.Requiem Posted March 12, 2009 Report Share Posted March 12, 2009 Well okay then I will format the latest chapter to something then PM it to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted April 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 Well I had a big case of Writer's Block. But this is all I can salvage out of all of it. [spoiler= Chapter 9: Battle In the City part 1: The worst hotel] It has been twelve hours since the team of Haris, Jodie, and Nena launched for their mission. The sun was starting to set behind the mountains making the sky change to a light red and orange and no clouds were in sight. They noticed a small city close to the mountains. All of them were tired, hungry, and they haven’t slept in a warm bed for over 3 weeks. They landed near the mountains and activated their Gundams’ GN Cloak. As they walked into the city they noticed the big hotels, the flashing lights, the restaurants, and the casino. Jodie’s eyes lit up as she noticed the restaurant. Jodie: Haris, We have to go to one of the restaurants. They look so romantic. Haris: Can we get some hotel rooms first before we go anywhere? Nena: Excellent idea, Haris! Let’s find a cheap hotel. They all looked for hotels that were close to the mountains and were cheap. After hours of searching, they found a hotel, but only had enough money for two rooms. Haris had a room to himself while Nena and Jodie had to share one. As they went into their rooms they looked at the place. The walls were peeling off; the bathroom looked like it wasn’t cleaned in years; the ceiling looked like it was going to collapse at any given minute; there were rats everywhere. Jodie: This is a complete rip-off. They said that these were the best room that we could afford. Nena: Well…I think these are the best rooms. Haris looked at his room. It looked like the only thing there was a bed. Everything was missing. The door to the bathroom was cemented over. There was no window or a light. Haris looked at the room in pure disgust. Haris: Great…I got a crappy room. I knew we should have taken the one on Wing Street. Haris unpacked and changed his clothes into a black collar shirt and black jeans, with blue and white sneakers. He knew that he was a bit too underdressed to go to a fancy restaurant with Jodie, but he didn’t care. He walked out of his room and as he closed the door, the bed and the floor collapsed and fell to the floor below Haris’s. Jodie was trying to get ready for her and Haris’ “Date”. Nena was watching Jodie work herself up trying to look good for Haris. There were clothes flying around the room. Jodie then chose some clothes and tried to look for more. Nena: Wow. Your all worked up just for this date? It must be fancy. Jodie: It’s not a date. It’s just me and Haris going to get something to eat at a fancy restaurant. Nena: In other words a date. Jodie: Fine it’s a date. But I don’t know what to wear. Nena: I’m sure Haris won’t care what you wear. If he doesn’t have his jaw on the floor, first. Nena started to laugh as Jodie glared at her. She finally chose a red dress with red heels. There was a knock on the door. Nena went to get the door and saw Haris trying to wipe the gel out of his hair. Nena: Haris! Jodie will be here in a minute. She’s just getting ready. And a word of advice, don’t use a full bottle of gel on your hair. Haris’ eye twitched as he heard what Nena said. He noticed Jodie come out of the bathroom wearing the dress. His jaw dropped almost to the floor. Nena then started to laugh. Nena: I told you his jaw would drop to the floor! You owe me big time Haptism. Jodie: Yeah, yeah. So Haris ready to go? Haris couldn’t speak. He has never seen this side of Jodie. The beautiful side. He always thought of her as one of the guys. Jodie took Haris’ hand and they ran out of the hotel. Nena watched as they left. Nena: Aw, young love. A piece of the ceiling hit Nena on her head and she fell to the ground, unconscious. A man wearing a black trench coat and hat walked into the hotel and started to take some things from the room. He ran as fast as he can and ran to the roof. He took off the hat and it was Shen he dialed a number on his cell phone. Shen: I have the files, Master Adam. I will start the second task as soon as possible. Adam was in the Innovators base as he was ready to get into Shinobi Gundam for the plan to take down the city Haris, Jodie, and Nena were in. The Shinobi was missing an arm from the last battle with Celestial Being, but in its place were a cloak and a cannon. Adam: Good work Shen. I want you to wait near the mountains for the AEU Mobile Suits. They will tire out the Gundams while we go in for the kill. Shen: Roger that. I’ll stand by until they show up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rucario Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 If this place is dead, why is it still in your sig? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Well, I'm still writing the fan fic. It's just that I'm not finding the right time to write it since I have another fan fic in another site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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