WindupRabbitFan14 Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 'I ran, as fast as I could, to stop him taking my soul...' This fanfic is intended to be about a Duel Spirit, who comes to life (like Yubel in GX), but this time it's Copycat. I changed his effect, etc. to make it suit the fanfic, so here's the updated card: [spoiler=Characters][spoiler=Kasu]Name: Kasu Height: 5' 1" (1m 55cm)Age: 15Description: Kasu has quick, brown eyes, and usually wears scruffy clothing. He has untidy dark hair, and he likes to invent cards. Kasu loves dueling more than anything else.Deck: ZombieSignature card: Ryu KokkiDuel Spirit: Spirit Reaper [spoiler=Oznij]Name: OznijHeight: 5' 3" (1m 60 cm)Age: 15 1/2Description: Oznij has a square face, with scarcely any hair. His eyes are a brownish color, but seem red in the dark. He occasionally wears brown clothing, but normally sticks to a green shirt and jeans. He is always up for a duel, but is easily put into a bad mood. Oznij contains DNA from Jinzo, thus has grown indifferently. Deck: Jinzo MonarchsSignature card: JinzoDuel Spirit: Jinzo - Returner [spoiler=Freya]Name: FreyaHeight: 5' 0" (1m 52cm)Age: 14 1/2Description: Freya has white-colored hair, and bright blue eyes. She rarely enjoys dueling, but loves cheerleading. Freya is always energetic, and thinks positive even in the worst possible scenario.Deck: Counter FairiesSignature card: Airknight ParshathDuel Spirit: Watapon [spoiler=Copycat]Name: CopycatDescription: Copycat was released in a Shadow Game, and his card was thrown onto a Destiny Board when Spirit Message L was activated. He came to life once the duel had ended, and used the soul of the losing duelist to do so. Copycat can take on any form of life.Deck: Copy CloneSignature Card: Copycat More will be added, don't worry ;) I'll leave a little bit up, and edit in some more every so often: [spoiler=Part 1]I was walking along, with my pals, Oznij and Freya. It was three o'clock, as we were heading to the card shop. I heard a faint voice coming from further down the road... it sounded like someone calling desperately for help. 'No! Help!!! Ok... You won... Uhh........' We stood still, listening... Suddeny, my Duel Spirit, Spirit Reaper, had appeared. He rushed ahead, to see what was happening. I had no choice; I had to follow him. Eventually, we saw it... It was the Soul of Copycat. On the floor, was a young child, who seemed unconscious. We knew what had happened. Copycat had defeated him in a duel, and absorbed his soul... It turned round, and suddenly glowed. It seemed as if some how he had grown, by absorbing the child's soul. 'Hey, what did you do to that kid?' I called across to him.'I defeated him in a duel, and it seems he just collapsed' Copycat answered, in a sinister voice.'Yeah, sure! You absorbed his soul, didn't you?' I shouted. I knew this was what'd happened, because on the floor was a card... it was Soul Absorption.'If you don't believe me, then let's duel!' Copycat said.'Ok, wouldn't have it any other way!' I replied. Freya grabbed my shoulder. 'It's not safe! What if he takes your soul?' Freya shouted.I answered, 'Don't worry, this'll be done before my second turn.''Ok... Go on then' she replied to me. 'Duel!' I started, by setting three cards facedown: 'Draw... I'll throw down three... and that's it! Give us all ya got!' 'Draw. Think I'll play the Spell Card, Foolish Burial! Now, I can send a Destiny Hero - Malicious to the Graveyard! Now, from my Deck, I can remove from play one more to summon the one in my Graveyard.' A winged figure rose. 'Next up, it's The Calculator! It gets three hundred ATK, for each Level Star out! Guess that's twenty four hundred. Now I activate the card, Synchro Boost! This gives my Malicious another 500 ATK, and a Level Star! Now I have 1300 and 2700... I'll attack with Malicious first! Go, attack!' I took the damage; it brought me to my knees. 'Now, you're done. Calc, destroy him!' It seemed to display a huge mixture of numbers on it's screen, and eventually stopped at 2700. It began to fire a beam, but I flipped a trap. 'Nope, let's go for a Magic Cylinder! Seems you're the lucky one.' The Calculator's display suddenly changed to 180, as it spun 180 degrees. It then fired the beam, doing severe damage to Copycat. I drew, hoping for something good. I had a Ryu Kokki, Book of Life and Double Summon in my hand. I looked at the card... It was an Allure of Darkness. I was sure what to discard in my head; it was the only choice, Ryu Kokki. 'Let's start... with Allure of Darkness! Now, I draw two, then ditch a DARK attribute monster. Let's see... Sweet! I'll discard a Ryu Kokki. Now, here comes a Book of Life! I bring back Kokki from the Grave, and he's no joke! With 2400, this is over!' I called. 'How? You won't win with that!' Copycat replied 'Yep, I will! I activate my Spell Card, Axe of Despair! Now he's up to 3400! Now, I play my face down, Ring of Destruction!' I answered. 'Won't that make you lose?' he questionned. 'Not until I flip Emergency Provisions! I gain a thousand by sending Ring to the Graveyard!' I said back, excitedly 'Crap.' Copycat mumbled. 'Guess it's over...' 'Damn well it is!' I cheered. 'You wait and see... I'll resurrect!' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 It's good....really good but it has some mistakes in it.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WindupRabbitFan14 Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 It's good....really good but it has some mistakes in it.8/10. Where? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Well it's in the I have no idea.Just talk to Mr.Puppet Hello there Slapp-Me-Do!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J123 Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Nice so far, maybe work on it a bit but apart from that, it's good so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WindupRabbitFan14 Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 *kills puppet**is not willing to make this pg13 for swearing* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J123 Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Swearing? I didn't notice any swearing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WindupRabbitFan14 Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Swearing? I didn't notice any swearing. I didn't, that's why. I was referring to Mr. Puppet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Yeah Mr.Puppet Nah nah nah nah nah I'm still alive hahahaha *Runs and get run over by a car*well that's the end of him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WindupRabbitFan14 Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 Good. He fails so hard, and is so dumb, he probablly got hit by a parked car. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J123 Posted February 8, 2009 Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 I just read the update. It's nice but a few mistakes... 'Now, you're done. Calc, destroy him!' It seemed to display a huge mixture of numbers on it's screen, and eventually stopped at 2700.[/Quote] You forgot an R an theres a few moar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WindupRabbitFan14 Posted February 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2009 crap. Fixed. The End. (of Mr. Puppet) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WindupRabbitFan14 Posted February 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 Bump -.-I'm about to add the end of teh duel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DuelingDude2 Posted February 11, 2009 Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 hey just a second! Here's Book of Life's ability: Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard and remove from play 1 monster from your opponent's Graveyard. And here's what you did: Discard Ryu-Kokki and then afterwards activated Book of Life when clearly there was no monster there in Copycat's grave! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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