Xayax Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 Hey this is my first cards i need some criticism. Rate and Comment please! Monsters:If another "Heaven's Angel"is in play, You may add 1 "Heaven's Rain" to your hand. If "Death Eater-Xayax" is in play, this card gains 400 ATK and 500 DEF.If another "Death Eater" is in play, you may add 1 "Death's Revenge to your hand. If "Heavens Angel-Mercury" is in play, add 400 ATK and 500 DEF to this card.This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except if "Heavens Angel-Mercury" and "Death Eater-Xayax" are in play. No tributes are necessary. Flip a coin, if heads destroy "Heavens Angel-Mercury". If tails destroy "Death Eater-Xayax".Spells:Rate and Comment!Lol, of course, originally the name of the Death Eaters were Death warriors. forgot to change effect. ignore Death Warrior and just think Death Eater. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arcfigter Posted July 18, 2010 Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 These look great and would make an awesome structure deck! also, some of your lore typing doesn't match your lore on the card. You should fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xayax Posted July 18, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2010 Lol, I know. My brother thought death eater sounded better but i forgot to chande mercury and Xayax's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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