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When this card is Advanced Summoned succesfully, select 1 monster on your opponent's field. Roll a die, if the result is 6, the selected card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. This card can attack your opponent directly.

 

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When this card is Advanced Summoned successfully, select one monster on your opponent's side of the field. Roll a die, if the result is 6, the selected card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. This card can attack your opponent directly.

 

One error, nice job on OCG.

 

Not sure on this:

Roll a die, if the result is 6, the selected card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard.

Roll a die, if the result is 6, the selected monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard.

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Actually, it differs. With that effect you can target your own monsters as for the effect since it does not specify the side of the field. For example check Snipe's effect.

 

You can discard 1 card to select 1 card on the field and roll a six-sided die. If the result is not 1 or 6, destroy the selected card.

 

You can destroy your own cards, can't you?

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Both of you stop fighting here is the correct fix:

 

When this card is Advanced Summoned, select 1 monster your opponent controls. Roll a 6-sided die, if the result is 6, the selected monster is sent to the Graveyard. This card can attack your opponent directly.

 

 

Also Grammar errors sad.

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Just to cut in here,

 

I found one thing:

The following effect thing, at the start of the effect, it needs one of thoose black circles. Oh, and level isnt capitalized.

 

Level is capitalized.

 

...card from field/side of field debate...

 

The term from 5d's OCG is Advance Summoned, not Advanced Summoned, although that OCG never made it to the TCG to begin with.

 

When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by this effect of this card, activate the following effect: both players Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from their hand in face-up Defense Position. During the 3rd Standby Phase after you activated this effect, remove all monsters on the field from play. Inflict 400 damage to both players for each WATER, LIGHT or FIRE monsters removed from play by effect of this card.

 

Not exactly OCG errors, but a portion of that text is redundant. Cutting a bit (and fixing 1 slight error):

 

When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can send this card to the Graveyard. If you do, both players Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from their hand in face-up Defense Position. During the 3rd Standby Phase after you activated this effect, remove all monsters on the field from play. Inflict 400 damage to both players for each WATER, LIGHT or FIRE monsters removed from play by effect of this card.

 

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