Nukyasu Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 I hope you like my set. I liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arako Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 I´m gonna do what I´ve seen very few people do here, comment on cards, single wise Sartorius is a normal monster with effect like text.war dragon frost/blaze/tornado are sick, 2000 ATK 4 stars that can become immortal in battle if just 1 of the others are on the field.Omega war cannon has alittle too much attack for a 4 star normal monster.motha is an incredible way to make a 8 star monster with enough ATK to give it side effect.Thane should either get -100 ATK or less DEF.Sin also has too much aTK for a 4 star.Robotic War wofl lycan gains WAY to much ATK per monster.Befaler is evil, you cant kill it with attacks at all.The orichalcos has been made before and is as always broken card and for #2...its effect is incorrect, you got most of it right though, you dont need to discard to uses its ant-direct attack effect.world of war MAY be alittle too much ATK per turn.hidding war warrior should either have a cost or limit to what it sets to defense, the was a reason behind limiting level limit area b to 1 per deck, and this card is just more eveil then that.War magic should either have a higher LP cost or a minimum of cards removed in order to activate.war resummoning is simply a monster reborn the needs a discard and si limited to your graveyard(and since its an equip card it lacks the usual revive equip text if I understadn your idea correct) I suggest you maybe make it limited to war monsters or something like that.war withdrawal is alittle strong you gain atleast 2 cards, being a trap soften the power alittle.war mirror is broken, 1 trap and then your monsters are as good as unbeatable.shield block: good effect, but there doesnt exist quick play traps.War Removal is just a copy of sakeretsu armor, no changes at all in the effect.War steal is a snatch steal copy adn snatch steal was banned in real life as it easy to bypass the only bad side it has or even turn it to your advantage.War trap is a direct copy Non-aggression Area.the others look good to me aside from the wording errors here and there, 7.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nukyasu Posted September 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 are the dragons good looking or are they really bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiCardMaker Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 Dragons are good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nukyasu Posted September 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 well okay. Arako gave me 7.2/10 also yami could you rate my cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YamiCardMaker Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 Overall 8.999/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DAJ Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 i only have dragons in my deck any way 10/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcademuffin Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 those normal monsters are far too overpowered, they pretty much relinquish the need for CyDra's (Cyber Dragons to you who dont know) 2400 attack for a normal 4 star is ridiculous , it really should have a drawback, at the moment the strongest normal monster we have is gene-warped warwolf, which is 2000 ATK. Also, how can you destroy the monkey in battle if it kills everything that attacks it? Surely the only things that could kill it are ring of destruction, fissure, shield crush, torrential etc. of course there are more things to destroy it but i'm hardly going to list them all, but what i'm trying to say is it is tremendously hard to kill, at least marshmallon/spirit reaper/gellenduo can be D.D warrior ladied or DD warriored, whereas this just kills them all. Overpowered, methinks. And the card with a card inside, thats just silly. 4/10 all round, but silly effects and ATK drops you a point or two. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROY Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 i would only buy that deck for the war king Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daspletosaurus Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 9/10 war king is overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 Bad cards. War Lord - Sartorius is Normal and has an effect. Lmao, that's not a card-making mistake, it's a RULEBOOK mistake. >_> You need to improve your Card Grammar, and War King is kinda overpowered, although it could be easily wiped off the field with a Sakuretsu/Vortex/etc. but still overpowered. Infinity War Angel is too overpowered and has very bad Card Grammar. Same with Death, it has bad OCG, and did Deity Mitsu give you any right to post his cards in such a VERY BAD way?! War Dragons are all overpowered and have bad OCG. Trithea, Motha, Unicorn, Thane and Sin are all overpowered and the effect monsters out of them have very bad OCG. Befaler is overpowered, and has bad OCG. Infinite is TOO overpowered and another ruining of Deity Mitsu's good cards. World of War is too overpowered. I don't see the other cards, but I'm sure they're all the same low level of these cards. Improve already, you became an Elite. Now, to comment on the silly comments that are making you make more low rated cards like this. i only have dragons in my deck any way 10/10! 10/10? Your cards are worse than that so it's regular you give such high rates for such cards. Overall 8.999/10 I thought you could get better rates, as you're an Elite and well-known member. Now to my rating, Nukyasu... 2/10. You deserve it. NOTE: I'm not doing this to hurt anyone. I've been already helpful and great with a lot of people to improve their card-making skills but really a few were helped like that. Telling these people to improve by force and make them feel really bad about these bad cards will surely encourage them to make better cards and challenge the commenter that they can do better than that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aztex Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 I would buy it if its real but it contains overpowered cards~8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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