Yusei Fudou Posted September 27, 2007 Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 Hmm, you may want some feedback by reading my fanfic. =) But a good start. EDIT: I register my character btw. :P Name: Mare OctaviusDeck: "The Sanctuary in the Sky" Deck: FairiesPersonality: Mean, creative, intelligent and always follows logic (Meanie Bastion, sorta) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted September 27, 2007 Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 cool i cant wait for my duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supersonic1994 Posted September 27, 2007 Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 Hurray, I may not have any currently planned duels in the fan fic for a while but I still am in the fan fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted September 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 Sonic Youre gonna duel soon enough Chapter 13 - Evil Hero's V.S Advanced Destiny GX-I start Draw I set a monster and 2 cards turn end Rahim-Draw i summon My D-hero Doom Lord and then activate his effect and remove your monster from play then i end my turn by setting a card GX-Very Well then Draw Summon Elemental Hero urstinarik now my monster will destoy your doom lord Rahim-Wrong i Activate Negate attack GX Set 1 more card end Rahim good then Draw!Yeah!now i activate my Spell card Advanced Destiny which trasforms all My D-heros to A-D-Heros hahahanow come forth advanced D-hero doom Lord first his effect then attack! GX-not Quite because i activate Negate attack... Rahim Then ill just end GX-Hmmm.....Draw and then summon my Evil Hero Power Lord!!1300 to attack you A doom lord and you lose 100.....Set card end Rahim-3900GX-4000 Rahim..Draw!now your moster comes back in a set position then i summon My Captian Tenacious and activate A destiny to summon my A D-hero Captian Tenacious to attack your mosnter! GX-Activate my monster's sp ability i can switch him to def mode by discarding 1 card from my hand! Rahim-But still he is destoryed...End GX-Draw and set monster turn end Rahim Pathetic draw and your monster returns back on the field in the way it was but now my captian attacks it so you lose 400 life point and your monster is destroyed and sent to the grave GX-3600Rahim-3900 To Be Continued... Sry biut the short ch but i had to go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowNeos Posted September 28, 2007 Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 Cool! Hey,GX,is Advanced Destiny a continious or field spell?If it isn't,I would change it, because you can only have 3 same cards,and to trasform only 3 D-heros ...Well ,you know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyberdude Posted September 28, 2007 Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 Type Of Deck:rebelion Personality: cocky and self centered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted September 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 Cool! Hey' date='GX,is Advanced Destiny a continious or field spell?If it isn't,I would change it, because you can only have 3 same cards,and to trasform only 3 D-heros ...Well ,you know[/quote'] It's a continous spell Effect:Remove from play 1 Destiny heroMonster from your side of the feild to the gravyars to special summon 1 Advanced Deastiny hero monster with the same name as the sacrficed destiniy hero monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
university222 Posted September 28, 2007 Report Share Posted September 28, 2007 when is next ep? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 yeah, when new ep out GX? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted September 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 sorry for the delays guys am trying to post as fast as i can Chapter 14 - Evil Hero Malicious Devil V.S Avanced Destiny Hero Plazma - Rahim:End GX:Great,My move draw Activate My spell Evil Sacrifice First i send 1 Hell Brat from my hand then i may Special Summon 1 Evil Token [3 Stars attack 0 Defence 0 Effect:You can Sacrifice 1 Hell Token To Special Summon 1 Monster to the field after 3 turns] and 1 Hell Token Which has the same stats but no effect then i tribute my Hell Token and After 3 turns i may Special summon a monster from my deck set card and set monster then i end my turn Rahim:Very Well Then Draw Summon Destiny Hero Double Dude and then Activate Advanced Destiny which allows me to turn Double dude into Advanced Destiny Hero Double Dude attack 2000/2000 Effect same as double dude.Now attack his Evil Token GX:Not quite if My hell token is in the Grave you can only destoy my monster by attack him 4 times Rahim:i attack him 3 times so next turn he will be destoyed by attack him once I end my turn its you move. GX:At last Draw 2 turns untill i can special summon my monster but for now i just set a card and end my turn its your turn Rahim:now my Monster attack GX:activate Negate attack to stop your attack and end your battle Phase Rahim:Ugh(he must want that Evil Token For somthing).....(But what) GX: Draw Set Monster Turn End Rahim:A D-hero Tenacious attacK!!! GX:Activate Sakuretsu armor now your monster is destoyed Rahim Activate Trap Sub Counter nopw i destoy Double Dude instead I end! GX: Now Draw Summon My E-hero Malicious Edge and Activate My dark Fuion to make Him E-hero Malicious Devil 3500 attack end rahim Okay Then I sacrfice my three monster to summon My D-hero Plazma and Sacrrifce him to Summon A d-hero Plazma 3500 attack END GX:now Attack Plazma My Devil As the Prepare to strike they both fly in the sky as thunder clashes and then the light becomes dark who will win the Desprate battle and Duel....... TO BE CONTINUED.... At last i finished Studing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowNeos Posted September 30, 2007 Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 Cool! Hey' date='GX,is Advanced Destiny a continious or field spell?If it isn't,I would change it, because you can only have 3 same cards,and to trasform only 3 D-heros ...Well ,you know[/quote'] It's a continous spell Effect:Remove from play 1 Destiny heroMonster from your side of the feild to the gravyars to special summon 1 Advanced Deastiny hero monster with the same name as the sacrficed destiniy hero monster Thx.Everything is clear;) The Episode is cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted September 30, 2007 Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 cool im the only one who lasted more than 5 seconds i will probbly lose and your good side will win or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted September 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 Nope.....I Put These 2 Chapters together becuase i had to make them short Just wait until chapter 18..heheheh Chapter 15 - Meet The Newest and Most Evil Evil Hero!!!+Chapter 16 - The End Of The Second Dimension GX:Well then...I guess its over its a tie between pur monsters ill just set a couple of face downs and then end my turn.Be careful you better listen because i will have no mercy on you! Rahim:I dont care about that now its my turn so listen up.....Draw ...Activate a Spell card Dimensional Message i may Special Summon one monster from my graveyard if i have no monsters and i am not allowed to summon/set or attack any cards this turn...so....I summon Advanced Destiny Hero Plazma...End turn GX:So Now its is My turn I drawSet a monster and activate my swords of evil which destroy one monster on your side of the field by tributing one monster on my side of the field so bye bye to my face down Monster and then bye bye to your Advanced Destiny Hero Plazma ahahahahahahahaha...then i guess ill just end my turn your up be carful i sence that the end is near very very near..hahahahaha Rahim:Your End that Is My Movse Draw first i summon my Destiny Hero Diamond Dude and Sacrifice him to special summon Advanced Destiny Hero Diamond Dude[Effect:Send one card from the top of your deck to the graveyard if it is a monster card your opponent losses 1000 life poinst of it is a Spell Your opponent losses 2000 Life points and if it is a trap Your Opponent losses 3000 Life points.This Effect Cannot Be activated for two more turns after the first time of activation.You cannot Draw a card for 2 more turns.]Now i activate His effect and draw (Rahim looked at it and smiled)well what do ya know a TRAP!!! so now you lose 3000 life points (this has gotta be my luckiest draw!) GX:WHAT??!!! GX-600Rahim-3900 Rahim-After That Diamond Dude Attack GX:wrong i activate Magic Cylender Rahim-But i Activate 7 tools of the bandit GX-gogo Trap Jammer Rahim - gogo Exsecss damage now this is how this works i lose 1000 life points all traps are negated and destoyed and we both take damage equal to Diamond Dude's attack points Rahim-100GX-0 Then a bright light shone it all turned dark for GX (Current Narrator GX) I woke up to find myslef in a strange like portal i asked rahim.... GX-rahim what is this place Rahim - We are being taken to another dimension Sonic - Wait Who's That??? ???-No need to be scared am no threat am an ally Sonic- Is that you???RainbowNeos!! Rainbow neos- Yea i was stuck here for a couple of days i fell in the portal which took everyone to the first strange dimension now we cannot go throught this diemension only with the power of darkness and i dont have any power of darkness neither do any of you right Rahim-I guess(looking at GX) Rainbow neos - If you do use it now GX-Stood up and took out a deck box whick looked like his old armor They all looked at him as he started to raise it above his head......................... Oh Yeah...there might not be any duel in chapter 17 soz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowNeos Posted October 1, 2007 Report Share Posted October 1, 2007 COOL! I'M FEAUTURED! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted October 2, 2007 Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 cool i totaly rock Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowNeos Posted October 3, 2007 Report Share Posted October 3, 2007 GX! When does the next Episode come? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted October 3, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2007 Here it is ENJOY!!! Chapter 17 - Destruction!Enter the Third and Final Dimension The portal Broke they were back on land as they stood they saw someone nearing in he had a black robe and was walking fast when he got to us.... ???:I am the lord of this dimension i took the body of this guy and also i am very diffrerent so be careful becuase i am just about to kill you all GX:Yaden?? ????:wrong His Body only you can call me Dan Lord Of The Three Lost Dimensions!!! GX:Three lost Dimensions??? Dan:Yes...... Rahim:Tell us what are these dimensions that you are talking about.. Sonic:Now i Know what happened that time when it became slightly Darker we entered the second dimension and now the third but before we had no portals no nothing now we just did.. RainbowNeos:Your lucky i was stuck in one the whole time! Sonic:well...Let him talk and we'll find out what happened Dan:Well ill Be expecting a duel..... GX:Sure but first Talk! Dan:Okay okay.....I created the three dimensions as a kid in my own imagination and thought of them very correctly but before i was pathetic i thought of them as dimensions of light of Good Till that dark day.......I fell on the ground as some duelists approched me i won the duel but as they talked i kept changing they gave me an amulet to make me think of anything i like and make it true so i thought of these Dimesions and lived here for 10 years untill.....(his voice started to change evil).....I found out my true power i could get people under my control and do whatever i like in them even if i wanted to destroy them but there had to be a limit i had to lose in something i choose that they lose in a duel they die....but the first diemension fills them with hatred so they dont die untill the second diemesion.....So if you beat me in a duel this amulet will be destroyed and i will die but if you lose i will become full and contol the worlds diemsion meet me at the top of that cliff tommrow Night about 22 hours from now(he then Dissapeared) GX looked at his deck the whole night updating it then rahim came in his room... Rahim:GX take this(He gave him a dark deck box with dark and gold armor then left) The Next Day they all left and went to the top of the cliff Dan:are you Sure your ready GX:Yea.... Dan:well Then.... GX + Dan: DUEL!!! (Chapter 18 might take a few days) What Do You guys think of my new sig? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowNeos Posted October 3, 2007 Report Share Posted October 3, 2007 About the sig...Do you mean "evil is power,power is evil"? I think this is good.Will I duel? And who is Dan? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted October 3, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2007 sry rainbow neos but youll duel in chapter 2 first ep both IF Evil is Power then Power is Evil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RainbowNeos Posted October 6, 2007 Report Share Posted October 6, 2007 Yeah,ok.I actually made a stupid thing matching my Deck as Roid Deck but ok,dont change it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted October 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2007 Note:Everyone Chapter 18 will be delayed sorry everyone but the problem is i have been very very very very busy all i can promise everyone now that before 21st Of October Chapter 1 season 2 will be relases (i hope)ill try to get Chapter 18 done on 11th becusae my exams finish 10 OCT Really Really Really Sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
university222 Posted October 9, 2007 Report Share Posted October 9, 2007 when do i come back? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted October 9, 2007 Report Share Posted October 9, 2007 WHEN DO I come back or maybe i nned to share my great dueling skills ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark24kid Posted October 10, 2007 Report Share Posted October 10, 2007 i want to make a return as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted October 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2007 Everyone will return...but it has to take some time i am kind of busy these days that is why i cannot write ill try to get the next epsiode out by 4 hours Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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