Master White Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 [center] [spoiler=Story not real or exact, just a fan fic short story.] This explains how Apec Kitsa was formed and transformed into Earthbound Immortal Apec Kitsa. A long time ago, even before Yugi, There was a person named Apec. Apec was a gentle local farmer at the time, at the age of 10. When Yugi discovered the Yugioh cards, Apec had discovered them before Yugi. But the difference is that he discovered the power these held, and so he waited. After years of waiting, he traveled all around the world and found Yusei Fudo and they talked. After explaining to Yusei he was the third line in main characters, Yusei was mad. Starting throwing stuff all around the room and then settled down. Well, to sum it up, they meet again. Apec entered into the World Riding Gran Prix as a last minute entry. He won all the duels up to the World Riding Gran Prix and then Apec showed up. But then, the time changed and he ended up somewhere else and couldn’t fight Yusei until later because he was affected by it. Well, before the World Riding Gran Prix, Apec had helped a little fox stuck in a hole, and it was bound to Apec. Apec named the fox Kitsa, and it became his pet. He didn’t realize it at first, but when he tried to feed it, he couldn’t. It was a spiritual fox bound to Earth by will. Well, Apec didn’t like the fact it was a spirit, so he went to a spiritual resurrection site at night, and did some chants. Before Apec knew it, Kitsa came to life, but rings bound to it to make it go between the worlds at free will. But the cost was that it couldn’t leave Earth. Well, Apec ran into an Evil Sprit. The Evil Spirit was attacking his village and then it challenged Apec to a duel. Apec scratched his head and then brought out his duel disk. Apec had won, but the evil spirit was so strong, it sucked up Apec and Kitsa became an Earthbound Immortal monster. Then after this, came forth Vellen Apec, the possessed version of Apec. Vellen Apec had decided that he had to get rid of Yusei Fudo... [/spoiler] So I got to thinking, you all liked the EBI monster I created and I liked it to, so I now gave it a story that which is or will not be true in any way, just for fun. It helps explain the names, and the card I am giving you now. Well, now behold, Before Earthbound monster, Apec Kitsa [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/2351/121293o.jpg[/img] [b] Lore [/b] [i] 2 Tuners + 1 or more non-Tuner LIGHT monsters. Once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster card on the field. [/i] Hope you all like it. [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted October 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Ok...2 Tuners, you didn't space the effect from the requirements, and effect is bland. Amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Embittered Moon Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 not op'd, the way i see it. ocg: press the enter button after you type the synchro material monsters. otherwise, 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted October 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 I know, I missed the enter key.. Thank you all. To me IMO, I think that it might be under powered. not sure, but to get it out would be hard, oh well, .et you all say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 Huh, looks alright. I would give it a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaime Duferier Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 [quote name='Shiny Azelf Fan 333' timestamp='1286818439' post='4696591'] 7/10 [/quote] This is spam. I'm just telling you that right now before you get warned. Also, even with looking at your rating system it doesn't tell how to improve the score. As for the card, it is a little too simple. Also, it is OP'd. I would lower either the ATK or DEF though, this effect is on par with Stardust's and it is too strong for that level. Even with 2 tuners. Also, this is gonna be a pain to summon, just too low a level. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted October 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 [quote name='FTW (For The Wynn)' timestamp='1286818786' post='4696610'] This is spam. I'm just telling you that right now before you get warned. Also, even with looking at your rating system it doesn't tell how to improve the score. As for the card, it is a little too simple. Also, it is OP'd. I would lower either the ATK or DEF though, this effect is on par with Stardust's and it is too strong for that level. Even with 2 tuners. Also, this is gonna be a pain to summon, just too low a level. [/quote] [b]Also, this is gonna be a pain to summon, just too low a level.[/b] Hence the reason for 2 tuners, so then it would be classified under powered b/c of how hard it is to summon it. Sure, i could go with te flow and make it a level 8 monster with 1 tuner and add another effect, but whats the fun in that, it is virtually the same if you look at it, so think, this card is underpowered b/c like you said, it would be a pain to summon but provides a good effect. It is simple because it has a stronger form that has already posted. but thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buttercup Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 Fabled just came. Take off the broken lolisimplifyandplus effect. Add a balanced effect/ make it trigger on the Synchro Summon. 3/10 BROKENZ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted October 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 [quote name='Ser Warjacksworth' timestamp='1286828356' post='4697089'] Fabled just came. Take off the broken lolisimplifyandplus effect. Add a balanced effect/ make it trigger on the Synchro Summon. 3/10 BROKENZ [/quote] Please speak YCM english, thank you. I have no idea what you are saying. ------------------------- This is not op'd, because this is negated by everything, and most importantly, it is a six star with 2 Tuners, that is 3-5 cards to get this card out. What op'd is is a 12 star monster with godly effects that are now playable by taking 3 monsters to get it summoned, that is what I call op. If the next person say's op'd without a page of explaing why and how this card is op'd why the gods are not op'd and playable, I will report them as spam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 [quote name='General White' timestamp='1286828713' post='4697111'] Please speak YCM english, thank you. I have no idea what you are saying. ------------------------- This is not op'd, because this is negated by everything, and most importantly, it is a six star with 2 Tuners, that is 3-5 cards to get this card out. What op'd is is a 12 star monster with godly effects that are now playable by taking 3 monsters to get it summoned, that is what I call op. If the next person say's op'd without a page of explaing why and how this card is op'd why the gods are not op'd and playable, I will report them as spam [/quote] 6 Star with 2500 ATK, destroy a monster each turn. Yeah, OP'd. Report this, and you're a moron. It's OP'd, try again. Don't throw a fit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted October 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 [quote name='Smesh' timestamp='1286829056' post='4697128'] 6 Star with 2500 ATK, destroy a monster each turn. Yeah, OP'd. Report this, and you're a moron. It's OP'd, try again. Don't throw a fit. [/quote] Ok, then explain to me and prove to me this is op'd in way's I do not see, how is keeping it level 6 with the requirements of 2 tuner monster + 1 or more [size="7"][b]LIGHT[/b][/size] monsters making it op'd? To me, i say it wouldn't be worth Summoning, b/c the minute I did, someone would play trap hole, and its bye bye. Now, explain or I will have no choice but to call it spam. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 [quote name='General White' timestamp='1286829482' post='4697141'] Ok, then explain to me and prove to me this is op'd in way's I do not see, how is keeping it level 6 with the requirements of 2 tuner monster + 1 or more [size="7"][b]LIGHT[/b][/size] monsters making it op'd? [b]Oh my, what a drawback.[/b] To me, i say it wouldn't be worth Summoning, b/c the minute I did, someone would play trap hole, and its bye bye. [b]Kills a monster each turn. Who would want that? And of course there are always scenarios.[/b] Now, explain or I will have no choice but to call it spam. [b]It's in no way spam if I don't explain it or not.[/b] [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted October 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 Okay, fair enough. But still, can you explain to me why this card is over powered as much as, i don't know, but lets say The playable egyptian god cards? I dedicate all my work, and so if it isn't as op'd as them, they are balanced. If they are more op'd then them, which this clearly states that you all our complainig it is, then the egyptian god cards are like babies to you all, and I can defeat each of them in 1 turn, so can you say that this card is op'd is like saing the gods are weak, which to konami, they arr the most powerful cards in the game. So in other words, if i made it 3 tuners, would that make you all feel better? P.S Apparently you all in RC do not understand the meaning of over powered... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Jay~ Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 *Sigh* Advantages Destroy 1 monster +1 Disadvantages Difficult to Summon -1 The card doesn't even seem worth it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 [quote name='General White' timestamp='1286830073' post='4697160'] Apparently you all in RC do not understand the meaning of over powered... [/quote] Are you kidding me? Take some advice, damn it. It's not the end of the world. Think whatever the hell you want. Your card is perfect. Jay's right. I was too arrogant myself to be wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master White Posted October 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 Well, this is the last time I post in RC, people getting upset for me stating the question why it is op'd and no one even saying why, gee, I want the facts, straight foward truth, but no, everyone has to go around saying op'd, 6/10, or wayy to op'd, give a new effect, but I have to wonder why I try to change minds, its never worked and people get angry, then all fails. So hence forth, I'm not posting in RC except to fill my duty with LCM when that comes back to play. Just was trying to get people to understand the fact that op'd has lost its meaning and people use it too freely now as a "get out of jail free card". Well, peace out, this card is locked and if I don't get views on the other already posted card before all this happned, I will request a mod lock it to. P.S @Smesh: I wasn't trying to say my card was perfect, if it was, why in thw world would I want to post it here? *Gee.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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