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[center][img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/5415/267156.jpg[/img]

When this card is summoned, select 1 Monster Card Zone on the Field. That zone cannot be used for the next 2 turns. If this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a LIGHT Monster, increase its ATK by 500. If it is used for the Synchro Summon of a DARK Monster, remove the monster from play during the End Phase.[/center]
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Seems a bit underpowered. If say used for a synchro summon of a light monster destroy 1 card on the field woudv'e been better since it'd be more easily splashable in many fairy decks that could use a fairy tuner.

And the second effect could be "if used for a synchro of a non light monster destroy it during the end phase"
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[quote name='ramze06' timestamp='1283005753' post='4574580']
Seems a bit underpowered. If say used for a synchro summon of a light monster destroy 1 card on the field woudv'e been better since it'd be more easily splashable in many fairy decks that could use a fairy tuner.And the second effect could be "if used for a synchro of a non light monster destroy it during the end phase"
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Eh, I just wanted it to be able to slightly help LIGHT Synchros, and be unusable with DARK ones. It's a pretty basic card. I don't think it's UP, due to the first effect, but I guess it could have been a tiny bit stronger, but I'm happy.

[quote name='Assasin (Hero)' timestamp='1283005975' post='4574591']
Underpowered?I'll say that is pretty balanced card.Picture is awesome.And it's your first...So 10/10 keep up the good work :D
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Thanks. ^^

[quote name='Lieutenant Renji' timestamp='1283006133' post='4574598']
[font="Palatino Linotype"][b]This card is awesome for a new member. Pretty good OCG, balanced. 9.6/10Nice job.[/b][/font]
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Thank you. I'm glad it turned out balanced.

I'm glad it's getting good reviews so far. ^^

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[quote name='XSilent.ShadowsX' timestamp='1283009625' post='4574756']
Im suprised. your OCG is perfect. its balanced. the pics great. Amazingg for a n00b.

9.5/10
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Excuse me, I'm not a N00b, I'm a Newb. There's a difference. D:

Anyway, thank you for the post. ^^
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It's not a bad card if you would be able to keep it on the field until you can summon a Light Synchro with it, but I'm not sure if many people would really miss one Monster Card Zone so I doubt the effectiveness of the first effect. Then again, if you yourself would benefit from having less Monster Card Zones, this is a good card.

I am worried about the effect when all Monster Card Zones are occupied, since you did not specify that.

Other than that, I speak of excellence when I cast judgement over this card made by you.

Rating: 9/10
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[quote name='KazukiShizuoka2' timestamp='1283011003' post='4574843']
It's not a bad card if you would be able to keep it on the field until you can summon a Light Synchro with it, but I'm not sure if many people would really miss one Monster Card Zone so I doubt the effectiveness of the first effect. Then again, if you yourself would benefit from having less Monster Card Zones, this is a good card.

I am worried about the effect when all Monster Card Zones are occupied, since you did not specify that.

Other than that, I speak of excellence when I cast judgement over this card made by you.

Rating: 9/10
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It's generally a card where you want to be able Synchro Summon using it as soon as you summon it. That one Zone could mean a lot against things like Blackwings that swarm with like tomorrow.

If there isn't a Zone, the effect can't be activated. That's usually how it works when the condition can't be met I believe.

Thank you. :[i][/i]D
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[quote]If there isn't a Zone, the effect can't be activated. That's usually how it works when the condition can't be met I believe.
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I hate to be so technical on this, but Monster Card Zones don't just disappear when a Monster is placed upon it. Both players have 5 Monster Card Zones from beginning 'til end, and you'd have to make one hell of a card to change that.

I carefully suggest added the defining word "unused" or "not-used" when the player is able to select a Monster Card Zone.
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[quote name='KazukiShizuoka2' timestamp='1283011494' post='4574863']
I hate to be so technical on this, but Monster Card Zones don't just disappear when a Monster is placed upon it. Both players have 5 Monster Card Zones from beginning 'til end, and you'd have to make one hell of a card to change that.

I carefully suggest added the defining word "unused" or "not-used" when the player is able to select a Monster Card Zone.
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Good point indeed. I'll have a revised version up in just a second. ;D
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[color="#1C2837"][font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][left][font="Arial"]Kazuki is right. It should be[/font][/left][left] [/left][left] [/left][left] [/left][left] [/left][left] [/left][center][left][font="Arial"]When this card is Summoned, select 1 Monster Card Zone on the field (you cannot select a zone occupied by a Monster Card). The selected zone cannot be used for the next 2 turns. If this card is used for the Synchro Summon of a LIGHT Monster, increase its ATK by 500. If it is used for the Synchro Summon of a DARK Monster, remove the monster from play during the End Phase.[/font][/center][/left][center][left] [/center][/left][left] [/left][center][left][font="Arial"]^OCG Fix + Effect Fix^[/font][/center][/left][/font][/color]

Ehh, nothing special. It's a pretty basic card. I could see it being used/side decked in a Fairy Deck, but other then that it's just a standard Tuner with an effect thrown in.

I refuse to rate with numbers like most morons on YCM, so I'll just say it's Decent.

[quote name='XSilent.ShadowsX' timestamp='1283009625' post='4574756']
Im suprised. your OCG is perfect.
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Not really.
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[quote]@Kazuki: No, she's right =/ Ground Collapse cannot be actrivated when there are not 2 spaces to bar from use.
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I think you just proved ME right. If you'd read the text on Ground Collapse, it says:

"Select 2 Monster Card Zones on the field (you cannot select a Monster Card Zone occupied by a Monster Card)."... etc.

[quote]I refuse to rate with numbers like most morons on YCM, so I'll just say it's Decent.
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I believe grading cards with numbers is a better way to specify your feelings and what you think about the overall quality. I feel offended by this.
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[quote name='KazukiShizuoka2' timestamp='1283011899' post='4574898']
I believe grading cards with numbers is a better way to specify your feelings and what you think about the overall quality. I feel offended by this.
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You feel offended? That's great. Rating with numbers are stupid. You reviewed the card well though, so you're not stupid.

Trust me, numbers = stupid. I've been on YCM for a long time.
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[quote]Trust me, numbers = stupid. I've been on YCM for a long time.
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That sounds like a very prejudiced thing to say if you don't say any reasons to support your opinion. I don't mean to make a drama out of this thread, but I disagree and I want to defend my opinion on this matter.
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[quote name='KazukiShizuoka2' timestamp='1283012419' post='4574924']
That sounds like a very prejudiced thing to say if you don't say any reasons to support your opinion. I don't mean to make a drama out of this thread, but I disagree and I want to defend my opinion on this matter.
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Everybody in CC just post the following.

bad ocg. nice effect.

9.7/10.

There is no real rating in that post. No sign of intelligence whatsoever. If you read my post, I said you reviewed the card properly, so you aren't a moron.

Plus, on the first post, I said "[color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]I refuse to rate with numbers like [b]most [/b]morons on YCM, so I'll just say it's Decent." [/font][/color]
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[font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1C2837"]Did I say everybody is a moron? No. [/color][/font]
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[quote]DISREGARD THIS POST.[/quote]

PWNT.

[quote]Everybody in CC just post the following.

bad ocg. nice effect.

9.7/10.

There is no real rating in that post. No sign of intelligence whatsoever. If you read my post, I said you reviewed the card properly, so you aren't a moron.

Plus, on the first post, I said "I refuse to rate with numbers like most morons on YCM, so I'll just say it's Decent."


Did I say everybody is a moron? No.
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On the defense who actually do rate like that... Wait, I'm not going to defend them. They're cheap, lazy and their posts are just completely +1.

On the other hand, I don't believe there is anything wrong with rating with numbers. If there is one good thing that came out of lazy-posting, I believe it is using numbers for a rate because that clearifies exactly how good it is, and how much room there is for improvement. Personally I do not believe worded ratings are very useful for the card creator, who wants feedback. And if there is one sure way to provide good feedback, it is grading the presented subject with a number.
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