this time)
• For Fugi Baka of the Beast Men Tribe - what face-down cards? Monsters? Spells or Traps? If pertaining to Spells and Traps, it is not considered "Tribute", so the correct way to phrase that would be: "You can Special Summon this card from your hand by sending 3 face-down cards you control to the Graveyard".
• There are some cards, such as Fugi Baka of the Dark Soul which are too situational, requiring another specific card to unlock its full potential - these types of cards, when used in game, often provide dead draws when it doesn't have the supporting card (in this case, Firey Spirit).

[judedudemude]

bump for comments

[Zextra]

The OCG I provided you with was universal - "sending 3 face-down cards to the Graveyard" works with ANY face-downs, whereas "Tribute" ONLY applies to monsters.

Also, I know that those two could be Normal Summoned. However, nobody will want to Normal Summon because (if you've ever played competitively in tournaments you would know) your opponent would rarely ever allow you to Normal Summon a monster that requires 2 Tributes. They would pin you down and rapidly crash through your monsters and defenses far before you could manage to get high level Tribute Summons in.

Also, I know that you put more than just those cards. However, once again, I'll say that I'm on an iPod, which doesn't load all the cards properly - I'm only commenting on those I can see. Therefore, I apologize for the fact that I am unable to post a full set review right now.

[judedudemude]

bump

[litenite]

u do know tht baka means idiot dont u dude? oh and most the pics are crap and the rules for summoning them are a bit to complex.
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[judedudemude]

bump for comments please

[judedudemude]

bump for comments

[judedudemude]

[quote name='litenite' timestamp='1302081921' post='5117999']
u do know tht baka means idiot dont u dude? oh and most the pics are crap and the rules for summoning them are a bit to complex.
[url=http://dragcave.net/view/P57g][img]http://dragcave.net/image/P57g.gif[/img][/url][url=http://dragcave.net/view/hceh][img]http://dragcave.net/image/hceh.gif[/img][/url][url=http://dragcave.net/view/cZHf][img]http://dragcave.net/image/cZHf.gif[/img][/url][url=http://dragcave.net/view/YDRE][img]http://dragcave.net/image/YDRE.gif[/img][/url][url=http://dragcave.net/view/jOo8][img]http://dragcave.net/image/jOo8.gif[/img][/url]
[/quote]

1st yes i know what baka means (it was the first japanese word that i learned)

2nd can not be help some times ............ (if you got better let me know LOL)

3rd you special summoning something form your extra deck with out giving soemthing up on your field so you gotta up at least 3 monsters in your graveyard (a way to keep it balanced i guess)

it was design to help keep balanced for this new summoning machanics ok ???

[Lunar Origins]

Working on your template. Will have it done in a little bit.

[judedudemude]

[quote name='Kindred' timestamp='1302157994' post='5120010']
Working on your template. Will have it done in a little bit.
[/quote]

allright thank you so munch

judedudemude writes note to remind judedudemude later (kindred recieves cedit on templates and a gaint thank you)