blizzy96 Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 :D I only just started today and this is my 1st realistic card:D plz rate and comment EDIT: Now ive made Triranolizard plz rate and comment this one too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 Not bad at all for your first card.A little over powered,and once you learn OCG(Official Card Grammar)you'll be great I'm sure!Welcome to the site!8/10 for me with an added 1 because your new and you made a decent card,so 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzy96 Posted September 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 Not bad at all for your first card.A little over powered' date='and once you learn OCG(Official Card Grammar)you'll be great I'm sure!Welcome to the site!8/10 for me with an added 1 because your new and you made a decent card,so 9/10![/quote'] :D Thanx mate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 No problem.If you need any help learning where stuff is on the site or you want help with some card effects,just private message me.:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzy96 Posted September 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 No problem.If you need any help learning where stuff is on the site or you want help with some card effects' date='just private message me.:)[/quote'] Will do:P PS. check out Triranolizard!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 Cool for a normal monster,but you don't see them much these days.I would work on the description if you were making more normal monster,but other than that,pretty cool!8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-_Tyrael_- Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 The only thing, I see is "this effect can only be used once", is that how you want (it indicates that you can use that effect once while that card is face-up) or you can add "per turn" or "per duel" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serrenox Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 Yeah they're pretty good. I got some advice though, always capitalize Life Points. That's a mistake that many users make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Member Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 How did you get the pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RonnieMagia Posted September 20, 2007 Report Share Posted September 20, 2007 Why all of you ask about the pics, believe me, finding good pics is not a big deal. Oh, I almost forgot, 9/10 as you're new to card making. Very nice job you made out there, keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titus Posted September 21, 2007 Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 yeah...it's pretty cool. i'd probably lower his atk a bit, but atleast you did add a cost and that it's only able to use once. 9/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzy96 Posted September 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 yeah...it's pretty cool. i'd probably lower his atk a bit' date=' but atleast you did add a cost and that it's only able to use once. 9/10 :D[/quote'] Thanx:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gungeransu Posted September 21, 2007 Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 I think you should make the Lizard into a Dinosaur-type, go more in depth with its description, and raise its ATK a little. I also think you should reword Lion's effect as:Pay 1000 Life Points. During the turn this effect is activated, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. This effect can only be used once in the entire duel.Welcome to the site! 8/10, I get a sense of realism from them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzy96 Posted September 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 I think you should make the Lizard into a Dinosaur-type' date=' go more in depth with its description, and raise its ATK a little. I also think you should reword Lion's effect as:Pay 1000 Life Points. During the turn this effect is activated, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. This effect can only be used once in the entire duel.Welcome to the site! 8/10, I get a sense of realism from them.[/quote'] Well my booster pack was goin to be "Heartless Beasts". So changing to to dinosaur wounldnt make sence. But i will change lions effect.:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gungeransu Posted September 21, 2007 Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 Oh really? I guess it makes sense then. They do look like chimera, after all. XDYou should also put the set name on the card. Heartless Beasts sounds awesome. Did you make a initial thingy for it yet? Like HLB or HBS or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzy96 Posted September 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 Oh really? I guess it makes sense then. They do look like chimera' date=' after all. XDYou should also put the set name on the card. Heartless Beasts sounds awesome. Did you make a initial thingy for it yet? Like HLB or HBS or something?[/quote'] Whats HLB and HBS?:shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzy96 Posted September 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 Ive made some awsome new cards for this set but im not going to post them yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted September 21, 2007 Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 Wow there awesome 9.9./10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzy96 Posted September 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 Wow there awesome 9.9./10 :Dthanx:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted September 21, 2007 Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 you have made a really good start.10/10. you make great cards and as deity mitsu said once you learn good OCG you will be a mast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzy96 Posted September 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 you have made a really good start.10/10. you make great cards and as deity mitsu said once you learn good OCG you will be a mast :DThanx:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzy96 Posted September 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 you have made a really good start.10/10. you make great cards and as deity mitsu said once you learn good OCG you will be a mast :DThanx:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blizzy96 Posted September 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 How long to do have to wait to bump? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowhorus Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 These are really good mate 9/10... can you tell me how you did the packet because i can make okay cards but i dont know how to make a packet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROY Posted September 23, 2007 Report Share Posted September 23, 2007 like the pic of the first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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