Flavour Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Could I have a splice to do please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 I want to be a student/ splicer. I suck balls now' date=' and I need to get better2 splices? Here:[img']http://i41.tinypic.com/29uwrhj.png[/img] You are in. The only things: The head should cast a shadow on the backpack and you also erased a little bit of the border where the backpack meets the tail. The yellow hair is kinda random. ^_^ On your sprite, it's small. It's good, but small! @ Southparkerstan: You need to get rid of all of the darkest shading color! Every single bit of it! It's just too dark. @ Flavour: I'd like for you to come up with it. Use your imagination. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 1) Border is awkward2) Arm is too far forward' date=' does not match placement of "left" arm3) Transition of colors does not follow pokemon shape. Shading is bad4) Leg was just copy/pasted5) Border not recolored6) Confusing. Does not match with head7) Unrecolored pixelBorders on feet need recolored That is all I saw[/quote'] So is this to par? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 1) Border is awkward2) Arm is too far forward' date=' does not match placement of "left" arm3) Transition of colors does not follow pokemon shape. Shading is bad4) Leg was just copy/pasted5) Border not recolored6) Confusing. Does not match with head7) Unrecolored pixelBorders on feet need recolored That is all I saw[/quote'] So is this to par? Yes, that's all I can see! Can you maybe recommend how he can fix #4? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Raelen, yes Raelen! o_o\ /| /\ New splice, Poke Transport(Yes, flower pokeh is random): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Raelen' date=' yes Raelen! o_o\ /| /\ New splice, Poke Transport(Yes, flower pokeh is random):[img']http://i41.tinypic.com/5plj0n.png[/img] Lol, you don't need to salute. ^_^ Not only are the flower "pokeh" random, but the coloring is random. Before I give any C&C, tell me what your thinking was behind this splice. Are there good reasons behind the coloring and the placing of the Pokemon parts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 The 2 lil' ones on the shoulder were supposed like little hands. I didn't like it, but I notice now I uploaded the version I didn't liek. The big arms are also messed up. Coloring was supposed to be something liek a plane.-Too many, way too many black pixels-I lost fingers on big hands =[ Damn. I didn't have to enter this. I teach myself =] Oh wellEasy splice to re-begin life? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 The 2 lil' ones on the shoulder were supposed like little hands. I didn't like it' date=' but I notice now I uploaded the version I didn't liek. The big arms are also messed up. Coloring was supposed to be something liek a plane.-Too many, way too many black pixels-I lost fingers on big hands =[ Damn. I didn't have to enter this. I teach myself ='] Oh wellEasy splice to re-begin life? You critique yourself well!I was just wondering if there was actually form behind your madness. ^_^ Try... Bellossom + Kakuna Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 I was just bored to death =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 I was just bored to death =) Lol, I could tell. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 1) Border is awkward2) Arm is too far forward' date=' does not match placement of "left" arm3) Transition of colors does not follow pokemon shape. Shading is bad4) Leg was just copy/pasted5) Border not recolored6) Confusing. Does not match with head7) Unrecolored pixelBorders on feet need recolored That is all I saw[/quote'] So is this to par? Yes, that's all I can see! Can you maybe recommend how he can fix #4? Easy, just create the transition like the leg is coming out of the fluff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Southparkerstan Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Here it is with a slightly lighter shade, but any lighter and the difference between the dark and the medium-bright is impossible to see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Here it is with a slightly lighter shade' date=' but any lighter and the difference between the dark and the medium-bright is impossible to see.[img']http://i44.tinypic.com/2h51xlc.png[/img] I still think you should just use the second darkest blue. I should be fine without the darkest blue as the shading. Let's just see how it looks that way.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Southparkerstan Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 Here it is with no dark shading Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 Here it is with no dark shading Much better! Maybe make the shading on the balloon tie thing a little lighter. Also, you have a stray pixel near the right glove (Our right)It's on the outside of the border of the hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 The shading is a little thick on the (our) left hand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
csaman3 Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 Raelen, I am sorry i have been inactive forever, but I was at my friend's house for the weekend, and there is no comp. at his house. I am sorry, and I would love to remain a member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2009 Raelen' date=' I am sorry i have been inactive forever, but I was at my friend's house for the weekend, and there is no comp. at his house. I am sorry, and I would love to remain a member[/quote'] Okay, I'll let you back in. (Being at your friend's house for the weekend is a very lame excuse seeing as how I gave sufficient warning for an entire week.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 ~coughbumpcough~ Here's a new recolor of mine! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EocDragon Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Is that the new Platinum sprite? Anyway, why did you only recolor 1 arm orange? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Is that the new Platinum sprite? Anyway' date=' why did you only recolor 1 arm orange?[/quote'] No, it's the D/P sprite. Those are the only ones I use. (Thus far..) I only colored one arm for creative reasons. It would've been to symetrical otherwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SquirtlemanRules Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 I was a member of the pokemon splicers club until my computer didn't work for a while I tried to go on my friends computes but they wouldn't let me they all said "You were probably already kicked out" I beleaved them for a while. I came back to see if I was kicked out (which I was) and I found out that you must graduate from this place. Do I have to go through this or can I just skip it since I was a member already? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 I was a member of the pokemon splicers club until my computer didn't work for a while I tried to go on my friends computes but they wouldn't let me they all said "You were probably already kicked out" I beleaved them for a while. I came back to see if I was kicked out (which I was) and I found out that you must graduate from this place. Do I have to go through this or can I just skip it since I was a member already? Well, show me an example of your splices and I will decide if you can join the club. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
csaman3 Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 I am currenlty working on a sprite, I will post it as soon as I am finished.Raelen, I am letting you know that I will be inactive due to school (but I really want to remain a member). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 I am currenlty working on a sprite' date=' I will post it as soon as I am finished.Raelen, I am letting you know that I will be inactive due to school (but I really want to remain a member).[/quote'] Hm, okay.. I will keep that in mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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