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hi here is my first fan fic

 

if you would like to be involved in it fill out this mini form(not personal deatails)

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i will put the first match of raw on now and mre later

 

 

raw theme (let it rock)

 

JTKL(jerry the king lawler):hello everyone and welcome to monday night raw

MC(micheal cole):yes we are in the NIA britain and we have got such a show for them

(goldust theme)

goldust:my opponent is......

(cody rhodes theme)

cody rhodes:your better brother me Cooooooooooody

JTKL:wait goldust just gave him a closhline

MC:let's get it started

JTKL:Goldust is goiving cody rhodes a load of left and rights

MC:but cody kicks goldust in temple and throws him on the canvice

JTKL:ouch goldust kicks cody rhodes in the face and trips and taunt's cody

MC:Wow cody rhodes flifs goldust over and is going up to the tope

JTKL:Bang he just jumped off the top rope onto goldust

The ref:1....2...

MC: oh and a big kickout by goldust

JTKL:cody rhodes is scraping goldust's eyes on throws him to the rope

MC:Cody rhodes is going to be dirty when he is on a team with randy orton

JTKL:But goldust can be dirty too and eh just proved that with a closhline out of the ring

MC:wait cody has got goldust

The ref:1....

JTKL:goldust retaliates by throwing cody on the announces table

MC:what a ddt by goldust

JTKL:goldust is going to the top rope

MC:this is going to be ugly

JTKL:but wait cody sliped of the announce table and gldust is gonna...

MC:Ouch

JTKL:is that someone coming

The ref:it's randy orton with a chair

MC:he EKO's goldust but wait randy lost cody the match

JTKL:It's hacksaw jim duggen he hits him with the stick

HJD(hacksaw jim duggen):oooooooh

The crowd:oooooooh

JTKL:what a match

 

i will post the next match tommorow or in a few days

 

Here is the next

 

JTKL:Lets get to our next match

MC:yes

(JBL's theme)

JTKL:here is the self made millionare

MC:yes can he win this match tonight though

(The rock's theme)

MC : oh my god it's the rock

The ROCK:Can you smell what the rock is cooking

JTKL:i don't have a clue

THE ROCK:A return victory

MC:so off we go

JTKL:the rck gets some early blows on jbl

MC:and sends him to the turnbuckle

JTKL:but jbl gets a lower kick and throws the rock to the floor

MC:and he put's the rock into a pin

1...2..

JTKL:an easy kickout by the rock he won't give up that easy

MC:so he gets a few shots to JBL and gets him back to the turnbuckle

JTKL:he gets JBL on the top rope but JBL gets the rock out the ring with a punch to the fac

1......

MC:JBLis very confident now

2.....

JTKL:but the rock is getting back up

3....

MC:but JBL is exiting the ring

1....

JTKL:the rock kicks JBL and punches him in the face

2....

MC:and now he irish whips him onto the steel steps

3....

JTKL:ouch the rock just smashed JBL'S face on the steps

4....

MC:but JBL retaliates with an elbow to the ribs of the rock

5...

JTKL:but the rock hits JBL's and throws him onto the commentry table

6...

MC:what a DDT by the rock

7...

JTKL : oh my god he just got JBL back up what is he going to do now

8...

MC:rock bottom!

9...

JTKL:the rock gets back into the ring

10...

MC:The rock wins the match

 

Match3

 

JTKL: our next match promises to be good

MC:yes it must be

JTKL:well espcessially if it is an last man standing match

(Randy ortons theme)

MC:here is one of the contenders who are looking to get in the 6man elimination chamber match at no way out

(Ric flairs theme)

Ric flair:woo woo woo before we got started i have one thing to say wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

JTKL:ric flair is ready now

MC:so the match is going to start for randy orten to get some hits to ric flair

JTKL:Randy orton isn't going to be in good shape after the attack from hacksaw jim duggen in the ribs

MC:and ric flair takes advantage of that with some kicks to the ribs

JTKL:but orton won't back down yet and he shows that with a headlock to ric flair

MC:flair espaces though and gets orton to the turnbuckle

JTKL:and he gives orton some blowes to the temple and gets him to the top rope

MC:but orton kciks flair

JTKL:fling RKO

MC:which busts flair open

JTKL:1.....2......3.........4.........5.........6.........7........

MC: oh my god flair got up

JTKL:and orton has just knocked the ref down

MC:and turns around to a low blow by flair

JTKl:and puton the

MC:the figure four

JTKl:to ware orton legs

MC:but the ref is back up now but orton gives flair a kick to the head which makes him fall

RANDY ORTON:come on flair get up come to home

JTKL:RKO

MC:1......2.....3.....4.....5.....6....7.....8.....9....10

JTKL: Orton has won the match

MC:WOW

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