The Really Cool Guy Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 Gosh! My first post here! Either my initial rep goes sky high or rock bottom with this post. Here goes nothing! Here's my attempt at making the Summoned Lord Exodia we've all seen and hated. I've seen the lore of this card appear a couple of places on the net, and I thought I'd just brush it up. Before you do post comments, take this in hand first: [i][b]We know that having the 5 "Forbidden One"s makes you win.[/b][/i] This is simply the act of winning, as it was depicted in the anime, when Yugi defeats Seto Kaiba and his 3 Blue-Eyes. Watch it here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fp8Tyi6_21g (BTW, Kaiba's Life Points drop to 0 right after the attack). If you read my card's lore, you can see it's basically an instant win anyway. [b]So please don't post comments regarding this.[/b] Any other constructive comments will be much obliged! [img]http://img856.imageshack.us/img856/2632/316011.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b]: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card is automatically Special Summoned from your hand, Deck, Graveyard, or Removed from Play Zone when you have "Exodia the Forbidden One," "Left Arm of the Forbidden One," "Right Arm of the Forbidden One," "Left Leg of the Forbidden One," and "Right Leg of the Forbidden One" in your hand, at when they are then discarded to the Graveyard. This card's Summon cannot be negated. This face-up card is unaffected by Spell and Trap cards and Effect Monsters' effects. Once per turn, you can destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the original attack of this card (no card effects can be activated in response to this card's effect). So, Whaddya think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Nu-13 Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 Card is pointless, as Exodia is auto-win Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Really Cool Guy Posted March 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 [quote name='The Really Cool Guy' timestamp='1300311307' post='5077442'][i][b]We know that having the 5 "Forbidden One"s makes you win.[/b][/i][/quote] Let me rephrase: [i]I know the card is pointless. But if the completed Exodia was a card, this would be how it's effect causes an instant win.[/i] Anyway, forget the pointlessness of the card. What about the card itself? I'd like some constructive criticism as to how to improve the image or its lore, or anything else about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unbreakerable Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 i like, it is asome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 When you have all parts of Exodia in your hand, why bother summoning this card? YOU AUTOWIN WHEN YOU DO! Besides that, very creative effect and balanced, not bad for a new member. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted March 16, 2011 Report Share Posted March 16, 2011 [quote name='suko nara' timestamp='1300314567' post='5077554'] i like, but it is realy OPd [/quote] How is it OP'ed? It's Exodia, and Exodia is far from OP'ed. Anyways, it looks like a nice interpretation of Exodia - I like it (even though it is just a "show card") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nicholasflamel Posted March 17, 2011 Report Share Posted March 17, 2011 agree with most ppl here but how the hell did u get such a killer picture like that?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Really Cool Guy Posted April 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Thanks for the comments, guys. Much appreciated! [quote name='nicholasflamel' timestamp='1300323351' post='5077883'] ...but how the hell did u get such a killer picture like that?! [/quote] Ah, but such is the power of the Internet! This particular pic I picked off of DeviantArt. You'd be surprised with the quality of pics that come from there. Some of the artists there are actually magnificent. Also, I've made a slight edit. I've made the card I've made it a Fusion monster instead of an Effect Monster, so that, should it exist, it doesn't take up any Deck space (seeing as it's pretty much just a "for show" card). I've also changed the beginning lines for this card to adapt to this change; the effect is identical from "[i]This card's Summon cannot be negated.[/i]" onwards. Here's the new card and lore: [spoiler=Summoned Lord Exodia] [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/2632/316011.jpg[/img] [center] "Exodia the Forbidden One" + "Left Arm of the Forbidden One" + "Right Arm of the Forbidden One" + "Left Leg of the Forbidden One" + "Right Leg of the Forbidden One" This card is automatically Fusion Summoned from your Extra Deck only when you have the above Fusioin Material Monsters in your hand, at when they are then discarded to the Graveyard.[/center][/spoiler] I'm not sure if the last part uses propper OCG. I'm unsure whether to keep the part where it says "...[i]at when they are then discarded to the Graveyard[/i]", or get rid of it because it already says, "[i]This card is automatically [b]Fusion Summoned[/b][/i]..." Could I get some suggestions and/or some constructive criticism? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AgentBlaze117 Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unbreakerable Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 to zextra: i miss-read the post sorry. and, as you can see i fix'ed my comment. sorry for the mix up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Ventus- Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 Correction, I believe this is Super Special Awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AgentBlaze117 Posted April 10, 2011 Report Share Posted April 10, 2011 BBBBBBBBUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMMMPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BloodyWolfer Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 Good(what you wanna me to say? I'm just saying what i think about the card.(not great because i prefer new card ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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