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[Master White]

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Well, here is an Earthbound Immortal Card I made, and I made it so it look a little different on three different purposes. First, a sillhouette fox with blue lines would look stupid and ugly, and thirdly, I liked the pinkish purple look to it better, so I hope you like the picture, I know I do.

But the picture is made by me and took me forever. Gold Rare Border Holo is what I did.

I made all of this with Gimp.

[img]http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/9319/ebi1.jpg[/img]

[b]Lore[/b]

[i] There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. [b]Once per 3 of your turns, [/b] you can destroy all cards your opponent controls. [/i]

I hope you all Enjoy.

bolded is the effect change

Thanks Tomtekorv for the effect fix.
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[Cloister]

I don't understand the effect... If your opponent controls 5 cards, you can destroy 5 cards?

And it's "number", not "amount".

[Ovedrive]

The Pic: EIs are usually black with some lines on them. But it's good pic.
The Effect: Just a EI's standard effect and +1 added. Maybe more creative effect would be better...
Good card edit...

[TheMan]

Well, nice card, nice pic, and nice destructive effect. And you made this pic all by yourself, that's just wow, rep goes for that. . I don't use EI's that often, so I really don't know all the effects, but this effect is pretty nice, not OPd, cuz it's an EI monster, so pretty good. 10/10

[Squirrel Girl]

Card is OPed. If your opponent controls 4 or 5 monsters, you can destroy them

6/10 cause the pic is ok

[Master White]

Thank you eveyone. I know its not blue and black, but I figured it would still be good.
The effect, well, I thought it was op'd, but isn't EBi's supposed to be op'd b/c of the ridicolous effect of being destroyed very easily and plus you need 2 monsters to bring it out.

@The Man: Thanks.

@Tomtekorv: I was always told amount, but I'll change that. Basically meaning, if your opponent has 10 cards, you can destroy all of them, which is too overpowered, so I need to change that. I wonder though how I would make it read the right way, "Once every 3 turns, you can" was my original idea.

[Lexadin]

Mhh, I'm sorry to say but this is 1 of the worst EBI's I've ever seen from a 3* and up memb.
It's pic doesn't really look like an EBI (Black with lines over it).
And it's effect is made so that you can always destroy all cards your opponent controls.

A 4/10, sorry.

[Cloister]

Amount is not the same as number...

You can't say "many Life Points".

And yes, detroying all cards is to powerful, even for an EI. Give it a cost or reduce the number of cards destroyed. Best would be to add "Once per 3 of your turns ...".

[Master White]

Is that how you would actually say it right?

I'll edit after my exam in a class of mine, so about an half hour from now.

[Ieyasu Tokugawa]

Mabey you could destroy cards until your opponent controls the same amount of cards you do? Hopefully that gives you some kind of idea.

Since you already know that the effect needs work, I'm not actually gonna give a specific rating on it yet, but I do like the pic, and yeah, a blue and black fox wouldn't look that good.

[Doom_Shaman]

cool pic.

pointing out minor flaws = redundent

so im waiting on the fixes excitedly

[Gleek]

I like the image. I agree with everyone else, about the effect.

Most other things are fine.

So I give you 7/10

[Master White]

I guess I could make a bluish bottom so it is half decent, maybe, But I still like the fox being its color, b/c it of how it is. Now working on it.

no, just fixing the effect, bluish bottom does not suit it.

[Zesking]

(Negative Resolved)


Like it otherwise

8/10

[Master White]

That is way off, worse than mine, but I have a change, don't worry, I just need to upload it.

Edited

[Cloister]

"Once per 3 of your turns, you can destroy all cards your opponent controls." is correct. Sorry... :c

Nuke the field when Summoned, and inflict 3000 LP. Me like it.

[Master White]

Thanks