OCG check

[ELPatoloco21]

This is my 4 type and none are complete but if i get some good picks and a OCG check this would be my first finished set "Rise of the Element Lord"

 

i made all the elements DARK,EARTH,LIGHT,WATER,WIND,and FIRE and all have written card just need OCG check and a pic

[Umbra]

1. I would suggest using Warrior instead of Lord.

 

2. While this card is face-up on the field, WIND monsters (your opponent controls?) cannot declare an attack. Once per turn, you can select 1 WIND monster your opponent controls and take control of it. If this card is designated as an attack target or as a target of a Spell or Trap Card, you can change the target to the selected monster.

 

3. Add a clause saying that you cannot control more than 1 of your opponent's monsters at the same time. Not that WINDs are commonly run these days, but still.

[ELPatoloco21]

Well i have all elements i'll post them

[-Berserker-]

2800 ATK and it cannot attack, wow Loco.

Don't use fake types.

[ELPatoloco21]

Nobody said it cant attack it can negate WIND att monsters not its own KEY word can negate but OCG is still under development and the type will either be warrior or spellcaster not sure leaning towards spellcaster i want a the tricky look to it without the ? mark