El Beasto Perezoso Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 Quiero ser un maestro.(I would like to be a teacher.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 Quiero ser un maestro.(I would like to be a teacher.) Alright' date=' IF you tell me what I did wrong on this splice. [img']http://i39.tinypic.com/2upxwfn.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twin_Souls Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 Quiero ser un maestro.(I would like to be a teacher.) Alright' date=' IF you tell me what I did wrong on this splice. [img']http://i39.tinypic.com/2upxwfn.png[/img] i can see that i think also how is this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 Quiero ser un maestro.(I would like to be a teacher.) Alright' date=' IF you tell me what I did wrong on this splice. [img']http://i39.tinypic.com/2upxwfn.png[/img] i can see that i think also how is this Well, you have a lot of brown pixels near the eye, the neck and the little plate thing on the chest. Also, there are some random blue pixels on the back near where the dress meets the body. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 Much better! You have cut off a little of the Charizard tail near the body.I'd love to go into detail' date=' but I have to go somewhere. I hope one of our teachers comes on. ^_^[/quote']Yes! My first good splices. I'll start another right away.Here's a new splice. Of what I can see, the right eye has some red. The border of the "nut" is green. So you need to fix that. By the neck to the right there is an odd kind of orange above the right feather which looks awkward against the shading. Yea, that was my first time critiquing. ^__^' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 Much better! You have cut off a little of the Charizard tail near the body.I'd love to go into detail' date=' but I have to go somewhere. I hope one of our teachers comes on. ^_^[/quote']Yes! My first good splices. I'll start another right away.Here's a new splice. Of what I can see, the right eye has some red. The border of the "nut" is green. So you need to fix that. By the neck to the right there is an odd kind of orange above the right feather which looks awkward against the shading. Yea, that was my first time critiquing. ^__^' Hm, yeah. I'm sorry not now. Hone your skills at critiquing and I'll let you be a teacher. ^_^ There are a lot of green and grey borders from the original Seedot, on the cap, under the eyes. Also, the red on the eyes, (the shading) is a bit too dark.Over all, you need to recolor your borders. Yes, all of the borders!So keep that in mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Southparkerstan Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 Borders have been edited. Thanks for visiting my showcase, Raelen. But i'll get more experience before posting there again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Culpa Posted February 19, 2009 Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 There is still the matter of the orange from the top of the "acorn" fading comic-style into the eye. Comic-Style Coloring - instead of fittting the shape, the coloring does not fit, but slides down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 Also, you still have the green borders on the cap. Also, about my shading tutorial, do you think there is something I missed related to shading? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Beasto Perezoso Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 Quiero ser un maestro.(I would like to be a teacher.) Alright' date=' IF you tell me what I did wrong on this splice. [img']http://i39.tinypic.com/2upxwfn.png[/img] There is no border between the rocks on his forehead and the fur, so they completly interupt each other and make it look bad. Also some pixels on his side that are too dark and come frome a light border colr and the rocks look like they're about to fall off his head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 I would like to join. How is this one? I know I left the pallete thingy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 You may join. but that splice is really good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 Thank you, its my first one. I spent about an hour making sure everything looked right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 Quiero ser un maestro.(I would like to be a teacher.) Alright' date=' IF you tell me what I did wrong on this splice. [img']http://i39.tinypic.com/2upxwfn.png[/img] There is no border between the rocks on his forehead and the fur, so they completly interupt each other and make it look bad. Also some pixels on his side that are too dark and come frome a light border colr and the rocks look like they're about to fall off his head. Alright, you're in. I'm surprised you didn't comment on the random grey pixel on the left near the rocks. ^_^ And EocDragon, you are in. Nice splice too!If there's anything I can say, is that I think the dark purple on the claws is too dark. Look at the front of the Forretress. It's very bright! I think you could make the claws a little brighter as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 How's this?I reduced the amount of darker color on the claws and added some lighter color to the edges. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 How's this?I reduced the amount of darker color on the claws and added some lighter color to the edges. I think that is better. Good job! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 K thank you One more for tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 K thank you One more for tonight Nice! I would like to see a bit more brown, however.Maybe make some of Pineco brown and not all green? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 Ok, I made the bottom parts brown, added a little lighter green on the left leg, and made sure the tree matched the other colors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 that looks really good.I don't see any border issues.You have potential ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 Thank you. One more for now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dorian001 Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 Can i join Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 I made some changes to the Pineco/Torterra/Alakazam splice. Do you think it looks better or worse? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted February 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 Can i join @Dorian: Sure. It's good but a bit simple. Also, you cut off a bit of Darkrai's head thing. @EocDragon: Your new on is quite simple. It's kinda meh.Also, since the light source of Voltorb is near the top-left, I think the left magnet should kin of cast a shadow on the left of Voltorb. It's a bit too bright there. You understand what I'm saying? The left magnet should cast a shadow.Also, I personally love the Pineco splice. It looks like he literally uprooted himself from the ground!One thing, however. On the Pineco body, it's kind of bright. I think, since it has a dang tree growing out of his head, the Pineco body should be a bit darker.About the new changes, make the eyebrows and moustache a mossy green. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 I knew the voltorb one wasn't so good. I noticed the problem with the magnet right after I posted it. Oh well. I think I got the pineco one right this time. I reduced the amount of highlights and darkened the mustache and eyebrows. Edit: Just so it doesn't bother me, I'm also going to post the fixed voltorb splice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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