Kuroda Kaito Posted August 14, 2010 Report Share Posted August 14, 2010 Hello, this is my first Lightsworn-type pack and i hope you like it :lol: [spoiler=My pack] [spoiler=Lightsworn - Electric Pikachu] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is successfully Tributed Summon, you can discard one card to take a look at your opponent's hand and choose one card from their hand and send it to the Graveyard. After that, this card's ATK increase by 500 points and you must send 3 cards from the top of your deck to the Graveyard . This effect can used once per turn. [spoiler=Lightsworn - Cutest Pichu] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is Summon, you can increase this card's ATK by 100 for each monster on both players field. When this card is destroyed, inflinct damage to your opponent for each monster on the field *100. You must send 2 cards from the topof your deck to your Graveyard. [spoiler=Lightsworn - Palkia the lord of Space] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is Tributed Summon, you can place one Lightsworn-counter onto this card (max.10) for each Lightsworn-monster on your field. This card can destroy the number of monsters that its ATK is lower than this card's ATK equal to the number of Lightsworn-counter on this card. When this card attack one monster on your opponent's field, increase this card's ATK by 1000 points during Damage Step only. After that you must send 5 cards from the top of your deck to your Graveyard. [spoiler=The rise of the Light] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is activated, all the monsters on the field except Lightsworn-monster will lose its ATK by 2000 points. [spoiler=Lightsworn - Jolteon the Thunder] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is Tributed Summon, you can take control one monster on your opponent field with Light-attribute. That monster will be destroy at the end of the turn and its ATK will be increase to this card. [spoiler=Lightsworn - Flareon the Fire] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is successfully Tributed Summon, you can destroy the number of card on the field equal to the number of Lightsworn-monster on your side of the field. [spoiler=Lightsworn - Vaporeon the Water] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is Tributed Summon, you can place one Water-counter onto this card (max.5) during each of your Standby Phrase. You can remove one Water-counter to descrease the ATK or DEF of one monster on your opponent's field. [spoiler=Lightsworn - Lord of Time Dialga] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is Tributed Summon, you can place one Time-counter onto this card (max.5) for each Lightsworn-monster on your field. Increase this card's ATK by 500 points for each Time-counter on this card. When your opponent's monster start an attack on your monster, you can remove one Time-counter on this card to let your opponent skip their Battle Step immedietely. [spoiler=Lightsworn - Lovely Eevee] [spoiler=Lore]When this card is Summon, you can destroy this card instead to Special-Summon one "Lightsworn" monster from your deck or hand to your field. That's all hope you like it, any comment will be appreciate The Lightsworn background template by achow198 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dffgf Posted August 14, 2010 Report Share Posted August 14, 2010 dude those cards are awsome. if they were real id buy em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuri Posted August 14, 2010 Report Share Posted August 14, 2010 dude those cards are awsome. if they were real id buy emI'm sorry I only buy realistic cards. These imo are pretty crapy since I really dont see pokemon cards as lightsworn since lightsworns are LIGHT insects maybe weedle etc. can pass as lightsworns but these no. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted August 14, 2010 Report Share Posted August 14, 2010 The names should be something like that: " Pikachu, Lightsworn Electro Mouse" or something. That's how Lightsworns are usually called.But, in this case it's not necessary because these cards are beast. Really nice and well made!There are some OCG errors such as: deck=Deck, When this card is Summon=Summoned, Tribute Summon=Tribute Summoned, "Lightsworn" monster(s), Lightsworn Counter(s), Light-attribute=LIGHT, Water-attribute=WATER, will lose its ATK by 2000 points=loses 2000 ATK, Special-Summon=Special Summon...I'f I missed something I'm sorry. I hope I helped at least a little.Keep going! You're doing great so far ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Six Samz 500 Posted August 14, 2010 Report Share Posted August 14, 2010 sorry there just not my thing, good idea and pictures.i like packet desighn aswell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 okay, thanks alot for commences Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fmafan123 Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Very Very Good!!! 11/10!!!!!!!!!ill rate it as soon as your done!!! :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 THanks for rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FTW (For The Wynn) Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 I see that there's a rift in opinions here. I'm just here mainly to rate cards, so I'll save my opinion for last. Pics: 8/10 The only pics I don't like are Palkia and your spell card. Here's a more fitting Palkia. [spoiler=Palkia] In the future I would use this site (all the pics fit together, they just need backgrounds). This is where I got Palkia from.[spoiler=Website]bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Main_Page Template: 8/10 Normal Template OCG: 8/10 The only problems I noticed at a glance were using (-) instead of (""). Example: in Dialga, Lightsworn-type should be "Lightsworn" type. Also Water should be WATER, Light should be LIGHT, etc. Some people hate fake types, I myself don't care about card types too much in Pop Culture, so I have no problem with that Originality/Creativity: 10/10 No matter where anyone stands on how much they like these cards, I don't believe that anyone can make a valid case against the originality or creativity of them. Very Well Done and +rep for a totally new (at least to me) combination. Playability: 8/10 They seem to work, but Lightsworns don't need much aid. Plus, these cards are also an archetype all there own as well. Overall: 42/50 Sweet B) A nice job and I can't wait to see you make more. However, I prob wouldn't play them myself. As was pointed out earlier, they aren't realistic, but were in Pop Culture, so who cares really? Keep up the good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuroda Kaito Posted August 15, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 thanks alot FTW, i'll better next time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krazyxgamer Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 eh... they are pretty cool... but why Lightsworn??... some OCG errorsEevee is OP should only be from the hand not the Deckotherwise decent set 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hanzo Hattori Posted August 15, 2010 Report Share Posted August 15, 2010 Wow, you're pack is awesome... I really like it... but some OCG error so 8.0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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