the gods set

[satins-son]

romoved my other 6 copyed card

[John A. Zoidberg]

It's just the same card 6 times
And that 1 card is extremely Overpowered, has terrible OCG (Official Card Grammar), has a double type, and has a fake type, too.
And the effect makes NO sense

[satins-son]

i`m sorry about that will post the proper set right now k

the other three coming after this post
[attachment=28989:devils sword.jpg]
[attachment=28990:godly figure.jpg]
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[Duplicitous]

Sorry bu't this is [b]FAIL[/b] 1.5/10 because these are your first cards

[satins-son]

the last three i hope this worked
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[Yoshi Member]

Ummmm.......Well......Uhh.....
I think -Athena- is rating....
Cards are overpowered.
Devil's sword effect: What does that mean?
Ill give you a 2/10 Keep going.This means,that you need to practise a bit.

[-Athena-]

Dude....if these are your cards....you should stop.
Wrong section too. If these are realistic cards, at least make them realistic.
No fake types. So delete the 'God' thing. Just out warrior or something like that.
These are so OP'd, I can't even explain them...................
You got some bad picture and name.
Your effect is bland and some doesn't make sense....
Not to sound messed up here but you obviously don't know what synchro and fusion monsters are. Go google it.
You have the worst OCG I've seen yet.....do you know how to spell Yu-Gi-Oh?

Overall, [b]1/10[/b]. I'm speechless....

Your card have officially been rated by -Athena-

[satins-son]

sorry i cant seem to add gods axe

remember these are my first cards

[The Random Bystander]

...What? These just don't make sense. Iknow that we aren't supposed to comment just about OCG, but your extreme lack of OCG makes these extremely hard to understand.

[Y.M.R.creator]

The pictures aran't that bad, but the effects are weird,make no sense e.c.

2/10

[Mr Dr Professor Spaz]

I'll give you a .2 point bonus because you're new...
0.2/10

[CDude]

OCG is terible

1/10

[MortalKombatSmoke]

okay, have you ever played Yu-Gi-Oh! ? Cause by the look of these cards, it's like you never have seen the show, read the manga, or even seen a real card for that matter. The cards make no sense. The effects make no sense. your OCG isn't even on a 1-10 scale. it's 0, your OCG is a level 0. Technically they aren't even Yu-Gi-Oh! cards!

0/10

[Lord Ursus]

Stop flaming this member right this instant!

A new member with a misfortunate lack of OCG skills need to be taught, NOT flamed for it.

If you haven't got a more educational comment than "OCG is terible. 1/10", then don't write at all and let the more mature members rate properly.

Seriously...

Over to your cards, satins-son, I believe YCM prefers discretion towards religious themes. At least most of the time here at Realistic Cards. I am pretty sure you weren't aware of that.

Start by study other member's cards, and examine how they word their effects. You can get useful tips from studying real cards as well.

I'll have to give this a B for now, but I will be awaiting your improvement.

B.

[RAGNOROK6]

0.7348857834967347893 465g385jjiq1/10
Yes there are emoticons and letters in this rating. Horrible cards

[**_Xan_-_-_]

those cards are the most weridest cards i have ever seen maybe if u "Under Power" most of them read some cards in this website or actualy google Yu Gi Oh cards u can get a better understanding of Fusion Synchro and actualy making ppl understand ur cards

[tk4l]

What did I just look at. My eyes are bleeding a little.

-1/10.

[NerdyAndyB]

I'm sorry, but WHAT?
3/10
(I'm not mean enough to give anyone a worse rating)
OP much?
Worst - OCG - EVER
And the effects make absolutely no sense whatsoever.


OK, trolling over, I'm ready for the helping now!


Read the effects of other member's cards, and some real cards.
"add this to satins-supremacy to make it satins-father" - Say "Equip only to Satins-Supremacy. Send the equipped monster to the Graveyard and Special Summon "Satins-Father" from your Hand, Deck or Graveyard.
"Can kill anything" ... I honestly can't think of how to put this into OCG.
As for everything else... It's so OPed it doesn't make sense. Sorry.
You should look at other people's cards and real cards before you post your own. Find some monsters with similar effects to the ones you want and use the same language.

[u][b]Don't give up because your first attempt didn't work out[/b][/u]

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

You all realize by now that this thing was Necrobumped right? I mean look at the date on Y.M.R.creator's post then look at the date on L1z@rD's post. It was probably dredged up when the forum went all crazy and L1z@rD didn't realize that it was in fact a dead topic.

[Sweetie Belle]

[quote name='FTW (For The Wynn)' timestamp='1285363212' post='4651394']
You all realize by now that this thing was Necrobumped right? I mean look at the date on Y.M.R.creator's post then look at the date on L1z@rD's post. It was probably dredged up when the forum went all crazy and L1z@rD didn't realize that it was in fact a dead topic.
[/quote]

I thought a topic was "dead" after having no post for a month. It was August 31 to September 18. That's 18~19 days. It's wasn't dead, as I know.

[FTW (For The Wynn)]

[quote name='SleepingKirby' timestamp='1285363615' post='4651422']
I thought a topic was "dead" after having no post for a month. It was August 31 to September 18. That's 18~19 days. It's wasn't dead, as I know.
[/quote]

That probably is true, in fact I'm 99% sure you are right, but satins-son never bumped it up or anything, it just sort of sprang to life. Besides, everything that needed to be said was said, that being that these cards need work. I don't even think satins-son has been on since posting this, so he probably doesn't care about this at the moment.