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Hey' date=' remember me? I'm back with a simple recolor

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Not that good. The shades of purple are too different from each other. One is like neon purple, another is a hybrid between red and purple, and there are other different shades of purple. The colors are too different.

There are also some light parts on the dark part of the tail, which completely goes against the light source. Also, there seems to be a small dark purple line where the lighter purple goes to the darker part of the tail. You do not need that.

It needs some work.

 

Ok, I'll fix it up by next Sunday. I've been spending way too much time on the computer, so I need to take a break from this site for a week and have a life. I know it might look as if I'm blowing off this school, this being my second break this month, but I realy like splicing so I'll participate much more after I rest my eyes for the week.

I hope you understand. :)

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Nice job on the recoloring!

The only problems I can spot are the joints between the pruple "hair" and Suicune's head dealy.

Try tweaking those pixels slightly until the joints flow corrctly from the base to the forehead.

As for the hair' date=' make those pixels a shade darker, as to cut off the flow between body and hair.

ive got a splice that I know needs work:

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Colors are not flowing well between head and grass/hair.

There is no flow or border, like it can't decide what it wants to be: Hair or part of the forehead.

As for the tail, go for a shade darker on certain things, it seems like it goes dark tail to very light things on the end.

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hows about this:

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Where is the light source? (Look at the lightest spot on Charmeleon's body. Now change the shading of the leaves and on the tail.

 

@ Eoc: Why the fire? Could you put something more bug-like on the end of the tail? The shading is fine. Maybe a bit to vivid, but I think that's good. Also, add some shading to the purple rings on the tail.

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TPSSS-1.png

 

Nice job on the recoloring!

The only problems I can spot are the joints between the pruple "hair" and Suicune's head dealy.

Try tweaking those pixels slightly until the joints flow corrctly from the base to the forehead.

As for the hair' date=' make those pixels a shade darker, as to cut off the flow between body and hair.

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Could you give an example? Sorry...

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TPSSS-1.png

 

Nice job on the recoloring!

The only problems I can spot are the joints between the pruple "hair" and Suicune's head dealy.

Try tweaking those pixels slightly until the joints flow corrctly from the base to the forehead.

As for the hair' date=' make those pixels a shade darker, as to cut off the flow between body and hair.

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Could you give an example? Sorry...

 

 

It's no fun if I just do it for you, so here's some zoomed in shots pin pointing the issues.:

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The pixels in the first one should be destroyed so that the head dealy joins at the fore head, not half way down. Even if you do want it to join there, you will still need to make it flow a little better.

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In this one, you should make the boxed pixels a shade darker as to make the hair be cut off from the head.

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TPSSS-1.png

 

Nice job on the recoloring!

The only problems I can spot are the joints between the pruple "hair" and Suicune's head dealy.

Try tweaking those pixels slightly until the joints flow corrctly from the base to the forehead.

As for the hair' date=' make those pixels a shade darker, as to cut off the flow between body and hair.

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Could you give an example? Sorry...

 

Make shading on the hair near the head a shade darker.

Also, make the base of Suicune's head thing a bit thicker.

I think that's what he means...

 

@ ~Twisted~:

 

On the Drifblim one, put some more borders on the grey things above the eyes. You make a bit of border, but it's not dark enough. Speaking of the eye, you should at least have 2 shades of red in the eye. It looks too monotone. The left hand (Our left) should cast a shadow on the red skirt, don't you think?

 

On the Dialga one, change the shading on the back fin thing. After all, the light source of the Corsola is coming from the left..

 

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k i found the stray pixels hows it now oh and is the brown spot on the top or bottom of the muzzel? or both spots?

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Great job on the stray pixels! And now the brown spot isn't there, so you must've taken care of it.

Something I just found, a little above his hind leg, there is a white pixel between the leg and the fur.

I think it's about done, unless one of our teachers has any advice! ^_^

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