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The Clash of the Final Dimensions PG 13 for mild violence (A Final Fantasy Fanfic)

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Silent Omega

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If this Fanfic sucks just tell me....Seriously...

[spoiler=Plot]

"The Different Dimensions of the World,Each has strong fighters...And villains.It seems that the Villains has been trying to teke over these Dimensions...I just hope they can stop them befor we all....Die.."

~The Final Fighters"

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Prolouge]

Characters

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Name:Tidus

Age:17

Personality:He's headstrong,And usually aggresive

Appearance:tidus.jpg

Location:Dimension 10

 

Name:Auron

Age:35

Personality:He's calm,Strong

Appearance:auron.jpg

Location:Dimension 10

 

Name:Kimahri Ronso

Age:25

Personality:He is Calm,Overprotective

Appearance:kimahri.jpg

Location:Dimension 10

 

Name:Cloud Strife

Age:21

Personality:He is Calm,quiet,protective,cool

Appearance:characters-cloud.jpg

Location:Dimension 7

 

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3 Warriors were training,One was blonde with medium size hair,an overall,And a yellow and blue shirt He also had a blue dragon shaped sword.The 2nd one had short black and grey hair,a Red robe,Black shirt,And he holded a Sword on his shoulders.The 3rd one looked like an animal with blue fur,Red pants,White medium sized hair,a half horn on his forehead and a Spear holded by his hands.

 

"What's wrong Kimahri...Am I too fast for you?!!" said the 1st one Laughing.

 

"Grrr i'll rip your head off Tidus!!" shouted the 2nd one.

 

"Both of you knock it off!This is a training session..." The 3rd one said calmly.

 

These 3 warrior were known as Tidus,Kimahri,and Auron who was training in a calm grass field,There was a farm and no Road showing anywhere.The Farm was were they used to live most of the time.

 

Tidus and Kimahri battled it out as they slashed wildly against each other.Tidus seemed to be enjoying it at the moment while Kimahri was enraged.

 

"C'mon does the little baby want to play?" said Tidus dodging every attack made by Kimahri.

 

"Tidus!!You bastard!!" shouted Kimahri as he tried to hit Tidus with his spear.

 

Auron sighed and nodded his head.

 

"This is Jecht's Father....." said Auron quietly.

 

Jecht was Tidus' father,He was known as a Guardian to Nebraska, the last summoner.Jecht was a serious man,Not like Tidus.Last time they same him he was heading for the Otherworld.

 

"Haha!!!Kimahri!!You really suck!!" taunted Tidus.

 

Kimahri threw the spear at Tidus and managed to make a mark across his shoulder,which was bleeding.

 

"I finally hit you!!!Yeah!!" Kimahri shouted confidently.

 

"You just got lucky...That's all..." Tidus said trying to make it look like he didn't actually fail.

 

====================At Dimension 7=======================

A Blonde man with black body armor and a cape was fixing a Motorcycle.The Man seemed quiet and yet he seemed like he wanted to scream.

 

"Damn Bike....I'll have to get off from here..." The Blonde man said calmly,At which he then got off the Motorcycle.

 

This Man was a great warrior,His name is Cloud Strife.He looks rougly at the age of 21.He was a serious,calm and quiet man.

 

Cloud kicked the Motorcycle which dropped off as it fell.

 

"The Bike is damn useless....I'll have to walk..." Cloud said Coldly....

 

He then began to walk the road,Which seemed endless....He had thought of crossing the city with his Bike but that plan failed...As Cloud reached an Inn he turned around

 

"Sephiroth!!"[/align]

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1:The Fight]

Characters

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Name:Sephiroth

Age:30

Personality:He is Calm,evil,sadistic.

Appearance:characters-sephiroth.jpg

Location:Dimension 7

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As Cloud turned around there was Sephiroth.

 

"Sephiroth!!Why are you here?" asked Cloud bravely.

 

Sephiroth laughed, "Why Cloud....I'm here to just end what I was supposed to do...Kill you.."

 

Cloud took out his sword which appeared to be huge.he called it "Buster Blade".Sephiroth took out an extremely deadly and long sword.

 

"The one who's gonna be finished is you Sephiroth!!" shouted Cloud angrily,He pointed his Sword forward.

 

"HAHAHA...You're not gonna stop me...I'm gonna kill you just like I killed your girlfriend...Aerith" Sephiroth said sadisticly,He pointed his sword at Cloud.

 

Cloud remembered about Aerith...Sephiroth had stabbed her in the back and killed her.For that he was enraged.

 

"Shut up!!" Cloud rushed towards Sephiroth,And Sephiroth stood still,Cloud striked him,But Sephiroth dissapeared and appeared behind Cloud.Then he kicked Cloud on the back at which Cloud was blown 2 feet away from Sephiroth and landed with a thud.Cloud got up and he put his Sword back as he started to chant.

 

"Fire!!" Shouted Cloud,At which he put his hands forward and Sephiroth came on fire.Though the fire seemed to dessapear as it hit Sephiroth.

 

"HAHA NoNo My dear Cloud....I'm much stronger than before..." Sephiroth smirked as he said that.Then he rushed forwards toward Cloud and stabbed him in the chest.Cloud was breathless as the Blade had pierced through his chest.He spat some blood out and fell to the ground.

 

"HAAHAHAHAHA....Now that's the power..Of the Dark Army..." said Sephiroth as he smiled before the dead body..[/align]

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2:Erased Memory...]

Characters..

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Name:Kuja

Age:?

Personality:?

Appearance:9kuja-s.jpg

Location:Dimension 9

 

Name:Garland

Age:?

Personality:

Apperance:337px-Dissidia_Garland.jpg

Dimension:?

 

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It seemed like the World had gone and died For Cloud as he drifted slowly and slowly away,He was in a state of coma...Something rather horrible to could happen.He began opening his eyelids as he looked at his surroundings...A dark room,filled with technology and beside him was a man covered in blue armor...This man...was Garland...

 

"Urrgh...Who are you?.." Asked Cloud as he woke up slowly and looked upon the man

 

"That's nothing you need to know....Cloud...Now go back to sleep.." Said garland as he touched Clouds Head and he fell asleep.

 

"He's the Man you captured?" asked Garland to a man in the shadows.The Man walked slowly to Garland revealing his face as...Sephiroth again.

 

"Yes...He's my old enemy.." replied Sephiroth in a tone of boredom.

 

"He looks weak....The Master did say you needed to only subdue him.." said Garland angrily.

 

"At least he's still alive..." replied Sephiroth again...

 

"Gentleman....Let's settle this like real men...." a man from the shadows walked to the arguing 2,He has long blue hair,His clothe looked old and rather sadistic.

 

"You stay out of this Kuja..." said Garland revealing his huge sword that was pointed to him.

 

"I'd rather stay out of this than listen to you whine..." replied Kuja laughing as he said that with Sephiroth joining him in laughter.

 

"You 3 are done arguing!!" shouted a Man who appeared to be home at the shadows..

 

"M-m-Master!!" said all 3 standing up at once and giving him or her their attention.

 

"Now You 3 need to do a mission for me....There is a Man named Vincent Valentine who is giving me a hard time...I need you 3 to kill him.." He grinned as he said that.

 

Cloud budged a little as they mentioned Vincent and thought "Vincent...That name seems familiar..."[/align]

 

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Ugh.

 

Space more often.

 

I see grammar mistakes such as "holded". That should be held. Some words should start with a lower case.

 

One more thing, the fight was quite lackluster. You should add some interesting moves that you don't see so often.

 

But you should really focus on your grammar. That seems to be your main problem.

 

Other than that, I like.

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