Flexh Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 [spoiler=Blurb]If you were looking for a jolly and happy book with happy events,happy people and happy endings you have picked the wrong book if so i would advise you to put this book down this moment.This book includes sad events includig people and mythical creatures and horrible events including dieing blood and wars.When the world our out of there comfort zone how will they react [spoiler=chapter1 What the world is like]It's 3000A.D and people have forgot how to do things for themselves because everthing is high tech and very easy to handle.Cars never touch the ground anymore,Ques don't exist anymore,even now you don't have to carry your shopping! But some people have to make sure that if we are invaded and in the middle of war we have good weapons to use especially guns however swords are still vital weapons to use.Wars are never usally happening because most country's get along with each other.The last thing any country would exspect is war When somebody dies a lot of respect is given to the family of the paticular person to make them feel better.We all know that life is hard when we lose someone close to us but somehow we manage to get it to the back of our minds,well most people some people never get over it.We all then wish that we could see that person again just if it was for 2minutes especcially if you never got to know them.There are hundreds and thousends of cemetary's around the world full of people visiting their fellow family members every day. People also think about estint thing like dinosaurs some people take it stupidly and say a kid killed them by farting heavy gas however others take it serious and say all this over the top things.But really no bdy know what happened [spoiler=Chapter2War is coming]At 9:59pm Saturday5th March 3000A.D the russian's decided to start war with America this was all started by a russian called Ireke Cliff who always enjoy's pain blood and killing because they all can be done with guns and he likes guns more than anything The Americans didn't have a clue that this was coming and the russians were invading at midnight,however one kid called Reece thought that this day was very unlucky so he wouldnt go to sleep.Also the special weapon organisation put the sky lights on and went to sleep.Dong,Dong went every big clock in america as hte clocks struck midnight and the russians were already in there jets on the way to america. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 Awesome job, but could be better :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.arx Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 A little short for one chapter don't you think? Anyway, to make this short, Good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexh Posted February 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 thanks guys how can it improve both get a rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flexh Posted February 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 If anyone wants to be involved in this book just fill out this quick and easy formname:age:country:dead or alive: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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