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Alright adding you to the list. ^_^

 

As for your splices, most of them are saved as .jpg (Splices 1, 2, 4, 6, and your 2 most recent ones are saved as .jpg)

You must always, always must remember to save as .png, or your splices will be ruined.

On the first one, the left hand is weird since it's placed upside-down.

On your second, you need to observe where the light source is. You need to correct the shading appropriately.

On the third, you saved as .png!! Good job! You do have some un-recolored borders that you need to recolor in the colors of Drapion. Again, notice the light source and where it would shine on the legs.

On the fourth, the left leg does not mach any of the others. You should either make the legs all Tropius or all Torterra.

Your fifth, I really like! The star is placed strangely, however, so you should change that. Also, you did save as .png! ^_^

Your sixth is a cliché idea. You saved as .jpg, not a good thing, and you have a lot of un-recolored borders. I would recommend a complete do over. Also, again, fix your shading. (I'll be coming out with a tutorial sometime soon, I imagine.)

Your seventh is a good idea. However, the left arm is upside-down. You need to change that. It looks wrong. And also, don't connect the left arm to the body. Instead, place the body over the armto make it look realistic.

As for your new ones, I like the idea of the first one better (the one with the Grumpig body) and the execution is better as well. (I would suggest doing it over and save as .png. Just toss the other version of it.)

Keep it up! And I'm glad you want to be a member. I think we can help you. ^_^

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any thing wrong with this 1

 

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Yay! You saved as .png! ^_^

Interesting idea you using green for the wings. If you want to do green wings, you need to recolor the grey borders, dark green. Also, the shaded parts on the clouds may be too dark. Try to find a shade in between. Another thing, you accidentally cut off the top of the red rose bouquet.

You're getting better!

 

Whitey, yes, you may join. ^_^

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Okay...

 

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electrode + golem + golbat

 

Electrode Body' date=' Golem Legs, Golbat Wings

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You're missing a lot of borders on the wings.

Also, maybe recolor the blue part of Electrode?

 

Yes, much of the wings borders are missing. I might suggest getting a sprite from the LeafGreen/FireRed Sprites if bad in the Diamond/Pearl Sprites.

 

Also, try to make the colors match. I know you tried, but the Electrode is a bad color. Maybe try purple along with the wings?

 

Umm, also, work on the feet placement, it is a little choppy.

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