jenofresh Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 [Spoiler=Monsters][img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/5284/282415.jpg[/img][spoiler=Osmosis Twins]If you have no monster's on your side of the field while your opponent has monsters in their side of the field, discard 1 card in your hand to Special Summon this monster from your hand. This monster also counts as a non-Tuner monster. If this card is used for a Synchro Summon with no other Synchro Materials, Remove it and all other 'Osmosis Twins' in your Deck from Play.[/spoiler] [img]http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/5284/282415.jpg[/img] [img]http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/5284/282415.jpg[/img] [img]http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/2207/282415d.jpg[/img][spoiler=Osmosis Girl]Flip: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or Lower 'Osmosis' Monster from your Deck with 1000 or less ATK. This Monster is also treated as a Tuner monster. This card can't be destroyed as a result of battle. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you may flip this card Face Down. If this card is flipped Face Down, remove 1 card in your Graveyard from play or remove this card from play.[/spoiler] [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/5284/282415.jpg[/img][spoiler=Osmosis Spirit]This Monster is also treated as a Tuner monster and a Union Monster. Once per turn, you can equip this Face-Up card to a Face-Up 'Osmosis' Monster on your side of the field. Reduce the ATK and DEF of a monster equipped with this card to 0. All battle damage involving a monster equipped with this card is reduced to 0. When a monster equipped with this card would be destroyed as a result of battle, you can remove this card, the monster it's equipped to, as well as monster's on your side of the field whose Level equals the total needed for a Synchro Summon and Special Summon a Synchro Monster from your Extra Deck(This is treated as a Synchro Summon)[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells and Traps][img]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/5284/282415.jpg[/img] [img]http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/5284/282415.jpg[/img][spoiler=Osmosis Flame][img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/5284/282415.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [img]http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/5284/282415.jpg[/img] [img]http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/2171/282415v.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=Synchros][img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/9606/282415q.jpg[/img][spoiler=Osmosis Moon Queen]"1 Tuner Monster" + "1 or more non-Tuner Monsters" If this card is Synchro Summoned by 'Osmosis Twins' effect, Synchro Summon another 'Osmosis Moon Queen' to your side of the field. Twice per turn, if this card would be the target of an attack, you can remove it from play and Special Summon a monster from your Removed from Play Zone in this card's place. When that monster is destroyed, reduce all Battle Damage with it to 0 and Special Summon this monster to your side of the field. If this card is in your Removed from play Zone during the End Phase, draw 1 card during your End Phase.[/spoiler] [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/2720/282415sn.jpg[/img][spoiler=Osmosis Magician]"1 'Osmosis' Tuner" + "1 Level 3 Osmosis non-Tuner monster" + "1 of more non-Tuner monsters" This card can only be summoned by Synchro Summon. All monsters used to Synchro Summon this monster are removed from play. During your Main Phase, you may add one card from your Removed from Play Zone to your Graveyard in order to Special Summon up to 3 Osmosis Tokens(Water/Aqua/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) In Defense Position. Once per turn, you can discard 2 cards from your Deck to Move an Osmosis Token to your opponent's side of the field.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewis atherton Posted November 2, 2010 Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Ok let me be honest you ave focused your cards on getting out a synchro monsters, this is quite interesting and not very common so well done fo that. Your cards seem fair and balnced - ish. The main problem I have is their are no basic or effect monster that arn't tuners so you couldn't make a deck around it which I really dont like sorry. for the overall set 7/10. keep trying and I also feel osmosis magician is overpowered and you should lose one of the effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jenofresh Posted November 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2010 Their not meant to be made for their own Deck, I made these cards in order to be Support for Different Dimension and Helios Decks But yeah, the Magician is a bit powerful. As for the Effect situation, They are made for Synchro Swarming. Added 2 more monsters as well. I think it's set now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Archwing Posted November 4, 2010 Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 Well.... Do you even know what osmosis is? '~' Only one of the cards is WATER... Names: It seems like you kinda tacked on "Osmosis" to a bunch of stuff.... 6/10 Pics: Meh, Not bad but you could do better... Huntress is kinda blurry (Not bad) Lovers pic is downright creepy to me... Osmosis flames pic is probably the best despite the fact that osmosis flame makes no sense... 7/10 OCG/Grammer:Some nitpicks that i dont care about so whatever.... Its readable thats what counts Effects: Some of them need lore down or ill have to squint to read them, which just downright annoys me, The ones i can read seem... Decent Balance: you messed up the balance quite a bit. the monster with 0 ATK and 0 DEF is 4 stars while the one with 1500 ATK and 1300 DEF is only 3? Also avoid going over 3500 with ATK or DEF on anything..... The little extras: Everything is there... Really my main problem with this is it has nothing to do with Osmosis.... Osmosis is the diffusion of water (Specificly water only) across a cell membrane. Thes have nothing to do with cells and almost nothing to do with water. So the Spellcaster/ Fire stuff is confusing me.... Mabey im not getting something... Overall [color="#FFA500"][size="4"]C[/size][/color] This is pretty average work. They could easily be better... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jenofresh Posted November 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 Their called Osmosis because of how easy it is for them to Swarm and Synchro Swarm. IE< Moon Queen's effect w/the Lovers creates a double Synchro. And the Balance is effect balancing though some stats are off. The Spirit is 4 stars because of it's powerful Effect. And yeah, OP'd magician's Defense a bit lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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