pumpkin_972005 Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 Hey everyone! How's it going? So I just decided to make this cool fanfic for you guys and I hope you like it, please comment and give me your honest opinion, but use gentil words. Oh, and happy friday the 13th!!!Here it goes: "Stop, Stop!" laughed Foshei as he pushed his annoying little step-brother off his bed and grabbed the feather he had used to tickle him, "You little jerk," Foshei smiled, "don't do that again!" "Or else what?" laughed Foshei's step-brother, "You'll kill me?" "No David, but I will rip your cards up!" Foshei taunted under a smirk. Foshei quickly opened a drawer containing a bunch of cards; duel monster cards. He had collected a lot of cards, and all of them were rare. Out of the mess, Foshei pulled a pack of cards out and shook it in front of his David's face. "You wouldn't!" "I would!" David sighed. "Foshei, I know all you want to duel me," he grumbled, "but I don't feel like it." "Oh really? Well how about you have a little chat with my friend Washington?" Foshei said, waving a dollar bill with his other hand. "Ok! But let's make it quick!" said David as he snatched the bill from Foshei's hand. "I hate how you always win, you with all your rare cards and rich father!" David activated a duel disk that was on his arm as Foshei gave him his deck, "DUEL!" "Challengers go first!" cried Foshei. "But that's cheap!" argued David. "That's what you think!" David laughed, "Draw! I activate the spell card Tribute of Death!" A dark card appeared face-down on the field. There also was a wire attached to it and Foshei's duel disk. "The effect is simple; this turn I can summon any card, regardless of its effect, in exchange for me paying lifepoints equal to its ATK and cards from my hand equal to its ATK divided by 1000! So I chose the Triple Thunder Warrior!" (ATK:3900, Foshei's LP:100, 3900 divided by 1000= 3 R 900, Fosei discards 3 cards) The dark card drained Foshei's lifepoints away through the wire, and turned around to reveal an amazing warrior. "Oh snap..." nervousely stated David. "And there's more!" Foshei announced, "My Triple Thunder Warrior can do something special; when my lifepoints are lower than yours, our lifepoints become equal!" The warrior with his sword made completely out of thunder and golden armor striked his sword at David's heart, destroying 3900 lifepoints and leaving him alone, wailing in pain, bolts of electricity shocking his body, his cry of pain echoing in the room, its owner crumbling to the ground. "Plus," Foshei smirked, "I can eliminate 1 card in my deck to force a card from your deck to be destroyed! And I chose to destroy ten cards from my deck!" The warrior took his sword, still on David's sizzling body, and slid it to the deck slot on his duel disk, shredding the top ten cards of David's deck, and leaving him virtually lifeless on the floor. Even though he was very weak, David managed to get up and smile. "You forgot, Foshei," calmly said David, "about my best card!" "What!" exclaimed Foshei, "You have no best card, David!" "That's what you think! Thanks to its effect, my best card comes out when its in the grave! Go, Governor of Light!" cried David happily. Strangely, a man came out from the ground, looking like an angel, an honest man. He was dressed in silk, a record book in his hand. Bright light shone from him, and by his feet, the point sign appeared: ATK=1000, DEF=2000. "He might look weak at first, but listen to this;" started David, "when it is summoned, your monster's ATK becomes subtracted from your LP!" "Impossible!" stated Foshei, "just impossible!" The Governor of light raised his hand and unleased a blinding light causing Foshei to go on his knees and his Triple Thunder Warrior to die. David had won! "WHOOHOO!" screamed David, "I beat you!" "Yeah," admitted Foshei, "you did." Suddenly, a bolt of lightning hit David in the back, knocking him unconsious. The Triple Thunder Warrior was standing behind David, a smile on his face. "I don't care if you beat him," he whispered in David's ear, "I just care that you beat me." The Triple Thunder Warrior now stood, staring at Foshei, "You're next, for letting him win." TO BE CONTINUED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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