galesonic Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 [spoiler= Introduction]It has been 16 years since Celestial Being was attacked by the UN forces and Innovators. They managed to survive with minimal damage and their lives. To this day, the Un forces returned back to their original 3 factions and they still notice Celstial Being attempting to eradicate war and fighting. [spoiler= characters][spoiler= Celestial Being]Name: Haris Ismail Age: 15Gundam/Mobile Suit: Knight GundamAppearance: Faction: Celestial BeingBio: The son of Setsuna F. Seiei and Marina Ismail. After knowing of his father piloting the gundam formerly Known as Exia now being made as Knight Gundam. He tried piloting it but ended up causing a fight against AEU. He was later chosen by Veda and Tieria to pilot Knight Gundam. Name: Saiya Dylandy (Saiya Stratos)Age: 15Gundam/Mobile Suit: Gundam IonAppearance: Faction: Celestial BeingBio: The daughter of Lockon Stratos and Feldt Grace. She learned how to snipe with a paintball gun at the age of 4 by her father. She later started a paintball group at her school at age 13. She was later chosen by Veda and Tieria to pilot Gundam Ion. Name: Jodie HaptismAge: 14Gundam/Mobile Suit: Gundam Kyrios GaleAppearance: Faction: Celestial BeingBio: The oldest twin daughter of Allelujah Haptism and Marie Parfacy. She was kept away from her sister, Karen because of the headaches she was constantly getting when they were close together. She showed everyone at her school that she wasn't only a genius but also an incredible athlete. She was later chosen by Veda and Tieria to pilot Gundam Kyrios Gale. Name: Ryan MitchellAge: unknown (looks 16)Gundam/Mobile Suit: Gundam MaximaAppearance: Faction: Celestial BeingBio: A rejected cloned from a famouse movie star. He lived in the slums for most of his life until a fight between the people and AEU started. He was caught in the middle of it. He wanted everything to stop. He showed his ability to contact and comunicate with Veda and sent out the Gundam Maxima to save him. He was later chosen by Veda and Tieria to pilot the Gundam Maxima. [spoiler= AEU]Name: Karen HaptismAge: 14Gundam/Mobile Suit: GN-DragonAppearance: Faction: AEUBio: The youngest twin daughter of Allelujah Haptism and Marie Parfacy. She was sent to Patrick Calossaur in order to keep away from Jodie because of the headaches she was constantly getting frm being too close to her. She soon ran away from home learning that she was abandoned and joined AEU to find her parents. Name- Daisuke AsukeAge- 18Gundam- Miraculous Freedomappearance- faction- AEUbio- once a stone hard young man, now a kind, nice person. His Gundam: Miraculous Freedom, is one of the most powerful ever made. His Girlfriend/Future Wife: Carly Ambrose awaits his return from the war. [spoiler= Human Reform League]Name: Megan WalkerAge: 17Gundam/Mobile Suit: GN-XIIIAppearance: Faction: Human Reform LeagueBio: One of the few surviving super soldiers after the attack on the super soldier facility caused by Allelujah Haptism. She vowed to kill Allelujah and avange her bretheren. Her capability of tactical forecasting can help ut her team of any attack. Name: Adrien MorisonAge: 18Gundam/Mobile Suit: GN-XIIAppearance: Faction: Human Reform LeagueBio: One of the few surviving super soldiers after the attack on the super soldier facility caused by Allelujah Haptism. He joined the Human Reform League to save enough money to buy a house and start a family. [spoiler= Innovators/Evicted]Name: Ayame Age: 14 (114 due to suspended animation)Gundam/Mobile Suit: Gundam ViperAppearance: Faction: Innovators/Evicted Bio: The youngest of the three remaining pilots in the Space Arcana. Before the colony was destroyed, she was in supended animation for 100 years until later found by the AEU. Her childish ways can be well used in her missions. Name: IzumiAge: 17 (117 due to suspended animation)Gundam/ Mobile Suit: Gundam AngelAppearance: Faction Innovators/EvictedBio: The oldest of the three remaining pilots in the Space Arcana. Before the colony was destroyed, she was in suspended animation for 100 years until later found by the AEU. Even though she looks weak, she can lift up twice her weight. Name: AdamAge: 16 (116 due to suspended animation)Gundam/Mobile Suit: ShinobiAppearance: Faction: Innovators/EvictedBio: The smartes of the three remaining pilots in the Space Arcana. Before the colony was destroyed, he was in suspended animation for 100 years until later found by by the AEU. His intellegence hasn't let him down in any fight so far. Name: Shen HaitakuAge: 15Gundam/Mobile Suit: Viral GundamAppearance: Faction: Innovators Bio: Still a young boy, he fights the UN Forces to avenge his parents, who were supposedly killed by the UN. more of the characters will be added soon. [spoiler= Chapter 1: 16 years earlier]In space, a battle was being fought since the start of it 1 day ago. It was the four Gundams of Celestial Being with the 15 GN-Flags of the UN forces. Beams were flying everywhere. The fight was a pure stalemate at this point. Gundam Arios piloted by Allelujah Haptism kept trying to eavade attacks while firing back at the enemy mobile suits though none of them hit. He hid behind a meteror so he can let his GN rifle recharge. Allelujah: This is way too pointless...we've been fighting for one straight day and all we've done is block each other's attacks or we miss. 1 of the Flags easily destroyed the meteror and was about to attack Arios when a shot was fired. Because of the flag's fast reaction, the shot only hit the arm, destroying it. The shot came from Cherudim Gundam's GN sniper piloted by the excellent sniper, Lockon Stratos and his partner in crime Haro. Haro: Target missed. Target missed. You suck. You suck. Lockon: Damn it. These Mobile Suits had a upgrade. Well its more fun to shoot them down when they are experienced than novice. Allelujah: Don't get too cocky Lockon. That can get you killed here just like the original Lockon Stratos. Lockon: You always have to go there do you... Setsuna: Can we focus on the battle? Lockon: Oh right. Sorry about that. Lets see what Cherudim can do. He kept firing at the squad of Flags and took down 2 of the 10 that was in formation. Gundam 00 piloted by Setsuna F. Seiei cut through at least 4 while the remaining team of Flags. Setsuna: This is getting too dangerous. If this keeps going, we all might die here. Tieria: Not while we are here. Celestial Being will not fall. Gundam Seravee piloted by Tieria used his GN Bazooka and vaporized the remaining Flags in formation. the remaining 5 Flags that were hiding in the asteriods shot at the Gundams, hitting directly at their GN drives, making them unable to move. Setsuna: Damn it it was a tra and we all fell for it. Lockon: Not only that. We are sitting ducks. Allelujah: Maybe this is Celestial Beings last stand. Tieria: No...Veda won't lets us die like this. Soon 4 GN Mobile Suits for Celestial being showed up and started to fire at the Flags. the team consisted of Marie Parfacy, Lasse Aeon, Saji Crossroad, and Nena Trinity. Nena: We're not going to lose our Meisters here in this battle. Marie: Let's say we take these guys down once and for all. Saji and Lasse: Fine by us. They started a fight against the Flags and after hours of intense fighting, the Flags were destroyed. The Mobile Suits tooook the disabled Gundams back into the Ptolemaios 2. They took them to the medical deck to check on their possible injuries. Doctor: It seems you all are in perfect health. Oh, wait a minute it seems that Allelujah neglected to take the capsule for his multiple personality syndrome. Allelujah: I already told you! I will NOT take something that will turn me into a sedated monkey. Doctor: It won't make you into a sedated monkey...more like a sedated cow. Allelujah: See? What better reason not to trust you as a doctor. Allelujah left the medical deck and noticed Tieria talking to the ship's capitan Sumeragi Lee Noregia. Sumeragi: Are the preperations being made Tieria? Tieria: Yes. But the new Gundams will be constructed in 5 years time due to the GN drives being complicated to make. Sumeragi: Have you talked to Veda about the plans? Tieria: Yes I have. He said that the original Gundam Meisters can pilot the current Gundams. When the new generation Gundams are finished, they will have a choice of either to stay Meisters or work in the sidlines. Allelujah soon realized that he might be losing his status as a Meister if the new generation of Gundams were created and finished. He just shrugged it off. Allelujah: Not my problem. Out with the old in with the new. Time skip: 16 years later. Setsuna woke up in a king sized bed and saw his wife Marina was still asleep. He put a nother blanket on her and kissed her cheek lightly. He changed into a T-shirt and jeans and walked out of the room. He noticed his 15-year old son Haris messing around wth a Haro. Setsuna: Haris..Where did you find that Haro? Haris: It was rolling around the hallway this morning and suddenly shorted out. Setsuna: Well it looks like it had gum in its circutry. Did Saiya mess with Lyle's Haro again? Haris: Maybe...or maybe Lyle messed with it. Setsuna had to admit it, Lyle has a tendancy to mess up things. Even with Haro he usually made it short circut. Setsuna got a coded message from Sumeragi saying "You have a mission come to the base at the closest location." Setsuna: Sorry sport I have to go. Hairs: Ok see ya later dad. Setsuna took his car and drove off while Haris put on his in-line skates and followed him without being seen. He followed him to a giant base with the symbol for Celestial Being. Haris: Whoa. I never knew dad worked for Celestial Being. That is awesome. He managed to get into the base and saw the Gundams that were on the news. He was amazed that they were right in front of him. Haris: This is awesome. I bet dad pilots Gundam 00. He walked father into the hangar and saw something that almost made his heart stop. It was Exia remodled with a bigger buster sword and more beam sabers. Haris: This must be the Knight Gundam Saiya told me about. I wonder what it's like piloting it. He opened the cockpit and got inside. As the door closes, Knight Gundam activated and launched outside. The alarm souned and the current Meisters noticed Knight Gundam was missing. Allelujah: How the hell did someone get passed the security system? Lockon: The recording showed Haris getting in here. Setsuna: Haris? How the hell did he activate Knight Gundam? Tieria: You do know that it was made for him right? Setsuna: Yeah I do but its just too early for him to pilot. He didn't have any training for it. Allelujah: Neither did you and you did well on your first mission. Tieria: Lets get into our Gundams and follow Haris. We have to know where he might go. The other Meisters aggred and got into their Gundams. While Haris was flying around but he didn't know he was over an AEU base. Mobile Suits were deplyed and were ready to attack and destroy Knight Gundam. AEU commander: We are giving one warning Gundam Meister. Surrender and we won't harm you. Haris: Oh crap what do I do? I can't let this Gundam be captured. AEU commander: Have it your way. Men attack. The Mobile suits kept firing at Knight Gundam but all Haris could do was block with the shield on its right arm. Haris: I don't think I'm gonna make it out alive. [spoiler= Chapter 2: Knight’s Arrival] Haris kept blocking the attacks with the shield as more AEU Mobile Suits arrived into the battle. Haris: Damn it. I can’t win this battle by just blocking. I need to attack somehow. He pressed a button and he shot GN beams at one of the Mobile Suits, causing it to be destroyed in an instant. AEU commander: He destroyed an ENACT. All men fire! Don’t try to miss a single shot. All of the Mobile suits kept firing at Knight Gundam. But Haris was quick enough to use the shield. Haris put his hand on the controls. Haris: Ok I think I’m getting the hang of this. Ok now I’m ready. He activated the Buster sword, which came out of Knight Gundam’s left arm. He charged at the ENACTs ad cut through at least 4 of them. The commander type ENACT was constantly shooting at Knight Gundam but they were useless because before the commander knew it, the Mobile Suit was stabbed through the torso, barely missing him. AEU Commander: Damn it! Send out Arche Gundam. After saying that the ENACT blew up. When the message was sent, Ali Al Saachez got into his Gundam and launched. He made it to the battle as he saw Knight Gundam destroy the last ENACT in the squad. Ali: Well, well, well. Looks like we have a Gundam here. And he's quite skilled. Ali and Haris were locked in a sword fight. Soon after, Arche Gundam’s arm and leg was cut as well as part of Knight Gundam’s right hand. All of a sudden eight GN beams were fired at them. 6 of them hit Arche Gundam, disabling it while 2 hit Knight Gundam. All of the Celestial Being Gundam showed up. Haris: Oh crap this isn’t good. Setsuna: Haris what the hell are you doing inside Knight Gundam? Allelujah: Well he did seem to destroy a lot of AEU Mobile Suits. I’ll give him that. Tieria: And on his first time piloting it. This kid has potential. Lockon: But he still broke into the base and had a joyride with the Knight Gundam. Haris: I’m getting the idea that I should bring this back to the base. Setsuna: Yes you should. All of the sudden the Arche Gundam self-destructed. With that, all 5 Gundams went back to the Celestial Being base. Haris was locked in a containment cell. Hours later Sumeragi and Tieria walked in. Haris: What happened? Am I going to be locked in here? Sumeragi: No, no. You are in a bit of trouble for taking Knight Gundam. Tieria: But you did manage to complete most of our mission already. Haris: So, I helped is what you’re telling me? Sumeragi: Helped? You basically completed Setsuna, Allelujah, and Tieria’s part of the mission in not only record time but also you managed to destroy the #1 enemy to Celestial Being Haris: So, what does it mean? Tieria: Well, I was talking to Veda and we both agreed on making you the pilot for Knight Gundam. Haris: This is awesome! When do I work? Setsuna: After school. But if there are mission that we do need you or if we need reinforcements, you will be taken out of school for the day. Haris felt like he was in a dream. Not only will he be in Celestial Being, but also he gets to pilot Knight Gundam. Setsuna and Tieria left while Haris was still with Sumeragi. Haris: So when am I getting out of here? Sumeragi: Another two days. Haris: Another two days!?! This isn’t fair! Sumeragi just giggled and closed the cell door while Haris kept screaming words that were muffled. Sumeragi: Since there’s one kid from the original Meisters, maybe we should use their kids as well. [spoiler= Chapter 3: Gale Force Winds part 1: The mission] Two days has passed since Haris had the joyride with Knight Gundam. He was released from the containment cell and went to Sumeragi’s office. Haris: You wanted to see me Miss Sumeragi? Sumeragi: Yes I do. As you know you become part of Celestial Being today. But I have a special task for you. Haris: What is it? Sumeragi showed pictures of two girls. Both of them Haris knew from school. Sumeragi: I want you to bring both of these girls to the Celestial Being base. Your first target is Saiya Dylandy, the captain of your school’s paintball team. Haris: I know Saiya. She always wanted to be part of Celestial Being as well as pilot a Gundam. Sumeragi: So this will be one of your easiest missions. If there is any trouble while you’re on your mission, bring them with you so they can pilot their selected Gundams. Haris: Okay. I’ll go after Saiya first and bring her here. Sumeragi: Okay then little boy. You should head off to school. You don’t want to start your first mission late. Haris: Oh right. And I’m not a little boy. He left and Sumeragi took out a bottle of sake Sumeragi: This kid is something else. Haris put on his rollerblades and skated toward his school, Arlious Academy. It was a big school separated into 4 different parts. 1 for the elementary school, 1 for middle school, 1 for high school, and the last part for gym and the auditorium. He bumped into a girl. As he got into the school. Haris: Oh sorry about that. Girl: No it’s my fault. I wasn’t looking. Haris looked at the girl and noticed that she was the second girl in the picture. Haris: I haven’t seen you around the academy. Girl: Oh. That’s because I just transferred here. My name is Jodie Haptism. Haris: My name’s Haris Ismail Jodie: So are you related to the princess Marina Ismail? Haris: She’s my mother. Though its weird how no one will believe you even though you have the same last name. School went by quicker than it usually was. Both of them had the same classes but they kept talking while the teachers weren’t looking. The bell rang and they went to lunch. Haris: So how do you like this school so far? Jodie: Its better than my old school I can say that. Both of them shared a laugh then it soon got quiet. Haris: So I was watching the news last night about that Gundam that attacked an AEU base. They said that it was part of Celestial Being. What do you think of them? Jodie: Well I’m for Celestial Being. I would want to eradicate war. This war so far is purely pointless. Haris: Not to mention we are losing people for no reason whatsoever, but for some things there has to be sacrifices. A Mobile Suit was seen outside the lunch room window and was targeting the school. The Mobile Suit was from the AEU but it was a new model. Haris had a beep coming from his phone with a message saying, “Knight is on the way” Haris grabbed Jodie’s hand and they ran out to the other side of the school where another Mobile Suit of the same model was there. Soon a shot was fired at the school, causing an explosion in the lunchroom. Haris and Jodie kept running away until they go to the exit. When they did, the Celestial Being Gundams excluding Allelujah and Gundam Arios arrived and Knight Gundam landed on the ground. Haris: Okay Jodie follow me. We’re going into Knight Gundam. Jodie: Wait why should we? We aren’t Meisters. We don’t know how to control it. Haris: I am a Gundam Meister for Celestial Being, Jodie. I piloted Knight Gundam that was on the news last night. Jodie was surprised about hearing her new friend was in the faction she always dreamed of being in. Haris took her hand and got inside Knight Gundam. The cockpit was too small so she had to sit on top of Haris, who couldn’t stop blushing. He activated Knight Gundam. Haris: this is Knight Gundam. Ready to await orders. Lockon: Ok we are against two new AEU Mobile Suits known as GN-Dragons. They carry a vast amount of fire-based weaponry. What we need to do is take them down before the school is destroyed. Setsuna: Ok Tieria, you and Lockon take the farther one while Haris and I take the closer one. Haris: Ok then let’s show them a real fight. Haris and Setsuna both charged at the closer GN-Dragon and all of them took out beam sabers. Setsuna took another beam saber and cut of the GN-Dragon’s arm while Haris cut off the legs. The pilot laughed and self-destructed, causing Knight Gundam to fall over with Haris and Jodie passed out. Setsuna: Damn it. Haris are you okay? Haris? Haris! Lockon and Tieria kept firing at the other GN-Dragon but they kept missing. Setsuna came in and tried to cut it but it was instantly blocked. The GN-Dragon shot 2 high-powered missiles at Tieria and Lockon with both of them hitting and destroying part of their Gundams while it took out a fire sword and slashed 00’s arms off and blasted the legs with a fire cannon, disabling them. The pilot in the GN-Dragon sent a transmission to the Gundams and revealed That it was Ali Al Saachez Ali: So this Mobile Suit took out all these Gundams. It’s great that I can destroy these now. [spoiler= Chapter 4: Gale Force Winds Part 2: The storm] Ali charged up the cannon in his arm, ready to fire at Knight Gundam. Ali: Well it looks like this will be the day you will be destroyed. All of a sudden two shots were fired and hit the cannon, stopping the attack. The shot came from Gundam Arios and another Gundam that was newly made. Ali: Oh great more Gundams. This should be fun. He kept shooting at the Gundams but they were easily blocked. Inside Knight Gundam, Jodie slowly started to wake up. When she did, she noticed that Haris was still unconscious. Jodie: Haris, wake up. You have to wake up Haris. Arios and the other Gundam landed next to the fallen Knight Gundam. Allelujah sent a transmission to Knight Gundam, and noticed Jodie in there. Allelujah: What? Jodie? What are you doing in there. Jodie: Dad? Your part of Celestial Being? Allelujah: Yeah I am. Quick get in the Gundam on your right. I’ll try to distract this guy. As Allelujah was fighting with Ali, Jodie got out of Knight Gundam and got into the Gundam. As she did, the cockpit closes and activated the Gundam. Words soon were starting to be typed on the screen. Jodie: Kyrios…Gale? Well either way it’s a Gundam. Jodie activated Kyrios Gale and took out the propeller blades and threw it at the GN-Dragon, cutting off the legs and the left arm. Ali just laughed. Ali: well is seems that this Gundam is strong. Looks like my job is done. The GN-Dragon then self-destructed, causing Gundam Arios to lose an arm. Soon after, a Celestial Being storage ship and they started to collect the Gundams and the Meisters got out of their Gundams and saw Jodie get out of Kyrios Gale. Setsuna: Who the hell is that? Allelujah: That’s my daughter. Well, one of them. Lockon: She sure is a pretty girl though. Probably good for Haris. Setsuna: Can we not go through this again? It’s hard enough that all your kids are girls and I’m the only Meister that has a son. Lockon: Come on Setsuna. It wouldn’t hurt to wonder now, would it? Setsuna: We should stop talking about this. I’m getting a bit uneasy about that. Jodie opened Knight Gundam’s cockpit and noticed that Haris was still unconscious and that his forehead was bleeding. Allelujah and Setsuna ran in and got Haris. They took him to the medical deck. Doctor: Well he seems to be fine. And Allelujah you still didn’t take the medicine. Allelujah: I told you already. I do not want to be a sedated monkey. Doctor: Fine. But you won’t be a sedated monkey you would be like a- Allelujah: SHUT UP! [spoiler= Chapter 5: The Evicted Part 1: Confrontation]In space, teams of AEU Mobile Suits were searching for what the think is a Gundam. One team found 3 Gundams floating in space. AEU cadet #1: Commander Colasour, we’ve found 3 Gundams but they seem to be floating in space. Patrick: Hmm that’s strange. Is there anybody in there? AEU cadet #2: There are people in there. But, their body temperature is below 20 degrees Fahrenheit. Patrick: That’s strange. Anyway, all men fire at will. All of the Mobile Suits fired at the Gundams, but all it did was wake up the people inside. Before they even knew it, all of the Mobile suits were vaporized, while Patrick’s Mobile Suits was floating in space with the lower half of its body destroyed. Patrick: What the hell happened? Who are these people? Patrick soon received 3 transmissions from the Meisters that destroyed the fleet. There were two girls and 1 boy. Boy: We are the Evicted. Our goal is to destroy the group that destroyed our home. Even if we have to kill every, single person to do so. The three Gundams destroyed the AEU base in the asteroid field and headed towards Earth. On Earth, early morning soon arose. Haris woke up and rubbed his head. He felt something rough on his forehead. He had some stitching on his forehead. He noticed Jodie asleep and she slowly started to wake up. Jodie: Haris? How are you feeling? Haris: My head hurts. How long was I out? Jodie: You were out cold for a day. Not only that, you missed the battle and me piloting Gundam Kyrios Gale. Haris: Damn it. Well at least I’m okay now. Sumeragi walked into the room and noticed Haris was awake. Sumeragi: Oh Haris. Glad to see you’re awake. Oh and you two should go to the briefing room in 10 minutes. 10 minutes have passed and everyone except Lockon went to the briefing room. On the screen was the 3 Gundams. Setsuna: So, are these the Gundams that easily destroyed an AEU base? Sumeragi: Yes they are. They are Gundams made from the Space Arcana. Allelujah: Wasn’t hat destroyed 100 years ago? Sumeragi: Yes it was but, 3 Gundams and their Meisters escaped. Jodie: Then they would be over 100 years old. Marie: They must have been under Cryogenic freezing for that long. Sumeragi: All we know is that they are Celestial Being Gundams. Haris: Wouldn’t that mean they are on our side? Sumeragi: That’s the thing. They may have Celestial Being Gundams but they might not be on our side. Nena: So this will be an intercepting and possible recruit mission? Sumeragi: Most likely. But since they seem to be long ranged Gundams, for now we send Setsuna, Haris, and Jodie. Within an hour of the mission, Tieria, Allelujah, and Lockon will be sent. Speaking of Lockon, where is he? Fedlt: When I asked Lockon where he was going, he said that he had business to take care of. He’ll be here soon, I hope. Lockon took Gundam Ion and flew towards Arlious Academy. He activated Haro and started a scan for Saiya Lockon: Haro have you found Saiya yet? Haro: Saiya located. Saiya located. Inside Arlious Academy. Inside Arlious Academy. Lockon landed near Arlious Academy and got inside. Minutes later, he got o he exit with Saiya. As soon as they exited the school, a GN beam was fired and the school was instantly destroyed. When Lockon and Saiya looked at the sky, they noticed one of the Gundams that was from 100 years ago. The cockpit opened and revealed a girl about 17. Lockon: What is this? Who is the Meister? Girl: Are you from Celestial Being? Lockon: Yeah. What of it? Girl: That’s all I needed to know… The girl got into her Gundam and activated it. The GN particles soon transformed into 2 wings making it look like an angel. The Gundam then took a GN pistol and started shooting at Lockon and Saiya. They started dodging the shots got in Ion. Saiya sat on top of Lockon because of the cockpit being to cramped. Lockon: Saiya, try to use the sniper rifle while I maneuver. Saiya: Okay dad. I just hope we can stop her. Saiya started to turn on the sniper system and targeted the angelic Gundam. As son as she fired a shot, the Angel Gundam’s GN wings blocked the attack. Lockon: What the hell was that? Girl: I see you noticed the GN wings system. Every shot fired at Angel Gundam will be blocked or deflected. Lockon: Damn it. Then Ion’s sniper systems will be useless. On a mountain far from the battlefield, Ribbons and another Meister named Shen Haitaku were watching from far away. Ribbons: It seems that Izumi was able to find Lockon. What is more exciting is that he’s against his total opposite. Shen: Master Ribbons, if you want, I can destroy Lockon easily for you. Ribbons: No, no. We are waiting for the other Celestial Being Gundams to be launched. Then, we’ll attack the base. Get into Viral Gundam, Shen. We are going on to find the other two of the Evicted. Shen: As you wish Master Ribbons. Shen and Ribbons both entered their Gundams and flew into separate directions to find the other Evicted members. [spoiler= Chapter 6:The Evicted Part 2: The Message] Sumeragi, Feldt, Haris, and the others waited at the briefing room for Lockon. They suddenly have a message from him. Sumeragi: An urgent message from Lockon? Wonder what this is about. Sumeragi opened the message and heard sounds of things exploding and some shots fired. Lockon: This is Lockon Stratos. I am with Saiya and I am requesting backup. We are against a Gundam from 100 years ago. I’m sending you the picture. The picture showed Angel Gundam with the GN wings activated. Sumeragi’s heart skipped a beat. Sumeragi: Oh my god. That Gundam is so familiar. Setsuna: How does it look familiar? Allelujah: It looks like Wing Zero but the color scheme is different. Its all white. Haris: Not only that it looks stronger. Sumeragi: I won’t let another one of Celestial Being die. Tieria, Allelujah, and Setsuna, get into your Gundams and head towards Lockon’s position. Another alert sounded and Sumeragi turned on the screen and saw Black Viper Gundam attacking an AEU base. It had two snake mouths for hands and had a cobra neck for a head and was colored completely black. Sumeragi: Damn it! This is really annoying! Haris and Nena, I want you to intercept Viper Gundam. Before another alarm sounds again, Marie, Saji, Lasse, Feldt, I want you to go after Gundam Shinobi. As everyone left to the hangars, Sumeragi took a bottle of sake from the desk and took a sip out of the bottle. Sumeragi: This job is really giving me a headache. Allelujah, Tieria, and Setsuna flew towards Lockon’s position. When they got there, they noticed that Gundam Ion’s cockpit was empty. Allelujah: Something isn’t right. Where are Lockon and Saiya? Tieria: Wait? Haro is still in there. Setsuna: Keep your eyes peeled guys. This may be an ambush. They kept looking around. After a few minutes they found something on their radar. The radar showed a small passenger ship. They activated the GN cloaking. As the ship got closer, a Gundam was behind it, cloaking itself from their radar. As the ship passed, they turned off their cloaking. Tieria: Well looks like that was a little too pre-cautious Allelujah: Yeah, but still we have to find Lockon and Saiya. Setsuna: something isn’t right here… Before they knew it, all of their Gundam’s weapons and arms were slashed off. The mystery Gundam turned off its cloaking and revealed it to be Gundam Shinobi. The Gundam was colored black with each arm colored red and had two Buster Swords on its back. The boy inside there sent a transmission to the Meisters. Boy: Well, well, well. And to think that these Gundams are able to beat their successors. Setsuna: You’re just a kid. How are you able to use a Celestial Being’s Gundam as if you learned your whole life? Tieria: And what is your name? Boy: I have no name. But if you must call me something, it will be Adam. Adam used Shinobi Gundam’s Trans Am. The GN particles became a cloak around it and the color turned from black to red. Adam: LET’S DO THIS! In the Innovators’ base, Ribbons and Shen threw Lockon and Saiya into separate cells. The girl that piloted Angel Gundam walked up to Ribbons. Girl: So what’s going to happen to those two. Ribbons: All will be known in due time Izumi. Shen, prepare a private room for Lockon Stratos and me. Shen: Yes Master Ribbons. As Shen left, Izumi looked at Saiya through the cell. Izumi: What about her, Ribbons? What are you going to do about Saiya? Ribbons: I say we “reprogram” her. [spoiler= Chapter 7: The Evicted part 3: Snake Shinobi] As Adam activated Shinobi’s Trans Am, he charged at the Meisters holding both of his Buster Swords. They quickly reacted and moved out of the way. Allelujah: Talk about cutting it close. Tieria: Too close. We are under a battle we can’t win. We lost our Gundam’s arms and legs. Setsuna: That won’t stop us from fighting. Tieria shot a GN beam at Shinobi but the GN cloak blocked the attack for him. Tieria: Damn it. This won’t help. We need a miracle to stop him. Jodie: You got your wish, Tieria. The cavalry is here. Knight Gundam, Kyrios Gale, and Gundam Throne Drei arrived. Haris: Looks like we came here just in time. Adam: Doesn’t matter. You will still die by my power. At the Innovators base, Saiya started to cry in her cell. Saiya: Why am I supposed to be locked up in this cell. I don’t even deserve to even be in Celestial Being. ???: What are you saying? I never knew this side of you. Saiya looked up at the ceiling and noticed Feldt in the vents. Saiya: Mom? How did you get here? Feldt: That’s not important. We have to go now. Feldt held out her hand and Saiya grabbed on to it. She was pulled into the vents, and followed Feldt outside. Saiya: what about Dad? Feldt: …he wanted me to only take you and leave him behind. Saiya: Oh...I see They both ran out of the base, making sure no one will see them. At the battle site, Shinobi fired eight GN beams at the cavalry, but Knight Gundam’s Buster Shield blocked them all. Another blast was fired and hit Knight Gundam in the back. The blast came from Viper Gundam. Adam smirked and turned off the Trans Am Adam: So Ayame, shall we show them what a real Gundam can do? Ayame: Very well, they will be too surprised. Viper Gundam and Gundam Shinobi collided with each other, causing a huge explosion. When the explosion cleared, a new Gundam appeared. It looked like Gundam Shinobi but the arm had snake mouths with the hands coming out of the mouths. Viper Gundam’s head became a shield. Adam and Izumi: Viper Shinobi, the snake charmer! Setsuna: What the hell? Tieria: Is that the GN bond Veda told me? Nena: Either way we can still beat them. Jodie: All Gundams attack. All of the available Gundams charged at Viper Shinobi, but their arms and weapons were cut off. Adam: Like shooting monkeys in a barrel. Izumi: Nothing will stop us. All of a sudden, a barrage of beams and missiles were fired at Viper Shinobi, causing a huge explosion. As the smoke cleared, the Viper Shinobi was on the ground with the arms, legs, and weapons were destroyed and scattered along the battlefield. In the air, there were two Gundams; one of them carrying a missile launcher and a shield two times the size of the Gundam while the other Gundams had four missile and laser cannons for arms. Both of the Gundams were colored red and burgundy. Setsuna: Who are you? What faction are you in? Meister #1: This is Johann and Michael Trinity of Celestial Being awaiting orders. [spoiler= Chapter 8: Mission: Rescue Lockon] Nena: Johann? Michael? You’re alive? How? Johann: Well I managed to escape with the Turbulenz Pack. Michael: And the shot Ali fired missed my heart by inches. Setsuna: Can we stick to what’s at hand please? They all looked at place where Snake Shinobi fell, but it was gone. Allelujah: Damn it! We let ourselves get pre-occupied and they left. Tieria: Well at least we know what we are dealing with. Return to base everyone. Everyone returned to base. As they got back, Sumeragi came into the hangar. Sumeragi: What happened? And who are those two Meisters? Johann: Oh come on Miss Sumeragi. Don’t tell me you forgot about us already. Sumeragi: Why should I even remember you. Both you and Michael caused many lives to be killed and started the UN Forces. Michael: Nena helped too though. Sumeragi: Well, she was able to repay us for that trouble. What are those Gundams by the way? They look familiar. Michael: Oh Mine is Phoenix Gundam and Johann’s is Physalis. Setsuna: So you repainted them to as your old Thrones? Michael: Exactly. We had to rebuild it and make able to use a GN Drive. It took 10 years but it was worth it. Sumeragi: Well we have another problem. Feldt and Saiya have just informed me that the Innovators captured Lockon. Haris: What?! Why don’t we go there now? Sumeragi: That’s the thing. The only people that are going are Nena, Haris, and Jodie. It will take 7 days to infiltrate the Innovator base. If the week is over and you didn’t manage to get Lockon out, he will be listed as KIA. Haris: Why would it take that long? I mean there aren’t that many Innovator bases. Are there? Sumeragi: There isn’t that many. But there could be a lot of traps. If you want to hurry you can start now. Haris and Jodie walked towards the hangar together as they saw Allelujah, Marie, and Setsuna by their Gundams. Jodie: Uhhh Mom, Dad. What are you doing here? Allelujah: Well your going on a very dangerous mission. We came here to tell you that you are not just the youngest Meisters in Celestial Being, but so far the best ones. Marie gave Jodie a kiss on the forehead. Both Haris and Jodie got into their Gundams and flew off with Throne Drei following them. Setsuna: What’s going to happen now? Jodie could run into her twin sister, Karen. Allelujah: Let’s hope she doesn’t. We don’t want them to meet just yet. In an AEU base, two people walked in, one a boy who was the tallest one out of the two and a girl. They both wore the AEU uniforms and stood in front of the commander Patrick Colosaur’s desk. Girl: You wanted to see us, sir? Patrick: Yes. There seems to be some unusual action for Celestial Being. Boy: Does it mean we have to follow them and possibly attack? Patrick: Yes. You can launch this hour. You’re dismissed They both saluted Patrick and left the office Patrick: Those damn terrorists of Celestial Being will pay for killing my beloved Colonel. [spoiler= Chapter 9: Battle In the City part 1: The worst hotel] It has been twelve hours since the team of Haris, Jodie, and Nena launched for their mission. The sun was starting to set behind the mountains making the sky change to a light red and orange and no clouds were in sight. They noticed a small city close to the mountains. All of them were tired, hungry, and they haven’t slept in a warm bed for over 3 weeks. They landed near the mountains and activated their Gundams’ GN Cloak. As they walked into the city they noticed the big hotels, the flashing lights, the restaurants, and the casino. Jodie’s eyes lit up as she noticed the restaurant. Jodie: Haris, We have to go to one of the restaurants. They look so romantic. Haris: Can we get some hotel rooms first before we go anywhere? Nena: Excellent idea, Haris! Let’s find a cheap hotel. They all looked for hotels that were close to the mountains and were cheap. After hours of searching, they found a hotel, but only had enough money for two rooms. Haris had a room to himself while Nena and Jodie had to share one. As they went into their rooms they looked at the place. The walls were peeling off; the bathroom looked like it wasn’t cleaned in years; the ceiling looked like it was going to collapse at any given minute; there were rats everywhere. Jodie: This is a complete rip-off. They said that these were the best room that we could afford. Nena: Well…I think these are the best rooms. Haris looked at his room. It looked like the only thing there was a bed. Everything was missing. The door to the bathroom was cemented over. There was no window or a light. Haris looked at the room in pure disgust. Haris: Great…I got a crappy room. I knew we should have taken the one on Wing Street. Haris unpacked and changed his clothes into a black collar shirt and black jeans, with blue and white sneakers. He knew that he was a bit too underdressed to go to a fancy restaurant with Jodie, but he didn’t care. He walked out of his room and as he closed the door, the bed and the floor collapsed and fell to the floor below Haris’s. Jodie was trying to get ready for her and Haris’ “Date”. Nena was watching Jodie work herself up trying to look good for Haris. There were clothes flying around the room. Jodie then chose some clothes and tried to look for more. Nena: Wow. Your all worked up just for this date? It must be fancy. Jodie: It’s not a date. It’s just me and Haris going to get something to eat at a fancy restaurant. Nena: In other words a date. Jodie: Fine it’s a date. But I don’t know what to wear. Nena: I’m sure Haris won’t care what you wear. If he doesn’t have his jaw on the floor, first. Nena started to laugh as Jodie glared at her. She finally chose a red dress with red heels. There was a knock on the door. Nena went to get the door and saw Haris trying to wipe the gel out of his hair. Nena: Haris! Jodie will be here in a minute. She’s just getting ready. And a word of advice, don’t use a full bottle of gel on your hair. Haris’ eye twitched as he heard what Nena said. He noticed Jodie come out of the bathroom wearing the dress. His jaw dropped almost to the floor. Nena then started to laugh. Nena: I told you his jaw would drop to the floor! You owe me big time Haptism. Jodie: Yeah, yeah. So Haris ready to go? Haris couldn’t speak. He has never seen this side of Jodie. The beautiful side. He always thought of her as one of the guys. Jodie took Haris’ hand and they ran out of the hotel. Nena watched as they left. Nena: Aw, young love. A piece of the ceiling hit Nena on her head and she fell to the ground, unconscious. A man wearing a black trench coat and hat walked into the hotel and started to take some things from the room. He ran as fast as he can and ran to the roof. He took off the hat and it was Shen he dialed a number on his cell phone. Shen: I have the files, Master Adam. I will start the second task as soon as possible. Adam was in the Innovators base as he was ready to get into Shinobi Gundam for the plan to take down the city Haris, Jodie, and Nena were in. The Shinobi was missing an arm from the last battle with Celestial Being, but in its place were a cloak and a cannon. Adam: Good work Shen. I want you to wait near the mountains for the AEU Mobile Suits. They will tire out the Gundams while we go in for the kill. Shen: Roger that. I’ll stand by until they show up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 EPIC, keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 Interesting, there are many grammar errors. Seems a lot of dialugue, but seems good. Ismail seems spelling right, but still good. If you want I can help. Can't wait to see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted February 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 I'm actually still working on the profiles for the fan fic as well as writing chapter 2 but I'll try to post as soon as possible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 Well that would be interesting to see. I will read it. Make sure to check your grammar and spelling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted February 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 I'll try to check on that when i finish my chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted February 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Now after a full day of typing nonstop heres chapter 2 [spoiler= Chapter 2: Knight’s Arrival] Haris kept blocking the attacks with the shield as more AEU Mobile Suits arrived into the battle. Haris: Damn it. I can’t win this battle by just blocking. I need to attack somehow. He pressed a button and he shot GN beams at one of the Mobile Suits, causing it to be destroyed in an instant. AEU commander: He destroyed an ENACT. All men fire! Don’t try to miss a single shot. All of the Mobile suits kept firing at Knight Gundam. But Haris was quick enough to use the shield. Haris put his hand on the controls. Haris: Ok I think I’m getting the hang of this. Ok now I’m ready. He activated the Buster sword, which came out of Knight Gundam’s left arm. He charged at the ENACTs ad cut through at least 4 of them. The commander type ENACT was constantly shooting at Knight Gundam but they were useless because before the commander knew it, the Mobile Suit was stabbed through the torso, barely missing him. AEU Commander: Damn it! Send out Arche Gundam. After saying that the ENACT blew up. When the message was sent, Ali Al Saachez got into his Gundam and launched. He made it to the battle as he saw Knight Gundam destroy the last ENACT in the squad. Ali: Well, well, well. Looks like we have a Gundam here. And he's quite skilled. Ali and Haris were locked in a sword fight. Soon after, Arche Gundam’s arm and leg was cut as well as part of Knight Gundam’s right hand. All of a sudden eight GN beams were fired at them. 6 of them hit Arche Gundam, disabling it while 2 hit Knight Gundam. All of the Celestial Being Gundam showed up. Haris: Oh crap this isn’t good. Setsuna: Haris what the hell are you doing inside Knight Gundam? Allelujah: Well he did seem to destroy a lot of AEU Mobile Suits. I’ll give him that. Tieria: And on his first time piloting it. This kid has potential. Lockon: But he still broke into the base and had a joyride with the Knight Gundam. Haris: I’m getting the idea that I should bring this back to the base. Setsuna: Yes you should. All of the sudden the Arche Gundam self-destructed. With that, all 5 Gundams went back to the Celestial Being base. Haris was locked in a containment cell. Hours later Sumeragi and Tieria walked in. Haris: What happened? Am I going to be locked in here? Sumeragi: No, no. You are in a bit of trouble for taking Knight Gundam. Tieria: But you did manage to complete most of our mission already. Haris: So, I helped is what you’re telling me? Sumeragi: Helped? You basically completed Setsuna, Allelujah, and Tieria’s part of the mission in not only record time but also you managed to destroy the #1 enemy to Celestial Being Haris: So, what does it mean? Tieria: Well, I was talking to Veda and we both agreed on making you the pilot for Knight Gundam. Haris: This is awesome! When do I work? Setsuna: After school. But if there are mission that we do need you or if we need reinforcements, you will be taken out of school for the day. Haris felt like he was in a dream. Not only will he be in Celestial Being, but also he gets to pilot Knight Gundam. Setsuna and Tieria left while Haris was still with Sumeragi. Haris: So when am I getting out of here? Sumeragi: Another two days. Haris: Another two days!?! This isn’t fair! Sumeragi just giggled and closed the cell door while Haris kept screaming words that were muffled. Sumeragi: Since there’s one kid from the original Meisters, maybe we should use their kids as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Cool the second chapter, this is getting better and better. Grammar seems better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted February 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 I used Microsoft word this time and used the spell check anyways i just finished the third chapter. [spoiler= Chapter 3: Gale Force Winds part 1: The mission] Two days has passed since Haris had the joyride with Knight Gundam. He was released from the containment cell and went to Sumeragi’s office. Haris: You wanted to see me Miss Sumeragi? Sumeragi: Yes I do. As you know you become part of Celestial Being today. But I have a special task for you. Haris: What is it? Sumeragi showed pictures of two girls. Both of them Haris knew from school. Sumeragi: I want you to bring both of these girls to the Celestial Being base. Your first target is Saiya Dylandy, the captain of your school’s paintball team. Haris: I know Saiya. She always wanted to be part of Celestial Being as well as pilot a Gundam. Sumeragi: So this will be one of your easiest missions. If there is any trouble while you’re on your mission, bring them with you so they can pilot their selected Gundams. Haris: Okay. I’ll go after Saiya first and bring her here. Sumeragi: Okay then little boy. You should head off to school. You don’t want to start your first mission late. Haris: Oh right. And I’m not a little boy. He left and Sumeragi took out a bottle of sake Sumeragi: This kid is something else. Haris put on his rollerblades and skated toward his school, Arlious Academy. It was a big school separated into 4 different parts. 1 for the elementary school, 1 for middle school, 1 for high school, and the last part for gym and the auditorium. He bumped into a girl. As he got into the school. Haris: Oh sorry about that. Girl: No it’s my fault. I wasn’t looking. Haris looked at the girl and noticed that she was the second girl in the picture. Haris: I haven’t seen you around the academy. Girl: Oh. That’s because I just transferred here. My name is Jodie Haptism. Haris: My name’s Haris Ismail Jodie: So are you related to the princess Marina Ismail? Haris: She’s my mother. Though its weird how no one will believe you even though you have the same last name. School went by quicker than it usually was. Both of them had the same classes but they kept talking while the teachers weren’t looking. The bell rang and they went to lunch. Haris: So how do you like this school so far? Jodie: Its better than my old school I can say that. Both of them shared a laugh then it soon got quiet. Haris: So I was watching the news last night about that Gundam that attacked an AEU base. They said that it was part of Celestial Being. What do you think of them? Jodie: Well I’m for Celestial Being. I would want to eradicate war. This war so far is purely pointless. Haris: Not to mention we are losing people for no reason whatsoever, but for some things there has to be sacrifices. A Mobile Suit was seen outside the lunch room window and was targeting the school. The Mobile Suit was from the AEU but it was a new model. Haris had a beep coming from his phone with a message saying, “Knight is on the way” Haris grabbed Jodie’s hand and they ran out to the other side of the school where another Mobile Suit of the same model was there. Soon a shot was fired at the school, causing an explosion in the lunchroom. Haris and Jodie kept running away until they go to the exit. When they did, the Celestial Being Gundams excluding Allelujah and Gundam Arios arrived and Knight Gundam landed on the ground. Haris: Okay Jodie follow me. We’re going into Knight Gundam. Jodie: Wait why should we? We aren’t Meisters. We don’t know how to control it. Haris: I am a Gundam Meister for Celestial Being, Jodie. I piloted Knight Gundam that was on the news last night. Jodie was surprised about hearing her new friend was in the faction she always dreamed of being in. Haris took her hand and got inside Knight Gundam. The cockpit was too small so she had to sit on top of Haris, who couldn’t stop blushing. He activated Knight Gundam. Haris: this is Knight Gundam. Ready to await orders. Lockon: Ok we are against two new AEU Mobile Suits known as GN-Dragons. They carry a vast amount of fire-based weaponry. What we need to do is take them down before the school is destroyed. Setsuna: Ok Tieria, you and Lockon take the farther one while Haris and I take the closer one. Haris: Ok then let’s show them a real fight. Haris and Setsuna both charged at the closer GN-Dragon and all of them took out beam sabers. Setsuna took another beam saber and cut of the GN-Dragon’s arm while Haris cut off the legs. The pilot laughed and self-destructed, causing Knight Gundam to fall over with Haris and Jodie passed out. Setsuna: Damn it. Haris are you okay? Haris? Haris! Lockon and Tieria kept firing at the other GN-Dragon but they kept missing. Setsuna came in and tried to cut it but it was instantly blocked. The GN-Dragon shot 2 high-powered missiles at Tieria and Lockon with both of them hitting and destroying part of their Gundams while it took out a fire sword and slashed 00’s arms off and blasted the legs with a fire cannon, disabling them. The pilot in the GN-Dragon sent a transmission to the Gundams and revealed That it was Ali Al Saachez Ali: So this Mobile Suit took out all these Gundams. It’s great that I can destroy these now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Well okay then, keeps getting interesting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted February 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 yeah somehow Gundam fan fictions i write are more interesting. I have no idea why though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Well in gundam you have all theses giant robots which can do almost anything. So you can make them anything you do, having your imagination run free. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted February 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2009 now this chapter probably won't be my best one so far. but still here's chapter 4 [spoiler= Chapter 4: Gale Force Winds Part 2: The storm] Ali charged up the cannon in his arm, ready to fire at Knight Gundam. Ali: Well it looks like this will be the day you will be destroyed. All of a sudden two shots were fired and hit the cannon, stopping the attack. The shot came from Gundam Arios and another Gundam that was newly made. Ali: Oh great more Gundams. This should be fun. He kept shooting at the Gundams but they were easily blocked. Inside Knight Gundam, Jodie slowly started to wake up. When she did, she noticed that Haris was still unconscious. Jodie: Haris, wake up. You have to wake up Haris. Arios and the other Gundam landed next to the fallen Knight Gundam. Allelujah sent a transmission to Knight Gundam, and noticed Jodie in there. Allelujah: What? Jodie? What are you doing in there. Jodie: Dad? Your part of Celestial Being? Allelujah: Yeah I am. Quick get in the Gundam on your right. I’ll try to distract this guy. As Allelujah was fighting with Ali, Jodie got out of Knight Gundam and got into the Gundam. As she did, the cockpit closes and activated the Gundam. Words soon were starting to be typed on the screen. Jodie: Kyrios…Gale? Well either way it’s a Gundam. Jodie activated Kyrios Gale and took out the propeller blades and threw it at the GN-Dragon, cutting off the legs and the left arm. Ali just laughed. Ali: well is seems that this Gundam is strong. Looks like my job is done. The GN-Dragon then self-destructed, causing Gundam Arios to lose an arm. Soon after, a Celestial Being storage ship and they started to collect the Gundams and the Meisters got out of their Gundams and saw Jodie get out of Kyrios Gale. Setsuna: Who the hell is that? Allelujah: That’s my daughter. Well, one of them. Lockon: She sure is a pretty girl though. Probably good for Haris. Setsuna: Can we not go through this again? It’s hard enough that all your kids are girls and I’m the only Meister that has a son. Lockon: Come on Setsuna. It wouldn’t hurt to wonder now, would it? Setsuna: We should stop talking about this. I’m getting a bit uneasy about that. Jodie opened Knight Gundam’s cockpit and noticed that Haris was still unconscious and that his forehead was bleeding. Allelujah and Setsuna ran in and got Haris. They took him to the medical deck. Doctor: Well he seems to be fine. And Allelujah you still didn’t take the medicine. Allelujah: I told you already. I do not want to be a sedated monkey. Doctor: Fine. But you won’t be a sedated monkey you would be like a- Allelujah: SHUT UP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 STOP NAO!!!!!!!!!!!! This topic is about tacos. The fourth one seems fine, well keep trying, I bet the next one will be good. Strange ending the last one with shut up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 I was trying to make a funny ending for that chapter,but I currently fail at that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 If you want make something funny, try to make it unsuspected and random that won't normally happen within the world of your story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted February 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 It would be hard to make omething funny in basically war staory. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 18, 2009 Report Share Posted February 18, 2009 You can have one moment like laid back. Then something random happens. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haitaku Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 I agree. So, what's chapter 5 about? Where do the HRS and Innovators come in? So far, good though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted February 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 Well i though that its too early for HRL o be in the war so they will be in a couple of chapters. But for the Innovators they were scheduled to be on this chapter. [spoiler= Chapter 5: The Evicted Part 1: Confrontation] In space, teams of AEU Mobile Suits were searching for what the think is a Gundam. One team found 3 Gundams floating in space. AEU cadet #1: Commander Colasour, we’ve found 3 Gundams but they seem to be floating in space. Patrick: Hmm that’s strange. Is there anybody in there? AEU cadet #2: There are people in there. But, their body temperature is below 20 degrees Fahrenheit. Patrick: That’s strange. Anyway, all men fire at will. All of the Mobile Suits fired at the Gundams, but all it did was wake up the people inside. Before they even knew it, all of the Mobile suits were vaporized, while Patrick’s Mobile Suits was floating in space with the lower half of its body destroyed. Patrick: What the hell happened? Who are these people? Patrick soon received 3 transmissions from the Meisters that destroyed the fleet. There were two girls and 1 boy. Boy: We are the Evicted. Our goal is to destroy the group that destroyed our home. Even if we have to kill every, single person to do so. The three Gundams destroyed the AEU base in the asteroid field and headed towards Earth. On Earth, early morning soon arose. Haris woke up and rubbed his head. He felt something rough on his forehead. He had some stitching on his forehead. He noticed Jodie asleep and she slowly started to wake up. Jodie: Haris? How are you feeling? Haris: My head hurts. How long was I out? Jodie: You were out cold for a day. Not only that, you missed the battle and me piloting Gundam Kyrios Gale. Haris: Damn it. Well at least I’m okay now. Sumeragi walked into the room and noticed Haris was awake. Sumeragi: Oh Haris. Glad to see you’re awake. Oh and you two should go to the briefing room in 10 minutes. 10 minutes have passed and everyone except Lockon went to the briefing room. On the screen was the 3 Gundams. Setsuna: So, are these the Gundams that easily destroyed an AEU base? Sumeragi: Yes they are. They are Gundams made from the Space Arcana. Allelujah: Wasn’t hat destroyed 100 years ago? Sumeragi: Yes it was but, 3 Gundams and their Meisters escaped. Jodie: Then they would be over 100 years old. Marie: They must have been under Cryogenic freezing for that long. Sumeragi: All we know is that they are Celestial Being Gundams. Haris: Wouldn’t that mean they are on our side? Sumeragi: That’s the thing. They may have Celestial Being Gundams but they might not be on our side. Nena: So this will be an intercepting and possible recruit mission? Sumeragi: Most likely. But since they seem to be long ranged Gundams, for now we send Setsuna, Haris, and Jodie. Within an hour of the mission, Tieria, Allelujah, and Lockon will be sent. Speaking of Lockon, where is he? Fedlt: When I asked Lockon where he was going, he said that he had business to take care of. He’ll be here soon, I hope. Lockon took Gundam Ion and flew towards Arlious Academy. He activated Haro and started a scan for Saiya Lockon: Haro have you found Saiya yet? Haro: Saiya located. Saiya located. Inside Arlious Academy. Inside Arlious Academy. Lockon landed near Arlious Academy and got inside. Minutes later, he got o he exit with Saiya. As soon as they exited the school, a GN beam was fired and the school was instantly destroyed. When Lockon and Saiya looked at the sky, they noticed one of the Gundams that was from 100 years ago. The cockpit opened and revealed a girl about 17. Lockon: What is this? Who is the Meister? Girl: Are you from Celestial Being? Lockon: Yeah. What of it? Girl: That’s all I needed to know… The girl got into her Gundam and activated it. The GN particles soon transformed into 2 wings making it look like an angel. The Gundam then took a GN pistol and started shooting at Lockon and Saiya. They started dodging the shots got in Ion. Saiya sat on top of Lockon because of the cockpit being to cramped. Lockon: Saiya, try to use the sniper rifle while I maneuver. Saiya: Okay dad. I just hope we can stop her. Saiya started to turn on the sniper system and targeted the angelic Gundam. As soon as she fired a shot, the Angel Gundam’s GN wings blocked the attack. Lockon: What the hell was that? Girl: I see you noticed the GN wings system. Every shot fired at Angel Gundam will be blocked or deflected. Lockon: Damn it. Then Ion’s sniper systems will be useless. On a mountain far from the battlefield, Ribbons and another Meister named Shen Haitaku were watching from far away. Ribbons: It seems that Izumi was able to find Lockon. What is more exciting is that he’s against his total opposite. Shen: Master Ribbons, if you want, I can destroy Lockon easily for you. Ribbons: No, no. We are waiting for the other Celestial Being Gundams to be launched. Then, we’ll attack the base. Get into Viral Gundam, Shen. We are going on to find the other two of the Evicted. Shen: As you wish Master Ribbons. Shen and Ribbons both entered their Gundams and flew into separate directions to find the other Evicted members. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted February 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Man0waR Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 you didn't add my dude...T_T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 ME like chapter 5 Interesting with a new person. So does the gundam use fossil fuels? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
galesonic Posted February 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 It's more like a start into the loss of fossil fuels so they started using E-Carbon to be safe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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