Nexev Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Digimon Data Cops, Custom Threat Welcome to Hardrive City, the third biggest city in the Digital World and the most dramatic by far.[spoiler=plot]See Hardrive City has both the biggest police force and the biggest underworld. It’s a legend ever since that crime king Big C came to town. He has never been seen but has built up the greatest crime empire known throughout history and then disappeared. Now we have to deal with Bommon, his second in command. However Big C apparently was one of those Robin Hood types, giving to the poor and whatnot. Bullshit though, after all he IS a criminal and it’s his fault that there is so much crime. Luckily for us we have Poyomon, the greatest chief of police in history. He brought our city from a crime-infested mess to someplace livable. Now we fight criminals everyday; but for some reason, things are getting harder. Some of the criminals fight way better for their level. I saw a Agumon punch out poor Knightmon. Our Forensic team says it’s a result of data modification, it has something to do with changing what makes them didgmon and make them more powerful and combat ready. It’s a act against nature, even more so then we were already. I kept this city as clean as possible for a record of 12 years, it ain’t going to get all smudgy now just cause a punimon can now punch-out an Alphamon. ~Police log 10/14/93 5:35 AM Officer Gargoylemon [spoiler=rules]1. This follows advance format, I’m a bit of an a****** as people tell me so I am not afraid of kicking you out.2. Police officers are assigned missions, these missions let you progress throughout the story by under covering evidence and proof about the true truth behind the mod ring and maybe even take down Big C. Inversly criminals get assignments from your superior. They serve a similar purpose.3. You cannot digivolve whenever you please, when you are assigned a mission you are told what the maximum level you can evolve to for that mission. Just cause you were allowed to be a mega in the first mission doesn’t mean you get to be a Ultimate the next day. Criminals are exempt from this rule.4. I can add any rule I please if I see a need.5. If your rp sample is good you may have multiple characters.6. Only me and Broken can accept or deny.7. Criminals are always a menber of Big C's gang, the Chrono Crew unless they specifically ask otherwise, if so it will be harder to get him accepted. [spoiler=app] Name: Digimon: Digimon line: Criminal or officer: Personallity: Bio: RP sample: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 [spoiler=Cops]Name: Okase Digimon: Agumon Hakase Digimon line: Agumon Hakase -> Greymon Hakase -> MetalGreymon Hakase -> WarGreymon Hakase Criminal or officer: Officer, science and forensics division. Personallity: Very knowledgeable, he always attempts to make science fun. He occasionaly speaks in techno-babble and has no inner-monologue, which creeps some of the other officers out. Bio: Okase, like many Agumon Hakase are geniuses, always willing to lend a hand. Okase was a little morbid, very interested in postmortom examinations and causes of death. He joined the police force in order to do good for his city. What? What do you mean that's it? He just likes seeing and examining dead bodies to find causes of death. he has no tragic past, why would you need one to enter the police force anyways? RP sample: Okases lab is always darkened save for his powerful light used to examine the bodies of victims, murdered or otherwise. He was looking over the body of a Tyrannomon, who had been completely gored through. He was looking in the hole with a torch for any traces of weaponry or heaven forbid poison. 'Nothing, absolutely nothing. He must've been just blown straigh through with a beam based attack or, by the kinda jagged holing, actually tackled straight through. That's almost insane, what the heck could build up the speed and power to do that, Tyrannomon are never usually weaklings. This must be another result of the data modification' Okase stated as he finished his examination and draped a green tarp over the body. 'Rest in peace' he stated, ceremoniously waving his pointing stick. [spoiler=Criminals]Name: Esaka Digimon: NiseAgumon Hakase Digimon line: NiseAgumon Hakase -> NiseGreymon Hakase -> NiseMetalGreymon Hakase -> NiseWarGreymon Hakase Criminal or officer: Criminal Personallity: Is mean and cunning. He's smart, but only nearly as smart as an Agumon Hakase, and he lies more often than tells the truth. Bio: Esaka was a genius, but he went down the wrong path. He was interested in chaos, mathematically speaking. He joined criminals because they were more fun. And just because. RP sample:"It's quite simple, actually." Esaka replied in his taunty voice. "Those blind people will see through it quite easily, but how will remain a mystery to them. Data Modification is quite easy to understand.....for me." The other Digimon was confused. He had a explain-to-me expression on his face. Esaka saw through it, but he was given that kind of look all the time. "It's quite safe, according to my calculations. I'd say a hundred percent safe." He said it as convincingly as possible. "And as for how it works....I can explain to you....but it would take at least an hour to understand it completely." Actually, it would only take a couple of minutes in clear language, but Esaka didn't want to answer his face. He then watched the Digimon go away quickly, not wanting to spend an entire hour understanding. Meanwhile, Esaka muttered to himself, "Kekekekeh.....with luck, he would spread that and less will ask that same question....." He then turned his chair around. Name: Faust Digimon: Phelesmon Digimon line: Kiimon- Yaamon - Impmon - Boogeymon - Phelesmon - Beelzemon Criminal or officer: Criminal Personality: Faust is as nice as any Phelesmon can be, but this is merely an act. In truth he is quite the sadistic bastard who loves to see people in pain or trouble. Despite being a high level, he doesn't like to fight, he thinks that such menial jobs are meant for those who were designed for them. Bio: Faust has always been a criminal. Even when he was just an Impmon, but back then he just caused trouble and the occasional theft. But as he grew older and more well known to both the police and the criminal underworld, he was recruited into the Chrono Crew. Faust became the one who gave out loans to needy Digimon, and then came to collect what they owed to Big C. Recently though Faust digivolved into a Phelesmon and he has started to gain a "worthier than though" attitude to alot of his fellow gang members. And while some criminals are using Mods to make themselves stronger, Faust thinks that anyone who uses Mods isn't good enough to clean his pitchfork. He believes that true criminality comes from the heart and not from outside sources (A very strange belief for a criminal). RP Sample: Faust landed softly on the ground outside of the building. It was run down and falling apart, not somehwere he wanted to be. The whole area was filthy, it was obviously on the back end of the cities rejuvination project. Faust moved his feet towards the door and stopped directly in front of the peep hole so that the occupant of the building could see him. His hand lifted to knock on the door, but Faust noticed a particluarly nasty stain and decided it would be best if he didn't touch the door. The pointy end of his pitchfork tapped against the digital wood and Faust waited. The door opened just a crack and a small eye could be seen through the gap."Oh! Mr Faust, I... um... Didn't expect you to be here so soon today." A quiet voice said through."Yes. Quite. I assume you know what I am here for?" Faust replied to the eye."I do Mr Faust I do. But there is a small problem.""Oh really? And what problem would that be?""I don't have the money." The eye told Faust as it started to quiver."Now, Now. That just won't do will it? I'm afraid you will have to be punished." Faust grinned. The eye stopped quivering and seemed to get more determined. The voice that went with it also seemed to gain more presence."Well I am afraid. That you won't be able to." The door opened even more to show the full form of the eye's owner, a Hagurumon. Faust noted that the digimon seemed a little different to the usual variety."Illegal Modifcations? No doubt bought with the money that was loaned to you?""Correct Mr Faust, so I suggest you leave. I know you're an Ultimate level, but I don't want to hurt you.""There is but one little problem to your plan." Faust smiled, "I already heard of your little addiction and so I brought some... security along. Meet my friends."Two shadowed digimon appeared alongside Faust. His hand tightened against the shaft of his pitchfork." I suggest you do not threaten me again, little one, or I may have to do something much more serious. You have two days to come up with the payment. Boys, show him what will happen if he doesn't" Faust turned as the two digimon beside him moved for the Hagurumon. The Phelesmon used his powers to lift his body from the ground and fly away as the unfortunate digimon's screams echoed around the neighbourhood. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted July 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Accepted. You are coleader, you can make more though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Name: EsakaDigimon: NiseAgumon HakaseDigimon line: NiseAgumon Hakase -> NiseGreymon Hakase -> NiseMetalGreymon Hakase -> NiseWarGreymon HakaseCriminal or officer: CriminalPersonallity: Is mean and cunning. He's smart, but only nearly as smart as an Agumon Hakase, and he lies more often than tells the truth.Bio: Esaka was a genius, but he went down the wrong path. He was interested in chaos, mathematically speaking. He joined criminals because they were more fun. And just because.RP sample:"It's quite simple, actually." Esaka replied in his taunty voice. "Those blind people will see through it quite easily, but how will remain a mystery to them. Data Modification is quite easy to understand.....for me." The other Digimon was confused. He had a explain-to-me expression on his face. Esaka saw through it, but he was given that kind of look all the time. "It's quite safe, according to my calculations. I'd say a hundred percent safe." He said it as convincingly as possible. "And as for how it works....I can explain to you....but it would take at least an hour to understand it completely." Actually, it would only take a couple of minutes in clear language, but Esaka didn't want to answer his face. He then watched the Digimon go away quickly, not wanting to spend an entire hour understanding. Meanwhile, Esaka muttered to himself, "Kekekekeh.....with luck, he would spread that and less will ask that same question....." He then turned his chair around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted July 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Did you two plan this? Meh accepted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Hurray for pai! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
//Zeromaru// Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Name: FaustDigimon: PhelesmonDigimon line: Kiimon- Yaamon - Impmon - Boogeymon - Phelesmon - BeelzemonCriminal or officer: CriminalPersonality: Faust is as nice as any Phelesmon can be, but this is merely an act. In truth he is quite the sadistic bastard who loves to see people in pain or trouble. Despite being a high level, he doesn't like to fight, he thinks that such menial jobs are meant for those who were designed for them.Bio: Faust has always been a criminal. Even when he was just an Impmon, but back then he just caused trouble and the occasional theft. But as he grew older and more well known to both the police and the criminal underworld, he was recruited into the Chrono Crew. Faust became the one who gave out loans to needy Digimon, and then came to collect what they owed to Big C. Recently though Faust digivolved into a Phelesmon and he has started to gain a "worthier than though" attitude to alot of his fellow gang members. And while some criminals are using Mods to make themselves stronger, Faust thinks that anyone who uses Mods isn't good enough to clean his pitchfork. He believes that true criminality comes from the heart and not from outside sources (A very strange belief for a criminal).[spoiler=RP sample:]Faust landed softly on the ground outside of the building. It was run down and falling apart, not somehwere he wanted to be. The whole area was filthy, it was obviously on the back end of the cities rejuvination project. Faust moved his feet towards the door and stopped directly in front of the peep hole so that the occupant of the building could see him. His hand lifted to knock on the door, but Faust noticed a particluarly nasty stain and decided it would be best if he didn't touch the door. The pointy end of his pitchfork tapped against the digital wood and Faust waited. The door opened just a crack and a small eye could be seen through the gap."Oh! Mr Faust, I... um... Didn't expect you to be here so soon today." A quiet voice said through."Yes. Quite. I assume you know what I am here for?" Faust replied to the eye."I do Mr Faust I do. But there is a small problem.""Oh really? And what problem would that be?""I don't have the money." The eye told Faust as it started to quiver."Now, Now. That just won't do will it? I'm afraid you will have to be punished." Faust grinned. The eye stopped quivering and seemed to get more determined. The voice that went with it also seemed to gain more presence."Well I am afraid. That you won't be able to." The door opened even more to show the full form of the eye's owner, a Hagurumon. Faust noted that the digimon seemed a little different to the usual variety."Illegal Modifcations? No doubt bought with the money that was loaned to you?""Correct Mr Faust, so I suggest you leave. I know you're an Ultimate level, but I don't want to hurt you.""There is but one little problem to your plan." Faust smiled, "I already heard of your little addiction and so I brought some... security along. Meet my friends."Two shadowed digimon appeared alongside Faust. His hand tightened against the shaft of his pitchfork." I suggest you do not threaten me again, little one, or I may have to do something much more serious. You have two days to come up with the payment. Boys, show him what will happen if he doesn't" Faust turned as the two digimon beside him moved for the Hagurumon. The Phelesmon used his powers to lift his body from the ground and fly away as the unfortunate digimon's screams echoed around teh neighbourhood. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 'Phelesmon has always been criminal....' Good grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
//Zeromaru// Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 I have dishounered myself. I shall commit suicide in response to this... oh whats that edit button? Never mind lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Oh well. At least you fixed it. The only thing left is the misspelling of 'dishounered', but that's less than a missing word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted July 30, 2010 Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Name:Takura Hasuki Digimon:Bearmon Digimon line:Bearmon-Grizzlymon-Callismon Criminal or officer:Criminal Personallity:cunning,sift and a great lier Bio:he has lived as a "street rat" his whole life stealing for keeps,but when he comes across this creature(Bearmon) he knows he could steal more then just food.Bearmon is the idea maker and Takura just follows along. Takura has always been caught but always ecsapces within the next 30 minutes RP sample:"What can i say Bearmon,I have been a theif my whole life",Takura exclaims to Bearmon.Bearmon being the smarter one thought a couple second while Takura whas going on and on about what to steal next.And then it came to him."Takura how bout we go on a steal spree,Ya Know gather a bunch of other crimanals together"."Thats a good Idea",Said Takura.And they headed off..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted July 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2010 Alfius is in, best app so far. Axel, denied since your sample isn't up to advance format. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Warden Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 I'll be keeping logs of the current apps so no one thinks to make 'subtle' changes to their ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 could you give me an example of this advanced format Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 It has to have four lines. As in....Once upon a time, there was a girl who did not like pie. Her friends were very angry at her for that. So they stuffed a pie into her mouth, apple pie, by the way, and then a few seconds later, she threw up, so they shoved it all the way into her stomach. She liked it, but it really hurt. And stuff. So she threw up again. And they were still angry. So they killed her by using a sharp knife made of titanium. And then the friends lived happily ever after. The End. See? Four lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted July 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 That was 3. >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 I was too lazy to preview. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted July 31, 2010 Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 can i have a second go at it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted July 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2010 Sure. Go ahead. MAke sure you read the rules first though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 ok Edited RP Sample(the rest in my previous app is the same):RP sample:"What can i say Bearmon,I have been a theif my whole life",Takura exclaims to Bearmon.Bearmon being the smarter one thought a couple second while Takura whas going on and on about what to steal next.And then it came to him."Takura how bout we go on a steal spree,Ya Know gather a bunch of other crimanals together"."Thats a good Idea",Said Takura.And they headed off to the dark area where Big C's Gang was having a little "get together".Bearmon and Takura were always willing to crash a party.So as they arrived at the ally they were attacked by followers of Big C."Whoa Whoa take it easy dude",Takura exclaimed as he saw himself and Bearmon in chains. "We just wanted to have some Fun",he exclaimed.Bearmon thought for a second,"Takura i dont think "sweet talking them" is such a great idea",Bearmon said as he watched Takura struggle.But Big C didnt want them for capture,no he wanted them for there skills. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 Why do everyone not put in spacesbefore full stops and commas,And why do they keep capitalizing after a comma and why do they forgot to, as my friend likes to say a few words. "Keep on putting the comma after the speech mark", He says, and why do everyone overuse something? Like "Bababa" John said, "Babababa" he said and then continued, "Babababa" he said. I mean really, the 'he saids' aren't even supposed to exist. It's supposed to be, like "Bababa" John said, "Babababa Babababa." Yes, like that. And they forgot their ''s in didn't and wasn't. And my reply? YOUR INTELLIGENCE SURPRISES ME.That's very, very good! Bravo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted August 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 Should have noticed before but I forget to mention. There are no tamers. Only digimon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 oh well can my bearmons name be takura then?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted August 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 Sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted August 3, 2010 Report Share Posted August 3, 2010 yay does that mean i am accepted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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