EocDragon Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 K, decreased the shadow line behind the antennae. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 though ive been making splices since i joined ycmive lost my touch and wish to join again.Ive made 356but only about 40 or 65 of them were great [varied on opinion]here is my most recentnumber 356 You are in. ^_^There are a lot' date=' and I mean A LOT of unrecolored borders all over the place.The top of the head being a different color than the snout is a cool idea. In order to make it work, you need to add more shading on the top part of the head. (Be sure to look where the light source is!)The border along the bottom of the shell is iffy. Make it look like it's rounded off and smooth on the bottom of the shell.[/quote']yea, i haven't done the borders on most of my splices[thats why most of them fail]the shading in the head i have trouble with alot of times.and on the shell, how would i round it. and for the light source...i never understood that.v.2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 This may be late...canz i be a teacher XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 did a recolor gonna work on the border...forgot about it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Animosity Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 Here are my newest splices, tell me what I can improve on, and what I did wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 134 of my earliest splices like 40 or so are good, but most suck, like i said didn't do the borders on alot of them.linkshttp://s151.photobucket.com/albums/s128/axleflame666/full%20splices/?action=view¤t=1-85.pnghttp://s151.photobucket.com/albums/s128/axleflame666/full%20splices/?action=view¤t=186-134.png Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Archon Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 so like this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 @ Kaiser Axle: On your Hippopotas splice, erase the red part you just added under the eyes. On the red part above the eyes, make the red lighter, seeing as how the light source is right above the splice.There are still unrecolored borders all over. Recolor every pixel that is sand colored.Rounding the shell might be hard, but just see what you can do to make the bottom of the shell look smoother. On the Beedrill splice, you need to recolor the borders on the arm spikes. There are a lot of purple borders on them. In your showcase on Photobucket, none of them are very good, sorry to say. You could definitely use some teaching. @ Neowolf: If you can tell me what is wrong with Eocdragon's newest splice. @ Animosity: Very nice! They are all good! If anything, could you make the tufts of hair on their heads connect with their skulls a bit more? ^_^ @ x0oo0: It still looks 2-D. Fool around with the shading on the tail and try to make it look 3-D. My advice does not seem to be working. ^_^ I think I covered everyone! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 What do you mean is wrong with it? Except maybe reduce some shadow on the claws... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Archon Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 how about this??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 What do you mean is wrong with it? Except maybe reduce some shadow on the claws... Wait until Neowolf comments on it. I see a glaring mistake that, hopefully, Neowolf will be able to spot. @ x0oo0: Just remove the second tail. It looks unnatural and it's causing some problems.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Archon Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 ok i got rid of it: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 Well, whatever it was, it was probably fixed in this version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 ok i got rid of it: That looks much better. ^_^Now, can you make the eyes any smaller? @ Eocdragon: Nope, still there. You'll just have to wait for Neowolf. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 Please don't say its the eye. Cause I can't figure out how to make it look better without doing a lot of scratching. Edit: I think I know what it is. I'll post the fix incase you still want him to find it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Animosity Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 I made a recoloring tut. I'm not sure if it is good. But if you like it fill free to put it on the club page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 I made a recoloring tut. I'm not sure if it is good. But if you like it fill free to put it on the club page. Hmm, not very good. The pics are a bit blurry and there are some other problems.I'll make a recoloring tutorial soon. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Animosity Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 Yeah, it came out weird... hmm, I don't understand... GRRRR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 @ Kaiser Axle: On your Hippopotas splice' date=' erase the red part you just added under the eyes. On the red part above the eyes, make the red lighter, seeing as how the light source is right above the splice.There are still unrecolored borders all over. Recolor every pixel that is sand colored.Rounding the shell might be hard, but just see what you can do to make the bottom of the shell look smoother. On the Beedrill splice, you need to recolor the borders on the arm spikes. There are a lot of purple borders on them. In your showcase on Photobucket, none of them are very good, sorry to say. You could definitely use some teaching. [/quote']@splice: yea i probably should switch the shades on the head to the other way around for the light source.@recolor the purple borders on the beedril were purposely put there. I recolored the grey borders it originally had[due to the shade of grey originally on the stripes] to that.@showcaseGood to know that atleast half of my splices suck. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 @ Kaiser Axle: On your Hippopotas splice' date=' erase the red part you just added under the eyes. On the red part above the eyes, make the red lighter, seeing as how the light source is right above the splice.There are still unrecolored borders all over. Recolor every pixel that is sand colored.Rounding the shell might be hard, but just see what you can do to make the bottom of the shell look smoother. On the Beedrill splice, you need to recolor the borders on the arm spikes. There are a lot of purple borders on them. In your showcase on Photobucket, none of them are very good, sorry to say. You could definitely use some teaching. [/quote']@splice: yea i probably should switch the shades on the head to the other way around for the light source.@recolor the purple borders on the beedril were purposely put there. I recolored the grey borders it originally had[due to the shade of grey originally on the stripes] to that.@showcaseGood to know that atleast half of my splices suck. Thanks. @ Recolor: Not a good idea. Change the purple and grey borders on the spikes to dark yellow. @ Showcase: I didn't mean it like that...They just need some work is all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 @ Kaiser Axle: On your Hippopotas splice' date=' erase the red part you just added under the eyes. On the red part above the eyes, make the red lighter, seeing as how the light source is right above the splice.There are still unrecolored borders all over. Recolor every pixel that is sand colored.Rounding the shell might be hard, but just see what you can do to make the bottom of the shell look smoother. On the Beedrill splice, you need to recolor the borders on the arm spikes. There are a lot of purple borders on them. In your showcase on Photobucket, none of them are very good, sorry to say. You could definitely use some teaching. [/quote']@splice: yea i probably should switch the shades on the head to the other way around for the light source.@recolor the purple borders on the beedril were purposely put there. I recolored the grey borders it originally had[due to the shade of grey originally on the stripes] to that.@showcaseGood to know that atleast half of my splices suck. Thanks. @ Recolor: Not a good idea. Change the purple and grey borders on the spikes to dark yellow. @ Showcase: I didn't mean it like that...They just need some work is all.@Showcase....sure ya didn'tDon't really matter to me that much, after like number 10 i got bored with it, only a certain amount of combos i can really do. Splicing just got boring and i just starting mixing and matching. Well, im gonna try a bit more, any ideas on what pokemon i should do/redo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 Rayquaza + Bayleaf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
csaman3 Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 Hello all, I am showcasing ALL my splices for the first time....ever.Now, I know that some are good and some aren't, but I don't care.I take all CONSTRUCTIVE criticism respectfully, and will try to follow the criticism as thouroughly as my abilities will allow. Without further adieu, here they are....http://s675.photobucket.com/albums/vv118/csasplicer/?action=view¤t=pokemonsplices.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavour Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 Could I join? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 Hello all' date=' I am showcasing ALL my splices for the first time....ever.Now, I know that some are good and some aren't, but I don't care.I take all CONSTRUCTIVE criticism respectfully, and will try to follow the criticism as thouroughly as my abilities will allow. Without further adieu, here they are....http://s675.photobucket.com/albums/vv118/csasplicer/?action=view¤t=pokemonsplices.jpg[/quote'] Your problem is saving all of them as .jpg. You will definitely need to redo them. @ Flavour: Yes, you may join! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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