John A. Zoidberg Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Hooray for my first post in Finish Sets :DAnyway, here's a deck that I made the past few days that focuses on stealing your opponents monster an using them against your opponents, sometimes by reducing their ATKs, sometimes stealing the monsters, etc. Anyway, here we go. Enjoy :D [spoiler=Booster Pack] (picture credit goes to JazinKay on photobucket)Spells: Traps:[spoiler=Lore]This card can only be activated when the only monster on your field is selected as an attack target. Special Summon 4 "Mind Control Tokens" (ATK: 500 DEF:500) in face-down defense position. Flip the monster that was selected as an attack target into face-down defense position. Rearrange the monsters in any order. Your opponent then selects an attack target. If the target is a "Mind Control Token," the attacking monster is destroyed. If the target is a "Mind Control" monster, all cards on your field are sent to the Graveyard and your opponents monster can attack again. Monsters:[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Ritual Summoned by activating the card "Mastery of Mind Control" and removing from play 2 "Mind Control" monsters. Once per turn, you can remove from play up to 5 "Mind Control" monsters on your field or in your Graveyard. For every card removed from play, this card gains 1 Mind Control Counter (Max. 10). Mind Control Counters cannot be removed the same turn they are added to this card. Once per turn, your can remove up to 10 Mind Control Counters from this card to take control of 1 monster on your opponents field. For every counter removed, you have that monster for 1 turn. If you remove 10 counters, you don't lose control of that card. [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Mind Control Guardian." When this card is successfully Special Summoned, send up to 4 "Mind Control" monsters on your field to the Graveyard. For every monster sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 monster in your opponents Graveyard to your field. (Pronounced- Mor-shus)(His name is a combination of Morcius, Narra, and Xeeskan ;D) [spoiler=Lore]"Mind Control Warrior Xeeskan" + "Mind Control Warrior Narra" + "Mind Control Warrior Morcius"This card gains 1 of the following effects for every "Mind Control" monster in your Graveyard:-1+ Take control of 1 monster on your opponents field until the End Phase.-3+ Pay 800 Life Points to take control of 1 monster on your opponents field.-7+ Any monster on your field that was taken control of by the effect of a "Mind Control" monster gains 700 ATK and DEF-15+ This card can take control of up to 3 monsters on your opponents field until the End Phase. [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Mind Control" monster. If this cards ATK is lower than the ATK of every monster on your opponents field, Special Summon 1 monster on your opponents field to your field until the End Phase. (Pronounced- Zee- skan)[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Normal Summoned, sent up to 4 monsters on your field to the Graveyard. For every monster sent to the Graveyard, add 1 Mind Control Counter (Max. 4) to this card. Once per turn, you can remove up to 4 Mind Control Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 monster on your opponents field. You control your opponents monster 1 turn for every Mind Control Counter removed. Deck:Spells:A Somewhat Fair Trade x2Animated Armor x2Blessed Blade of Mind Control x2Cursed Blade of Mind Control x2Mastery of Mind Control x1Mesmerizing Shrine x1Null and Void x1The Joining of Minds x1Living Soul x2 Traps:Increased Consequences x2Mind Control Barrage x2Mind Control Confusion x2Portal of Mind Control x2 Monsters:Mind Control Archer x2Mind Control Guardian x2Mind Control King x1Mind Control Knight x3Mind Control Master x1Mind Control Queen x1Mind Control Swordsman x2Mind Control Templar x3Mind Control Warrior Morcius x1Mind Control Warrior Morraskan x1Mind Control Warrior Narra x1Mind Control Warrior Xeeskan x1Mind Control Sledger x3Ancient Mind Control Guardian x2 TOTAL: 46 Cards. If you want me to post the lore of any other cards, just say so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Wow you actually made what looks like a playable Deck too? You actually printing these or something? Cos it looks like you put a lot of work into these. I don't really want to criticise cos you've done the set and stuff. Love Morcius' pic. --- I want a "Mind Control Templar" in my Deck plz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted July 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Wow you actually made what looks like a playable Deck too? You actually printing these or something? Cos it looks like you put a lot of work into these. I don't really want to criticise cos you've done the set and stuff. Love Morcius' pic. --- I want a "Mind Control Templar" in my Deck plz. I'm not sure if I'm printing them or not. I might. Anyway, rating is helpful, I don't care if it's a bit harsh of a rating, I've learned to find the positive in a negative review. And you can use a Mind Control Templar :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PandoraMaster Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Holy mother of god!!! This is really cool. I would not mind having that deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted July 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Thanks :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiza Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Isn't Null and Void a real card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted July 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 I have no clue. The name just seemed to fit what I was going for. I've never really bought too many actual cards other than some booster packs and structure decks, so if Null and Void is a real card, I definitely haven't heard it.Rating the rest of the set would be appreciated :D I have no clue. The name just seemed to fit what I was going for. I've never really bought too many actual cards other than some booster packs and structure decks, so if Null and Void is a real card, I definitely haven't heard it.Rating the rest of the set would be appreciated :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiza Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Yep it is infact a real card:[spoiler= Null and Void] The cards seem really cool with solid ocg and some nice pics. It also looks like a real deck, IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted July 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Yep it is infact a real card:[spoiler= Null and Void] The cards seem really cool with solid ocg and some nice pics. It also looks like a real deck, IMO. Thanks! And I'll try to think of a new name for Null and Void Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowuchiha08 Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 This is a good Archetype however a few flaws (7.10)- The idea of "Mind Control" sounds dull ... i would say just leave it to "Mind" like, Mind Guardian but that would sound stupid. Also, some of these cards are way OP..I'm willing to test this deck however the OP cards seemed that they should be forbidden. Such cards are:- "Animated Armor" Is it a continuous spell? Even so, i feel that it should be a trap continuous (like a call of the haunted)-Mesmerizing Shrine seems to have lots of typos-Null of Void is confusing so is "mind Control Confusion"- i find it impossible to summon "mind control king" if the only tuner is a level 4well, you still need to add cards, dont you? ... welll good luck :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 This is a guy Archetype however a few flaws (7.10)- The idea of "Mind Control" sounds dull ... i would say just leave it to "Mind" like, Mind Guardian but that would sound stupid. Also, some of these cards are way OP..I'm willing to test this deck however the OP cards seemed that they should be forbidden. Such cards are:- "Animated Armor" Is it a continuous spell? Even so, i feel that it should be a trap continuous (like a call of the haunted)-Mesmerizing Shrine seems to have lots of typos-Null of Void is confusing so is "mind Control Confusion"- i find it impossible to summon "mind control king" if the only tuner is a level 4well, you still need to add cards, dont you? ... welll good luck :D Actually this is the entire set. You know, that's kinda why I posted the "full deck" thing at the bottom. I'm actually going to change the Tuner to a Level 2 monster to make it easier to use. Null and Void makes it so Portal of Mind Control is less painful to you.Animated armor: no it's not a continuous spell. Think of it like Monster Reborn, but with more of an effect. The maximum ATK it can get with this specific is 5400, and while that is way OP'd, that would mean literally EVERY monster in this deck except for the selected is in the Graveyard, which is insanely unlikely.Mesmerizing Shrine: the only typo is that I forgot to say cannot.Mind Control Confusion: you have 1 monster on your field. It's selected as an attack target. You flip it face down and summon 4 tokens. You then arrange the cards in any order you want. Your opponents monster attacks. It hits a token, your opponents monster is destroyed. If it hits the original monster, every card on your field is destroyed and your opponents monster gets to attack again. Your opponent has a 1/5 change, but if they hit the right card, it's devastating to you, which kind of balances it out. I don't see how any of these cards are OP, as they have a lengthly process of use, some effects require a lot of work, and others are just a 1-turn thing.Also, there's a lot of risk. A lot of effects involve getting rid of monsters, which could potentially get rid of all of your monsters in a few turns, and that's why I have cards like Animated Armor. I appreciate the review, but I simply don't see your point. And be rest assured, this is the ENTIRE set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom M.C. Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 HOLY "BLEEP", you actually made an entire playable deck, a really good one too. i definitely saw some ocg errors in there. but good work. + rep. i might use this deck, though i tend to rely on traps like mirror force a lot. rating: 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Amazing Avian Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 I could see these actually being printed as official cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 I could see these actually being printed as official cards. Thanks :D HOLY "BLEEP", you actually made an entire playable deck, a really good one too. i definitely saw some ocg errors in there. but good work. + rep. i might use this deck, though i tend to rely on traps like mirror force a lot. rating: 8.5/10 Go on ahead, use it all you want! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 1 word: WOW!!!You really outdid yourself this time! Though there are OCG errors, these are simply amazing! The pics are perfect, the names (except for Null and VOid, which is an already existing card... http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Null_and_Void ), and the effects are just perfectly fit!As everyone above me said, these cards would make a really nice actual set!(Also, I envy your patience; I would never be able to sit still making a set like these!!!)10/10 and of course +1 rep...oh, make that 3! :D :D :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 1 word: WOW!!!You really outdid yourself this time! Though there are OCG errors, these are simply amazing! The pics are perfect, the names (except for Null and VOid, which is an already existing card... http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Null_and_Void ), and the effects are just perfectly fit!As everyone above me said, these cards would make a really nice actual set!(Also, I envy your patience; I would never be able to sit still making a set like these!!!)10/10 and of course +1 rep...oh, make that 3! :D :D :D Thanks so much! And yes, I've been attempting to figure out a new name for Null and Void.And I have no patience whatsoever, but thanks!And you get a rep for that great review :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snow_wolfyII Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 That is 8.5/10its a little overpowered but i guess u could fix that.i'm a newbie so my ratings won't be the most accurate. ciaoPS: my fave would be mind control swordsman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The God of Darkness Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 This set is amazing I wouldn't mind using this Deck especially "Mind Control Templar". This set gets 9.9/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 This set is amazing I wouldn't mind using this Deck especially "Mind Control Templar". This set gets 9.9/10 :) Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 Anyone who wants to test this deck out, feel free. I would love to know how it does in a legitimate duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowuchiha08 Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Actually this is the entire set. You know, that's kinda why I posted the "full deck" thing at the bottom. I'm actually going to change the Tuner to a Level 2 monster to make it easier to use. Null and Void makes it so Portal of Mind Control is less painful to you.Animated armor: no it's not a continuous spell. Think of it like Monster Reborn, but with more of an effect. The maximum ATK it can get with this specific is 5400, and while that is way OP'd, that would mean literally EVERY monster in this deck except for the selected is in the Graveyard, which is insanely unlikely.Mesmerizing Shrine: the only typo is that I forgot to say cannot.Mind Control Confusion: you have 1 monster on your field. It's selected as an attack target. You flip it face down and summon 4 tokens. You then arrange the cards in any order you want. Your opponents monster attacks. It hits a token, your opponents monster is destroyed. If it hits the original monster, every card on your field is destroyed and your opponents monster gets to attack again. Your opponent has a 1/5 change, but if they hit the right card, it's devastating to you, which kind of balances it out. I don't see how any of these cards are OP, as they have a lengthly process of use, some effects require a lot of work, and others are just a 1-turn thing.Also, there's a lot of risk. A lot of effects involve getting rid of monsters, which could potentially get rid of all of your monsters in a few turns, and that's why I have cards like Animated Armor. I appreciate the review, but I simply don't see your point. And be rest assured, this is the ENTIRE set.Sorry, those cards i mentioned were just slightly OP. and some cards would be better off so that both players can use their effect (if they have a mind control monster) that would make it best. I will see if i can test it out. As for "Finish Set" i was just applying that you were not finish making this archtype seeing that you only have 1 tuner which was a 4 star. anyways, good luck... i have a finish set of my own but i dont know how to post them... care to pm about it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Sorry, those cards i mentioned were just slightly OP. and some cards would be better off so that both players can use their effect (if they have a mind control monster) that would make it best. I will see if i can test it out. As for "Finish Set" i was just applying that you were not finish making this archtype seeing that you only have 1 tuner which was a 4 star. anyways, good luck... i have a finish set of my own but i dont know how to post them... care to pm about it? Maybe. Based off of other reviews the only thing I really see absolutely to do is make Templar a level 2 and fix up some OCG/grammar. After I finish that, I'm going to print the deck and use it myself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowuchiha08 Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Maybe. Based off of other reviews the only thing I really see absolutely to do is make Templar a level 2 and fix up some OCG/grammar. After I finish that, I'm going to print the deck and use it myself Gurgle! You actually did ALOT BETTER than the rest of the people in this forum so i raise my vote to 10/10... .. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Gurgle! You actually did ALOT BETTER than the rest of the people in this forum so i raise my vote to 10/10... .. XD thanks! I like 10/10's! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted August 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2010 Bump? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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