°•Dragon Ball•° Posted December 1, 2010 Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 [center]Here are three of my new cards Red Tip-The Raptor [img]http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8323/302202l.jpg[/img] Its Equip card [img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/4060/302202.jpg[/img] And Hot Shotted Pterodactyl [IMG]http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/9173/awsome.png[/IMG][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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War Chess Posted December 1, 2010 Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 I loved them, specially the third one Well, the OCG needs to be fixed and I think that Red Tip-The Raptor should be an EARTH. The atworks are awesome and the Dinaussaur idea of increasing ATK is present. 8.5/10 each!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
°•Dragon Ball•° Posted December 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 finally smne rated and thanx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted December 1, 2010 Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 [center][b]1st Card[/b] Well it name doesn't really seem to meet YGO standards, I think it would look way better if you did it like this: "Red-Tip the Raptor". The pic is interesting, but effective. OCG fix: [i]During your Battle Phase, increase this card's ATK by 500. In addition when this card battles a Dinosaur-Type monster, increase this cards ATK by 500. During each of your End Phases, decrease this card's ATK by 1000.[/i] Mhh, after fixing its effect I must say it's an pretty interesting effect, gaining and losing the enire time, combined with DNA Surgery it can be lethal. While being ballanced. Good work. After the fixes a 8/10 [b]2nd Card[/b] Well I find it's name a bit undue. "Teeth of the Raptor" would cover the load way better. OCG fix: [i]Equip only to a Dinosaur-Type monster. Increase its ATK by 200. When the equipped monster destroys a monster by battle, increase your Life points by half the original ATK of the destroyed monster.[/i] Yeah, only a few errors, but no posted Lore means total redo. Though it can be effective, I don't see it being used. Change the boost to 500 and it could be a winner. After the fixes a 7.2/10 [b]3rd Card[/b] Like its name, like its pic. I just don't really like the edits. But ok, you tried something different. OCG fix: [i]When this card is send from the field to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Dinosaur-Type monster with and DEF of 1800 or less from your [b]*...[/b]in face-up Attack Position.[/i] *= From where? The Deck, Graveyard, hand, RFP? Well though being great support, I must say it's Horribly broken. Combined with cards like "Lightning Conducter Tyranno" and "Dark Driceratops" or other low DEF high ATK Dinos. But if it only Summon from hand then I gues it can be Ballanced. If not change the "DEF" part to "ATK". Besides the OPness and the errors, a 8.8/10 would do. Overall, some nice Dinos with basic, but effective effects. [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
°•Dragon Ball•° Posted December 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 Thank You lexadin for rating so deeply and throughly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted December 1, 2010 Report Share Posted December 1, 2010 Np, it's the least I can do for a new member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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