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Regi-Ho: Ew. You for got to add and recolor borders on the wings, not to mention all of the white spots on the wings. I'd do this one over.

 

Luxceus: You have shading problems on the head of the first one, and color problems on the pelt and around the eyes of the 2nd one. I can't really decide which is better or worse. That's not really what matters anyway..

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Hey Raelen' date=' if none of your teachers show up... can I perhaps be a teacher? I'm bored and I'm active a lot...

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I was thinking the same thing.

You are in IF you can tell me what I did wrong on this splice.

 

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Almost all the borders are black. The tail needs reshading. I don't know if you meant to or not but the random darker spot on the forehead that replaced the lighter shading looks odd and messes up the shading effect. There is a spot near the foot that is entirely black. Instead of using the three shades of gray, you instead ditched the middle shade in all but one spot and used the lightest shade of the black fur for the dark gray, which is weird, considering its a bluish color. You also moved the shades on the side fur one down in darkness, but kept the tail the origional shade, which makes the tail seemed miscolored.

 

I think that's everything

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Hey Raelen' date=' if none of your teachers show up... can I perhaps be a teacher? I'm bored and I'm active a lot...

[/quote']

 

I was thinking the same thing.

You are in IF you can tell me what I did wrong on this splice.

 

rsejb8.png

 

Almost all the borders are black. The tail needs reshading. I don't know if you meant to or not but the random darker spot on the forehead that replaced the lighter shading looks odd and messes up the shading effect. There is a spot near the foot that is entirely black. Instead of using the three shades of gray, you instead ditched the middle shade in all but one spot and used the lightest shade of the black fur for the dark gray, which is weird, considering its a bluish color. You also moved the shades on the side fur one down in darkness, but kept the tail the origional shade, which makes the tail seemed miscolored.

 

I think that's everything

 

Wonderful! You are now a teacher!! ^_^

 

@ Southparkerstan: Drifloon + Polywrath

 

@ csaman3: Fix the nose. ^_^

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The splice is simple, but since your intent was to learn reshade, its ok.

 

You need to work a little bit on reshading. Because the lightsource is coming from the top left, there should be a brighter edged on the top area of the arm, while the bottom edge should be darker. The right fist needs to be reshaded as well, with the lighter area on the left side, mostly near the top.

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Here you are. It's probably not very good' date=' but this is my first reshade.

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The dark shade is too dark. Fix that.

 

@ Flavour: Yes, you are in again. But please, remain more active..

 

@ Prometheus: Hmm.. Okay. For a start, could you give C&C on E-Hero Shadow's splices?

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1) Border is awkward

2) Arm is too far forward, does not match placement of "left" arm

3) Transition of colors does not follow pokemon shape. Shading is bad

4) Leg was just copy/pasted

5) Border not recolored

6) Confusing. Does not match with head

7) Unrecolored pixel

Borders on feet need recolored

 

That is all I saw

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