PrometheusMFD Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 The arms aren't at a good angleTry scratching one, see what happensYou need to work on the shading around the horn The Recolor is simple but good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
csaman3 Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 @RandomChill out, Raelen will deem you worthy or not when he/she comes on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elemental Hero Shadow Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 here's the new sheet! i loves the umbreon/espeon one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Here, I made a Random Splice. I moved Lucario's arm down so it appears on his knee. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 @ Elemental Hero ShadowYour various eeveelution splices are very good, but most of your other splices need work. Most of them look like copy/paste + recolors and some of them have parts that don't go together. I'm going to go over the ones that need the most help. Linoone/Alakazam just doesn't work. The pokemon face at different angles, and it doesnt even look like you made an efort to reshade the mustache and ears. Drapion/Pinser is basically a recolor with a pair of pinser horns that are too big for the face. Plus, you randomly took away the lines on the back. I don't even know what to say about the multisplice at the end. It looks like an unorganized jumble that appears lopsided. Don't think that your bad; you have a lot of very good splices as well. Look at what you did right and what you did wrong, and learn from it. Edit: @ Random Xing If your going to move parts, you need to make sure that it still looks connected. They arm needs to be scratched a bit to make it look connected. I would also move the Giratina arms down to where the arm meets the shoulder and recolor the splice to make the arm tips and the skin match. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 I'll try being helpful. If you mind teachers, I'll delete.@Random: You should fix the lightning/shading on the wings/ w/e.Find it's light source. You do see one leg is cut off, don't you?Or, do you o.O IDK. Too simple, and that only thing you did made it worse.Sorreh.The repose of the arm also needs some shading and bordering help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 I'll try being helpful. If you mind teachers' date=' I'll delete.@Random: You should fix the lightning/shading on the wings/ w/e.Find it's light source. You do see one leg is cut off, don't you?Or, do you o.O IDK. Too simple, and that only thing you did made it worse.Sorreh.The repose of the arm also needs some shading and bordering help.[/quote'] Ok, whatever. The legs SUPPOSED TO BE LIKE THAT Original Sprite Edit: I've done a Recolor and edited the Lucario Lucario Magby Recolor, with a Mareep Tail, and blue nail polish o.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Stoner-™ Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 [spoiler=Eevee + Houndoom ( Zombie Recolor )] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elemental Hero Shadow Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 @ Elemental Hero ShadowYour various eeveelution splices are very good' date=' but most of your other splices need work. Most of them look like copy/paste + recolors and some of them have parts that don't go together.[/quote'] That's what a random splice generator will do for ya. I did what I could. I don't even know what to say about the multisplice at the end. It looks like an unorganized jumble that appears lopsided. That was a combination of all final evolution fossils. It isn't lopsided. Don't think that your bad; you have a lot of very good splices as well. Look at what you did right and what you did wrong' date=' and learn from it.[/quote'] Well, thank you. Btw, any of them you particularily like? This question is for everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Commenting today made me feel like splicing, but I didn't know what to splice... So I scratched a toaster rotom instead. Enjoy BTW Random Xing, the lucario splice needs some shading on the giratina arms, and the (our) right arm is missing a small border patch. Have the shadow run down the right side of the arms instead of being in one spot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 [spoiler=Eevee + Houndoom ( Zombie Recolor )] The border is too think and the wrong color. It should be darker. In fact, the whole splice looks kinda green..Fix the horns.Try a do-over. @ Eoc: Hey, not bad! I like it! ^_^The eyes are a bit lopsided. Move the mouth more to the left. (Our left) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted March 29, 2009 Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 well i tried my hand at a revamp. little hard on the charmander one because the new charmander sprites have like 5 base colors while the original has like 3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SquirtlemanRules Posted March 29, 2009 Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 can I atleast tutor my friend gamer536? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 well i tried my hand at a revamp. little hard on the charmander one because the new charmander sprites have like 5 base colors while the original has like 3. Not very good.. Then again, I don't know much at all about revamps & devamps and all that stuff..I think if you PM Twisted or Zeroshot, they can be of more assistance. @ Squirtleman: Yes, you may. And you might tell him to be a bit more active.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted March 29, 2009 Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 well i tried my hand at a revamp. little hard on the charmander one because the new charmander sprites have like 5 base colors while the original has like 3. Not very good.. Then again' date=' I don't know much at all about revamps & devamps and all that stuff..I think if you PM Twisted or Zeroshot, they can be of more assistance. @ Squirtleman: Yes, you may. And you might tell him to be a bit more active..[/quote'] will do. oh, and im working on a new splice.ghastly and onyx. not working out to well but...ill get it one of these times Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SquirtlemanRules Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 cant go on cpu!I'm on wii! I cant splice :-( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 cant go on cpu!I'm on wii! I cant splice :-( Thaynx for the update??Next time, I will consider a post like that spam. @ Kaiser: Sounds like a cool combo! Work on it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SquirtlemanRules Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 cant go on cpu!I'm on wii! I cant splice :-( Thaynx for the update??Next time' date=' I will consider a post like that spam. @ Kaiser: Sounds like a cool combo! Work on it![/quote'] srry I just didn't want to get kicked out 4 not splicing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 cant go on cpu!I'm on wii! I cant splice :-( Thaynx for the update??Next time' date=' I will consider a post like that spam. @ Kaiser: Sounds like a cool combo! Work on it![/quote'] srry I just didn't want to get kicked out 4 not splicing. Next time, PM me. Plus, you were basically just saying what you were doing at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SquirtlemanRules Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 cant go on cpu!I'm on wii! I cant splice :-( Thaynx for the update??Next time' date=' I will consider a post like that spam. @ Kaiser: Sounds like a cool combo! Work on it![/quote'] srry I just didn't want to get kicked out 4 not splicing. Next time, PM me. Plus, you were basically just saying what you were doing at the moment. will do!+ I will make sure gamer536 logs in tomorrow! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 cant go on cpu!I'm on wii! I cant splice :-( Thaynx for the update??Next time' date=' I will consider a post like that spam. @ Kaiser: Sounds like a cool combo! Work on it![/quote'] srry I just didn't want to get kicked out 4 not splicing. Next time, PM me. Plus, you were basically just saying what you were doing at the moment. will do!+ I will make sure gamer536 logs in tomorrow! Great! The more activity, the better! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 Um, yeah.. THE MORE ACTIVITY, THE BETTER!!! (Echo, echo, echo, echo..) ~BUMP~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 Sorry, I have been getting distracted by finals.Anyhow, ...Anyone need help with splicing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 Sorry' date=' I have been getting distracted by finals.Anyhow, ...Anyone need help with splicing?[/quote'] That's what I would like to find out.. -_-' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted March 31, 2009 Report Share Posted March 31, 2009 Ok, well I decided to finally finish that toaster Rotom. I decided it didn't look right as just a box, so I added little legs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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