.-~ Chaotyc - New archetype [14/??] ~-.

[Cloister]

This is my new archetype, Chaotyc.

These cards' mainfocus is on adding FIRE monsters to the hand to cause a minor burn each time. Well, enjoy!

Ohh... And, all pictures are taken from Jazin Kay's archive on Photobucket.

(12) Monsters:

 

[spoiler=Chaotyc Flare]

FIRE

***

Insect / Effect

1200 / 600

 

 

When this card is added to your hand from your Deck, your opponent draws 1 card. If they drew a monster, you can add 1 FIRE monster from your Deck to your hand with a Level equal to or lower than the Level of the monster your opponent drew.

 

[spoiler=Chaotyc Dragon]

FIRE

*****

Dragon / Effect

2200 / 2000

 

 

Once per turn, you can add 1 Level 3 or lower FIRE monster from your Deck to your hand. This card cannot attack during a turn you activated this effect.

 

[spoiler=Chaotyc Fiend]

FIRE

****

Fiend / Effect

1600 / 1200

 

 

You can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard by discarding 1 card when a FIRE monster is added to your hand from your Deck.

 

[spoiler=Chaotyc Priest]

FIRE

***

Pyro / Tuner

1000 / 300

 

 

Each time a FIRE monster is added to your hand from your Deck outside your Draw Phase, inflict 300 damage to your opponent.

 

[spoiler=Chaotyc Ruined Enchanter']

FIRE

**

Warrior / Effect

0 / 900

 

 

If this card is added to your hand from your Deck outside your Draw Phase, inflict 300 damage to your opponent. This card gains 200 ATK for each card in your hand.

 

[spoiler=Chaotyc Doppelganger]

FIRE

********

Fiend / Synchro / Effect

2800 / 2000

 

 

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

Once per turn, you can add 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster from your Deck to your hand. You can discard 1 card to have this card gain that card's effect(s) until the End Phase of this turn.

 

[spoiler=Chaotyc Forcestriker - NEW]

FIRE

****

Beast-Warrior / Effect

1700 / 1000

 

 

When this card attacks or is attacked and a monster is destroyed in that battle, inflict 100 damage to your opponent x its Level.

 

[spoiler=Chaotyc Heathealer - NEW]

FIRE

****

Winged Beast

1800 / 1000

 

 

Your opponent takes no Battle Damage from battles with this card. Each time this card attacks, gain Life Points equal to the Level of the attacked monster x 100.

 

[spoiler=Chaotyc Claw Marlon]

FIRE

******

Beast / Effect

2600 / 0

 

 

You can Tribute Summon this card without Tributing. If you do, this card's original ATK becomes 2000. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict damage equal to its Level x 100. When this card is destroyed, you can add 1 Level 4 or lower FIRE monster from your Deck to your hand.

 

[spoiler=Chaotyc Firetamer]

FIRE

*

Spellcaster

? / 0

 

 

This card cannot be added to your hand by a card effect. This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card's original ATK is equal to half the difference in you and your opponent's Life Points.

 

[spoiler=Chaotyc Tyrrannus]

FIRE

*********

Rock / Synchro / Effect

3000 / 3000

 

 

1 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card gains 200 ATK for each face-up FIRE monster on the field. When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half that monster's ATK.

 

[spoiler=Chaotyc Madman - NEW]

FIRE

****

Beast-Warrior / Effect

1900 / 400

 

 

Each time your opponent takes damage, inflict an additional 100 damage.

 

 

 

(1) Spells:

 

[spoiler=Flame-Demon's Touch]

Spell Card

Continuous

 

 

Face-up FIRE monsters gain 100 ATK for each face-up FIRE monster on the field. Any effects of a monster that battles a FIRE monster are negated until the end of the Damage Step. If this card would be destroyed, you can Tribute 1 monster you control instead.

 

 

(1) Traps:

 

[spoiler=Illusion Flare]

Trap Card

Counter

 

 

Activate only when a FIRE monster is added to your hand from your Deck. Pay 900 Life Points and discard 1 card to add 1 more FIRE monster to your hand from your Deck with the same Level.

 

 

 

 

All comments and suggestions are very welcome.

[NeosWiseman]

Yes, quite a nice FIRE cards. I suppose the Priest won't be the only burner, but even if he is the swarm-like effects (swarming the hand that is) are nice. I like them a lot. Only 1 OCG problem I see. It's on the Spell Card:

 

 

Face-up FIRE monsters gain 100 ATK for each face-up FIRE monster on the field. Any effects of a monster that battles a FIRE monster's effect(s) monster is are negated until the end of the Damage Step. If this card would be destroyed, you can Tribute 1 monster you control instead.

 

I'll be looking forward to more of these. Keep it up! I think you've got it right for now :D

 

 

 

P.S.: Btw, the Doppelganger looks like Naruto 8-Tails. Just noticed that :lol:

[Cloister]

Thanks. Priest is not the only burner; and I have some more "adding" cards coming too.

 

Will fix the lore when I update the thread.

 

And no more love for burning? Bumpy..

[Alexis Rhodes]

They all work together great and all the pics look good

 

My only problem is for Chaotyc Doppelganger adding any monster from your deck to your hand is a bit too OP

 

9/10:)

[Cloister]

Ahh, yeah that might be true, will balance him then. Thanks 5D'S. :]

[Lexadin]

Pics are epic.

OCG looks fine.

I only have a problem with Dragon his effect/stat ratio is to high for his lvl. I would rease it.

 

A 9/10

[Cloister]

Well 2200 isn't that strong for a Level 5.

 

I will give both Doppelganger and Dragon a drawback on the adding part.

 

Thanks. ;)

[Cloister]

Added 3 new cards + updated Doppelganger, Dragon and Flame-Demon's Touch.

 

Ohh, and BUMP.

[NeosWiseman]

Great! New additions!

So, Claw Marlon is a little overpowered with its first effect. You can Special Summon a monster with 2300 ATK just like that. You should fix that somehow imo.

Firetamer has a small mistake, your and your opponent's.

The Illusion Flare seems nice but maybe a little too costly. I'd make it 800 + discarding OR 1000 without discarding. The way it is now it's not really worth it.

 

The new cards are cool, but they will be even better when you make some adjustments. ;)

[Cloister]

Well, I was worried making Illusion Flare OPed. At first I had it just discarding 1 card and it could add any FIRE monster to the hand. :/

 

I guess I'll have to change Marlon, will make it 2100 instead, a 500 ATK drop if you don't Tribute.

 

And I think it should be "you and your opponent's"...

[Cloister]

Srsl, are the cards really that bad?

[Cloister]

Added 2 more monsters.

 

Why no comments?!

[NeosWiseman]

The Fiend is really nice, but the Ruined Enchanter could use a little boost. I'd make it attack directly and maybe with 0 ATK, but if you want to keep him the way it is I don't really mind.

Both of them are great! Well done! ;)

[Cloister]

Thanks, and I really appreciate you actually comment on these, I worked really hard with the whole thing for a long time tbqh.

 

I might give him a little bigger boost, 200 wouldn't make him too strong huh? Also, edited Claw Marlon.

[NeosWiseman]

Yeah, 200 would be better, but maybe it should go to Level 3 now... Oh, man, Idk. If you want leave it the way it was, I can't figure it out now :D

And for Marlon 2000 ATK should just do the job! ^^

 

P.S.: Thanks for repping me :D (it wasn't necessary though). I'm commenting because I'm interested in the cards, that's all ;)

P.S.: I feel like giving YOU a rep now :lol: For the constant nice job! ^_^

[Cloister]

Well, I appreciate your help and that was the only way to award you except saying thanks and all so... :D

 

I will change it liek nao. *Goes to change it*

 

EDIT: Changed it so it has 0 ATK and gains 200 for each card. Should be balanced enough.

[Cloister]

Added 1 Synchro monster.

[NeosWiseman]

Simple but useful. I like it! The boosting effect makes it too powerful though. Maybe make it +100 ATK.

Other than that, it's cool :)

[Cloister]

Well, consider it's a Level 9 monster. And you have to use 3 monsters to Summon it, leaving this card pretty lonely on the field. So I don't really think it's OPed tbh.

 

EDIT: And thanks! :D

[Khoaz]

I like the pics and effects and everything. only problem that I have with this is the text. there are some cards that say "...added to your hand from your Deck..." when it should be "added from your deck to your hand."

 

besides that little prob. 9/10

[NeosWiseman]

Well, consider it's a Level 9 monster. And you have to use 3 monsters to Summon it, leaving this card pretty lonely on the field. So I don't really think it's OPed tbh.

 

EDIT: And thanks! :D

 

Oh, sorry. I counted up to 8...... and I have no idea why did that happen. Sorry, again! *bow*

[Cloister]

Thanks, and I don't really think it matters that much.

 

EDIT: @Neos - xD No problem.

[Cloister]

Added 3 monsters.

 

Bump.

[Lexadin]

Forcestrikers Lore should be simulair to Heathealer's.

 

Marlon's Pic = <3

His effect is OP though, lower its no Tribute ATK to 1800ish.

 

Madman=OTK, he chains on his own effect to slowly burn your opp to death. And even if you fix that part, Dark Room of Nightmare will restart the OTK. I would change it to "Once per turn" or something like that.

[Cloister]

Ahh, I will change that lol.

 

Thanks Lex!