.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 That's okay! And I loved the chapters as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 That's okay! And I loved the chapters as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 I guess I'll take Celebi then. I changed my story a tiny bit, the part about Miora getting saved by Mew to Celebi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 I guess I'll take Celebi then. I changed my story a tiny bit, the part about Miora getting saved by Mew to Celebi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 I guess I'll take Celebi then. I changed my story a tiny bit, the part about Miora getting saved by Mew to Celebi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Hello, I haven't even read the storyline yet and I would like to join when Chapter 20 opens, or as soon as possible. But before I do, I looked at the list, and unless my eyes are going bad from anger, I don't see Latios and Latias! If they are not a choice, then I'll choose a different one. Sorry, I just hate it when people forget Latios and Latias, it burns my eyes. Name: Wayne RayAge: 16Personality: Energetic, sometimes hyperAppearence(Pic or description): Blonde hair, blue eyes, a gold and orange jacket with blue pants, and a watchBio(Optional): He is the son of the Sunnyshore Gym Leader. He has been around power all his life, and learned a lot about being an engineer. He likes fast and speedy pokemon, and loves electric pokemon. His partner is Luxray raised from a Shinx. He didn't lose his parents, because Latios was clever enough, since he didn't trust most humans, to make himself invisible by blending in with the light.Other Pokemon: Luxray, Altaria, Espeon, Jolteon, FloatzelLegendary Guide(Optional): Latios Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Hello, I haven't even read the storyline yet and I would like to join when Chapter 20 opens, or as soon as possible. But before I do, I looked at the list, and unless my eyes are going bad from anger, I don't see Latios and Latias! If they are not a choice, then I'll choose a different one. Sorry, I just hate it when people forget Latios and Latias, it burns my eyes. Name: Wayne RayAge: 16Personality: Energetic, sometimes hyperAppearence(Pic or description): Blonde hair, blue eyes, a gold and orange jacket with blue pants, and a watchBio(Optional): He is the son of the Sunnyshore Gym Leader. He has been around power all his life, and learned a lot about being an engineer. He likes fast and speedy pokemon, and loves electric pokemon. His partner is Luxray raised from a Shinx. He didn't lose his parents, because Latios was clever enough, since he didn't trust most humans, to make himself invisible by blending in with the light.Other Pokemon: Luxray, Altaria, Espeon, Jolteon, FloatzelLegendary Guide(Optional): Latios Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Hello, I haven't even read the storyline yet and I would like to join when Chapter 20 opens, or as soon as possible. But before I do, I looked at the list, and unless my eyes are going bad from anger, I don't see Latios and Latias! If they are not a choice, then I'll choose a different one. Sorry, I just hate it when people forget Latios and Latias, it burns my eyes. Name: Wayne RayAge: 16Personality: Energetic, sometimes hyperAppearence(Pic or description): Blonde hair, blue eyes, a gold and orange jacket with blue pants, and a watchBio(Optional): He is the son of the Sunnyshore Gym Leader. He has been around power all his life, and learned a lot about being an engineer. He likes fast and speedy pokemon, and loves electric pokemon. His partner is Luxray raised from a Shinx. He didn't lose his parents, because Latios was clever enough, since he didn't trust most humans, to make himself invisible by blending in with the light.Other Pokemon: Luxray, Altaria, Espeon, Jolteon, FloatzelLegendary Guide(Optional): Latios Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 I have shut down submit a character again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Southparkerstan Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Sorry I forgot those guys. I had to recreate the "submit a character" post once cause I accidently deleted it, and I had to rush through. Tell me if you see any more errors. As for the character, Ill accept him when submit a character has re-opened, but you'll need to wait.And thanks for switching to Celebi, Aximil. I hope Omega is as kind as you. You could still use Regigias, if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 So when is the next chapter up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 lol, thanks. But it's fine. I don't really mind if I have Regigigas or not. The Omega did request it first. lol, I guess if I snooze I lose. Can't wait for the next chapters. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Southparkerstan Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 As promised, chapters 14+15 are up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Well, even if I am a fast reader, I managed to get the whole story! Awesome chapters! Wonder when Jonathan will show up with Rayquaza...Oh! Silly me, I forgot! Rayquaza is too big!:oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 In Chapter 15, you used the word "quickly" too much. And, I'm pretty sure Magikarp doesn't grow wings OR get the ability to fly. Even though it becomes part flying type. Other than that, fantastic chapters. I can't wait for when my character shows up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Southparkerstan Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 I can fix the quickly part, but remember, the cloudstone enables wings. Since magikarp evolves into garydos, a flying type, he can ALSO obtain wings with this method. At least in this world. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Alright. Just thought I'd point it out anyway since it said that it only worked on poke'mon that grew wings in the later evolutions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 Nice work on the last 2 chapters.Can't wait to see my character in the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 Me neither. I really like this series, and can't wait to see more chapters. And I thought that you left Latios and Latias out of this because they both have genders, and though it is not held in the game, there are more that one of each, kinda disqualifying them as legends, but they were still added. Whoops, part of my application got cut off, I'll add that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 ~SUPER BUMP!~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Jeez, I missed out on a lot. My computer's kind of broken and I have to fix it, I've read the chapters, though it seemed like I Skimmed it more than read it, They're all good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 lol, yep. Fantastic chapters. The main reason I get on here now is to see if the story is continued. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duckmasta2020 Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 I can't wait to read the next chapters please keep up the fantastic work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Southparkerstan Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Sorry this is taking so long. I've been busy with school. I'll have the next chapter up by tomorrow at the latest. Omega, would you mind if I changed john spear's legend to Mew? I asked in an earlier post, so you must have just missed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Well, isn't it your fan-fic? You could do whatever you want with our characters. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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