Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 14, 2010 Report Share Posted December 14, 2010 A set I made when I was a level 2. Fixed OCG errors, added a couple of new cards, still working on support. All the pics came from Maxwindy from Deviantart, so kudos to you. [center][spoiler=Monsters] [spoiler=Angel of Blessing(new)] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/AngelofBlessing.png[/IMG] While in the Deck or, this monster's ATK is 0. During your Standby Phase, if this card is face-up on the field, you can reduce its ATK to 0 until the End Phase to return 1 of your removed from play non-Tuner monsters to the Graveyard. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Angel of Heart] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/AngelofHeart.png[/IMG] If this card is in your Graveyard, you can remove from play 1 monster with 500 or less ATK from your Graveyard to Special Summon this monster. This monster's level becomes that of the monster removed from play. If this effect is activated and this monster is used for a Synchro Summon, remove this monster from play. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Asya the Time Walker] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/AsyatheTimeWalker.png[/IMG] During your Main Phase, you can remove this card and 1 face-up monster your opponent controls from play. If you do, Special Summon both monsters to the fields of their respective owners in face-up Attack Position during your second End Phase after this card's activation. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Ayase the Mythologist] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/AyasetheMythologist.png[/IMG] This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If a monster you control is removed from play by it's own effect, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If you Special Summon this card this way, destroy 1 card on the field. If this card is used for a Synchro Summon, you must destroy 1 card on your side of the field. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Evangeline, Queen of Bloody Night(new)] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/EvangelineQueenofBloodyNight.png[/IMG] When this monster is Tribute Summoned, it gains ATK equal to the number of monsters on the field whose original ATK is 500 or less x600. As long as this card is face-up on the field, monsters with 500 or less ATK cannot be targetted by the effects of Spells, Traps or monsters. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Fuyutsuki Rei, Moon Blade] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/FuyutsukiReiMoonBlade.png[/IMG] This monster can attack your opponent directly. If it does, you can remove this card from play after damage calculation. If this card was removed from play by its own effect, Special Summon it to your side of the field during the End Phase of your next turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Kitsune, Soul of the Shadow Moon] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/KitsuneSouloftheShadowMoon.png[/IMG] This card cannot be Special Summoned. If this card is in your Graveyard, during your Main Phase, you can remove this card from play to use it as a Synchro Material mosnter for a Synchro Summon. The other Synchro Material monsters must be on the field and are sent to the Graveyard. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Martha, Lady of Crimson Light] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/MarthaLadyofCrimsonLight.png[/IMG] While this card is on the field, any battle damage your opponent inflicts to you is halved. When this monster is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove this card from play to add 1 monster with 500 or less attack points from your Deck to your hand. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Rena, the Silver Moon Fang] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/RenatheSilverMoonFang.png[/IMG] When this face-down Defense Position monster is attacked, you can remove this monster from play and discard 1 card to destroy the attacking monster. If this card is removed from play by its own effect, you can Special Summon it during your next End Phase. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Sakura the Luminous Wing(new)] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/SakuratheLuminousWing.png[/IMG] When this monster is Summoned, you can remove 1 monster in your hand from play to Special Summon 1 of your removed from play monsters whose original ATK is 500 or less. If this monster is used to Synchro Summon a Synchro monster whose original ATK is 500 or less, that monster is unaffected by Spells and Traps until your next turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Setsuna the Cardcaster] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/SetsunatheCardcaster.png[/IMG] This card cannot be used for the synchro summon of a monster with 1500 or more ATK. When this card is sent to the Graveyard for a synchro summon, you can remove this card from play and discard 1 card to add 1 Spell or Trap card from your Deck to your hand. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Sheena the Ice Mage] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/SheenatheIceMage.png[/IMG] When you Normal Summon this card, you can remove 1 card in your Graveyard from play to switch this card to Defense Position. Once per turn, you can remove 1 card in your hand from play to Special Summon 1 of your removed from play monsters with 500 or less ATK. [/spoiler] [spoiler=The Witch of Succubus(new)] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/TheWitchofSuccubus.png[/IMG] When this monster is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can activate one of the following effects. *Select one non-Tuner monster with 500 or less ATK in your Deck and Special Summon it to your side of the field. *Add 1 monster with 500 or less ATK from your Deck to your hand. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Boss Monsters] [spoiler=Elizabeth Fireheart] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/ElizabethFireheart.png[/IMG] "Setsuna the Cardcaster" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters This monster can only be Synchro Summoned using Synchro Material monsters that have 500 or less ATK. This monster gains ATK equal to the number of removed from play monsters x300. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove it from play to Special Summon 1 or your removed from play non-Tuner monsters with 500 or less attack. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Mythril Arcangel(new)] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/MythrilArcangel.png[/IMG] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters If the Synchro Material monsters used to Synchro Summon this card all had 500 or less ATK, this card's attack is doubled. During your Standby Phase, you can remove from play 1 monster in your hand to add 1 of your removed from play monsters with 500 or less ATK to your hand. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells and Traps] [spoiler=Bamboo Forest] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/BambooForest-1.png[/IMG] While you control a monster with 500 or less ATK, excluding tokens, once per turn you can Special Summon 1 Strike Token (Warrior-type/Earth/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). When a Strike Token is removed from the field, you can double the Attack of a monster whose original ATK is less than 500 until the End Phase. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Broken Time] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/BrokenTime.png[/IMG] Once per turn, when a monster is removed from play by its own effect, you can search your Deck for 1 other monster with the same name as the removed from play monster. Destroy this card during your second Standby Phase after activation. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Words of Destruction] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/WordsofDestruction.png[/IMG] Discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. Then add 1 monster with 500 or less ATK from your Deck to your hand. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Song of Songs(new)] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/SongofSongs.png[/IMG] Remove 1 face-up monster you control whose original ATK is 500 or less. Then destroy 1 face-up monster your oponent controls whose level is equal to or less than double the removed from play monster's. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Song of the City(new)] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/SongoftheCity.png[/IMG] Activate only when a face-up monster you control with 500 or less ATK is selected as an attack target. Remove from play all face-up attack position monters your opponent controls. Then remove a number of cards in your Graveyard from play equal to the number of monsters removed by this effect. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Song of the Earth] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/SongoftheEarth.png[/IMG] Activate only when a monster you control with 500 or less ATK is selected as an attack target. Remove from play 1 card in your Graveyard and destroy all face-up Attack Position monsters your opponent controls. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Song of the River] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/SongoftheRiver.png[/IMG] You can activate this card during the End Phase of either player's turn. Remove from play a number of cards from your opponents Graveyard equal to the number of monsters removed from play by their own effects this turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Song of the Sky] [IMG]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/SongoftheSky.png[/IMG] Activate only when a card effect would destroy 1 or more monsters with 500 or less ATK that you control. Negate and destroy that card and remove from play 1 monster in your Deck. [/spoiler] [/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 Don't know why Angel of Heart had 1300 Def... Well fixed and a bump please comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
â™ >:Stick-Man:<â™ Posted December 15, 2010 Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 So I hate when someone makes epic cards and they get no respect from people, as I too am a victim of that >.< Anyways hella great cards and i like how there low level but have very creative and balanced effects to support each other 10' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavens Guardian Posted December 15, 2010 Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 Good cards Nice Pics Nice eries 5 Stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2010 Yays comments! Thanks for the reviews, though I'm hoping somebody will be bored enough to do some review of the individual cards. Expecially Rena, since last time I posted this there were some issues with the lolsakuretsu effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 16, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2010 Bumpage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venom Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 I cant believe no one comments O.o, I always tried to make a Set of monsters with low to 0 ATK, but never really balanced them. Your cards are worthy of only 1 word from me: [b]A-M-A-Z-I-N-G![/b] Seriously, they support each other very very well, effects are very creative, and given proper time, you can beat the hell out of your opponent. Your "Fireheart" card made me remember my favourite Yu-Gi-Oh card trio: -Helios the Primordial Sun -Helios Duo Megistus -Helios Tris Megistus If i were to rate Rena, as you believe that card to be OP, its definitely not. Its extremely low ATK and DEF values balance her powerful effect, and you have to wait a whole new turn to get her back. So its nicely balanced =D. I wish I had the talent you have, im having trouble with my own Set too xD. Sheesh, my Dark Beauty monsters give me work, ya know? To sum it up, [b]I WANT TO SEE MORE![/b] LoL [b]Rating:[/b] Creativity - 10/10 Pics - 10/10 Balance - 10/10 OCG - 9/10 (check some cards, you got minor Capitalization and phrase wording issues, but nothing too serious) [b]Final Score - 39/40[/b] This gets you an additional Rep! Gratz! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Nice! Thanks for the comment and rating. I remember the problem with rena was because the other person though its effect activated face-up, but it has to be face-down. I still have more pics for this set, so I wanna try to give these guys some more strong support. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 These cards are well...AWESOME! I noticed a few OCG errors like not capitalizing Graveyard, but pretty good OCG. I love these cards. I give them a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Thanks to people pointing out that I had OCG errors, helped me find some like Angel of Heart not specifying where to remove monsters from play from to use its effect Added a searcher as well as a new boss monster, whose main purpose is to give this deck a little more power. Edit: Don't comment on Mythril Arcangel's OCG problems, I just now noticed them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 [font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif][color=#000000]I will do OCG errors that I see one card at a time here is my first. [img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/RFP/AsyatheTimeWalker.png[/img] During your Main Phase, you can remove this card and 1 face-up monster your opponent controls [b]from play[/b]. If you do, Special Summon both monsters to the field[b]s of their respective owners[/b] in face-up Attack Position during your second End Phase after this card's activation. [/color] [/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Guess I missed that one when redoing the set. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted December 17, 2010 Report Share Posted December 17, 2010 Welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2010 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2010 Moar Bumpage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2010 Buuuuuuuuuuuuump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2010 Bumping. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2010 Bump again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2010 My topics are always slow... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 Well, until somebody says something's wrong, I'll keep updating. Also, yes I know spoilers are messed up, I can't figure out why. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowDragon666 Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 Awsome cards though you could change the song of songs name it just kinda dont sound right to me maybe sumthin like Divine Song or something otherwise 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted December 23, 2010 Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 [quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1293081440' post='4875727'] Well, until somebody says something's wrong, I'll keep updating. Also, yes I know spoilers are messed up, I can't figure out why. [/quote] It seems that a lot of spoilers are messed up. I am thinking that YCM is updating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted December 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2010 [quote name='Dhole' timestamp='1293113171' post='4876471'] It seems that a lot of spoilers are messed up. I am thinking that YCM is updating. [/quote] Yeah I noticed, so I stopped trying to fix them for now. Mabey I'll try again later today when I'm not on my dad's slow work computer. [quote name='boomboom98' timestamp='1293086094' post='4875836'] Awsome cards though you could change the song of songs name it just kinda dont sound right to me maybe sumthin like Divine Song or something otherwise 9.5/10 [/quote] Unless its because there's already another card with the name I put on one oc my cards, I don't change names. No offense, but I use MSE, and if I change something I have to go through the trouble of re-uploading it to photobucket, and I don't think a name change is worth that work. Also, quick bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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