The Warden Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 This was an idea i came up with last year and dropped, i've now decided to revive it for here. This is intended simply as a parody to the original Digimon Series, so certain themes and actions will co-incide with the actual show itself. [spoiler=Characters]Name: Jack TamoriAge: 15Height: 5'7Weight: 71 KgAppearance: Partner: BkAgumonDigivice Colour: OrangeCrest: ??? Name: Samuel MatsudaAge: 15Height: 5'5Weight: 69 KgAppearance: Partner: BkGabumonDigivice Colour: BlueCrest: ??? Name: Sara YotsubaAge: 14Height: 5'4Weight: 55 KgAppearance: Partner: FanbeemonDigivice Colour: RedCrest: ??? Name: Remington TsubasaAge: 14Height: 5'7Weight: 67 KgAppearance: Partner: DracmonDigivice Colour: GreenCrest: ??? Name: Elizabeth HarutoAge: 14Height: 5'3Weight: 52 KgAppearance: Partner: KeramonDigivice Colour: PurpleCrest: ??? Name: Robert ModoAge: 16Height: 5'11Weight: 76 KgAppearance: Partner: CommandramonDigivice Colour: GrayCrest: ??? Name: Tommy MatsudaAge: 11Height: 4'6Weight: 58 KgAppearance: Partner: DemiDevimonDigivice Colour: YellowCrest: ??? Name: ???Age: ???Height: ???Weight: ???Appearance: ???Partner: ???Digivice Colour: ???Crest: ??? [spoiler=Episode 1: I Wanna go Home! NOW!]“Have you ever wondered if there is a world within another? That is to say a parallel world living in complete harmony to others. Sounds crazy I know, but, once you’ve lived the way I have, crazy is normal and normal is, wait, what’s beyond normal again? It doesn’t matter. Now, intros, I am Tai Chi, Am I joking? Well, yes, I’m joking, my real name is Jack Tamori. I enjoy normal things like sports and video games, and yet, I enjoy bringing fear into people’s hearts. So I’m exactly your average 15 year old. I am what you could call, erm, what were they called now? Oh yeah, a maverick. Btw, I AM NOT short; I am 5’7 feet tall, so there. Now, I am on this stupid summer camp because my parents claim ‘it’ll be good for you’. Yeah right, it’s about as good as a hockey stick where the sun don’t shine, but, at least I’m not alone. I’ve made some new friends whilst here. Like this lone wolf character Samuel Matsuda, he seems to enjoy a slight bit of company, but he seems to neglect most people. There’s also his little bro Tommy, he’s a strange kid. Apparently their mother died about 6 years ago; it seemed to have deeply affected the kid, as sometimes enters a state of terminal despair. There’s also this really hot chick I met called Sara Yotsuba, my god, that girls got the tits I’ve been dreaming about, a nice pair of C’s, oh man…Damn, I just drooled on the page…Oh right, back on track now. There’s also this really smart kid called Elizabeth Haruto, but we call her Lizzie for short. Despite her seemingly innocent appearance, we’re pretty sure one of these days she’ll hack into the pentagon. Now, there’s this other kid whose a real piece of work, he’s called Remington Tsubasa, but we call him Remi. Now, he may seem all dignified and upper crust, not to mention stupid, but that guy sure as hell can spot a bargain when he sees one. He actually managed to budget the camp funds with enough for a trip to the movies three times round. And the seventh person I’ve meet is called Robert Modo, but we shortened it to Rob or Bert, but his character, well, he’s an interesting piece of work I’ll tell you that, as he is totally responsible of everything, yet he somehow manages to loss all control of any situation. Now, I don’t know if it was chance or something, but we were put together for a reason, unfortunately, that reason wasn’t exactly a happy one”. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Jack had finished writing in his diary and looked outside to find it was snowing. “What the hell is going now?” he grumbled. Outside, everyone was playing the snow, but Lizzie was just typing away and Rob was losing it, literally. “This is truly fascinating, I have no idea why, but the world’s climate is currently going out of sync. If this keeps up, life as we know it will cease to exist” Lizzie surmised. “I don’t know life at al, form my point of view, this means a snow day” Remi said. Lizzie sighed. “Ignoramus” she muttered, continuing her work. Jack himself was mowed down by a snowball lobbed at him by Sara. “That was a cheap shout chesty, I mean Sara” Zack corrected, hitting her back. “Could save perv boy” Sam said, hitting him with a snowball as well. “I’ll get you for that and, hey, where’s your little brother at?” “Oh, he’s playing a video game, best not to bother him” Sam remarked, only to get winded by a snowball. “Leave me out of the fun will you?” Tommy said, tossing balls like a machine, hitting everyone. Eventually, everyone, even Lizzie took part into an all out melee, until a truce was called. Everyone was soaking wet from the snow and freezing, but, this was short lived as the snow began to stop. “Well, it was fun while it lasted” Sara said. “What’s that” Tommy asked, pointing up to the sky. Each of them looked up as something was falling from the sky. This something shattered into 7 pieces, each striking the ground near them and covering them in snow and dirt. “Ugh, I just got this new outfit” Remi whined. This was ignored as strange little devices floated up in front of them, each getting grabbed. “What are these things?” Jack asked, poking his one. “An MP3 player?” Rob asked. “No, some kind of device” Lizzie deduced. This was short lived as the ground in the centre began to crack as something was erupting from it, they attempted to run but a large whirlwind issued forth from the crack and captured them. Now, they all screamed something as they were sucked in, but it was garbled, so I’ll clearly write what each person said. Jack shouted “GOD DAMMNIT!” Sam shouted “WHY ME?!” Sara shouted “MY NIPPLES EXPLODE WITH DELIGHT!” (epic last words). Remi shouted “MY NEW OUTFIT!” Lizzie shouted. “THIS IS SCIENTIFICALLY IMPOSSIBLE, HOW COULD A WHIRLWIND ERUPT FROM THE GROUND AND DRAW US IN?” Rob shouted “THIS WAS NOT MY FAULT!” And Tommy shouted “WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!” ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ A voice was speaking to Jack, calling his name. “Jack, wake up, sleepy time over, wakey wakey, eggs and baky”. Jack slowly came too to see a small pink creature in front of him. He screamed and immediately climbed the nearest tree. From there, he could see he was in a densely packed forest. “Don’t be afraid Jack, I’m your friend” it said. Jack looked closely to see it resembled a pink misshapen soccer ball, with two large antennae sticking out of its head and black stripes on its face. “What are you then, friend?” “I’m Koromon, nice to meet ya, so, will you please come down from that tree so I can eat you?” “You’re joking right?” “Yeah”. “Thought so” Jack said and climbed down, picking up his new friend. “Hey, have you seen anyone else land here, that look like me?” “Yeah, I saw about six other people land in this area; we better go find them, before something else does” Koromon warned. “Fabulous” Jack groaned. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ They searched fruitlessly for 15 minutes until Jack found Lizzie; she was leaning on a tree and drooling a little. Some strange little creature was on her head and staring back at them. “Oh great, some little devil thing at her brain” Jack said, getting closer. When he was in range Lizzie let loss a scary noise and Jack and Koro jumped back in fright. She laughed as she grabbed the little critter on her head. “See Tsumemon, I told you I would get someone sooner or later, you just need to be patient” she said. “You win I guess” it said. “Erm, Lizzie? What is that?” Jack asked pointing at the creature. “This is Tsumemon, he’s my new friend here; isn’t he just the cutest?” “Yeah, I guess, but, where are the others?” ”I don’t quite know myself; I’m not exactly familiar with this particular forest” Lizzie said, just oozing sarcasm. Screaming was heard as all four of them saw Rob being chased by something. “HELP! I’M BEING CHASED BY A MISSILE!” he screamed. He zoomed passed them all and a missile zoomed passed as well. “WTF there” Jack said, chasing after him. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ They had found their friend hiding up in a tree. The missile was circling him. “HELP, THIS THING WON’T LEAVE ME ALONE!’ he screamed. ‘Hey, who’re you calling a thing, me name’s Missimon, at your service” it said, and stopped. They got Robert down and he finally made friends with Missi. They all began to explore when a thunderous roar shakes the forest. Rob breaks down and runs whilst Lizzie and Jack investigate, of course, this was stupid as they began to run for their lives as they were then chased by a giant bug. “Man, out of all the times, we get chased by Kuwagamon” Koromon whined. “What’s a Kuwagamon?” Jack asked, dodging branches. “It’s an insectoid Digimon, it is a greater level then us, it is a champion level Digimon”. “And what are you?” “In- training, which is two levels lower, cause it goes baby, in-training, rookie then champion” Tsumemon explained. They eventually found cover in a tree, yeah, a tree. “Wow, if you wanna hide a tree, put it in a forest, if you wanna hide, hide in a tree” Lizzie remarked. “Hey guys, you can come out, Kuwagamon is gone” a voice called. “Sara” Jack said as he got out. She was smiling at them and a small bee thing was on her hat. “You got one too?” Lizzie asked. “Yeah, this is Puroromon, isn’t he cute?” “Yeah an-” Jack was cut off as Rob came screaming in a stopped. “Oh, here you guys are” he said. “Yes, here we are” a new voice said. Sam stepped in with a small creature under his arm; it was an orange ball with a large horn, a white face and black markings. “Pleasant to me you, I am Tsunomon”. “And I am Tokomon” a little marshmallow like creature said. They all look at it and then Tommy comes in. “Tokomon, I told you to wait” he said. “Well, at least we’re all together, except for Remi, where could he be?’” Sam said. Screaming was heard in an east bound direction, they followed it. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Remi himself was at a loss end as he and his little bat-like partner were cornered by the bug. “It’s going to eat me-ee-ee” he screamed. Unfortunately, he wasn’t as the cavalry came in to save him. This went to disaster as they were all cornered on the cliff. “Good going guys” Sara said. “Not my fault” Remi whined. “Well, we may be in-trainings, but let’s go kick his ass” Koromon said. All seven of the little guys went forward, attacking with bubbles. Each of the kids cried as they rushed to their certain doom. “KOROMON! TSUNOMON! PUROROMON! MISSIMON! ALPHAFLAPMON! TSUMEMON! TOKOMON!” they all shouted. Their devices began to glow brightly as each partner was trapped in a column of light. “Koromon, digivolve to BkAgumon. Tsunomon digivolve to BkGabumon. Puroromon digivolve to FanBeemon. Missimon digivolve to Commandramon. AlphaFlapmon digivolve to Dracmon. Tsumemon digivolve to Keramon. Tokomon digivolve to DemiDevimon”. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Each of them looked in awe at their new partners. “They got bigger” Jack remarked. “Time to play, with Pepper Breath” BkAgumon said, firing a green fire ball. “Blue Blaster!” BkGabumon shouted, firing a blue and purple flame. “Gear Stinger!” FanBeemon shouted, pointing it’s butt at Kuwagamon and firing both its stingers. “M16 Assassin!” Commandramon called, launching a barrage of bullets. “Eye of Nightmare!” added Dracmon, firing beams of energy from its palms. “Crazy Giggle!” shouted Keramon, launching energy bullets from its mouth. “Demi Darts!” finished Demidevimon, firing for large darts. All the attacks combined into a massive strike that completely knocked Kuwagamon out. “So now, what are you guys called anyways?” Tommy asked. “We’re Digimon, short for Digital Monsters” they all shouted, hugging their new partners. “That’s gay’ Jack said one happy time was over. Now, despite this win, Kuwagamon had the last laugh as it broke the cliff and they all fell to their doom. “DAMNIT!” Jack shouted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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The Warden Posted March 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2009 I'm going to keep trying. There is no way that I'm not going to let my fic fall into obscurity, NO WAY! [spoiler=Episode 2: Digivolution? What’s That?]“Just perfect, we beat that jerk and now we’re all plummeting towards our probable doom” Sam said upside down. “What do you mean doom? I don’t see anything that can harm us. We’ll just dive into the water” Remi said. ‘Gee Rems, I hate to break it to ya, but sharp jagged rocks usually pertain to certain doom” Lizzie replied. “Not this time friends, for a good soldier is ALWAYS prepared” Commandramon told them. He grabs a small sphere from his belt and chucks it. It immediately inflates into a large inflatable raft that they all climb aboard. ‘Great, how do we avoid certain doom now?” Remi asked. “Leave that to us” Demidevimon told them. He and FanBeemon immediately grab onto the side and pull it away from the cliff until they were on course to the water. They land with a crash and a dog pile. “Ugh, always. Be. Prepared” Commandramon groaned and collapsed on top of Rob. “Indeed” Lizzie said, totally unarmed. “At least we’re alive” Kermon said optimistically. “Alive, and unharmed” DemiDevimon corrected as he landed on Tommy’s head. “Now, let’s get to shore” Dracmon told them. “Hey look, it appears Kufagamon got done in by his own girly trick” Remi said, pointing to the cliff. They all look up to see Kuwagamon falling into the water along with the rest of the cliff that he was on. They all laugh as he hits the water, and then large waves began to rock them, launching them all the way to the beach shore and giving them a salty shower. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- They safely make it to the beach and they just sit on it, brooding over what is happening. Commandramon however was worrying over the fact that his combat raft popped.. “Okay, we have all somehow entered a world different to our own, called the Digital World. It is populated by the Digimon, such as our partners here. For some reason, we were brought here. For what reason, I am unaware of. But it must have something to do with this island and this world. Now, our partners, what exactly did you call the process that made you transform?” Lizzie asked, turning to the Digimon. ‘It’s called digivolution. It is a process where we obtain energy and we become stronger and more powerful. We do not understand why we change shape or name, but we remain the same at heart. The energy we obtained in the battle with Kuwagamon came from you guys, we do not know how, the exact process of digivolution is really foggy” Keramon answered. “Now, from what we were told just then, they used our energy to transform, therefore, they probably could do it again to access what I was told to be the champion level, which is what Kuwagamon is. But, the problem is how exactly? Well, I am not sure, now, are there any questions?” Lizzie asked after summing everything up. Tommy raised his hand anxiously. “Tommy, if this is about the bathroom, I told you, go in the bushes, as there AREN’T any toilets here” Sam told him. Tommy looked down remained silent, until he put his head up again. “I was actually going to ask about that ringing I’m hearing, or am I going mad?” he answered, pointing behind Lizzie to some strange boxes off about 15 meters away. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- They all gasp as there were 7 telephones in front of them. “Is it me, or is this too convenient?” Rob asked, picking up a phone. “Who gives a sheet? We can call home with these. Now everyone grab a phone get dialing” Jack ordered. “I’m sorry, but these phone lines are busy, please call in again in 4,528 years”. “DAMMNIT!”. “We’re sorry, this phone line does not exist, please hang up and never call again”. ‘FOR THE LOVE OF!” “We’re sorry, this line is busy, please try and call later”. “Gotta try again”. “This line is still busy”. “One more time”. "DID YOU HEAR ME?!” “But I-” “IT’S BUSY!” “Sorry ma’am”. Everyone kept trying to call and got nowhere. They all slump down whilst Rob keeps trying to ring. Jack grunts uncomfortably as reality set in. “So, did anyone bring any food, as we haven’t eaten since this morning” Zack asked. “Nope, I brought the medical stuff” Sara said. “I left my bag behind” Sam said. “I brought candy” Tommy said. “Would you want to share that with good ol Remington?” Remi asked. “No need to get creepy Remi, there should be enough for a 2 hour sugar rush” Sara told him. “Hey, I think Rob has the emergency ration bag” Lizzie told them. They all look at Sir Hopeless trying to dial any possible number. “HEY ROB!” Sam shouted. “Quiet, I’m on the phone” he replied. “ROB!” Tommy shouted. “I SAID I’M ON THE PHONE!” Rob shouted back in a high-pitched voice. Commandramon sighs as he drags Rob back over to the group. “Where’s the bag Rob?” DemiDevimon asked. “Erm, I think I dropped it after Kuwagamon separated us”. “No you didn’t, you dropped the bag in the raft and I picked it up after we got to shore” Commandramon told them, taking the bag off his shoulder. “What about you Rems? Do you have anything useful?” Dracmon asked. “Let me see, I believe I have: 2 torches, 5 cans of fire fuel, a compass, but that’s broken, and several medical supplies. All you would ever need for a weeks worth of camping” he told them. “Well, it seems we’re screwed besides Rob. So, let’s get Rob to separate this food, as we’ll do some group bonding to learn more about our partners” Lizzie told them. They managed to leave Rob and Commandramon with the food to split it into 7 equal groups as each of them began to learn about their partners. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “So BkAgumon, you digivolved from Koromon right?” Jack asked. ‘Yes I did, we all digivolved”. “I know, it just seems weird. Before, I could put you on my head, now, you could devour me in one gulp. This world is odd”. “I don’t seem to think so”. “That’s because you live here” Jack replied. Sam and BkGabumon were discussing interesting topics as well. “So BkGabumon, what can you actually do, as I didn’t exactly hear your attack” Sam asked. “I can do the Blue Blaster. You see, I am a sub-species of the Gabumon strain. All rookie Gabumon can use Blue Blaster, the form of the attack differs for each strain, mine is fire based and it is purple and blue”. “I see”. Sara was learning about the wonderful world of honey. “You can do so much with honey, not to mention the wax from the hives. FanBeemon honey is 100% natural, and, it differs in flavours depending on what kind of flower is used. The bravest FanBeemon can make a world class honey from the pollen obtained from a Rosemon” FanBeemon explained. Sara just stared at it. “I honestly don’t give a crap, tell me about you” she said. Lizzie and Keramon got on pretty well. ‘So, you’re telling me that your world is nothing but data? As is your composition. That doesn’t make sense, you don’t seem mechanical in any way”. “That’s because I’m not part of the Metal Empire” Keramon answered. “What’s the Metal Empire?” “They are Digimon who are in anyway mechanical, such as this rookie level one shaped like a gear called Hagurumon” Keramon explained. “Fascinating”. Remi and Dracmon were considering fashion tips for Dracmon. “Now, that pendant that you wear on your chest is pretty, but, I think you need some pep, like a nice shirt, file down those nails of yours, toenails included” Remi said. Dracmon has fallen asleep. Tommy and DemiDevimon were trying to see who could hold their breath the longest. And Rob and Commandramon had finally set up the food after discussing what army life is like. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Jack was the first to come back and he and BkAgumon began to chow down quickly. Rob sighed at them stuffing themselves. “You were supposed to wait for everyone” he told them. “Screw that, we’re hungry” Jack said and continued eating. FanBeemon perks up and looks to the water. “What is it, are you sensing some breed of aquatic flower?” Sara asked. “No, it’s trouble” she replied. FanBeemon was right as a large geyser began tearing the beach apart, including the telephone boxes. “NO! I WAS SO CLOSE! AND YOU BLEW IT UP! DAMN YOU TO HELL!” Rob shouted. The sand began to churn away as a large shell rose from it. A large hideous creature extracted itself from it. “Oh great, first we get attacked by Kuwagamon, no we’re about to get eaten by Shellmon” BkGabumon complained. “Real imaginative name” Sam said sarcastically. “You guys stay back, we’ll fend him off” Commandramon told them and began to fire bullets from his rifle. They had no affect as they bounced of Shellmon’s blubbery hide. He launched Commandramon into the water with a spray from his head, as he turned his attention back to the others. “Pepper Breath” BkAgumon shouted, firing a large green fireball and knocking Shellmon back. “Crazy Giggle” Keramon shouted and failed to launch an attack. “Demi Dart?” DemiDevimon tried, firing a tiny purple sphere. “Gear Stinger” FanBeemon called, releasing it’s stinger, only for it to land a few centimeters away. Shellmon laughs as it swipes them all away, but BkAgumon fires another burning sphere. “Why can’t they use their attacks?” Tommy asked, grabbing DemiDevimon. “Because kid; we simply don’t have the energy to fight, we haven’t eaten at all. BkAgumon can fight because he and jack already pigged out” DemiDevimon told them. “Then it’s up to us Agumon. I’ll distract Shellmon, and you attack it” Jack told him. Jack searches through the wreckage of the phone boxes and finds a sturdy iron bar. “This’ll do”. He begins to swing wildly at Shellmon, only to get caught in a tentacle. “LET ME GO YOU BASTARD. I’M GOING TO SHOVE THIS TENTACLE SO FAR UP YOUR ASS YOU’LL FEEL IT TIL JUNE!” Jack shouted. Bk runs up and tries to attack, only to get squashed by a massive hand. It then turns to the others and blasts them ala Hydro Pump. “Come on Agumon, we’re the only ones that can fight, if we loss now, we’re toast!” Jack shouts, his digivice beginning to glow, as did Agumon beneath Shellmon’s hand. “BkAgumon, digivolve toooooooooo BkGreymon” he shouted. Shellmon was tossed aside and Jack released as a large purple and black dinosaur challenges Shellmon. Shellmon immediately sprays BkGreymon, which had little effect. “Stop it, that tickles” he growled and grabbed Shellmon, picking him up and raising it above his own head. BkGreymon tosses Shellmon into the sky and he takes aim. “Nove Fire!” he shouts, launching a large purple fire ball at Shellmon, rocketing it off toward the far end of the horizon. Everyone cheers as BkGreymon roars and reverts back to his rookie form. Jack hugs him happily. “You totally owned that crustacean Agumon”. “Jack, do you have anything else to eat?” BkAgumon asked. Jack smiles. “You should’ve been called a porkymon. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- After preparing their belongings, the group decides on their next course of action. “Well, We clearly can’t stay here. Shellmon wasn’t destroyed, so it’ll be a matter of time before it returns to this beach again. I say we skedaddle before it comes back” Lizzie tells them. “I agree with Lizzie, we don’t want to have to face that thing again, and I DON’T want this outfit to be ruined again by that cretin” Remi said, Dracmon nodded. “Yeah, what he said”. “Well then, let’s get the hell out of here” Sara said and started walking, everyone else followed her as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toxic-skull Posted March 10, 2009 Report Share Posted March 10, 2009 ok you just keep working on it really good so far ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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