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Engetsu vs. newfie shark [Finished]


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● All YCM Rules apply.

● Anyone can join. Though I prefer going against a 3 star member or higher.

● Opponent chooses the requirements. I can freely deny the requirements if I don't like it.

● First to 3 votes wins.

● Winner gets 1+ Rep.

● If no one reaches 3 votes by October 30th , then whoever has the most votes win. If it's a tie, then the next vote will decide the winner.

● Votes must have a valid reason. No votes based only on the name and/or pic.

● Card must be original, meaning no cards you have previously made.

 

Requirements: Make an Equip Spell Card with a pic of a vehicle (basically Anything Goes with this one).

 

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You can only equip this card to a face-up level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster you control. The equipped monster cannot attack and it's effect is negated. If the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard instead. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can select and activate one of the following effects. ● Return 1 face-up monster your opponent controls to the owners hand. ● Select 1 face-down card in your opponent's Spell & Trap Card Zone. Remove it from play until the End Phase of this turn. ● Destroy the monster equipped with this card and 1 card your opponent controls.

 

Image Credit goes to Jazin Kay

 

 

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You can only activate this card by Tributing a Machine-Type monster you control. When this card is activated, you can send a face-up Equip Spell card your opponent controls to the Graveyard. Equip only to a Warrior or Machine-Type monster. Increase the equipped monster's ATK and DEF points by 400. This card cannot be destroyed by Monster effects. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, discard 2 cards.

 

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LORE!

 

Equip this card to Future Rider to boost ATK and DEF points by 100 points.

This card is only playable when you tribute

1 Machine type monster from your side of the field to the graveyard.

Discard 2 cards from your hand to the graveyard when this card is destroyed.

This card cannot be destroyed by a monsters Effect.

Send 1 Equip card from your opponents side of the Field to the Graveyard

when this card activated.

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To be fair, I think you might want to fix up your OCG before I post this up. You don't need to space every sentence of the card's effect. Also you made your card unplayable because it can only be equipped to a card that doesn't exist, so I would remove that part if I were you.

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To be fair, I think you might want to fix up your OCG before I post this up. You don't need to space every sentence of the card's effect. Also you made your card unplayable because it can only be equipped to a card that doesn't exist, so I would remove that part if I were you.

oh yea. sure thing ill fix it!

 

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lore:

 

Equip this card to any Warrior or Machine type monster on the field to boost ATK and DEF points by 400 points.This card is only playable when you tribute 1 Machine type monster from your side of the field to the graveyard.Discard 2 cards from your hand to the graveyard when this card is destroyed.This card cannot be destroyed by a monsters Effect.Send 1 Equip card from your opponents side of the Field to the Graveyard when this card activated.

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Alright.

Anyways, some of your OCG, such as the word "playable" or "boost", is not used in any form of OCG.

Also, you have some capitalization errors:

graveyard=Graveyard

Machine type = Machine-Type

tribute = Tribute

 

Anyways, something along the lines of this would be better:

 

You can only activate this card by Tributing a Machine-Type monster you control. When this card is activated, you can send a face-up Equip Spell card your opponent controls to the Graveyard. Equip only to a Warrior or Machine-Type monster. Increase the equipped monster's ATK and DEF points by 400. This card cannot be destroyed by Monster effects. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, discard 2 cards.

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Check my previous post.

This is what I explained:

 

Alright.

Anyways, some of your OCG, such as the word "playable" or "boost", is not used in any form of OCG.

Also, you have some capitalization errors:

graveyard=Graveyard

Machine type = Machine-Type

tribute = Tribute

 

Anyways, something along the lines of this would be better:

 

You can only activate this card by Tributing a Machine-Type monster you control. When this card is activated, you can send a face-up Equip Spell card your opponent controls to the Graveyard. Equip only to a Warrior or Machine-Type monster. Increase the equipped monster's ATK and DEF points by 400. This card cannot be destroyed by Monster effects. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, discard 2 cards.

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I would take Zextra's advice and change your card's OCG to what he suggested newfie, but that's up to you.

 

In any case, you have until tomorrow to make your decision. Until then, I won't post your card up.

 

EDIT: My card is up. It's most likely Op'ed though.

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